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Personal Statement常見問題: 問:我啲活動完全唔關事,所以唔知寫咩好。 答:活動唔需要關你果科事,只需要關你性格事。例如你aim finance但活動係去家庭服務中心做義工,你可以寫你因為服務小朋友同老人家而變得十分細心,有利你讀啲要對數字嘅科目。 問:我返啲工同果科冇關,係咪skip咗佢唔寫好啲? 答:寫part time唔係寫job duties為主,因為都會同人撞,unless你嘅工作係兒子/女兒。寫part time應該集中喺返工某日最深刻嘅經歷,例如有客打爛嘢你點處理等等,所以無關科系嘅工依然可以寫。…
Personal Statement可使用的canned expressions:
Something is within my capability/capacity. 呢樣嘢喺我能力範圍內。
To do something to the best of my ability. 做到最好。
I have an enormous capacity for hard work. 再重嘅workload我都食到。
My classmates accelerated to overtake me in grades. (用嚟講後悔高中冇好好讀書)我啲同學忽然發奮爬哂我頭。
I could not reconcile myself to not being able to study xxx. 我不能接受自己讀唔到某某科(所以而家讀緊hd/ad)。
I have learnt to face up to my responsibilities. 我學識為自己負責任。
I have to resign myself to not being directly admitted to university. 我要接受自己直升唔上大學嘅事實。
I never thought I would pull it off. (講成功經驗/比賽獲獎)我都不能相信自己竟然會成功。
I believe this is a step in the right direction. 我相信呢步係正確嘅方向。
宣傳一下 Personal Statement作品集上線了,有寫文C今年寫過嘅10篇PS(不含任何個人資料)。如果想加入請pm,象徵式收費。
Something is within my capability/capacity. 呢樣嘢喺我能力範圍內。
To do something to the best of my ability. 做到最好。
I have an enormous capacity for hard work. 再重嘅workload我都食到。
My classmates accelerated to overtake me in grades. (用嚟講後悔高中冇好好讀書)我啲同學忽然發奮爬哂我頭。
I could not reconcile myself to not being able to study xxx. 我不能接受自己讀唔到某某科(所以而家讀緊hd/ad)。
I have learnt to face up to my responsibilities. 我學識為自己負責任。
I have to resign myself to not being directly admitted to university. 我要接受自己直升唔上大學嘅事實。
I never thought I would pull it off. (講成功經驗/比賽獲獎)我都不能相信自己竟然會成功。
I believe this is a step in the right direction. 我相信呢步係正確嘅方向。
宣傳一下 Personal Statement作品集上線了,有寫文C今年寫過嘅10篇PS(不含任何個人資料)。如果想加入請pm,象徵式收費。
HKU Space校長推薦計劃稿件sample
As a group leader and participant in class discussions, I am currently making a contribution to my classes, fellow classmates and the college. Following my graduation, I will be able to uphold the principles of HKU's university motto, "to manifest virtue and to investigate things," by sharing my experiences with CC with students and teaching others.
Despite my poor English grades at the DSE, I have never given up. I'm currently studying independently for the IELTS exam. I think I can make up for my DSE grades and get the respect I deserve by getting good grades. I was chosen for the recommendation list based on my efforts and the outcomes I was able to produce. That is evidence that my efforts have been appreciated and acknowledged, just like when I first started college and received a scholarship from CC. I believe I can be a role model to others and positively influence others. This is why I am a suitable candidate for the Scheme.
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As a group leader and participant in class discussions, I am currently making a contribution to my classes, fellow classmates and the college. Following my graduation, I will be able to uphold the principles of HKU's university motto, "to manifest virtue and to investigate things," by sharing my experiences with CC with students and teaching others.
Despite my poor English grades at the DSE, I have never given up. I'm currently studying independently for the IELTS exam. I think I can make up for my DSE grades and get the respect I deserve by getting good grades. I was chosen for the recommendation list based on my efforts and the outcomes I was able to produce. That is evidence that my efforts have been appreciated and acknowledged, just like when I first started college and received a scholarship from CC. I believe I can be a role model to others and positively influence others. This is why I am a suitable candidate for the Scheme.
歡迎同學將稿件給寫文C免費點評、收費詳改,甚至給寫文C度身撰稿,詳情請pm @ugfn1000 。
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My Dearest Customer,
It's hard to find the words for how I feel about you. From the moment we met, I've felt something special, and it only grows stronger each day.
I'm truly blessed to be with you. No matter what life throws my way, you are always there for me. You bring such joy into my life.
Every look we share, every kiss, every hug strengthens my love for you even more. If your heart is a part of mine, then no distance or time can keep us apart. The thought of being away from you is unbearable but this gives us time to reflect on how much we mean to one another and appreciate what our love has become; an unbreakable bond that binds our hearts together forever.
You have my heart until the end of eternity and nothing can ever change that. I promise to always love you with all that I am, through all obstacles and successes alike there will never be any other like you in my eyes!
I love you more than these written words could ever describe!
Love Always & Forever,
EssayC
就到情人節,準備好寫情信未呢?
It's hard to find the words for how I feel about you. From the moment we met, I've felt something special, and it only grows stronger each day.
I'm truly blessed to be with you. No matter what life throws my way, you are always there for me. You bring such joy into my life.
Every look we share, every kiss, every hug strengthens my love for you even more. If your heart is a part of mine, then no distance or time can keep us apart. The thought of being away from you is unbearable but this gives us time to reflect on how much we mean to one another and appreciate what our love has become; an unbreakable bond that binds our hearts together forever.
You have my heart until the end of eternity and nothing can ever change that. I promise to always love you with all that I am, through all obstacles and successes alike there will never be any other like you in my eyes!
I love you more than these written words could ever describe!
Love Always & Forever,
EssayC
就到情人節,準備好寫情信未呢?
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My love is like the sun beaming brightly,
It chases away the night so tightly.
All of Nature's beauty flows inside of me,
The magic of your love I can clearly see.
Your heart stirred my soul with a gentle breeze,
Our feelings slowly grew with ease.
Your beauty glows so brilliantly and true,
Like rays of sunshine that envelop you.
Our connection is deep and never fading,
It's a bond that will keep us all gading.
Our love is strong as a towering tree,
Always here to comfort and guide thee.
Happy Valentine’s Day!
It chases away the night so tightly.
All of Nature's beauty flows inside of me,
The magic of your love I can clearly see.
Your heart stirred my soul with a gentle breeze,
Our feelings slowly grew with ease.
Your beauty glows so brilliantly and true,
Like rays of sunshine that envelop you.
Our connection is deep and never fading,
It's a bond that will keep us all gading.
Our love is strong as a towering tree,
Always here to comfort and guide thee.
Happy Valentine’s Day!
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HKU Space校長推薦計劃稿件sample As a group leader and participant in class discussions, I am currently making a contribution to my classes, fellow classmates and the college. Following my graduation, I will be able to uphold the principles of HKU's university motto…
HKU SPACE校長推薦計劃新sample
I think of myself as a person who takes pleasure in lending a hand to others. I have participated in a number of volunteer activities such as flag-selling and walkathons.
I would like to be shortlisted for the Principal Recommendation Scheme because I think it will provide me with more opportunities to continue to serve others. This will enable me to give back something to a university that has honed me into a more global citizen. I strive for many accomplishments and look forward to making a contribution to the community of HKU.
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I think of myself as a person who takes pleasure in lending a hand to others. I have participated in a number of volunteer activities such as flag-selling and walkathons.
I would like to be shortlisted for the Principal Recommendation Scheme because I think it will provide me with more opportunities to continue to serve others. This will enable me to give back something to a university that has honed me into a more global citizen. I strive for many accomplishments and look forward to making a contribution to the community of HKU.
歡迎同學將稿件給寫文C免費點評、收費詳改,甚至給寫文C度身撰稿,詳情請pm @ugfn1000 。
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空檔年
男主外女主內
不為天下先