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1. Growing up in a household deeply rooted in Chinese culture and history, I developed a profound appreciation for the richness and complexity of our heritage. Exploring ancient texts and delving into the stories of our ancestors inspired me to pursue further studies in these domains. Applying to CityU's Chinese and History program, I aim to deepen my understanding and engage in critical analysis of our cultural past, empowering me to contribute meaningfully to its preservation and interpretation.
2. Raised in a technology-driven world, I have always been captivated by the power of computers to transform our lives. From a young age, I tinkered with hardware and dabbled in coding, sparking my passion for Computer Science Engineering. Seeking to turn my enthusiasm into expertise, I am excited to apply to CUHK's program, where I aim to explore the frontiers of technology, solve complex problems, and contribute to the development of innovative solutions that shape our future.
3. As a child, driving through cityscapes dotted with towering structures, I marveled at the intricacy and grandeur of bridges and skyscrapers that framed our urban surroundings. Those moments instilled in me a fascination for the field of Civil Engineering, where the marriage of creativity and precision has the power to construct magnificent structures and shape the world around us. With a strong desire to apply my knowledge and skills to contribute towards sustainable and resilient infrastructure, I am eager to pursue a degree in Civil Engineering.
4. “Service to others is the rent you pay for your room here on earth.” This powerful sentiment by Muhammad Ali resonates deeply with my aspiration to pursue a degree in social work at Hong Kong Baptist University. Growing up in a diverse community, I witnessed firsthand the struggles faced by individuals from various backgrounds, which ignited my passion for advocacy and support. I believe that social work is not just a profession; it is a calling to uplift those in need and foster positive change. With a commitment to empathy and understanding, I am eager to equip myself with the knowledge and skills necessary to make a meaningful impact in the lives of others.
5. Early childhood holds a special place in my heart, as it is where the foundation of a child's learning journey is laid. Inspired by the transformative impact of dedicated and nurturing educators during my own early years, I aspire to become an influential figure in the lives of young children. Pursuing a program in early childhood education, I aim to cultivate a love for learning, foster holistic development, and provide a supportive environment that sparks joy and curiosity in every child.
6. "Language is the bridge that connects us all." This motto has guided my curiosity and passion for learning foreign languages. But as I grow up learning Japanese and Spanish as my interests, I realized I can never learn (or be proficient) in all the languages in the world. Instead, I can learn the commonalities and differences among different languages. = My desire to explore the nuances of linguistic structures and their cultural implications has led me to seek a deeper understanding of how language influences identity and society. I am eager to immerse myself in a dynamic learning environment where I can further develop my analytical skills and contribute to the vibrant field of linguistics.
7. Witnessing the compassion and unwavering dedication of nurses during a family member's illness left an indelible mark on my heart. Inspired by their tireless efforts to provide comfort and care, I am determined to follow in their footsteps. Applying to PolyU's Nursing program, I seek to acquire the knowledge and skills necessary to navigate the multifaceted world of healthcare, making a meaningful difference in the lives of individuals and contributing to the overall well-being of our
好多時，寫文只要開咗個頭，之後就好易寫埋落去。有好多同學反映唔識開 Personal Statement個頭，你可以瀏覽返我之前教嘅頭一句例子、訂閱我嘅原創PS作品集瀏覽近30篇personal statement samples、或者睇下以下頭段參考下：
1. Growing up in a household deeply rooted in Chinese culture and history, I developed a profound appreciation for the richness and complexity of our heritage. Exploring ancient texts and delving into the stories of our ancestors inspired me to pursue further studies in these domains. Applying to CityU's Chinese and History program, I aim to deepen my understanding and engage in critical analysis of our cultural past, empowering me to contribute meaningfully to its preservation and interpretation.
2. Raised in a technology-driven world, I have always been captivated by the power of computers to transform our lives. From a young age, I tinkered with hardware and dabbled in coding, sparking my passion for Computer Science Engineering. Seeking to turn my enthusiasm into expertise, I am excited to apply to CUHK's program, where I aim to explore the frontiers of technology, solve complex problems, and contribute to the development of innovative solutions that shape our future.
3. As a child, driving through cityscapes dotted with towering structures, I marveled at the intricacy and grandeur of bridges and skyscrapers that framed our urban surroundings. Those moments instilled in me a fascination for the field of Civil Engineering, where the marriage of creativity and precision has the power to construct magnificent structures and shape the world around us. With a strong desire to apply my knowledge and skills to contribute towards sustainable and resilient infrastructure, I am eager to pursue a degree in Civil Engineering.
4. “Service to others is the rent you pay for your room here on earth.” This powerful sentiment by Muhammad Ali resonates deeply with my aspiration to pursue a degree in social work at Hong Kong Baptist University. Growing up in a diverse community, I witnessed firsthand the struggles faced by individuals from various backgrounds, which ignited my passion for advocacy and support. I believe that social work is not just a profession; it is a calling to uplift those in need and foster positive change. With a commitment to empathy and understanding, I am eager to equip myself with the knowledge and skills necessary to make a meaningful impact in the lives of others.
5. Early childhood holds a special place in my heart, as it is where the foundation of a child's learning journey is laid. Inspired by the transformative impact of dedicated and nurturing educators during my own early years, I aspire to become an influential figure in the lives of young children. Pursuing a program in early childhood education, I aim to cultivate a love for learning, foster holistic development, and provide a supportive environment that sparks joy and curiosity in every child.
6. "Language is the bridge that connects us all." This motto has guided my curiosity and passion for learning foreign languages. But as I grow up learning Japanese and Spanish as my interests, I realized I can never learn (or be proficient) in all the languages in the world. Instead, I can learn the commonalities and differences among different languages. = My desire to explore the nuances of linguistic structures and their cultural implications has led me to seek a deeper understanding of how language influences identity and society. I am eager to immerse myself in a dynamic learning environment where I can further develop my analytical skills and contribute to the vibrant field of linguistics.
7. Witnessing the compassion and unwavering dedication of nurses during a family member's illness left an indelible mark on my heart. Inspired by their tireless efforts to provide comfort and care, I am determined to follow in their footsteps. Applying to PolyU's Nursing program, I seek to acquire the knowledge and skills necessary to navigate the multifaceted world of healthcare, making a meaningful difference in the lives of individuals and contributing to the overall well-being of our
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各位曾經信任過我、同我合作過嘅朋友：
首先，我要向你哋致以最真誠嘅歉意。呢幾年我失咗職業上最基本嘅誠信，令好多合作同朋友受到影響。無論原因係乜嘢，結果就係我冇交到承諾嘅稿件，收咗錢卻交唔到貨，呢啲都係無可推卸嘅錯。我唔想再沉默落去，所以今日寫低呢封道歉信，將一切交代清楚。
我嘅健康問題其實由2017年已經開始。嗰陣時我確診咗甲狀腺功能亢進（甲亢），醫生好直接咁解釋：「因為你嘅 TSH 壓唔住 T4，身體就好似成日踩住油門，唔停咁加速。」就因為咁，我成日手震、心跳快、夜晚訓唔著，成日焦慮，好似腦袋無停過。靠住長期食藥先勉強壓得住，但始終都唔算穩定。
我本身以寫作維生，呢段時間我都硬係頂住去交稿。雖然狀態差，但我仲相信可以處理得到。不過去到2024年，情況突然反轉，由甲亢變成甲狀腺功能減退（甲減）。醫生同我講：「依家就係另一邊極端，你嘅 T4 幾乎分泌唔到，撳唔住 TSH，成個系統完全失衡。」
由過度活躍，突然跌落去過度低落，副作用嚴重得嚟仲持續咗幾個月。我每日都攰到好似冇電，無論幾點訓覺都唔夠精神(一日醒住嘅時間唔過5個鐘)；情緒長期處於低谷，講嘢冇力，甚至記憶同專注力都大幅下降。有時我開住電腦，望住個空白畫面一整日都打唔到幾句字，腦袋成日斷片。寫文章對我嚟講，本來係習慣，變成咗痛苦。
偏偏喺呢段時間之前，我已經接咗好多單。好多客戶俾咗訂金，等我交稿。我好想撐住，但結果係一單又一單延誤，甚至有啲完全交唔到。根據我自己統計，由2023年底到2024年中，大約27個項目入面，有17個完全冇完成，其他嘅就拖到遲遲先交。呢啲數字係殘酷嘅現實，反映出我失職嘅程度。
我知好多朋友其實有擔心過我，有人問過我發生咩事，但當時我根本無力上網，每日連食飯都有困難，但唔食又更加冇力，最終只能喺床上渡過，默默等情況改善。
到咗今日，我要承認：病可以解釋，但唔可以做藉口。我收咗大家嘅錢，卻冇交貨，呢個錯係屬於我，唔可以推落去其他人身上。就算我嘅健康長期反覆，無論甲亢定甲減帶嚟幾多副作用，專業上嘅責任都係必須承擔。
另一個現實係，呢幾年我喺治療上花咗大量金錢。長期覆診、抽血檢查、藥物調整，已經幾乎掏空晒我所有積蓄。我冇能力去逐一退返錢俾大家，呢點我知更加令人失望。但我唔想就咁話一句「冇辦法」就算，所以我諗到另一個方法去補救。
為咗表達歉意同補救，我承諾：喺下個學期，我願意為所有已付款未收稿嘅受影響客戶免費寫一篇完整英文文章(2500字內，不論你本身付款係幾多字)，無論係學術報告、專題或者其他稿件，我都會盡力完成。呢份工作將完全免費，但唔包括修改或二次修訂，因為我希望先用自己最佳嘅狀態交出作品，而唔係拖延。呢個唔會等於金錢嘅賠償，但係我現階段唯一可以付出嘅誠意。
我明白，無論我再點樣努力，都未必能夠令所有人原諒我。病痛可以解釋，但唔可以做藉口。今次嘅錯，我會承擔。希望透過免費完成一篇文章，能夠讓大家感受到我仍然願意用自己嘅專業去補償。最後，我衷心再講一次：對唔住。
I want to begin by offering my most sincere apology to everyone who trusted me, worked with me, or supported me over the past few years. I know I let many of you down, and that my silence only made the disappointment worse. This letter is not written lightly. It is written because I cannot hide behind excuses anymore, and because those who placed their faith in me deserve the truth, even if it is painful to admit.
My health has been unstable for a long time. Since 2017, I have been on long-term medication for hyperthyroidism. At that time, the doctor explained to me in very simple words: “Your TSH cannot suppress your T4, so your metabolism is constantly speeding up.” The result was that I lived with hand tremors, constant nervous energy, and severe insomnia. I was often anxious, restless, and unable to find calm. Medication helped me maintain some stability, but it was never perfect.
For several years I tried to live and work with this condition. Writing remained my livelihood, and even when I felt shaky or exhausted, I pushed myself forward because I wanted to honor my commitments. But in 2024, my condition shifted dramatically, and in many ways my life collapsed. My thyroid function flipped from hyperthyroidism to hypothyroidism. As my doctor told me: “Now it’s the other extreme. Your T4 can no longer be produced properly, and it cannot hold back your TSH. The balance is lost.”
Although my body already had so many problems, for those years I continued to rely on writing to make a living, because writing was my only source of income and a part of my self-worth. I forced myself to hand in manuscripts, even though the process was painful, because I believed I could still manage, that I could still handle it. But by 2024, everything suddenly flipped. What had originally been hyperthyroidism suddenly rebounded into hypothyroidism. The doctor once again explained the problem in simple words: “Now it’s the other extreme. Your T4 can hardly be produced, it cannot suppress TSH, and the whole system is out of balance.”
Falling from one extreme to the other brought very serious side effects that lasted for months. Before, I was overactive and sleepless; now, every day I felt exhausted, as if my energy had been drained. No matter how long I slept, I woke up as if I had never rested at all. My mood sank into a constant low, I had no strength in my speech, my memory deteriorated sharply, and my ability to concentrate almost disappeared. Sometimes I would sit in front of the computer for hours staring at a blank page, my mind going in and out, unable to write even a few complete sentences. Writing, which had once been a habit and even a source of joy, had turned into a kind of suffering and torment.
Unfortunately, before all this happened, I had already taken on quite
首先，我要向你哋致以最真誠嘅歉意。呢幾年我失咗職業上最基本嘅誠信，令好多合作同朋友受到影響。無論原因係乜嘢，結果就係我冇交到承諾嘅稿件，收咗錢卻交唔到貨，呢啲都係無可推卸嘅錯。我唔想再沉默落去，所以今日寫低呢封道歉信，將一切交代清楚。
我嘅健康問題其實由2017年已經開始。嗰陣時我確診咗甲狀腺功能亢進（甲亢），醫生好直接咁解釋：「因為你嘅 TSH 壓唔住 T4，身體就好似成日踩住油門，唔停咁加速。」就因為咁，我成日手震、心跳快、夜晚訓唔著，成日焦慮，好似腦袋無停過。靠住長期食藥先勉強壓得住，但始終都唔算穩定。
我本身以寫作維生，呢段時間我都硬係頂住去交稿。雖然狀態差，但我仲相信可以處理得到。不過去到2024年，情況突然反轉，由甲亢變成甲狀腺功能減退（甲減）。醫生同我講：「依家就係另一邊極端，你嘅 T4 幾乎分泌唔到，撳唔住 TSH，成個系統完全失衡。」
由過度活躍，突然跌落去過度低落，副作用嚴重得嚟仲持續咗幾個月。我每日都攰到好似冇電，無論幾點訓覺都唔夠精神(一日醒住嘅時間唔過5個鐘)；情緒長期處於低谷，講嘢冇力，甚至記憶同專注力都大幅下降。有時我開住電腦，望住個空白畫面一整日都打唔到幾句字，腦袋成日斷片。寫文章對我嚟講，本來係習慣，變成咗痛苦。
偏偏喺呢段時間之前，我已經接咗好多單。好多客戶俾咗訂金，等我交稿。我好想撐住，但結果係一單又一單延誤，甚至有啲完全交唔到。根據我自己統計，由2023年底到2024年中，大約27個項目入面，有17個完全冇完成，其他嘅就拖到遲遲先交。呢啲數字係殘酷嘅現實，反映出我失職嘅程度。
我知好多朋友其實有擔心過我，有人問過我發生咩事，但當時我根本無力上網，每日連食飯都有困難，但唔食又更加冇力，最終只能喺床上渡過，默默等情況改善。
到咗今日，我要承認：病可以解釋，但唔可以做藉口。我收咗大家嘅錢，卻冇交貨，呢個錯係屬於我，唔可以推落去其他人身上。就算我嘅健康長期反覆，無論甲亢定甲減帶嚟幾多副作用，專業上嘅責任都係必須承擔。
另一個現實係，呢幾年我喺治療上花咗大量金錢。長期覆診、抽血檢查、藥物調整，已經幾乎掏空晒我所有積蓄。我冇能力去逐一退返錢俾大家，呢點我知更加令人失望。但我唔想就咁話一句「冇辦法」就算，所以我諗到另一個方法去補救。
為咗表達歉意同補救，我承諾：喺下個學期，我願意為所有已付款未收稿嘅受影響客戶免費寫一篇完整英文文章(2500字內，不論你本身付款係幾多字)，無論係學術報告、專題或者其他稿件，我都會盡力完成。呢份工作將完全免費，但唔包括修改或二次修訂，因為我希望先用自己最佳嘅狀態交出作品，而唔係拖延。呢個唔會等於金錢嘅賠償，但係我現階段唯一可以付出嘅誠意。
我明白，無論我再點樣努力，都未必能夠令所有人原諒我。病痛可以解釋，但唔可以做藉口。今次嘅錯，我會承擔。希望透過免費完成一篇文章，能夠讓大家感受到我仍然願意用自己嘅專業去補償。最後，我衷心再講一次：對唔住。
I want to begin by offering my most sincere apology to everyone who trusted me, worked with me, or supported me over the past few years. I know I let many of you down, and that my silence only made the disappointment worse. This letter is not written lightly. It is written because I cannot hide behind excuses anymore, and because those who placed their faith in me deserve the truth, even if it is painful to admit.
My health has been unstable for a long time. Since 2017, I have been on long-term medication for hyperthyroidism. At that time, the doctor explained to me in very simple words: “Your TSH cannot suppress your T4, so your metabolism is constantly speeding up.” The result was that I lived with hand tremors, constant nervous energy, and severe insomnia. I was often anxious, restless, and unable to find calm. Medication helped me maintain some stability, but it was never perfect.
For several years I tried to live and work with this condition. Writing remained my livelihood, and even when I felt shaky or exhausted, I pushed myself forward because I wanted to honor my commitments. But in 2024, my condition shifted dramatically, and in many ways my life collapsed. My thyroid function flipped from hyperthyroidism to hypothyroidism. As my doctor told me: “Now it’s the other extreme. Your T4 can no longer be produced properly, and it cannot hold back your TSH. The balance is lost.”
Although my body already had so many problems, for those years I continued to rely on writing to make a living, because writing was my only source of income and a part of my self-worth. I forced myself to hand in manuscripts, even though the process was painful, because I believed I could still manage, that I could still handle it. But by 2024, everything suddenly flipped. What had originally been hyperthyroidism suddenly rebounded into hypothyroidism. The doctor once again explained the problem in simple words: “Now it’s the other extreme. Your T4 can hardly be produced, it cannot suppress TSH, and the whole system is out of balance.”
Falling from one extreme to the other brought very serious side effects that lasted for months. Before, I was overactive and sleepless; now, every day I felt exhausted, as if my energy had been drained. No matter how long I slept, I woke up as if I had never rested at all. My mood sank into a constant low, I had no strength in my speech, my memory deteriorated sharply, and my ability to concentrate almost disappeared. Sometimes I would sit in front of the computer for hours staring at a blank page, my mind going in and out, unable to write even a few complete sentences. Writing, which had once been a habit and even a source of joy, had turned into a kind of suffering and torment.
Unfortunately, before all this happened, I had already taken on quite
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a few commissions. Clients had paid deposits and were waiting for me to deliver their manuscripts. I wanted so much to hold on and complete the work, but the reality was repeated delays, and in some cases, total failure to deliver. According to my own records, between the end of 2023 and the middle of 2024, out of about 27 projects, 17 were never completed at all, while the rest were only delivered after serious delays. These numbers may sound cold, but for me, they are cruel and undeniable facts, reflecting the seriousness of my failure.
I also know that during this period, many friends were genuinely worried about me. Some asked what had happened. But at the time, I simply did not have the courage to reply, because every time I saw a message, my heart would pound, my palms would sweat, and I felt like I had no face to respond. In the end, I chose silence. But that silence, for all of you, was itself another form of harm.
Now, I can only admit this: illness can explain what happened, but it cannot serve as an excuse. I accepted money but failed to deliver the work. This fault belongs to me, and it should not be shifted onto anyone else. Even if my health continues to fluctuate, even if both hyperthyroidism and hypothyroidism bring many side effects, as a professional writer I still must bear responsibility.
Another reality I must be honest about is that in recent years I have already spent a huge amount of money on treatment. Long-term check-ups, regular blood tests, constant adjustments of medication—these have nearly drained all of my savings. I do not have the ability to refund everyone, and I know that this makes things even more disappointing. But I do not want to just end with “there’s nothing I can do.” So I have thought of the only remedy I can manage.
To express my apology and attempt to make amends, I promise this: starting from the next academic term, I will write one complete article (max 2500 words inclusive) free of charge for every affected client who has paid but not received our work yet, whether it is an academic report, a project, or another manuscript. This work will be entirely free, but it will not include revisions or second drafts, because I want to devote my best effort to producing one finished piece, rather than risk further delays. Of course, this is trivial compared to financial compensation, but it is the only sincere commitment I can make at this stage.
Although I cannot repay everyone financially, I do not want to simply say “there is nothing I can do” and walk away. As a gesture of apology and responsibility, I promise that in the next academic term, I will write one complete article for each client who was affected, whether it is an academic paper, a report, or another form of writing. This work will be entirely free of charge, but it will not include revisions or edits, because I want to focus on delivering my best effort once, without further delay. This is not equivalent to financial compensation, but it is the only way I can show sincerity at this stage.
I understand that no matter how hard I try, not everyone will forgive me. Illness may explain what happened, but it is not an excuse. This failure is mine to carry. My hope is that by completing one free article, I can at least show that I am still willing to use my skills to make amends. Finally, let me say once more, with all sincerity: I am sorry.
I also know that during this period, many friends were genuinely worried about me. Some asked what had happened. But at the time, I simply did not have the courage to reply, because every time I saw a message, my heart would pound, my palms would sweat, and I felt like I had no face to respond. In the end, I chose silence. But that silence, for all of you, was itself another form of harm.
Now, I can only admit this: illness can explain what happened, but it cannot serve as an excuse. I accepted money but failed to deliver the work. This fault belongs to me, and it should not be shifted onto anyone else. Even if my health continues to fluctuate, even if both hyperthyroidism and hypothyroidism bring many side effects, as a professional writer I still must bear responsibility.
Another reality I must be honest about is that in recent years I have already spent a huge amount of money on treatment. Long-term check-ups, regular blood tests, constant adjustments of medication—these have nearly drained all of my savings. I do not have the ability to refund everyone, and I know that this makes things even more disappointing. But I do not want to just end with “there’s nothing I can do.” So I have thought of the only remedy I can manage.
To express my apology and attempt to make amends, I promise this: starting from the next academic term, I will write one complete article (max 2500 words inclusive) free of charge for every affected client who has paid but not received our work yet, whether it is an academic report, a project, or another manuscript. This work will be entirely free, but it will not include revisions or second drafts, because I want to devote my best effort to producing one finished piece, rather than risk further delays. Of course, this is trivial compared to financial compensation, but it is the only sincere commitment I can make at this stage.
Although I cannot repay everyone financially, I do not want to simply say “there is nothing I can do” and walk away. As a gesture of apology and responsibility, I promise that in the next academic term, I will write one complete article for each client who was affected, whether it is an academic paper, a report, or another form of writing. This work will be entirely free of charge, but it will not include revisions or edits, because I want to focus on delivering my best effort once, without further delay. This is not equivalent to financial compensation, but it is the only way I can show sincerity at this stage.
I understand that no matter how hard I try, not everyone will forgive me. Illness may explain what happened, but it is not an excuse. This failure is mine to carry. My hope is that by completing one free article, I can at least show that I am still willing to use my skills to make amends. Finally, let me say once more, with all sincerity: I am sorry.
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如何定FYP題目 🤔💡
新嘅一年相信好多同學今年都final year 🎓，又要頭痛點樣拎靚龜 🤯🏆。想喺FYP（Final Year Project）拎高分 💯，定一個好題目係成功嘅第一步！🚀 但點樣先可以搵到一個啱心水、又有研究價值 🔬 嘅題目呢？😌 呢篇文教你點樣用簡單又實際嘅方法 💡，幫你定出一個靚FYP題目 ✨，仲可以令你嘅project脫穎而出！🌟
1. 了解自己嘅興趣同專長 ❤️🧠
首先，問吓自己：我鍾意研究啲咩？🤔🔬 FYP係一個長期嘅project ⏳，如果揀一個你完全唔感興趣嘅題目，做到一半可能會想放棄！😫 所以，搵一個同你興趣相關嘅題目好重要。✅ 但係千祈唔好揀你好鍾意嘅題目，因為長期對住佢你會鍾意都變唔鍾意 😵💫。揀一個唔討厭嘅就得。👍
小貼士：💡 列出3-5個你有興趣嘅範疇 ❤️，再同你嘅學科要求 📚 比較，搵出重疊嘅地方。🎯 呢幾個方向都可以問一問教授做邊個好，你嘅指導教授會指出佢最想supervise邊個題目。🧐
2. 研究熱門趨勢同實際需要 🔥📊
一個好嘅FYP題目唔單止要你鍾意，仲要同現實世界有連繫！🌎 最好係做下literature review 睇下有咩research gap 先，如果太冇前文亦會好難做。例如，如果讀電腦科學 💻，可以考慮人工智能（AI）或者網絡安全嘅題目；如果讀環境科學 🌱，可以研究可持續發展或者氣候變化嘅影響，呢啲都係有一定嘅文獻基礎。Literature review唔識做都可以參考我哋嘅Sample： https://t.me/+l62l-nCbT4gxZmY1 🔗。
小貼士：💡 睇吓學術期刊 📚、行業報告 📈，或者上Reddit平台搵吓同你學科相關嘅討論，搵靈感！✨
3. 確保題目夠具體同可行 ✅🗺️
好多同學一開始會揀啲好宏大嘅題目，例如「點樣解決香港能源問題」🌍🔥，但呢啲題目通常太闊，做到一半會好亂 🤯。揀題目時要夠具體，例如將「能源問題」縮窄到「可再生能源使用情況」🇭🇰☀️，成題題目可以改為「香港大學生對香港可再生能源使用效率及改善方案提議」。同時，考慮你嘅時間限制 ⏳，確保研究嘅methodology唔會太難完成。💪
小貼士：💡 大嘅題目可以加上地域 📍/年齡層 👨👩👧👦等等就有效縮窄到題目範圍。🎯
續： https://t.me/essayC/611
新嘅一年相信好多同學今年都final year 🎓，又要頭痛點樣拎靚龜 🤯🏆。想喺FYP（Final Year Project）拎高分 💯，定一個好題目係成功嘅第一步！🚀 但點樣先可以搵到一個啱心水、又有研究價值 🔬 嘅題目呢？😌 呢篇文教你點樣用簡單又實際嘅方法 💡，幫你定出一個靚FYP題目 ✨，仲可以令你嘅project脫穎而出！🌟
1. 了解自己嘅興趣同專長 ❤️🧠
首先，問吓自己：我鍾意研究啲咩？🤔🔬 FYP係一個長期嘅project ⏳，如果揀一個你完全唔感興趣嘅題目，做到一半可能會想放棄！😫 所以，搵一個同你興趣相關嘅題目好重要。✅ 但係千祈唔好揀你好鍾意嘅題目，因為長期對住佢你會鍾意都變唔鍾意 😵💫。揀一個唔討厭嘅就得。👍
小貼士：💡 列出3-5個你有興趣嘅範疇 ❤️，再同你嘅學科要求 📚 比較，搵出重疊嘅地方。🎯 呢幾個方向都可以問一問教授做邊個好，你嘅指導教授會指出佢最想supervise邊個題目。🧐
2. 研究熱門趨勢同實際需要 🔥📊
一個好嘅FYP題目唔單止要你鍾意，仲要同現實世界有連繫！🌎 最好係做下literature review 睇下有咩research gap 先，如果太冇前文亦會好難做。例如，如果讀電腦科學 💻，可以考慮人工智能（AI）或者網絡安全嘅題目；如果讀環境科學 🌱，可以研究可持續發展或者氣候變化嘅影響，呢啲都係有一定嘅文獻基礎。Literature review唔識做都可以參考我哋嘅Sample： https://t.me/+l62l-nCbT4gxZmY1 🔗。
小貼士：💡 睇吓學術期刊 📚、行業報告 📈，或者上Reddit平台搵吓同你學科相關嘅討論，搵靈感！✨
3. 確保題目夠具體同可行 ✅🗺️
好多同學一開始會揀啲好宏大嘅題目，例如「點樣解決香港能源問題」🌍🔥，但呢啲題目通常太闊，做到一半會好亂 🤯。揀題目時要夠具體，例如將「能源問題」縮窄到「可再生能源使用情況」🇭🇰☀️，成題題目可以改為「香港大學生對香港可再生能源使用效率及改善方案提議」。同時，考慮你嘅時間限制 ⏳，確保研究嘅methodology唔會太難完成。💪
小貼士：💡 大嘅題目可以加上地域 📍/年齡層 👨👩👧👦等等就有效縮窄到題目範圍。🎯
續： https://t.me/essayC/611
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4. 預留改進空間 🔄✨
定題目唔係一錘定音嘅事！🔨 喺研究嘅過程中，你可能會發現新嘅問題或者需要調整方向 🧭。所以，揀題目時要留有彈性 🤸，方便之後改進。記得同導師定期update 🗓️，確保你嘅題目同研究方向係可行嘅。有時改3、4次先可以開始做都正常㗎！😅
小貼士：💡 喺開頭階段多做literature review 📖，幫你了解題目嘅可行性同潛在問題。🔎
總結 ✍️
定一個好嘅FYP題目係一門學問 🎓，但只要你了解自己嘅興趣 ❤️、搵到同現實相關嘅問題 🌎、諮詢導師同同學 🗣️、確保題目具體可行 ✅，你嘅FYP一定可以順利完成兼拎高分！💯 即刻開始諗你嘅題目啦！⏰💨等寫文C有時間，會再講下定好題目後可以點做。如果你唔sure題目點定/定得好唔好，歡迎dm @ugfn1001 consult。
定題目唔係一錘定音嘅事！🔨 喺研究嘅過程中，你可能會發現新嘅問題或者需要調整方向 🧭。所以，揀題目時要留有彈性 🤸，方便之後改進。記得同導師定期update 🗓️，確保你嘅題目同研究方向係可行嘅。有時改3、4次先可以開始做都正常㗎！😅
小貼士：💡 喺開頭階段多做literature review 📖，幫你了解題目嘅可行性同潛在問題。🔎
總結 ✍️
定一個好嘅FYP題目係一門學問 🎓，但只要你了解自己嘅興趣 ❤️、搵到同現實相關嘅問題 🌎、諮詢導師同同學 🗣️、確保題目具體可行 ✅，你嘅FYP一定可以順利完成兼拎高分！💯 即刻開始諗你嘅題目啦！⏰💨等寫文C有時間，會再講下定好題目後可以點做。如果你唔sure題目點定/定得好唔好，歡迎dm @ugfn1001 consult。
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新學期寫文C將推出新嘅免費服務俾一直支持我哋嘅同學。
過往寫文C一直為同學免費略評 Personal Statement ，考慮到呢個服務只可以受惠於處於升學階段嘅同學，我哋會推出新嘅免費服務 —— Essay Plan 略評服務。呢個服務用意在幫到在學但又未打算升學嘅同學。
報名方法係 follow 本頻道 @essaycteam 並截圖傳送給 @ugfn1001，然後填妥附表。注意只有呢個格式可以得到免費略評服務，其他格式 Essay Plan 、詳評均需收費。
歡迎大家踴躍參與，祝爆四﹗
過往寫文C一直為同學免費略評 Personal Statement ，考慮到呢個服務只可以受惠於處於升學階段嘅同學，我哋會推出新嘅免費服務 —— Essay Plan 略評服務。呢個服務用意在幫到在學但又未打算升學嘅同學。
報名方法係 follow 本頻道 @essaycteam 並截圖傳送給 @ugfn1001，然後填妥附表。注意只有呢個格式可以得到免費略評服務，其他格式 Essay Plan 、詳評均需收費。
歡迎大家踴躍參與，祝爆四﹗
點樣落筆寫fyp proposal?
FYP Proposal其實同其他research proposal差唔多，亦即係如果你喺SPACE TAS有寫過science project proposal又拎過A，寫返差唔多嘅嘢就得。👍 但係個分別就係你今次真係要做嘅，所以你嘅methodology唔可以寫到天花龍鳳。😅 以後就等我哋介紹一下一啲簡單嘅方法點樣可以幫到你開始，但係如果你有其他方法都可以用自己嘅方法去做。💡
1 首先要確認返你嘅proposal要寫幾多字 📝
有啲係寫好少字，只需要1000左右，其實反而可能會比較難，因為你比較難去話比較受知你想點樣做，有啲proposal要寫成3000字，就可以比較詳細咁樣表達自己嘅諗法。🧐
2 分配你嘅字數 ⚖️
通常abstract都唔計字，可以寫100-300字。🔢 introduction我通常寫150-300字，objective可能係一段150-200字或者慳字數就點列式。🎯 literature review最少1000字我先覺得夠，最長佢自己都可以寫夠2500字。📚 由於呢部份係唔可以吹水嘅，所以其實教授最鍾意睇你呢度做咗幾多功夫。💪 methodology就睇你有幾多個方法去做而決定長度。🔬 有一啲有實驗性質嘅research要寫假設，點列式即可。🧪 最後你可以寫埋一個timeline，你都可以寫你預計一啲乜嘢嘅limitations，即係話有咩困難比預期到嘅。🗓🚧 如果你份proposal嘅要求字數同我上述唔同，請你按自己嘅需要調整。🔄
3 諗定你嘅Research Question (RQ) / Thesis Statement 🎯
呢個係你成份proposal嘅核心！一個清晰、明確嘅RQ或者Thesis Statement可以引導你之後所有嘅寫作。例如，如果你想研究社交媒體對年輕人心理健康嘅影響，你嘅RQ可以係：「社交媒體過度使用如何影響香港大學生嘅焦慮水平？」記住，RQ唔可以太闊，亦唔可以太窄，要係可以透過你嘅方法去解答到嘅問題。💡可以問一問你嘅老師你篇FYP可唔可以多個一題RQ，因為如果你諗唔到嘅時候回答兩題會比較容易有足夠字數。至於TS嘅寫法，每位老師有唔同嘅方法，建議你都係問返你嘅教授通常係點樣寫。
FYP Proposal其實同其他research proposal差唔多，亦即係如果你喺SPACE TAS有寫過science project proposal又拎過A，寫返差唔多嘅嘢就得。👍 但係個分別就係你今次真係要做嘅，所以你嘅methodology唔可以寫到天花龍鳳。😅 以後就等我哋介紹一下一啲簡單嘅方法點樣可以幫到你開始，但係如果你有其他方法都可以用自己嘅方法去做。💡
1 首先要確認返你嘅proposal要寫幾多字 📝
有啲係寫好少字，只需要1000左右，其實反而可能會比較難，因為你比較難去話比較受知你想點樣做，有啲proposal要寫成3000字，就可以比較詳細咁樣表達自己嘅諗法。🧐
2 分配你嘅字數 ⚖️
通常abstract都唔計字，可以寫100-300字。🔢 introduction我通常寫150-300字，objective可能係一段150-200字或者慳字數就點列式。🎯 literature review最少1000字我先覺得夠，最長佢自己都可以寫夠2500字。📚 由於呢部份係唔可以吹水嘅，所以其實教授最鍾意睇你呢度做咗幾多功夫。💪 methodology就睇你有幾多個方法去做而決定長度。🔬 有一啲有實驗性質嘅research要寫假設，點列式即可。🧪 最後你可以寫埋一個timeline，你都可以寫你預計一啲乜嘢嘅limitations，即係話有咩困難比預期到嘅。🗓🚧 如果你份proposal嘅要求字數同我上述唔同，請你按自己嘅需要調整。🔄
3 諗定你嘅Research Question (RQ) / Thesis Statement 🎯
呢個係你成份proposal嘅核心！一個清晰、明確嘅RQ或者Thesis Statement可以引導你之後所有嘅寫作。例如，如果你想研究社交媒體對年輕人心理健康嘅影響，你嘅RQ可以係：「社交媒體過度使用如何影響香港大學生嘅焦慮水平？」記住，RQ唔可以太闊，亦唔可以太窄，要係可以透過你嘅方法去解答到嘅問題。💡可以問一問你嘅老師你篇FYP可唔可以多個一題RQ，因為如果你諗唔到嘅時候回答兩題會比較容易有足夠字數。至於TS嘅寫法，每位老師有唔同嘅方法，建議你都係問返你嘅教授通常係點樣寫。
續～
4 決定methodology 🤔
Methodology都係長有長寫，短有短寫。✍️ 短嘅300字大概講下點做就得。🏃♀️ 長嘅可以分participants, sampling methods, implementation, data analysis去寫。🔍 你嘅methodology可以參考下literature review裡面cover咗嘅文獻係用咩方法做，我自己就鍾意問卷訪談併用，加上observation或participant observation，唔係太鍾意textual analysis，但有時都係必要嘅。💬👀
5 開始寫Introduction (引言) ✍️
Introduction通常會由一個大背景開始，慢慢收窄到你嘅研究主題。你可以先講吓你研究領域嘅重要性或者現時嘅概況，然後指出呢個領域入面有咩研究空白 (Research Gap)，或者現有研究仲有啲咩可以深入探討嘅地方。🤔 最後，你就引入你嘅RQ或者Thesis Statement，並簡要講述你份proposal想達到嘅目的同埋主要嘅研究範圍。目標係要令讀者 (即係你教授) 覺得你嘅研究係有意義同值得做嘅。🌟
6 撰寫Literature Review (文獻回顧)📚
呢個係你份proposal最重要、亦都係最考功夫嘅部分。你需要閱讀大量同你主題相關嘅學術文獻 (journal articles, books, conference papers等)，然後有系統地整理同分析佢哋。唔單止係summarize人哋講過啲咩，更重要係要評論佢哋，指出唔同研究嘅共通點、分歧、佢哋嘅優點同缺點（即係佢喺學術界嘅作用以及佢嘅矛盾點或者佢嘅方法cover唔到嘅地方）。💡 最後，你要用呢個回顧嚟證明你嘅研究係有必要性，因為你填補緊某個研究空白或者提出緊一個新嘅角度。呢部分係show off你研究功力嘅地方，所以要俾心機呀！💪
7 擬定研究目標 (Objectives) / 假設 (Hypotheses) 📝
如果你嘅研究係探索性質或者比較傾向社會科學，你可能需要列出清晰嘅研究目標 (Research Objectives)。例如：「探討香港大學生對社交媒體使用的態度手」同埋「分析社交媒體使用頻率與焦慮感之間嘅關係」。🎯 如果你嘅研究有實驗性質，或者想測試某啲理論，你就要提出具體嘅假設 (Hypotheses)。例如：「假設一：高頻率使用社交媒體嘅大學生，其焦慮水平會顯著高於低頻率使用者。」記得每個假設都應該係可以被驗證嘅！🧪
8 回顧、修改並潤飾 ✨
當你寫完所有部分之後，唔好急住交！一定要花時間重新閱讀整份proposal，檢查吓有無語法錯誤、拼寫錯誤或者表達唔清晰嘅地方。🧐最好可以搵朋友或者同學幫你讀一次，佢哋可能會發現你睇唔到嘅盲點。多重修改同潤飾係寫好proposal嘅關鍵！不過，如果你真係睇唔到有咩唔好嘅地方，都可以比我哋略睇先交，歡迎 pm @ugfn1001 💯
總結
睇到呢度，相信各位FYP準畢業生對點樣寫proposal已經心中有數啦！✨
要記住，你份proposal嘅「靈魂」同「骨幹」就係有個清晰明確嘅Research Question (RQ)，佢會貫穿你成份report，係帶領你成個研究方向嘅燈塔🧭。而一份紮實有深度嘅Literature Review，就係展現你學術功力同埋找出研究「靚位」（Research Gap）嘅秘密武器！🔎📚只要呢兩部份做得好，其他部份都可以以吹水吹出嚟。💬
如果你真係想搵人幫眼提下意見， @ugfn1001 永遠都歡迎你㗎！📲 祝大家寫proposal順順利利，攞個好嘅開始！🚀 加油啊！💪
4 決定methodology 🤔
Methodology都係長有長寫，短有短寫。✍️ 短嘅300字大概講下點做就得。🏃♀️ 長嘅可以分participants, sampling methods, implementation, data analysis去寫。🔍 你嘅methodology可以參考下literature review裡面cover咗嘅文獻係用咩方法做，我自己就鍾意問卷訪談併用，加上observation或participant observation，唔係太鍾意textual analysis，但有時都係必要嘅。💬👀
5 開始寫Introduction (引言) ✍️
Introduction通常會由一個大背景開始，慢慢收窄到你嘅研究主題。你可以先講吓你研究領域嘅重要性或者現時嘅概況，然後指出呢個領域入面有咩研究空白 (Research Gap)，或者現有研究仲有啲咩可以深入探討嘅地方。🤔 最後，你就引入你嘅RQ或者Thesis Statement，並簡要講述你份proposal想達到嘅目的同埋主要嘅研究範圍。目標係要令讀者 (即係你教授) 覺得你嘅研究係有意義同值得做嘅。🌟
6 撰寫Literature Review (文獻回顧)📚
呢個係你份proposal最重要、亦都係最考功夫嘅部分。你需要閱讀大量同你主題相關嘅學術文獻 (journal articles, books, conference papers等)，然後有系統地整理同分析佢哋。唔單止係summarize人哋講過啲咩，更重要係要評論佢哋，指出唔同研究嘅共通點、分歧、佢哋嘅優點同缺點（即係佢喺學術界嘅作用以及佢嘅矛盾點或者佢嘅方法cover唔到嘅地方）。💡 最後，你要用呢個回顧嚟證明你嘅研究係有必要性，因為你填補緊某個研究空白或者提出緊一個新嘅角度。呢部分係show off你研究功力嘅地方，所以要俾心機呀！💪
7 擬定研究目標 (Objectives) / 假設 (Hypotheses) 📝
如果你嘅研究係探索性質或者比較傾向社會科學，你可能需要列出清晰嘅研究目標 (Research Objectives)。例如：「探討香港大學生對社交媒體使用的態度手」同埋「分析社交媒體使用頻率與焦慮感之間嘅關係」。🎯 如果你嘅研究有實驗性質，或者想測試某啲理論，你就要提出具體嘅假設 (Hypotheses)。例如：「假設一：高頻率使用社交媒體嘅大學生，其焦慮水平會顯著高於低頻率使用者。」記得每個假設都應該係可以被驗證嘅！🧪
8 回顧、修改並潤飾 ✨
當你寫完所有部分之後，唔好急住交！一定要花時間重新閱讀整份proposal，檢查吓有無語法錯誤、拼寫錯誤或者表達唔清晰嘅地方。🧐最好可以搵朋友或者同學幫你讀一次，佢哋可能會發現你睇唔到嘅盲點。多重修改同潤飾係寫好proposal嘅關鍵！不過，如果你真係睇唔到有咩唔好嘅地方，都可以比我哋略睇先交，歡迎 pm @ugfn1001 💯
總結
睇到呢度，相信各位FYP準畢業生對點樣寫proposal已經心中有數啦！✨
要記住，你份proposal嘅「靈魂」同「骨幹」就係有個清晰明確嘅Research Question (RQ)，佢會貫穿你成份report，係帶領你成個研究方向嘅燈塔🧭。而一份紮實有深度嘅Literature Review，就係展現你學術功力同埋找出研究「靚位」（Research Gap）嘅秘密武器！🔎📚只要呢兩部份做得好，其他部份都可以以吹水吹出嚟。💬
如果你真係想搵人幫眼提下意見， @ugfn1001 永遠都歡迎你㗎！📲 祝大家寫proposal順順利利，攞個好嘅開始！🚀 加油啊！💪
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