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Should I read a page of this book every Sunday or yourself will read it with yourself?
Anonymous Poll
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Yes read it and if possible translate it and share its new and difficult words with their meanings.
75%
No need to read we will self study 🙂
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ENGLISH TOWN 🏘🏕
Should I read a page of this book every Sunday or yourself will read it with yourself?
As a result of votes 🗳 it is better for you to self study 📖 this book.
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امارت اسلامی: ۸۰ درصد حقوق زنان را احیا کرده‌ایم و کشورها باید از رفتار ما با زنان الگو بگیرند.
Islamic Imarat stated that it revived 80 % of women's rights and the world's countries must sample from us about treating with women.
What do you think about it? 🤦♀😒
Islamic Imarat stated that it revived 80 % of women's rights and the world's countries must sample from us about treating with women.
What do you think about it? 🤦♀😒
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تیم کریکت افغان ابدالیان امروز در جام ملت‌های آسیایی جوانان به مصاف تیم بنگله‌دیش می‌رود
این بازی راس ساعت ۶:۰۰ شام به وقت کابل برگزار خواهد شد.
Abdallian Afghan Cricket team is going to face with Bangladesh 🇧🇩 Cricket team today in the Asian youth cup matches.
This match will start today at 6:00 pm.
این بازی راس ساعت ۶:۰۰ شام به وقت کابل برگزار خواهد شد.
Abdallian Afghan Cricket team is going to face with Bangladesh 🇧🇩 Cricket team today in the Asian youth cup matches.
This match will start today at 6:00 pm.
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ENGLISH TOWN 🏘🏕
#lesson 6 Drafting: Drafting is a crucial stage in the writing process where writers transform their ideas and outlines into a structured piece of text. This phase involves putting thoughts on paper without worrying too much about perfection. Key aspects…
Lesson 7:
Revising:
Revising is a crucial step in the writing process that involves reviewing and improving your draft to enhance clarity, coherence, and overall effectiveness. Here’s a comprehensive overview of revising in English writing:
▎1. Understanding Revision
• Definition: Revision comes from the Latin word "revisere," meaning "to see again." It involves re-evaluating your work to make significant changes, rather than just correcting grammar or spelling errors.
• Purpose: The goal is to refine ideas, enhance structure, and ensure that the writing meets its intended purpose and audience expectations.
▎2. Stages of Revision
• Content Revision: Focus on the ideas presented. Ask yourself:
• Is the thesis clear and well-supported?
• Are the arguments logical and persuasive?
• Is there sufficient evidence?
• Structural Revision: Look at the organization of the piece. Consider:
• Is there a clear introduction, body, and conclusion?
• Do paragraphs flow logically from one to another?
• Are transitions effective?
• Style Revision: Refine your voice and tone. Evaluate:
• Is the language appropriate for the audience?
• Are sentence structures varied?
• Is the vocabulary precise and engaging?
• Mechanical Revision: Finally, focus on grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Check for:
• Sentence fragments and run-ons
• Subject-verb agreement
• Proper punctuation usage
▎3. Techniques for Effective Revision
• Take a Break: Step away from your writing for a while to gain fresh perspective.
• Read Aloud: Hearing your writing can help identify awkward phrasing or unclear passages.
• Peer Review: Sharing your work with others can provide valuable feedback and new insights.
• Use Checklists: Create a revision checklist to ensure you address all aspects of your writing.
• Focus on One Aspect at a Time: Don’t try to fix everything at once; concentrate on content, then structure, and so on.
▎4. Common Revision Strategies
• Reverse Outlining: Create an outline from your draft to visualize the structure and identify areas needing improvement.
• Questioning: Ask yourself critical questions about your work. For example:
• What is the main point of each paragraph?
• Does each section contribute to my overall argument?
• Cutting Unnecessary Words: Be concise. Remove redundant phrases or sentences that don’t add value.
• Adding Details: Enhance your writing by incorporating examples, anecdotes, or relevant data.
▎5. Final Steps
• Proofreading: After revising for content and structure, conduct a final check for grammatical errors and typos.
• Formatting: Ensure that your document adheres to any required formatting guidelines (e.g., MLA, APA).
• Feedback Loop: If possible, get feedback on the revised draft before finalizing it.
▎6. Tools and Resources
• Writing Centers: Many educational institutions offer writing centers where you can get help with revision.
• Online Tools: Use grammar checkers (like Grammarly) or style guides (like Purdue OWL) for additional support.
• Books on Writing: Consider reading books focused on writing and revision techniques (e.g., "On Writing Well" by William Zinsser).
▎Conclusion
Revising is an essential part of the writing process that transforms a rough draft into a polished piece. By systematically reviewing content, structure, style, and mechanics, writers can significantly improve their work. Embrace revision as an opportunity to refine your ideas and enhance your writing skills.
Revising:
Revising is a crucial step in the writing process that involves reviewing and improving your draft to enhance clarity, coherence, and overall effectiveness. Here’s a comprehensive overview of revising in English writing:
▎1. Understanding Revision
• Definition: Revision comes from the Latin word "revisere," meaning "to see again." It involves re-evaluating your work to make significant changes, rather than just correcting grammar or spelling errors.
• Purpose: The goal is to refine ideas, enhance structure, and ensure that the writing meets its intended purpose and audience expectations.
▎2. Stages of Revision
• Content Revision: Focus on the ideas presented. Ask yourself:
• Is the thesis clear and well-supported?
• Are the arguments logical and persuasive?
• Is there sufficient evidence?
• Structural Revision: Look at the organization of the piece. Consider:
• Is there a clear introduction, body, and conclusion?
• Do paragraphs flow logically from one to another?
• Are transitions effective?
• Style Revision: Refine your voice and tone. Evaluate:
• Is the language appropriate for the audience?
• Are sentence structures varied?
• Is the vocabulary precise and engaging?
• Mechanical Revision: Finally, focus on grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Check for:
• Sentence fragments and run-ons
• Subject-verb agreement
• Proper punctuation usage
▎3. Techniques for Effective Revision
• Take a Break: Step away from your writing for a while to gain fresh perspective.
• Read Aloud: Hearing your writing can help identify awkward phrasing or unclear passages.
• Peer Review: Sharing your work with others can provide valuable feedback and new insights.
• Use Checklists: Create a revision checklist to ensure you address all aspects of your writing.
• Focus on One Aspect at a Time: Don’t try to fix everything at once; concentrate on content, then structure, and so on.
▎4. Common Revision Strategies
• Reverse Outlining: Create an outline from your draft to visualize the structure and identify areas needing improvement.
• Questioning: Ask yourself critical questions about your work. For example:
• What is the main point of each paragraph?
• Does each section contribute to my overall argument?
• Cutting Unnecessary Words: Be concise. Remove redundant phrases or sentences that don’t add value.
• Adding Details: Enhance your writing by incorporating examples, anecdotes, or relevant data.
▎5. Final Steps
• Proofreading: After revising for content and structure, conduct a final check for grammatical errors and typos.
• Formatting: Ensure that your document adheres to any required formatting guidelines (e.g., MLA, APA).
• Feedback Loop: If possible, get feedback on the revised draft before finalizing it.
▎6. Tools and Resources
• Writing Centers: Many educational institutions offer writing centers where you can get help with revision.
• Online Tools: Use grammar checkers (like Grammarly) or style guides (like Purdue OWL) for additional support.
• Books on Writing: Consider reading books focused on writing and revision techniques (e.g., "On Writing Well" by William Zinsser).
▎Conclusion
Revising is an essential part of the writing process that transforms a rough draft into a polished piece. By systematically reviewing content, structure, style, and mechanics, writers can significantly improve their work. Embrace revision as an opportunity to refine your ideas and enhance your writing skills.
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سه فیلم از فیلم‌سازان افغان برنده جایزه بخش افغانستان جشنواره فیلم سماع در سویدن شدند.
فیلم‌های «زیباترین پیراهن کابلی» از کاظم عجرم، «آخرین تولد» از نوید محمدی و «کودکی من، وطن من» از فل گرابسکی و شعیب شریفی در فهرست برندگان جشنواره سماع‌اند.
Three films by Afghan filmmakers won awards in the Afghanistan section of the Samah Film Festival in Sweden.
The films "The Most Beautiful Kabul Dress" by Kazem Ajram, "The Last Birth" by Navid Mohammadi, and "My Childhood, My Homeland" by Phil Grabsky and Shoaib Sharifi are among the winners of the Samah Festival.
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فیلم‌های «زیباترین پیراهن کابلی» از کاظم عجرم، «آخرین تولد» از نوید محمدی و «کودکی من، وطن من» از فل گرابسکی و شعیب شریفی در فهرست برندگان جشنواره سماع‌اند.
Three films by Afghan filmmakers won awards in the Afghanistan section of the Samah Film Festival in Sweden.
The films "The Most Beautiful Kabul Dress" by Kazem Ajram, "The Last Birth" by Navid Mohammadi, and "My Childhood, My Homeland" by Phil Grabsky and Shoaib Sharifi are among the winners of the Samah Festival.
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Hello everyone
Good morning guys
Wish you to have a fabulous day ahead
Good morning guys
Wish you to have a fabulous day ahead
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"You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough."
Good afternoon 😊
Good afternoon 😊
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Tomorrow ( Wednesday) : speaking
https://t.me/echfle/408
Program: discussing about this issue by voice message: which gender looks to be more sensitive?
https://t.me/voicemessagemaliharahin/79/80
https://t.me/echfle/408
Program: discussing about this issue by voice message: which gender looks to be more sensitive?
https://t.me/voicemessagemaliharahin/79/80
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