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In paragraph 1 first support, you should continue developing what you had said to be more persuasive and coherent.
Same goes for second support in first paragraph.
Easily enough 😐 not a good choice
Since the question specifies "give your own opinion", u ought to discuss your opinion in a seperste but short paragraph.
In paragraph 1 first support, you should continue developing what you had said to be more persuasive and coherent.
Same goes for second support in first paragraph.
Easily enough 😐 not a good choice
Since the question specifies "give your own opinion", u ought to discuss your opinion in a seperste but short paragraph.
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Writing is far more than 250 words especially introduction and conclusion are too large
The vocabulary and grammatical structures are limited.
The ideas presented in each paragraph do not have convincing support and therefore lose point related to coherence and cohesion.
There are 2 ideas in the question and as a result 2 main paragraphs are enough to support the. The 3rd main paragraph is unnecessary.
There we several spelling and punctuation mistakes.
Writing is far more than 250 words especially introduction and conclusion are too large
The vocabulary and grammatical structures are limited.
The ideas presented in each paragraph do not have convincing support and therefore lose point related to coherence and cohesion.
There are 2 ideas in the question and as a result 2 main paragraphs are enough to support the. The 3rd main paragraph is unnecessary.
There we several spelling and punctuation mistakes.
اسپیکینگ آیلتس IELTS Speaking
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🔴 Estimated Score is 6.5 to 7
The second body paragraph is not supported well and it is not convincing and u may lose points for coherence/cohesion and task response.
The paragraph which expresses your opinion and conclusion should be separated and u may lose point for mixing them in real exam.
Higher level of vocabulary and grammatical structures could be attempted for a higher score.
The second body paragraph is not supported well and it is not convincing and u may lose points for coherence/cohesion and task response.
The paragraph which expresses your opinion and conclusion should be separated and u may lose point for mixing them in real exam.
Higher level of vocabulary and grammatical structures could be attempted for a higher score.
اسپیکینگ آیلتس IELTS Speaking
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🔴Estimated Score for this writing is 6
Support and developing the ideas is not enough in body paragraph 1. This paragraph could be longer with more coherent support.
In second paragraph main idea is presented and repeated but support is not very convincing and although this paragraph is too long, it is not coherent.
You need one short paragraph for your personal opinion or u may lose point for not having it.
The level of vocabulary and grammatical structures keeps the essay from reveiving higher scores.
Support and developing the ideas is not enough in body paragraph 1. This paragraph could be longer with more coherent support.
In second paragraph main idea is presented and repeated but support is not very convincing and although this paragraph is too long, it is not coherent.
You need one short paragraph for your personal opinion or u may lose point for not having it.
The level of vocabulary and grammatical structures keeps the essay from reveiving higher scores.
Omid
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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6
Mohammad
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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6 to 6.5
DhulThaffnat
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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 5 to 5.5
Your sample sounds monotonous and it seems you are reading from text though
Your sample sounds monotonous and it seems you are reading from text though
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This is a very good work. At this level try to write a rather shorter introduction by avoiding repetitive sentences. U also have repeated rather same structure several times.
In both main paragraphs, u have a short support for second reason. Try to talk more and avoid repetition.
When u have a separate paragraph for Your Opinion, it's fine to write 90 words or even less provided that you be consice without repeating anything.
This is a very good work. At this level try to write a rather shorter introduction by avoiding repetitive sentences. U also have repeated rather same structure several times.
In both main paragraphs, u have a short support for second reason. Try to talk more and avoid repetition.
When u have a separate paragraph for Your Opinion, it's fine to write 90 words or even less provided that you be consice without repeating anything.
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