❤️ تعیین سطح رایگان رایتینگ آیلتس

@ielts2com

👈 زبان آموزان روزهای جمعه شهریورماه برای این هفته رایتینگ تست ۲ تست ۱ کمبریج آیلتس ۱۲ که تصویر آن در بالا آمده را برای نوشتن در دستور کار دارند. این کلاس به تازگی استارت خورده و زبان آموزان در جلسه سوم هستند.


👌 علاقمندان میتوانند پاسخ های کامل خود را به نشانی زیر فرستاده و در همین کانال نمره تخمینی و فیدبک دریافت نمایند.
@PouyaAbolghasemi


👈 همچنین پیشنهاد میکنیم برای نگارش یک رایتینگ کم خطا نگاهی به چک لیست رایتینگ تسک ۲ ما داشته باشید. زبان آموزان موظف هستند برای به حداکثر رساندن نمره و جلوگیری از خطاهای متداول از این چک لیست پیروی نمایند.

http://ielts2.com/چک-لیست-رایتینگ-آزمون-آِیلتس-آکادمیک/

نمونه رایتینگ ارسالی اعضای محترم کانال 🌹🌹👆👆

🔴 نمونه رایتینگ ارسالی اعضای محترم کانال 👆👆👆

Estimated Speaking score is 6

نمونه رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط زبان آموزان دوره های آنلاین 👆👆👆

#feedback

Introduction is fine but it could be more concise

@ielts2com

First body paragraph is too short. Although you have a clear idea, the development and progress is not enough and the paragraph is simply too short. I suggest you write at least 100 words for each body paragraph.

In second body paragraph you have two supports for the main idea which are clearly ecpressed but none of them is developed and supported enough and again this paragraph is too short.

The paragraph about your opinion is too general. It would be better if you took a single position to defend.

Conclusion is fine but at least it could be better worded.

The vocabulary throughout the essay could be improved for a higher score with better collocation and specifit vocab related to this area.

Grammatical structures are fine but limited almost everywhere in the essay.

🔴 Estimated score for this writing is 5.5 to 6

#feedback

Your introduction is fine but addressed the financial aspect of the question which is not mentioned in the question itself. This point is presented and discussed further in the body paragraphs which could affect your score(Task Response) since it can be considered an off topic point.

@ielts2com

In first paragraph the main idea is discussed and developed but other irrelevant points(last 4 lines) included as well and you could lose point for them. Finally there is a point you made without support at the end of the paragraph.

In paragraph two, you did not support and defend the main idea effectively. Instead, discussed the point generally and talk about "what should be done" rather than "why it is not a good idea to share infornation". This certainly influences both your task response and coherence/cohesion.

The conclusion does not include 2 sides mentioned in the question. This can be the result of not having a clear plan or bubble diagram in front of you which contributed to your deviation.

🔴 Estimated Score for this essay is 6 to 6.5

❤️دانلود نمونه برگه های رایتینگ Task 1 و 2 آیلتس + پاسخنامه لیسنینگ و ریدینگ 👇👇👇

👈کوشش کنید تمرین های رایتینگ را حتما بر روی برگه های استاندارد و با مداد (تراشیده شده!) انجام دهید.

http://ielts2.com/دانلود-نمونه-برگه-رایتینگ-آیلتس/