#exampaper IDP/BC PBI 29.04.2023
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#task2: In some countries, students live at home with their family while they study at university, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do the advantages of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?
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#task1:
#task2: In some countries, students live at home with their family while they study at university, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do the advantages of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?
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The bar chart provides information about seven different employment categories of adults in 2003 and 10 years later.
Overall, the proportions of adults in education training, hotel industry, building, and self-employed categories increased, whereas the figures for those in medicine, business, and who were unemployed showed the opposite. Although in 2003 business sector had the largest proportion of workers, in 2013 the dominance was taken over by the self-employed category.
Focusing on the year 2003 first, the highest number of workers, at about 47%, was employed in the business field, which was distantly followed by medicine with 20%. An identical percentage of adults (just over 10%) were self-employed and unemployed in this year, while education training and hotel industry closed the list with about 8 and 4% respectively.
The rankings of all the categories had changed by 2013. For example, those who were self-employed accounted for the largest share of about a third, whereas business ranked second with roughly 27%. Having proportions in the region of 17-20%, building, hotel industry and education training came next, but medicine and unemployment figures were a lot lower than the shares mentioned above, at 10% and just over 5%.
21 min.
#classwork #task1 #bar #alisher_types #aGoodOne
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Overall, the proportions of adults in education training, hotel industry, building, and self-employed categories increased, whereas the figures for those in medicine, business, and who were unemployed showed the opposite. Although in 2003 business sector had the largest proportion of workers, in 2013 the dominance was taken over by the self-employed category.
Focusing on the year 2003 first, the highest number of workers, at about 47%, was employed in the business field, which was distantly followed by medicine with 20%. An identical percentage of adults (just over 10%) were self-employed and unemployed in this year, while education training and hotel industry closed the list with about 8 and 4% respectively.
The rankings of all the categories had changed by 2013. For example, those who were self-employed accounted for the largest share of about a third, whereas business ranked second with roughly 27%. Having proportions in the region of 17-20%, building, hotel industry and education training came next, but medicine and unemployment figures were a lot lower than the shares mentioned above, at 10% and just over 5%.
21 min.
#classwork #task1 #bar #alisher_types #aGoodOne
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#exampaper BC CDI 30.04.2023
#task1: The graph shows the number of applicants from four different countries in a UK university between 1999 and 2003.
#task2: Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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#task1: The graph shows the number of applicants from four different countries in a UK university between 1999 and 2003.
#task2: Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of holidays in a year.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is suggested that every member of company staff be entitled to the same amount of holiday time as a gesture of equal treatment in the workplace. I personally take issue with this suggestion.
Admittedly, a company can benefit from a uniform holiday time policy in some respects. One immediate positive outcome of such a policy would be improved staff morale. Having received an equal amount of holiday break, staff members, especially junior employees, feel appreciated and a heightened sense of self-worth, which are critical to employee engagement. One other upside to having the same number of sabbaticals is better group dynamics. That is, it helps foster positive relationships between the employee and the supervisor seeing as everyoneβs work is equally rewarded. This is especially true in the case of new recruits who might feel underappreciated for lack of experience and familiarity with their job. In these regards, company can enjoy boosted productivity as a result of the so-called βjust holiday systemβ.
Despite these benefits, I see some flaws in allowing all employees equal holiday break irrespective of their job title or productivity. The main downside is arguably loss of competitive spirit in the workplace. Since most people consider their holiday length as a privilege earned for their exceptional performance, they become less driven to work hard when their holiday time is capped. This, as a result, might mean fewer high performers in a company. Not only does uniform holiday break hurt employee performance, but it can also prove financially disadvantageous. This is because a general rise in vacation time is often followed by a fall in output, which means no additional revenue for the company. In effect, the company is less likely to grow.
In conclusion, there are certainly some advantages to having the same amount of time off work for the entire staff, but I believe it can hinder competition in a company and its bottom line.
#task2
319 words, #classwork
#Mukhammadali_Issues
β‘οΈ@alisherpostsβ‘οΈ
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is suggested that every member of company staff be entitled to the same amount of holiday time as a gesture of equal treatment in the workplace. I personally take issue with this suggestion.
Admittedly, a company can benefit from a uniform holiday time policy in some respects. One immediate positive outcome of such a policy would be improved staff morale. Having received an equal amount of holiday break, staff members, especially junior employees, feel appreciated and a heightened sense of self-worth, which are critical to employee engagement. One other upside to having the same number of sabbaticals is better group dynamics. That is, it helps foster positive relationships between the employee and the supervisor seeing as everyoneβs work is equally rewarded. This is especially true in the case of new recruits who might feel underappreciated for lack of experience and familiarity with their job. In these regards, company can enjoy boosted productivity as a result of the so-called βjust holiday systemβ.
Despite these benefits, I see some flaws in allowing all employees equal holiday break irrespective of their job title or productivity. The main downside is arguably loss of competitive spirit in the workplace. Since most people consider their holiday length as a privilege earned for their exceptional performance, they become less driven to work hard when their holiday time is capped. This, as a result, might mean fewer high performers in a company. Not only does uniform holiday break hurt employee performance, but it can also prove financially disadvantageous. This is because a general rise in vacation time is often followed by a fall in output, which means no additional revenue for the company. In effect, the company is less likely to grow.
In conclusion, there are certainly some advantages to having the same amount of time off work for the entire staff, but I believe it can hinder competition in a company and its bottom line.
#task2
319 words, #classwork
#Mukhammadali_Issues
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There is a common belief that women are becoming more aggressive drivers.
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A&M admission for Summer 2023 is hereπ₯³π₯³
Admission test date: May 14, Sunday
Program launch date: May 22, Monday
Registration deadline: May 10, Wednesday
βΌοΈA quick update on our admission testβΌοΈ
Our admission will be carried out in TWO stages:
Stage I - A reading&listening test (IELTS format; passing score 6.5+)
Stage II - A 5-10-minute-long freestyle interview (we'll shortlist students based on their test results)
(generated from an earlier post)
Here's a little on what to expect from the course:
πa 5-month-long comprehensive program featuring pre-IELTS and IELTS classes
πmedium-sized groups (about 10-12 students)
π8 classes a week, each lasting about 2 hours
πa complimentary mock test(Reading&Listening) session every week and free all-inclusive mock test sessions few weeks leading up to your main exam
πall classes taught by Alisher (IELTS Band 8.5(x7) | W8.0(x3)) and Mukhammadali (IELTS Band 9.0(x2)| S9.0(x3) | W8.5(x2))
πa dedicated essay check teacher service
πexam registration help
π free textbooks
The tuition fee is 700,000 soums/month
(advance payment)
Class timing: 10:00-12:00//12:00-14:00
Once again, since our group size is LIMITED to 10-12 students, we will be selecting top 10-12 applicants on the basis of a mock test held on May 14th and interviews few days afterwards at Ad Astra school (Bukhara)[@ad_astra_school].
https://forms.gle/rkhMAwQaq1eurMVx6
Admission test date: May 14, Sunday
Program launch date: May 22, Monday
Registration deadline: May 10, Wednesday
βΌοΈA quick update on our admission testβΌοΈ
Our admission will be carried out in TWO stages:
Stage I - A reading&listening test (IELTS format; passing score 6.5+)
Stage II - A 5-10-minute-long freestyle interview (we'll shortlist students based on their test results)
(generated from an earlier post)
Here's a little on what to expect from the course:
πa 5-month-long comprehensive program featuring pre-IELTS and IELTS classes
πmedium-sized groups (about 10-12 students)
π8 classes a week, each lasting about 2 hours
πa complimentary mock test(Reading&Listening) session every week and free all-inclusive mock test sessions few weeks leading up to your main exam
πall classes taught by Alisher (IELTS Band 8.5(x7) | W8.0(x3)) and Mukhammadali (IELTS Band 9.0(x2)| S9.0(x3) | W8.5(x2))
πa dedicated essay check teacher service
πexam registration help
π free textbooks
The tuition fee is 700,000 soums/month
(advance payment)
Class timing: 10:00-12:00//12:00-14:00
Once again, since our group size is LIMITED to 10-12 students, we will be selecting top 10-12 applicants on the basis of a mock test held on May 14th and interviews few days afterwards at Ad Astra school (Bukhara)[@ad_astra_school].
https://forms.gle/rkhMAwQaq1eurMVx6
Google Docs
Summer Admission
A&M admission for Summer 2023 is hereπ₯³π₯³
Admission test date: May 14, Sunday
Program launch date: May 22, Monday
βΌοΈA quick update on our admission testβΌοΈ
Our admission will be carried out in TWO stages:
Stage I - A reading&listening test (IELTS format;β¦
Admission test date: May 14, Sunday
Program launch date: May 22, Monday
βΌοΈA quick update on our admission testβΌοΈ
Our admission will be carried out in TWO stages:
Stage I - A reading&listening test (IELTS format;β¦
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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is suggested that the government be in charge of conducting scientific research, not private entities such as businesses. Although there are some valid reasons for this suggestion, I am personally opposed to it.
Government oversight over research in the area of science can be justified on several grounds. The most potent reason for this would be prevention of unethical practices. Some companies, like cosmetics and drug manufacturers, test their new products on animals and in some extreme cases, on humans, in the name of scientific advances. This raises moral questions over animal and human safety. The government could also play a critical role in sharing scientific research results in a just and meaningful manner. Companies are sometimes reluctant to share their research results, but the government could disseminate knowledge obtained from scientific research efficiently with extensive resources at its disposal and to people who need it the most.
Despite these reasons, I object to having the government control scientific research. The main problem here is research progress being stifled as a result of excessive regulation. That is, inherent bureaucracy which comes with government intervention could hamper research speed as well as business operations. Allowing businesses autonomy in scientific research would also fuel healthy competition. Having been given freedom to research and experiment and deliver new products, companies would be more driven to innovate, which will ultimately benefit the economy. Finally, government involvement can sometimes lead to malicious meddling when there are corrupt officials involved. In these regards, government being responsible for scientific research can be undesirable.
In conclusion, government control over scientific research is justifiable in some ways, but I believe it is an unwise course of action as it can hinder progress and market competition and possibly, create chances for unlawful acts.
#task2
294 words, #classwork
#Mukhammadali_Issues
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It is suggested that the government be in charge of conducting scientific research, not private entities such as businesses. Although there are some valid reasons for this suggestion, I am personally opposed to it.
Government oversight over research in the area of science can be justified on several grounds. The most potent reason for this would be prevention of unethical practices. Some companies, like cosmetics and drug manufacturers, test their new products on animals and in some extreme cases, on humans, in the name of scientific advances. This raises moral questions over animal and human safety. The government could also play a critical role in sharing scientific research results in a just and meaningful manner. Companies are sometimes reluctant to share their research results, but the government could disseminate knowledge obtained from scientific research efficiently with extensive resources at its disposal and to people who need it the most.
Despite these reasons, I object to having the government control scientific research. The main problem here is research progress being stifled as a result of excessive regulation. That is, inherent bureaucracy which comes with government intervention could hamper research speed as well as business operations. Allowing businesses autonomy in scientific research would also fuel healthy competition. Having been given freedom to research and experiment and deliver new products, companies would be more driven to innovate, which will ultimately benefit the economy. Finally, government involvement can sometimes lead to malicious meddling when there are corrupt officials involved. In these regards, government being responsible for scientific research can be undesirable.
In conclusion, government control over scientific research is justifiable in some ways, but I believe it is an unwise course of action as it can hinder progress and market competition and possibly, create chances for unlawful acts.
#task2
294 words, #classwork
#Mukhammadali_Issues
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BC CDI 30/04/2023
Alhamdulillah!!!
First Uzbek niner with BC (youngest)
First Uzbek double niner (youngest)
Age: 23
#Nine
#Mukhammadali_Issues
You donβt become confident by shouting affirmations in the mirror, but by having a stack of undeniable proof that you are who you say you are. Outwork your self-doubt
- Alex Hormozi
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Alhamdulillah!!!
First Uzbek niner with BC (youngest)
First Uzbek double niner (youngest)
Age: 23
#Nine
#Mukhammadali_Issues
You donβt become confident by shouting affirmations in the mirror, but by having a stack of undeniable proof that you are who you say you are. Outwork your self-doubt
- Alex Hormozi
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BC CDI 30/04/2023 Alhamdulillah!!! First Uzbek niner with BC (youngest) First Uzbek double niner (youngest) Age: 23 #Nine #Mukhammadali_Issues You donβt become confident by shouting affirmations in the mirror, but by having a stack of undeniable proofβ¦
Part of the reason I retook the test was to show support to a friend who is suffering from a rare health condition. She is a reminder superheroes exist and not all heroes wear capes. Keep fighting, cuz I will
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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? It is suggested that the government be in charge of conducting scientific research, not privateβ¦
This was my most recent exam Task 2 question. The essay here is a word-for-word recollection of my original work.
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The images describe how a coastal town called Templeton changed from 1990 to 2005. Overall, by 2005, the town had developed greatly with the addition of new residential blocks at the expense of old houses and greenery. The town also became more accessible once new forms of transportation were introduced alongside the old ones. Some features of the town, however, were not subject to change.
In 1990, the town had housing units in all four quarters, which were separated by a river running from north to the sea in the south as well as two stretches of horizontal roads. The north-east corner was occupied with a school and a hospital to its east. These two buildings were flanked by housing units on all sides. There was also a railway station in the easternmost corner and a parking lot. As for the western part of the town, there was a lake in the north surrounded by a relatively large house in the north and smaller ones in the west and south. Across the street could be found two rows of houses as well as a residential block in the south-west.
By 2005, the town had seen a complete makeover. The majority of small housing units were replaced by residential apartment complexes, even though some new small houses were built in certain areas. Other key changes were the construction of a supermarket alongside the new apartments in the west and the erection of a factory in the east. Additionally, the town was now accessible via a ferry in the south-east and an airplane in the north. The railway line had also been extended along the beach. No changes were made to the school and hospital buildings.
#task1
284 words, #classwork
#Mukhammadali_Issues
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In 1990, the town had housing units in all four quarters, which were separated by a river running from north to the sea in the south as well as two stretches of horizontal roads. The north-east corner was occupied with a school and a hospital to its east. These two buildings were flanked by housing units on all sides. There was also a railway station in the easternmost corner and a parking lot. As for the western part of the town, there was a lake in the north surrounded by a relatively large house in the north and smaller ones in the west and south. Across the street could be found two rows of houses as well as a residential block in the south-west.
By 2005, the town had seen a complete makeover. The majority of small housing units were replaced by residential apartment complexes, even though some new small houses were built in certain areas. Other key changes were the construction of a supermarket alongside the new apartments in the west and the erection of a factory in the east. Additionally, the town was now accessible via a ferry in the south-east and an airplane in the north. The railway line had also been extended along the beach. No changes were made to the school and hospital buildings.
#task1
284 words, #classwork
#Mukhammadali_Issues
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A&M admission for Summer 2023 is hereπ₯³π₯³
Admission test date: May 14, Sunday
Program launch date: May 22, Monday
Registration deadline: May 10, Wednesday
βΌοΈA quick update on our admission testβΌοΈ
Our admission will be carried out in TWO stages:
Stage I - A reading&listening test (IELTS format; passing score 6.5+)
Stage II - A 5-10-minute-long freestyle interview (we'll shortlist students based on their test results)
(generated from an earlier post)
Here's a little on what to expect from the course:
πa 5-month-long comprehensive program featuring pre-IELTS and IELTS classes
πmedium-sized groups (about 10-12 students)
π8 classes a week, each lasting about 2 hours
πa complimentary mock test(Reading&Listening) session every week and free all-inclusive mock test sessions few weeks leading up to your main exam
πall classes taught by Alisher (IELTS Band 8.5(x7) | W8.0(x3)) and Mukhammadali (IELTS Band 9.0(x2)| S9.0(x3) | W8.5(x2))
πa dedicated essay check teacher service
πexam registration help
π free textbooks
The tuition fee is 700,000 soums/month
(advance payment)
Class timing: 10:00-12:00//12:00-14:00
Once again, since our group size is LIMITED to 10-12 students, we will be selecting top 10-12 applicants on the basis of a mock test held on May 14th and interviews few days afterwards at Ad Astra school (Bukhara)[@ad_astra_school].
https://forms.gle/rkhMAwQaq1eurMVx6
Admission test date: May 14, Sunday
Program launch date: May 22, Monday
Registration deadline: May 10, Wednesday
βΌοΈA quick update on our admission testβΌοΈ
Our admission will be carried out in TWO stages:
Stage I - A reading&listening test (IELTS format; passing score 6.5+)
Stage II - A 5-10-minute-long freestyle interview (we'll shortlist students based on their test results)
(generated from an earlier post)
Here's a little on what to expect from the course:
πa 5-month-long comprehensive program featuring pre-IELTS and IELTS classes
πmedium-sized groups (about 10-12 students)
π8 classes a week, each lasting about 2 hours
πa complimentary mock test(Reading&Listening) session every week and free all-inclusive mock test sessions few weeks leading up to your main exam
πall classes taught by Alisher (IELTS Band 8.5(x7) | W8.0(x3)) and Mukhammadali (IELTS Band 9.0(x2)| S9.0(x3) | W8.5(x2))
πa dedicated essay check teacher service
πexam registration help
π free textbooks
The tuition fee is 700,000 soums/month
(advance payment)
Class timing: 10:00-12:00//12:00-14:00
Once again, since our group size is LIMITED to 10-12 students, we will be selecting top 10-12 applicants on the basis of a mock test held on May 14th and interviews few days afterwards at Ad Astra school (Bukhara)[@ad_astra_school].
https://forms.gle/rkhMAwQaq1eurMVx6
Google Docs
Summer Admission
A&M admission for Summer 2023 is hereπ₯³π₯³
Admission test date: May 14, Sunday
Program launch date: May 22, Monday
βΌοΈA quick update on our admission testβΌοΈ
Our admission will be carried out in TWO stages:
Stage I - A reading&listening test (IELTS format;β¦
Admission test date: May 14, Sunday
Program launch date: May 22, Monday
βΌοΈA quick update on our admission testβΌοΈ
Our admission will be carried out in TWO stages:
Stage I - A reading&listening test (IELTS format;β¦
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Alisher&Mukhammadali posts
A&M admission for Summer 2023 is hereπ₯³π₯³ Admission test date: May 14, Sunday Program launch date: May 22, Monday Registration deadline: May 10, Wednesday βΌοΈA quick update on our admission testβΌοΈ Our admission will be carried out in TWO stages: Stageβ¦
βΌοΈRegistration deadline is set for May 10, 11.00pm.βΌοΈ
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Applications filed past this date and time won't be processed
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The image outlines the different stages involved in the life cycle of a flower. Generally speaking, there are eight distinct stages involved in this cyclical process, starting with seeds and culminating with plants with fruits. It is also noteworthy that the process is almost self-contained, with only one phase requiring external influence.
At the first stage of the process, seeds fall from mature plants on the ground, which are collected by humans in the subsequent step and are planted and watered. Following this, the planted seed starts to germinate, growing a root underneath it. After the germination phase is complete, a sprout appears with small leaves, and after a week it turns into a seedling with larger leaves and more roots.
The next stage of the development sees a seedling turn into a plant with buds, each of which produces pink flowers after three days. These flowers then alter their color - becoming paler - and shape from flat into round, thus maturing. Ultimately, these mature plants drop their seeds and repeat the cycle.
20 minutes.
#classwork #task1 #mock_writing #alisher_types #process
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At the first stage of the process, seeds fall from mature plants on the ground, which are collected by humans in the subsequent step and are planted and watered. Following this, the planted seed starts to germinate, growing a root underneath it. After the germination phase is complete, a sprout appears with small leaves, and after a week it turns into a seedling with larger leaves and more roots.
The next stage of the development sees a seedling turn into a plant with buds, each of which produces pink flowers after three days. These flowers then alter their color - becoming paler - and shape from flat into round, thus maturing. Ultimately, these mature plants drop their seeds and repeat the cycle.
20 minutes.
#classwork #task1 #mock_writing #alisher_types #process
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Today many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family and businesses. Is it a positive or negative development?
The development of technology, particularly smartphones and the internet, has enabled people to send money to any person or business. While there are some downsides to transferring money online, I believe that it is a change for the better.
There are some reasons why sending money online can be deemed unfavorable. First, there is a risk of online frauds. My father, for instance, has recently fallen victim to a website and lost about $200 after downloading an application on his smartphone, which was supposed to offer commission-free transfers. Second, there are accessibility issues. People living in remote places like deserts or mountains have very poor mobile connection, let alone internet access. For them, it is more convenient to send money in a traditional way.
Despite the negatives mentioned above, I believe that sending money with the help of the internet and smartphones is a positive change. The main reason why this is so is convenience it offers to users. While banks donβt work 24/7 and ATMs are placed only in specific places, online transfers can be made whenever and wherever possible. Aside from this, sending money via the internet provides instant support or help. A student studying in a foreign country, for example, can easily ask for money from friends or family members during an emergency, such as ill-health or an unfortunate accident. Due to these reasons, online transfers should be seen as progress.
To sum up, whereas online money transfers may not be accessible to all and are potentially vulnerable to scams, I feel that their convenience and speed outweigh any of the drawbacks.
#task2 #alisher_types #classwork #positivenegative
#aGoodOne
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The development of technology, particularly smartphones and the internet, has enabled people to send money to any person or business. While there are some downsides to transferring money online, I believe that it is a change for the better.
There are some reasons why sending money online can be deemed unfavorable. First, there is a risk of online frauds. My father, for instance, has recently fallen victim to a website and lost about $200 after downloading an application on his smartphone, which was supposed to offer commission-free transfers. Second, there are accessibility issues. People living in remote places like deserts or mountains have very poor mobile connection, let alone internet access. For them, it is more convenient to send money in a traditional way.
Despite the negatives mentioned above, I believe that sending money with the help of the internet and smartphones is a positive change. The main reason why this is so is convenience it offers to users. While banks donβt work 24/7 and ATMs are placed only in specific places, online transfers can be made whenever and wherever possible. Aside from this, sending money via the internet provides instant support or help. A student studying in a foreign country, for example, can easily ask for money from friends or family members during an emergency, such as ill-health or an unfortunate accident. Due to these reasons, online transfers should be seen as progress.
To sum up, whereas online money transfers may not be accessible to all and are potentially vulnerable to scams, I feel that their convenience and speed outweigh any of the drawbacks.
#task2 #alisher_types #classwork #positivenegative
#aGoodOne
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