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реальные задания экзамена 2024 года
задание 1
#theatre
#театр
#егэ2024реальныезадания

Вот мой вариант. Не смогла удержаться, чтобы не впихнуть инверсию - годы подготовки к IELTS никуда не денешь, конечно, но в ЕГЭ это абсолютно необязательно.


I am currently working on a project on why some Zetlanders are not keen on theatre going and I have found a pie chart with the results of a survey. I am going to analyse them and express my opinion.

Looking at the pie chart, I can identify some facts. The most popular answers to the question “Why
are you not keen on theatre going?” are “too expensive” (52%) and "too far from home" (18%). IN CONTRAST, the least frequently chosen option is “inconvenient time of performances” (6%). NOTABLY, the options “other interests”and “online broadcasting available” make up 13% and 11% of the total respectively.

According to the data, the proportion of those who do not go to the theatre due to financial concerns is higher than that of those who are not keen on theatre going because they have other interests. It can be assumed that in order to attract more visitors theatres should consider offering discounts. Not only will it make theatre going more affordable to those who are on tight budget, but it could also make those who have other interests reconsider their attitude to theatre.

However, there are some problems which can arise while choosing a play to watch. One of them
is that there are often so many performances on that it is hard to choose the best one. A solution is to read reviews online or ask one’s friends to recommend a play to watch.

In conclusion, I believe that theatre going is very important as it allows people to broaden their horizons. In addition, theatre is a great place to meet like-minded people.

И никто не заметил, что это не пирожок, а таблица …

Вот небольшой список универсальных фраз для объяснения роли/важности чего-либо для последнего параграфа. Если есть дополнения, велкам в комментарии!

In conclusion, I believe that *** is really important/plays a pivotal role in our lives because

it gives people/students/teenagers a brilliant opportunity to
broaden their horizons,
meet like-minded people,
reduce stress,
enhance their overall well-being,
improve their mood,
learn new skills,
improve their skills

In addition, it can
open doors to more career opportunities
help (to) reduce stress
help (to) meet like-minded people
help one to become more rounded as a person

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Новости из документа с анализом ошибок экзамена 2024 по эссе.

1)

В ЕГЭ 2025 г. от участника ожидается правильное в
пунктуационном отношении оформление подобных предложений. В идеале следует
использовать принятое в английском языке графическое оформление кавычек, но
отступление от этого ошибкой считаться не будет.

Перевод:

Раньше за отсутствие кавычек при цитировании опций не снижали, теперь будут снижать. Кавычки можно писать по-разному, но лучше в Английском варианте (“”)

2)

Во вступлении авторы стремятся дать некую вводную фразу общего характера перед
описанием коммуникативной ситуации. Эта фраза необязательна, но возможна.
К сожалению, в целом ряде работ вступительная фраза, бездумно взятая из какого-то
шаблона, противоречит дальнейшему изложению, а то и самой теме проектной работы,
что является логической ошибкой.

Перевод:

Как и всегда, эту фразу просто не пишем. Не пишем и все. Даже если очень хочется. Скорее всего, напишете фигню.

3)

Новая ошибка этого года в средствах логической связи, неожиданно получившая
широкое распространение, – это неуместное использование слова overall: Overall, as can
be seen from the table, 29% of the surveyed do not want to go to music schools as they do not see
a fast result. Использование этого слова возможно при определенном обобщении, общем
описании ситуации, но является ошибкой, когда приводится один конкретный факт.

Перевод:

Не пишем overall, если в предложении один факт. Если получится впихнуть в одно предложение все факты, которые вы приводите во втором абзаце, то ладно, но так не получится.

4)

Стали чаще встречаться работы, в которых некоторые слова взяты в скобки, но
не зачеркнуты. При исправлениях следует зачеркивать ненужные слова, даже если они
берутся в скобки, иначе нарушается смысл текста и его связность, поскольку скобки – это
пунктуационный знак, имеющий свои функции.

Перевод:

Научиться зачеркивать неверный вариант.

задание ЕГЭ 2024

I am currently working on a project on why some Zetlanders refuse to attend music schools and I have found a table with the results of a survey. I am going to analyse them and express my opinion.

Looking at the table, I can identify some facts. While the most popular answer to the question “Why do you refuse to attend a music school??” is “No fast results” (29%). By contrast, the lowest proportion of the respondents are not willing to go to a music school because they lack have no money for a quality instrument (14%). Another interesting fact is that 19% of those surveyed refuse say they do not want to attend a music school as they are not interested in music.

According to the data, the proportion of those who choose "Time-consuming" as an answer to the survey question is higher than that of those who opt for "Far from home", at 23% and 15% respectively probably because It can be explained by the fact that learning to play music this activity takes years of regular practice and few people have enough time to do that. In addition, I can assume that Zetland has plenty of music schools and distance is not such a big problem.

However, there are some problems which can arise while learning to play a musical instrument. One of them
is that one can easily lose motivation to learn and give up as it takes a lot of time and effort. A solution is to watch videos of talented musicians to get inspired and stay motivated.

In conclusion, I believe that one should be able to play
a musical instrument as it develops creativity. In addition, it it a good way to express oneself.

283 слова - надо урезать
вот за что я люблю шаблон с пятью опциями, так это за то что там не надо перефразировать и тратить слова

что еще урезать?

Хотя я и люблю писать все пять фактов во втором параграфе, вот идеи для трех фактов во втором параграфе.

Рандомные факты:

According to the data in the pie chart/table, ___% of the surveyed choose “option name” as a response to the survey question “question?”. Another ___% opt for “option name”. It is also clearly seen that ___% of the respondents choose “option name”

Самое большое, второе и самое маленькое:

According to the data in the table, the most popular answer to the question “Question?” is “option” (%), followed by “option” (%). By contrast, the least frequently cited option is “option” (%)


Самое большое, рандомное и рандомное:

According to the data in the table, the most popular answer to the question “Question?” is “option” (%). It is also clearly seen that ___% of the respondents choose “option”, and “option” makes up ___% of the total.

According to the data in the table, the most popular answer to the question “Question?” is “option” (%). It is also clearly seen that “option” and “option” make up ___% and ___% of the total respectively.

Рандом, рандом, самое маленькое:

According to the data in the pie chat/table, ___% of the surveyed choose “option name” as a response to the survey question “question?”. It is also clearly seen that ___% of the respondents opt for “option”, and the least frequently cited option is “option” (%)

Большое, рандомное, маленькое:

According to the data in the table, the most popular answer to the question “Question?” is “option” (%). By contrast, the least frequently cited option is “option” (%). It is also clearly seen that ___% of the respondents choose “option name”

Варианты выше можно собирать, как конструктор, и по сути можно уложиться всего в 4 комбинации:

Sentence 1: 1 fact

According to the data in the table,

the most popular answer to the question “question” is “option” (%)

or

% of the surveyed choose “option” as a response to the survey question “question”

Sentence 2: 2 facts

It is also clearly seen that

the least frequently cited option is “option” (%), and “option” makes up % of the total,

or

the options “option” and “option” make up % and % of the total respectively

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ФИПИ 2025 тест 1
предположим что проблема
with drinking enough water

(intro)

Looking at the table, I can identify some facts. The most popular answer to the survey question "How often do you drink water?” is "from time to time at school, between the lessons", at 45%. It is also clearly seen that the least frequently cited option is “It depends on the weather a lot” (7%), and “Almost never, I prefer other drinks” makes up 12 % of the total.

According to the data in the table, the proportion of the respondents who drink water only at home, in the morning and in the evening is higher than that of those who drink water every hour from their own bottle, at 25% and 11% respectively. It can be suggested that schools in Zetland should raise students' awareness about how important it is to drink water regularly.

Unfortunately, there are some problems that can arise with drinking enough water. One of them is that people often drink water from disposable plastic bottles which are then thrown away, and it leads to plastic pollution. A solution is to buy reusable water bottles which do not harm the environment.

In conclusion, I think that it is very important to drink enough water because it helps people to stay healthy. In addition, it has a positive impact on one's skin condition.

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2025 тест 1 38.2

I am currently working on a project on what outdoor summer activities Zetland teenagers like the most, and I have found a pie chart with the results of a survey. I am going to analyse them and express my opinion.

To begin with, I would like to say that 23% of those polled choose “Riding a bike or a scooter” as a response to the survey question “What outdoor summer activity do you like the most?”. It can also be seen that “playing active games” makes up 16% of the total, and the least frequently cited option is “Working out on a sports ground” (7%)

According to the data, 46% of those polled like walking with friends the most, while 8% say that their favorite activity is rollerblading. This is not surprising as the former plays a crucial role for adolescents. In addition, it does not require any special skills unlike the latter.

However, there are some problems which can arise while playing active games in the summer. One of them
is that one can get a sunburn or even a sunstroke in hot and sunny weather . A solution is to wear a cap or a hat and put on sunscreen on sunny days.

In conclusion, I believe that spending enough time outdoors in the summer is very important for teenagers because it helps them to keep fit. Apart from that, it has a positive impact on their emotional wellbeing .

ФИПИ тайм на нашем канале!

Я, как самоназначенный амбассадор ФИПИ, хочу обратить внимание на такой удобный для слабых учащихся факт, что сравнение в третьем параграфе может быть выражено с помощью синтаксических сравнительных конструкций ✅

2025, тест 2, 38.1