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I am currently working on a project on why teenagers in Zetland do extreme sports, and I have found some data in the form of a table – the results of the opinion polls. I would like to analyse them and express my opinion.
Looking at the table, I can identify some main facts. The most popular answer to the question "Why do you do extreme sports?" is "to get some adrenaline" (49%), followed by "to follow modern trends" (17%). 13% select "to increase self-confidence". The least frequently selected answers are "to fight fears and stress" and "to explore one's limits, at 12 % and 9% respectively.
Further analysis of the responses to the opinion poll question reveals that the proportion of the people who opt for "to get some adrenaline" is higher than that of those who opt for "to increase self-confidence", at 49% and 13% respectively. This is not surprising because people who do extreme sports are addicted to adrenaline. At the same time, risky sports are very challenging so many people fail or get injured which does not increase their self-confidence.
It is worth mentioning that there is a typical problem that one can face while doing an extreme sport -the chances of breaking a limb are very high. The way forward might be to do extreme sports under professional supervision and use only high-quality equipment.
In conclusion, I believe that extreme sports play an important role in the lives of young people. This is because such sports bring them plenty of new emotions and help to relieve stress.
Looking at the table, I can identify some main facts. The most popular answer to the question "Why do you do extreme sports?" is "to get some adrenaline" (49%), followed by "to follow modern trends" (17%). 13% select "to increase self-confidence". The least frequently selected answers are "to fight fears and stress" and "to explore one's limits, at 12 % and 9% respectively.
Further analysis of the responses to the opinion poll question reveals that the proportion of the people who opt for "to get some adrenaline" is higher than that of those who opt for "to increase self-confidence", at 49% and 13% respectively. This is not surprising because people who do extreme sports are addicted to adrenaline. At the same time, risky sports are very challenging so many people fail or get injured which does not increase their self-confidence.
It is worth mentioning that there is a typical problem that one can face while doing an extreme sport -the chances of breaking a limb are very high. The way forward might be to do extreme sports under professional supervision and use only high-quality equipment.
In conclusion, I believe that extreme sports play an important role in the lives of young people. This is because such sports bring them plenty of new emotions and help to relieve stress.
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I am currently working on a project on the most important factors teenagers in Zetland consider when choosing a travel destination, and I have found a pie chart with the results of a survey. I would like to analyse them and express my opinion.
Looking at the pie chart, I can identify some main facts. The most popular answer to the question "What is the most important factor to consider when choosing a travel destination?" is "Cost" (42%), followed by the option "Safety" (28%). The least frequently chosen answers are "Distance" and "Natural beauty", at 10% and 2% respectively.
According to the data, the proportion of the people who opt for the response "Safety" is higher than that of those who choose "Culture". This is not surprising because one will not be able to enjoy the local culture if they feel uneasy in a dangerous place.
Unfortunately, there is a typical problem that one can face while having a holiday - one can get lost and get into trouble. A solution might be to install a special application on one's phone which will help travellers to find their way around.
In conclusion, I believe that the best travelling destinations in my country are Sochi and the Altai Republic. This is because there are spectacular views and one can relax and unwind.
Looking at the pie chart, I can identify some main facts. The most popular answer to the question "What is the most important factor to consider when choosing a travel destination?" is "Cost" (42%), followed by the option "Safety" (28%). The least frequently chosen answers are "Distance" and "Natural beauty", at 10% and 2% respectively.
According to the data, the proportion of the people who opt for the response "Safety" is higher than that of those who choose "Culture". This is not surprising because one will not be able to enjoy the local culture if they feel uneasy in a dangerous place.
Unfortunately, there is a typical problem that one can face while having a holiday - one can get lost and get into trouble. A solution might be to install a special application on one's phone which will help travellers to find their way around.
In conclusion, I believe that the best travelling destinations in my country are Sochi and the Altai Republic. This is because there are spectacular views and one can relax and unwind.
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Когда мы пишем проблему, нужно объяснить, почему это проблема.
Например:
A typical problem that can arise while visiting a museum is that tickets can be expensive.
То, что билеты дорогие, это не проблема, это у вас денег нет. Например, для владельца музея это вообще не проблема, для миллионеров это не проблема.
Подумаем чуть дальше. Какой из этого следует результат? Почему тот факт, что билеты дорогие, становится проблемой для многих людей? Не некоторых! А многих.
so many people simply cannot afford going there.
Вот теперь проблема.
Такие дела.
Например:
A typical problem that can arise while visiting a museum is that tickets can be expensive.
То, что билеты дорогие, это не проблема
Подумаем чуть дальше. Какой из этого следует результат? Почему тот факт, что билеты дорогие, становится проблемой для многих людей? Не некоторых! А многих.
so many people simply cannot afford going there.
Вот теперь проблема.
Такие дела.
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Re: Задание 38, выбор глаголов
от Мария Валерьевна Вербицкая - понедельник, 8 апреля 2024, 21:03
Уважаемая Евгения Викторовна!
Чтобы разобраться в нюансах употребления синонимов, надо поработать с несколькими словарями и привлечь другие источники, изучить контексты употребления синонимов. Отвечу кратко. Некоторая стилистическая разница между интересующими нас синонимами проблемы не представляет, т.к. ни один из этих глаголов не маркируется в словарях как spoken, colloquial, informal. Они все более или менее нейтральны, с некоторыми колебаниями в ту или иную сторону.
Я не рекомендую select, потому что считаю, что респонденты в ходе соцопроса вряд ли выбирают ответ из предложенных “by making careful decisions”, это требует времени и дополнительной информации, а в условиях соцопроса на это обычно нет времени – см. Кембриджский словарь.
Я не рекомендую single out – см. collinsdictionary.com: If you single someone out from a group, you choose them and give them special attention or treatment. – этого тоже нет в соцопросе. Мы также обсуждали на форуме vote в нашем контексте – не подходит семантически.
Т.о., рекомендую choose & opt for. В заключение все-таки позволю себе заметить, что в цели ПК изучение английского языка не входит.
С уважением,
МВ
от Мария Валерьевна Вербицкая - понедельник, 8 апреля 2024, 21:03
Уважаемая Евгения Викторовна!
Чтобы разобраться в нюансах употребления синонимов, надо поработать с несколькими словарями и привлечь другие источники, изучить контексты употребления синонимов. Отвечу кратко. Некоторая стилистическая разница между интересующими нас синонимами проблемы не представляет, т.к. ни один из этих глаголов не маркируется в словарях как spoken, colloquial, informal. Они все более или менее нейтральны, с некоторыми колебаниями в ту или иную сторону.
Я не рекомендую select, потому что считаю, что респонденты в ходе соцопроса вряд ли выбирают ответ из предложенных “by making careful decisions”, это требует времени и дополнительной информации, а в условиях соцопроса на это обычно нет времени – см. Кембриджский словарь.
Я не рекомендую single out – см. collinsdictionary.com: If you single someone out from a group, you choose them and give them special attention or treatment. – этого тоже нет в соцопросе. Мы также обсуждали на форуме vote в нашем контексте – не подходит семантически.
Т.о., рекомендую choose & opt for. В заключение все-таки позволю себе заметить, что в цели ПК изучение английского языка не входит.
С уважением,
МВ
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Мой последний вариант шаблона:
I am currently working on a project on the most important reasons for doing sports
among teenagers in Zetland and I have found a table with the results of the opinion polls. I am going to analyse them and give my opinion on the
importance of sports in our lives.
Looking at the table, I can identify some facts. Answering the question “Why
is sport important to you?”, 33% of the respondents choose “it teaches teamwork
and problem-solving skills”, 11 % select “it encourages a social life” and the lowest
proportion of those surveyed opt for “it boosts self-esteem” (9 %).
The results of the opinion polls invite comparison. The proportion of those who do sports to reduce stress is higher than that of those who are into sports because they need to control weight, at 29% and 18% respectively, which is not surprising because modern life is really stressful and stress is known to cause stress-related illnesses. At the same time, doing a sport is not always helpful in losing weight as after a workout a person often feels hungry which often results in overeating.
However, there are some problems one can face while doing a sport. One of them
is that people can get injured. A solution is to do a sport under a proper supervision,
use only high-quality equipment and take all precautions.
In conclusion, I believe that sport plays a great role in our lives because it helps
us to stay healthy. In addition, if people did not do any sports, their lives would be
more boring.
I am currently working on a project on the most important reasons for doing sports
among teenagers in Zetland and I have found a table with the results of the opinion polls. I am going to analyse them and give my opinion on the
importance of sports in our lives.
Looking at the table, I can identify some facts. Answering the question “Why
is sport important to you?”, 33% of the respondents choose “it teaches teamwork
and problem-solving skills”, 11 % select “it encourages a social life” and the lowest
proportion of those surveyed opt for “it boosts self-esteem” (9 %).
The results of the opinion polls invite comparison. The proportion of those who do sports to reduce stress is higher than that of those who are into sports because they need to control weight, at 29% and 18% respectively, which is not surprising because modern life is really stressful and stress is known to cause stress-related illnesses. At the same time, doing a sport is not always helpful in losing weight as after a workout a person often feels hungry which often results in overeating.
However, there are some problems one can face while doing a sport. One of them
is that people can get injured. A solution is to do a sport under a proper supervision,
use only high-quality equipment and take all precautions.
In conclusion, I believe that sport plays a great role in our lives because it helps
us to stay healthy. In addition, if people did not do any sports, their lives would be
more boring.
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новое авторское задание 38 - вы заметили, что в этом году было много эссе с отрицанием в формулировке?
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I am currently working on a project on attitudes to gap years in Zetland and I have found a pie chart with the results of the opinion polls. I am going to analyse them and express my opinion.
Looking at the ie chart, I can identify some facts. The most popular answers to the question “Why
do you refuse to take a gap year” are “financial concerns” (30%) and "fear of falling behind" (27%). IN CONTRAST, the least commonly cited response is “desire to start my career” (4%). NOTABLY, the options “pressure to follow a traditional path” and “uncertainty about what to do” make up 22% and 17% of the total respectively.
According to the data, the proportion of those who refuse to take a year out due to financial concerns is higher than that of those who do so because they are uncertain about what to do, which is not surprising because of the ongoing global financial crisis. At the same time, it is quite easy to do some research and find out what gap year options are available today.
However, there are some problems which can arise with returning to studies after a gao year. One of them
is that students often fall behind because they forget what they have learnt at school. A solution is for parents to encourage young people to do some studying during their gap year.
In conclusion, I believe that travelling is the best way to spend a year off because it helps one to broaden their horizons and recharge their batteries.
Looking at the ie chart, I can identify some facts. The most popular answers to the question “Why
do you refuse to take a gap year” are “financial concerns” (30%) and "fear of falling behind" (27%). IN CONTRAST, the least commonly cited response is “desire to start my career” (4%). NOTABLY, the options “pressure to follow a traditional path” and “uncertainty about what to do” make up 22% and 17% of the total respectively.
According to the data, the proportion of those who refuse to take a year out due to financial concerns is higher than that of those who do so because they are uncertain about what to do, which is not surprising because of the ongoing global financial crisis. At the same time, it is quite easy to do some research and find out what gap year options are available today.
However, there are some problems which can arise with returning to studies after a gao year. One of them
is that students often fall behind because they forget what they have learnt at school. A solution is for parents to encourage young people to do some studying during their gap year.
In conclusion, I believe that travelling is the best way to spend a year off because it helps one to broaden their horizons and recharge their batteries.
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Меня часто спрашивают (преимущественно голоса в моей голове):
Отвечаю.
Numerous
There are numerous problems that can arise while studying online. One of them is that …
A considerable number of
It can probably be explained by the fact that a considerable number of teenagers do not know how to cook.
A multitude of
Young people can use a multitude of educational resources available online
A great deal of
Learning to play a musical instrument takes a great deal of time and effort
Чем заменить a lot of в эссе, чтобы повысить уровень лексики?
Отвечаю.
Numerous
There are numerous problems that can arise while studying online. One of them is that …
A considerable number of
It can probably be explained by the fact that a considerable number of teenagers do not know how to cook.
A multitude of
Young people can use a multitude of educational resources available online
A great deal of
Learning to play a musical instrument takes a great deal of time and effort
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Channel name was changed to «Эссе Английский 2025»
А вот и работа стобалльницы 2024.
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Пока не вышли новые методические рекомендации, пишем эссе по прежним требованиям.
Самое важное:
1) введение.
2) 2-3 факта. Удобно сгруппировать все данные в три группы, например, так:
Большое
Среднее
Маленькое
(Подводка). The most popular response to the survey question “Why do you keep making minor meaningless changes to the exam format?” is “ To drive teachers crazy” (36%), followed by “To imitate hard work” (28%). The responses “Just because we can” and “It’s none of your business” are also relatively popular, with 18% and 16% of the respondents choosing them respectively. It is also clearly seen that the least common response is “we are held hostage here please help us”, at only 2%.
3) (подводка)… the proportion of the respondents who make alterations to the format of the exam to drive teachers mad is significantly higher than that of those who do so against their will. It can be assumed that those responsible for the changes have a negative attitude towards educators and should be replaced with AI to minimise the damage to teachers’ mental health.
4) (подводка) например, такая:
It is worth mentioning that there are multiple problems that can arise with adapting to changes in the exam format. One of them is that many people find it hard to adapt as they do not see any sense in making regular alterations to the exam. A solution is to watch several webinars from the official exam centre and gain deep knowledge of the reasons behind the changes. As a result, understanding the reasons will facilitate adaptation.
5) In conclusion, I believe that …. because ….
(Подводка, I think/I believe that + мнение + объяснение)
Самое важное:
1) введение.
2) 2-3 факта. Удобно сгруппировать все данные в три группы, например, так:
Большое
Среднее
Маленькое
(Подводка). The most popular response to the survey question “Why do you keep making minor meaningless changes to the exam format?” is “ To drive teachers crazy” (36%), followed by “To imitate hard work” (28%). The responses “Just because we can” and “It’s none of your business” are also relatively popular, with 18% and 16% of the respondents choosing them respectively. It is also clearly seen that the least common response is “we are held hostage here please help us”, at only 2%.
3) (подводка)… the proportion of the respondents who make alterations to the format of the exam to drive teachers mad is significantly higher than that of those who do so against their will. It can be assumed that those responsible for the changes have a negative attitude towards educators and should be replaced with AI to minimise the damage to teachers’ mental health.
4) (подводка) например, такая:
It is worth mentioning that there are multiple problems that can arise with adapting to changes in the exam format. One of them is that many people find it hard to adapt as they do not see any sense in making regular alterations to the exam. A solution is to watch several webinars from the official exam centre and gain deep knowledge of the reasons behind the changes. As a result, understanding the reasons will facilitate adaptation.
5) In conclusion, I believe that …. because ….
(Подводка, I think/I believe that + мнение + объяснение)
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Простые советские подводки, которые помогут
не потерять баллы за К2
- без подводки.
To begin with, I would like to say that …
According to the information shown in the table/pie chart, …
Looking at the table, I can identify some main facts.
According to the data in the table/pie chart …
It is worth mentioning that there are some problems that … One of them is …
In conclusion, I think that …
не потерять баллы за К2
Абзац 1
- без подводки.
Абзац 2:
To begin with, I would like to say that …
According to the information shown in the table/pie chart, …
Looking at the table, I can identify some main facts.
Абзац 3:
According to the data in the table/pie chart …
Абзац 4:
It is worth mentioning that there are some problems that … One of them is …
Абзац 5:
In conclusion, I think that …
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