путешествия - авторское задание

I am currently working on a project on things teenagers in Zetland like doing when they travel, and I have found some data in the form of a pie chart – the results of the opinion polls. I would like to analyse them and express my opinion.

Looking at the pie chart, I can identify some main facts. While the most important aspect of travelling for the majority of the respondents is seeing new places (33%)б followed by relaxing (30%), a very small proportion of those surveyed believe that for them meeting new people is of utmost importance when they travel.

Further analysis of the responses to the opinion poll question "What aspect of travelling do you find the most important?" reveals that the proportion of the teenagers who select "trying new activities" is higher than that of those who opt for "sampling local food", at 18% and 12% respectively. This is not surprising
because new activities always bring new emotions, while local food can be too unusual for travellers.

It is worth mentioning that there is a typical problem that one can face on holiday - it can be hard to plan one's budget and it can result in overspending . The way forward might be to do a money management course and learn to manage one's money more effectively.

In conclusion, I believe that the best place to spend a holiday in my area is a small town called Dubna in the vicinity of Moscow. This is because this town is very quiet and peaceful and one can relax and recharge their batteries.

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какая проблема с этой проблемой?

I am currently working on a project on motivates people in Zetland to do volunteering, and I have found some data in the form of a table – the results of the opinion polls. I would like to analyse them and express my opinion.

Looking at the table, I can identify some main facts. The most popular answer to the question "What motivates you to do volunteering?" is "bringing benefit, helping others" (48%), followed by "getting new knowledge, skills" (20%). The least frequently selected answer is "exploring new places" (8%).

Further analysis of the responses to the opinion poll question reveals that the proportion of the people who select "finding new friends" is slightly higher than that of those who opt for "getting privileges, bonuses", at 14% and 10% respectively. Such a small gap is quite surprising
because socialisation plays a very important role in our lives. At the same time, there is no direct link between volunteering and getting privileges.

It is worth mentioning that there is a typical problem that can arise with volunteer work - it can be hard to balance one's time between volunteering and work or studies . The way forward might be to do a time management course and learn to manage one's time more effectively.

In conclusion, I believe that volunteering is very important for the society. This is because it can make the difference in people's lives and make the society kinder and more generous.

P1: There can be not enough volunteer opportunities available.

S: Try finding local organizations, community centers, or online platforms that offer volunteer work.
S2:Attend events to learn about volunteering options in your area.

P2: People do not have not enough time for volunteering.

S: select volunteer opportunities that fit one's schedule.

P3:: Volunteers often feel tired.

S: Make time for self-care and learn some basic relaxation techniques.

P4: Volunteers do not have enough skills and do not know how to do tasks properly.

S: Find organizations that provide training for volunteers.

make A difference конечно

ОТВЕТ ОТ ФИПИ по животрепещущим вопросам. Отвечает Александр Друзь Мария Вербицкая


1. В задании 38 НЕ будет ошибкой писать the majority of the respondents select «option_name» относительно самого высокого показателя в таблице/диаграмме, даже если он не превышает 50%. Правило, которое Вы имеете в виду, относится только к ситуации выборов (elections).
2. Можно the opinion polls заменить на some relevant opinion polls, можно повторить формулировку из задания – «большей» аутентичности от участника экзамена не требуется, артикль the как раз и несет мысль о том, что речь идет об опросах на указанную тему.

I am currently working on a project on why teenagers in Zetland do extreme sports, and I have found some data in the form of a table – the results of the opinion polls. I would like to analyse them and express my opinion.

Looking at the table, I can identify some main facts. The most popular answer to the question "Why do you do extreme sports?" is "to get some adrenaline" (49%), followed by "to follow modern trends" (17%). 13% select "to increase self-confidence". The least frequently selected answers are "to fight fears and stress" and "to explore one's limits, at 12 % and 9% respectively.

Further analysis of the responses to the opinion poll question reveals that the proportion of the people who opt for "to get some adrenaline" is higher than that of those who opt for "to increase self-confidence", at 49% and 13% respectively. This is not surprising because people who do extreme sports are addicted to adrenaline. At the same time, risky sports are very challenging so many people fail or get injured which does not increase their self-confidence.

It is worth mentioning that there is a typical problem that one can face while doing an extreme sport -the chances of breaking a limb are very high. The way forward might be to do extreme sports under professional supervision and use only high-quality equipment.

In conclusion, I believe that extreme sports play an important role in the lives of young people. This is because such sports bring them plenty of new emotions and help to relieve stress.

I am currently working on a project on the most important factors teenagers in Zetland consider when choosing a travel destination, and I have found a pie chart with the results of a survey. I would like to analyse them and express my opinion.

Looking at the pie chart, I can identify some main facts. The most popular answer to the question "What is the most important factor to consider when choosing a travel destination?" is "Cost" (42%), followed by the option "Safety" (28%). The least frequently chosen answers are "Distance" and "Natural beauty", at 10% and 2% respectively.

According to the data, the proportion of the people who opt for the response "Safety" is higher than that of those who choose "Culture". This is not surprising because one will not be able to enjoy the local culture if they feel uneasy in a dangerous place.

Unfortunately, there is a typical problem that one can face while having a holiday - one can get lost and get into trouble. A solution might be to install a special application on one's phone which will help travellers to find their way around.

In conclusion, I believe that the best travelling destinations in my country are Sochi and the Altai Republic. This is because there are spectacular views and one can relax and unwind.

Когда мы пишем проблему, нужно объяснить, почему это проблема.

Например:
A typical problem that can arise while visiting a museum is that tickets can be expensive.

То, что билеты дорогие, это не проблема, это у вас денег нет. Например, для владельца музея это вообще не проблема, для миллионеров это не проблема.

Подумаем чуть дальше. Какой из этого следует результат? Почему тот факт, что билеты дорогие, становится проблемой для многих людей? Не некоторых! А многих.

so many people simply cannot afford going there.

Вот теперь проблема.

Такие дела.

Знаете ли вы, что у этого канала есть чат? https://t.me/+hvZuGcq8SmJlNDFi

Re: Задание 38, выбор глаголов
от Мария Валерьевна Вербицкая - понедельник, 8 апреля 2024, 21:03
Уважаемая Евгения Викторовна!

Чтобы разобраться в нюансах употребления синонимов, надо поработать с несколькими словарями и привлечь другие источники, изучить контексты употребления синонимов. Отвечу кратко. Некоторая стилистическая разница между интересующими нас синонимами проблемы не представляет, т.к. ни один из этих глаголов не маркируется в словарях как spoken, colloquial, informal. Они все более или менее нейтральны, с некоторыми колебаниями в ту или иную сторону.

Я не рекомендую select, потому что считаю, что респонденты в ходе соцопроса вряд ли выбирают ответ из предложенных “by making careful decisions”, это требует времени и дополнительной информации, а в условиях соцопроса на это обычно нет времени – см. Кембриджский словарь.

Я не рекомендую single out – см. collinsdictionary.com: If you single someone out from a group, you choose them and give them special attention or treatment. – этого тоже нет в соцопросе. Мы также обсуждали на форуме vote в нашем контексте – не подходит семантически.

Т.о., рекомендую choose & opt for. В заключение все-таки позволю себе заметить, что в цели ПК изучение английского языка не входит.

С уважением,

МВ

Мой последний вариант шаблона:


I am currently working on a project on the most important reasons for doing sports
among teenagers in Zetland and I have found a table with the results of the opinion polls. I am going to analyse them and give my opinion on the
importance of sports in our lives.

Looking at the table, I can identify some facts. Answering the question “Why
is sport important to you?”, 33% of the respondents choose “it teaches teamwork
and problem-solving skills”, 11 % select “it encourages a social life” and the lowest
proportion of those surveyed opt for “it boosts self-esteem” (9 %).

The results of the opinion polls invite comparison. The proportion of those who do sports to reduce stress is higher than that of those who are into sports because they need to control weight, at 29% and 18% respectively, which is not surprising because modern life is really stressful and stress is known to cause stress-related illnesses. At the same time, doing a sport is not always helpful in losing weight as after a workout a person often feels hungry which often results in overeating.

However, there are some problems one can face while doing a sport. One of them
is that people can get injured. A solution is to do a sport under a proper supervision,
use only high-quality equipment and take all precautions.

In conclusion, I believe that sport plays a great role in our lives because it helps
us to stay healthy. In addition, if people did not do any sports, their lives would be
more boring.

новое авторское задание 38 - вы заметили, что в этом году было много эссе с отрицанием в формулировке?