上次出完personal statememt參考開頭，今次就等我講下personal statement可以點樣收筆啦！一般嚟講都係表達返你好有興趣加入佢間大學，如果唔sure點收尾可以參考以下句子：
1. I look forward to hearing from you and seeing how I can contribute to your university.
2. My commitment to success is unwavering, and I am excited for what the future holds.
3. As such, it is with enthusiasm that I express interest in joining your university and giving it my very best effort each day!
4. Achieving my long-term goals depends strongly on your confidence in me; thank you for considering my application.
5. From this moment, I embark on a journey of learning and growth which will lead to continuous successes down the line.
6. I am confident that with this unique combination of experience and skill, I will be an excellent addition to your university.
7. Let me leave you with one thought: together we can work towards making a difference in the world around us!
8. As someone who strives for excellence in all areas of life, I am confident I will bring great value to your program or university if given the opportunity.
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1. I look forward to hearing from you and seeing how I can contribute to your university.
2. My commitment to success is unwavering, and I am excited for what the future holds.
3. As such, it is with enthusiasm that I express interest in joining your university and giving it my very best effort each day!
4. Achieving my long-term goals depends strongly on your confidence in me; thank you for considering my application.
5. From this moment, I embark on a journey of learning and growth which will lead to continuous successes down the line.
6. I am confident that with this unique combination of experience and skill, I will be an excellent addition to your university.
7. Let me leave you with one thought: together we can work towards making a difference in the world around us!
8. As someone who strives for excellence in all areas of life, I am confident I will bring great value to your program or university if given the opportunity.
歡迎查詢寫文C Personal Statement作品集、Personal Statement寫作服務及改文服務，詳情請pm @ugfn1000 。
Subscribe 請按 @essayC 。
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改文通常會改兩三浸，有唔明白嘅地方會請同學用返中文解比我聽。第一浸改完之後謄咗文會有第二次改文，不需另加收費。如果唔明點解我咁改，都可以提出，我可以解釋返。
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個人化Essay plan包含thesis statement及每段Topic sentence。
Sample題目：
1. "Is it rational to expect extraterrestrial life forms with civilization more advanced than human beings to treat us as their equals? How is your judgment to this question related to the problem of space exploration?"
2. "Religion is unscientific as religion talks about the world after we die and we don't have any pieces of evidence to support it. So religion is just an obstacle to human development."
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個人化Essay plan包含thesis statement及每段Topic sentence。
Sample題目：
1. "Is it rational to expect extraterrestrial life forms with civilization more advanced than human beings to treat us as their equals? How is your judgment to this question related to the problem of space exploration?"
2. "Religion is unscientific as religion talks about the world after we die and we don't have any pieces of evidence to support it. So religion is just an obstacle to human development."
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