Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Aprel oyidagi “Writing Killers” kursiga qo’shilganlar menga yozingizlar: darslarni hali ko’rib ulgurmaganlar uchun hozirgi davom etayotgan kursni linkini beraman. Yana jonli darslarga ham qatnashsalaringiz boladi!
Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
🔥EXCITING NEWS🔥
I just started working on a new IELTS Speaking course with a unique approach. I will launch this course only if I put the methods to the test myself and score a band 9.0 in IELTS Speaking through these innovative approaches. As the old saying goes " Practice what you preach"!
@WRITING_T
I just started working on a new IELTS Speaking course with a unique approach. I will launch this course only if I put the methods to the test myself and score a band 9.0 in IELTS Speaking through these innovative approaches. As the old saying goes " Practice what you preach"!
@WRITING_T
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Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
✅ Keep one’s feet on the ground = muvaffaqiyatga qaramasdan havolanib ketmaslik!
📝 Despite his massive success and wealth, Elon Musk has managed to keep his feet on the ground and stayed humble in the face of accomplishments.
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📝 Despite his massive success and wealth, Elon Musk has managed to keep his feet on the ground and stayed humble in the face of accomplishments.
@WRITING_T
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✨ In the face of adversity, stand up straight with your shoulders back ✨
✅ 2 nice phrases!
@WRITING_T
✅ 2 nice phrases!
@WRITING_T
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✨If you don’t watch the news, you are uninformed. If you do watch them, you are misinformed✨
✅Shame on the mainstream media: they have turned the whole Uzbek population into ignorant, life-wasting, entertainment-oriented slaves who do not even know about the fact that they are slaves. The movies we watch have been polluted, the news we hear have been diluted, the books we read have been corrupted. Gone are the days when we spread the light of knowledge and purified souls worldwide, today’s Uzbekistan serves as a mere source of blue-collar workers, daughters of the sin, and mindless media consumers.
Time to wake up: I have to wake up and you have to wake up!
@WRITING_T
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🔥RIPPLE-EFFECT APPROACH🔥
Why are more and more people spending time indoors?
✅ PLANNING:
Spend time indoors [ why ] - engage in sedentary activities like online gaming and TV watching [ why ] - convenient and accessible entertainment options [ why ] - technological advances, internet resources, and electronic devices!
✅ PARAGRAPHING:
There are various reasons why individuals are spending more time indoors. With the advent of technological breakthroughs and the widespread availability of internet resources and electronic gadgets, entertainment options have become increasingly convenient and accessible from the comfort of our homes. Given these heightened opportunities for personal enjoyment, it comes as no surprise that individuals are opting for sedentary activities such as immersing themselves in online gaming, indulging in binge-watching television programs, and engaging in prolonged periods of social media consumption, thus leading to a notable increase in indoor leisure hours.
@WRITING_T
Why are more and more people spending time indoors?
✅ PLANNING:
Spend time indoors [ why ] - engage in sedentary activities like online gaming and TV watching [ why ] - convenient and accessible entertainment options [ why ] - technological advances, internet resources, and electronic devices!
✅ PARAGRAPHING:
There are various reasons why individuals are spending more time indoors. With the advent of technological breakthroughs and the widespread availability of internet resources and electronic gadgets, entertainment options have become increasingly convenient and accessible from the comfort of our homes. Given these heightened opportunities for personal enjoyment, it comes as no surprise that individuals are opting for sedentary activities such as immersing themselves in online gaming, indulging in binge-watching television programs, and engaging in prolonged periods of social media consumption, thus leading to a notable increase in indoor leisure hours.
@WRITING_T
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Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
🔥RIPPLE-EFFECT APPROACH🔥
Why are more and more young people suffering from depression?
✅ PLANNING:
Struggle with depression [ why ] - increased social comparison and loneliness [ why ] - increased exposure to social media and reduced real-life interactions [ why ] - addictive social media sites and technology!
✅ PARAGRAPHING:
There are various reasons why an increasing number of young individuals are struggling with mental health issues like depression. With the advent of technological advancements and the widespread prevalence of addictive social media platforms, young people in particular spend a great deal of time online instead of engaging in meaningful real-life interactions and building healthy relationships. Given this heightened social media consumption, it comes as no surprise that youngsters are constantly comparing themselves with others and suffering from a lack of strong interpersonal bonds, thereby leading to mental health struggles like depression.
@WRITING_T
Why are more and more young people suffering from depression?
✅ PLANNING:
Struggle with depression [ why ] - increased social comparison and loneliness [ why ] - increased exposure to social media and reduced real-life interactions [ why ] - addictive social media sites and technology!
✅ PARAGRAPHING:
There are various reasons why an increasing number of young individuals are struggling with mental health issues like depression. With the advent of technological advancements and the widespread prevalence of addictive social media platforms, young people in particular spend a great deal of time online instead of engaging in meaningful real-life interactions and building healthy relationships. Given this heightened social media consumption, it comes as no surprise that youngsters are constantly comparing themselves with others and suffering from a lack of strong interpersonal bonds, thereby leading to mental health struggles like depression.
@WRITING_T
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Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
🔥RIPPLE-EFFECT APPROACH🔥 Why are more and more young people suffering from depression? ✅ PLANNING: Struggle with depression [ why ] - increased social comparison and loneliness [ why ] - increased exposure to social media and reduced real-life interactions…
Mana shu ikkita paragraphni tahlil qilib yaxshi uslub bo’lsa 8.0 + lik essay yozish qanchalik osonligini tushunsangiz boladi!
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✅WRITING-6.5
📝 Unfortunately, I haven’t taught Task 1 lessons yet: otherwise, he would have probably pulled off a 7.0 in Writing. Anyways, such an impressive accomplishment!
@WRITING_T
📝 Unfortunately, I haven’t taught Task 1 lessons yet: otherwise, he would have probably pulled off a 7.0 in Writing. Anyways, such an impressive accomplishment!
@WRITING_T
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Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
🔥RIPPLE-EFFECT APPROACH🔥
Why are more and more people working overtime?
✅ PLANNING:
Work overtime [ why ] - gain a competitive advantage over other employees [ why ] - limited job opportunities and promotions [ why ] - strong competition in the job market [ why ] - technological tools and globalization!
✅ PARAGRAPHING:
There are various reasons why an increasing number of individuals are working overtime. With the successful incorporation of technological tools in business processes and the impact of globalization, competition has intensified in the international labor market, leading to limited opportunities for career progression. Given this heightened competitiveness, it comes as no surprise that many employees feel compelled to work longer hours to outperform their peers and gain a competitive edge.
@WRITING_T
Why are more and more people working overtime?
✅ PLANNING:
Work overtime [ why ] - gain a competitive advantage over other employees [ why ] - limited job opportunities and promotions [ why ] - strong competition in the job market [ why ] - technological tools and globalization!
✅ PARAGRAPHING:
There are various reasons why an increasing number of individuals are working overtime. With the successful incorporation of technological tools in business processes and the impact of globalization, competition has intensified in the international labor market, leading to limited opportunities for career progression. Given this heightened competitiveness, it comes as no surprise that many employees feel compelled to work longer hours to outperform their peers and gain a competitive edge.
@WRITING_T
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Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
✅ Make a big splash = become suddenly successful and garner a lot of public attention!
📝 After his videos went viral across various social media platforms, Andrew Tate has made a big splash.
@WRITING_T
📝 After his videos went viral across various social media platforms, Andrew Tate has made a big splash.
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✅ Ahead of the curve = ahead of current thinking and trends.
📝 Large corporations like “Tesla” stay ahead of the curve due to their innovative and progressive nature.
📝 Back in high school, I was much ahead of the curve compared to my peers because of my consistent reading and writing habits.
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📝 Large corporations like “Tesla” stay ahead of the curve due to their innovative and progressive nature.
📝 Back in high school, I was much ahead of the curve compared to my peers because of my consistent reading and writing habits.
@WRITING_T
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Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
✅ Plug away = work hard
📝 You have to be resilient enough to keep plugging away until things will turn in your favor.
@WRITING_T
📝 You have to be resilient enough to keep plugging away until things will turn in your favor.
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Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
By refusing to join my Writing course, you shot yourself in the foot, my friend 😁!
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Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Our Writing Course would have served as an antidote to your wounds 😢!
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Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Some people think that children should have activities organised for them, while others believe that they should be free to do what they want in their free time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
@WRITING_T
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
@WRITING_T
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Forwarded from IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
People have different views as to whether children should engage in structured activities or have the freedom to do whatever they want in their leisure time. While there are decided benefits to free play, I believe that it is crucial for parents to arrange the recreational pursuits of their children.
Proponents of allowing children to pursue their preferred activities highlight the benefits of free play for personal growth and development. By granting children the autonomy to participate in activities of their choice, they are likely to delve into their passions, unearth their talents, develop new skills, and cultivate a heightened sense of independence and responsibility. In a world where young people often lack fundamental traits such as discipline and self-reliance, encouraging them to make critical decisions can make a big difference in terms of their character formation and skill enrichment. Supporters of this school of thought also stress the significance of leisure time in a child's psychological progression. Without the opportunity to engage in activities they find fulfilling during their free hours, children might struggle with feelings of injustice and disenfranchisement, potentially leading to the breakdown of parent-child relationships.
In my opinion, however, the responsibility of regulating children's leisure activities falls on the shoulders of their parents. If children have unrestricted freedom in their free time, they may prioritize mindless entertainment over genuine relaxation and personal advancement due to their lack of maturity. A case in point is Uzbekistan, where many children spend long hours playing video games, binge-watching television programs, and scrolling through social media sites in lieu of meaningful face-to-face interactions and sports activities. This sedentary behavior has resulted in the erosion of vital interpersonal skills like emotional intelligence and conflict resolution, as well as the rise of chronic health conditions such as obesity and cardiovascular diseases. With the freedom to engage in their favourite activities, children are also likely to skip school and play truant in pursuit of instant gratification, ultimately compromising their academic performance.
In summary, although a large number of parents grant their children autonomy in their free time, I contend that it is essential to establish a well-organised framework for recreational pursuits. Only through the meticulous and strategic organization of leisure activities can we ensure children spend their downtime effectively.
Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev
@WRITING_T
Proponents of allowing children to pursue their preferred activities highlight the benefits of free play for personal growth and development. By granting children the autonomy to participate in activities of their choice, they are likely to delve into their passions, unearth their talents, develop new skills, and cultivate a heightened sense of independence and responsibility. In a world where young people often lack fundamental traits such as discipline and self-reliance, encouraging them to make critical decisions can make a big difference in terms of their character formation and skill enrichment. Supporters of this school of thought also stress the significance of leisure time in a child's psychological progression. Without the opportunity to engage in activities they find fulfilling during their free hours, children might struggle with feelings of injustice and disenfranchisement, potentially leading to the breakdown of parent-child relationships.
In my opinion, however, the responsibility of regulating children's leisure activities falls on the shoulders of their parents. If children have unrestricted freedom in their free time, they may prioritize mindless entertainment over genuine relaxation and personal advancement due to their lack of maturity. A case in point is Uzbekistan, where many children spend long hours playing video games, binge-watching television programs, and scrolling through social media sites in lieu of meaningful face-to-face interactions and sports activities. This sedentary behavior has resulted in the erosion of vital interpersonal skills like emotional intelligence and conflict resolution, as well as the rise of chronic health conditions such as obesity and cardiovascular diseases. With the freedom to engage in their favourite activities, children are also likely to skip school and play truant in pursuit of instant gratification, ultimately compromising their academic performance.
In summary, although a large number of parents grant their children autonomy in their free time, I contend that it is essential to establish a well-organised framework for recreational pursuits. Only through the meticulous and strategic organization of leisure activities can we ensure children spend their downtime effectively.
Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev
@WRITING_T
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