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Personal Statement諗唔到點寫?可以試下用以下句子開頭: 1. As I commence my journey towards an exciting future, university has been the ideal next step for me. 2. After a lot of hard work and thoughtful consideration, I am thrilled to be applying to university. 3. With great…
好多時,寫文只要開咗個頭,之後就好易寫埋落去。有好多同學反映唔識開Personal Statement個頭,你可以瀏覽返我之前教嘅頭一句例子、訂閱我嘅原創PS作品集瀏覽近30篇personal statement samples、或者睇下以下頭段參考下:

1. Growing up in a household deeply rooted in Chinese culture and history, I developed a profound appreciation for the richness and complexity of our heritage. Exploring ancient texts and delving into the stories of our ancestors inspired me to pursue further studies in these domains. Applying to CityU's Chinese and History program, I aim to deepen my understanding and engage in critical analysis of our cultural past, empowering me to contribute meaningfully to its preservation and interpretation.

2. Raised in a technology-driven world, I have always been captivated by the power of computers to transform our lives. From a young age, I tinkered with hardware and dabbled in coding, sparking my passion for Computer Science Engineering. Seeking to turn my enthusiasm into expertise, I am excited to apply to CUHK's program, where I aim to explore the frontiers of technology, solve complex problems, and contribute to the development of innovative solutions that shape our future.

3. As a child, driving through cityscapes dotted with towering structures, I marveled at the intricacy and grandeur of bridges and skyscrapers that framed our urban surroundings. Those moments instilled in me a fascination for the field of Civil Engineering, where the marriage of creativity and precision has the power to construct magnificent structures and shape the world around us. With a strong desire to apply my knowledge and skills to contribute towards sustainable and resilient infrastructure, I am eager to pursue a degree in Civil Engineering.

4. Growing up in a society deeply influenced by gender dynamics, I witnessed firsthand the struggles faced by individuals stemming from inequality and discrimination. Motivated by a desire to foster inclusivity and social justice, I am eager to study gender studies at CUHK. By critically examining the intersections of gender, race, and class, I hope to contribute to positive societal change and promote equality in all aspects of life.

5. Early childhood holds a special place in my heart, as it is where the foundation of a child's learning journey is laid. Inspired by the transformative impact of dedicated and nurturing educators during my own early years, I aspire to become an influential figure in the lives of young children. Pursuing a program in early childhood education, I aim to cultivate a love for learning, foster holistic development, and provide a supportive environment that sparks joy and curiosity in every child.

6. Growing up fascinated by the beauty of mathematics, I found joy in unraveling its intricate puzzles and patterns. Guided by exceptional teachers who nurtured my passion, I developed a deep appreciation for the significance of a strong mathematical foundation. Aspiring to become an educator who makes mathematics come alive for young minds, I am keen to undertake the BEd in Primary Math program at EduHK, where I can refine my pedagogical skills and inspire a new generation of math enthusiasts.

7. Witnessing the compassion and unwavering dedication of nurses during a family member's illness left an indelible mark on my heart. Inspired by their tireless efforts to provide comfort and care, I am determined to follow in their footsteps. Applying to PolyU's Nursing program, I seek to acquire the knowledge and skills necessary to navigate the multifaceted world of healthcare, making a meaningful difference in the lives of individuals and contributing to the overall well-being of our society.

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HKU SPACE IAE A1 Sample已出
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HKU SPACE EAP2 A1 Sample已出
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HKU SPACE Film and Music
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SPACE CCCU4044 New Media Art
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HKU SPACE ACL以下題目sample已出:
長久以來・傳統工作模式皆以專職為主・即人們在任職期内・只需專注投身一份全職工作便可,講求工作上的專業性和穩定性。不過,隨著社會文化日趨多元發展,開始出現一種名為「斜桿族」的新興工作模式,相對傳統的專職工作模式,斜桿族則為多重職業工作者,皆因他們認為這樣的工作模式,不但可享有工作上的靈活自由,更有助發揮個人興趣與生活追求。試圍繞上述主題,撰寫論說文一篇,詳述你的見解。文章題目自擬

傳統中國社會以家庭為本位,會以傳宗接代為目的,除了要求子女必須結婚外,更要求他們生育下一代,所謂「不孝有三,無後為大」,不生子女就會被視為不孝,;然而現今時代人們變得獨立,愈來愈重視個人利益,認為結婚生子應是個人意願,不應被上一代的觀念所約束,甚至有了「不婚主義」誕生,而且就算結了婚,也有人因為生活環境所限而不生育下一代。現請以「結婚生子是否必須」為主題,闡述你的個人觀點,並附以論據作支持。

有人認為因循已有成功的方法,跟從別人的步伐,能更快獲取成功;不過亦 有人認為在多變的社會,應力求創新,另闢蹊徑才能找到適合自己的方法,更快 獲取成功。試圍繞以上主題,撰寫論說文一篇,詳述你的見解。文章題目自擬

2019 新冠肺炎爆發其間,全球學校推行網上教學。疫情過後,學校多已恢復實體 課堂。有人建議大專學界應趁機轉型,除了必要的實體實驗和實習外,院校應推 行全面網上授課,讓教學雙方的時間和空間更具彈性;也有人認為網課難以取代 傳統的面授課堂,院校應維持實體授課。請就此撰寫論說文一篇,詳述個人見解,

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本年度推出兩款寫作指導,比各位同學選擇

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SPACE EHP Forum sample已出

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HKBU 大英 Annotated Bibli sample已出
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SPACE CCEN4200 CARDS
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今個sem全新「A Range 保證」改文計劃!我哋唔單止會幫你改文,仲保證你可以拎到 A range 嘅分數!😎

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HKBU BIOL2037 Asm1 Sample已出
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HKU SPACE History Individual Essay Sample已出
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