Use relative clauses to add meaning

I read the book yesterday, which was interesting.

❌ unclear if "the book" or "yesterday" was interesting

Yesterday, I read the book, which was interesting.

✅ "which" refers to the "book"

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When your friend is your translator...

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The bar chart compares the percentage of sustainable energy in total supply in four countries between 1997 and 2010.

Overall, the proportion of renewable energy in Sweden and Iceland grew gradually, the reverse was true for Australia and Turkey. Additionally, the figure for Iceland was by far the highest in each year.

Iceland and Sweden showed increases in their percentage of renewable energy. In 1997, the percentage of renewable energy in Iceland started at about 45%, which were considerably higher than that of Sweden, about 5%. This gap became even more pronounced in 2000, as the figure for Iceland underwent a noticeable increase to 60% and that for Sweden rose to approximately 7%. In 2010, the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in Iceland reached its peak of 70%, while that of Sweden saw a minimal rise to about 9%.

Australia and Turkey, on the other hand, opposed the trend. The proportion of renewable energy in Australia started at about 9% in 1997, a figure that then decreased slightly to 7% in 2000. The figure experienced a slight decline to about 5% by the final year. The percentage of renewable energy in Turkey improved from about 38% to 40% between 1997 and 2000, after which it fell gradually to approximately 33% in 2010.

Written by student A

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of sustainable energy in total energy supply in four countries between 1997 and 2010.

Overall, while the proportion of renewable energy in Iceland and Sweden increased over the years, the opposite trend was seen in Australia and Turkey. Additionally, Iceland stood out with consistently higher figures.

Iceland and Turkey showed much bigger changes in their renewable energy supply compared to the other countries. Both countries exhibited increases from 1997 to 2000, rising from 45% to 60% in Iceland and from 38% to 40% in Turkey. However, in the final year, while the figure for Iceland continued to increase and reached the peak of 70%, Turkey’s share dropped back to just over 30%.

In contrast, the figures were smaller for the two remaining countries. Interestingly, Australia and Sweden showed opposite trends, both staying within the 10% range. The percentage of renewable energy in Australia declined steadily from 9% in 1997 to about 4% in 2010 whereas the figure for Sweden rose gradually from around 5% to 9% over the same period.

Written by student B

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Is it ok to write a whole answer without any paragraphs?

With Task 1, you can do that and still get a band 7 for coherence and cohesion because paragraphing is a part of that criterion. If you want a band 8 or higher for Task 1, you need to organize your response into paragraphs.

With Task 2, it is important from band 6 and up. Even if you write a fantastic response but you have no paragraphs, then your coherence and cohesion mark will be limited to a band 5.

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I’ve noticed that many of my students struggle with the W sound — they often mix it up with the V sound, probably because the W sound doesn’t exist in their native language. To help you master the difference, I’m sharing a useful link here. Check it out and see how clearly you can tell them apart!

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Remittance inflows hit $3.3 billion in Q1 2025

In the first quarter of 2025, the volume of remittances sent to Uzbekistan reached $3.3 billion, marking a significant 32% increase – or nearly $800 million – compared to the same period in 2024.

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Here’s how native speakers say some common everyday phrases.

- I made a mistake. - I screwed up.
- I don't have money.- I'm broke.
- I'm listening to you. - I'm all ears.
- It's not a problem. - It's not a big deal.
- I agree with you. - We are on the same page.
- I'm full. - I'm stuffed.

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You can write an introduction and overview for this chart and I will send mine later for comparison.

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The bar chart illustrates the typical amount of time social media users spent on four platforms between 2016 and 2020.

Overall, the average time spent on all platforms except Facebook increased, with different platforms taking the lead at different times. Moreover, while the time spent on Twitter rose steadily, Facebook saw a consistent decline.

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CD IELTS tutorial- Introduction

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