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I am doing a project on the most effective method of learning new words in a foreign language for Zetland teenagers. I have found a pie chart with the results of a survey. I am going to comment on the data and give my opinion on the subject of the project.

Looking at the pie chart, I can identify a few main facts. The majority of the respondents choose the option “Make paper cards with words” (48%) answering the survey question “What is the most effective method of learning new words in a foreign language?”. It is also clearly seen that the responses “Use a mobile app” and “Learn lists of words by heart” constitute 20% and 5% of the total respectively.

According to the data, the figure for the option “Make sentences with new words “ (18%) is twice higher than that for “Use mnemonic techniques” (9%). This is unsurprising as using new words in a context provides better comprehension of the meaning and long-term memorisation, whereas mnemonic techniques are helpful for low level students only.

It is worth mentioning that one of the problems that can arise with learning a foreign language is lack of speaking practice which is crucial for learner’s fluency. The solution is to communicate with native speakers via special online platforms or social media.

To conclude, I firmly believe that learning a foreign language is of great importance as it improves one’s career opportunities and also broadens our horizon.

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I am doing a project on why Zetlanders rarely buy Christmas presents online. I have found a table with the results of a relevant survey. I am going to comment on these data and give my opinion on the subject of the project.
According to the data in the table, 52% of the respondents, answering the survey question “Why do you rarely buy Christmas presents online?”, choose the option “Difficult to find a high-quality present”. Another 13% opt for the response “Choosing takes too much time”. It is also clearly seen that the option “Late delivery” (11%) is ranked fourth.
It is worth mentioning that such reason for RARELY buying Christmas presents online as the fact that the photo may be deceptive (18%) is more common than the fact that no gift packaging is provided (6%). This is natural as photos can be misleading in terms of the size of a gift or the material it is made of, and it is impossible to fix these if they are not exactly what one expected. A gift packaging, however, can be bought additionally.
Unfortunately, some problems can arise with buying presents online. One of them is late delivery, which can be frustrating and can ruin the whole celebration. An obvious solution is to buy gifts in advance. This can have an additional bonus: one will have time to order another gift if something goes wrong.
To conclude, I think it is not advisable to buy presents online because it is impractical. One can get a damaged or wrong item due to the impossibility to physically examine the purchase.

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While doing a project on why Zetlanders rarely buy Christmas presents online , I found a table with the results of a survey. I am going to comment on the survey data and give my opinion on the subject of the project.
Based on the table, 52% respondents choose “Difficult to find a high-quality present” as an answer to the survey question “Why do you rarely buy Christmas presents online?”. Another 13% of those surveyed opt for “Choosing takes too much time”. Notably, a small fraction of the polled (11%) choose the response “Late delivery”.
Looking more closely at the table, I can note that the figure for “The photo may be deceptive” is three times higher than that for “No gift packaging”, at 18% and 6% respectively. This is not surprising because vendors can post misleading product photos to increase sales, while gifts can be easily wrapped by customers.
Unfortunately, when buying presents online one might be concerned about having a purchase delivered on time. The solution would be to carefully check delivery dates and to order a gift in advance.
In conclusion, I believe that it is advisable to buy presents online because online stores and e-commerce platforms offer a wide variety of goods to choose from. Furthermore, they usually provide a reliable shipping service and flexible exchange policy. (257 words)

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1) Не задаем вопросы про количество страниц в книге и про цвет обложки - такие вопросы считаются не содержательными и не принимаются.

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Добрый день! Метод " задай 4 вопроса to be on the safe side" работает! Спасибо за Ваши рекомендации, коллеги и за такую прекрасную группу. Я конечно говорила своей девочке, что спрашивать про колличество страниц строго запрещено, но она все равно умудрилась спросить. Спас запасной вопрос)) Работу оценили на максимум.

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