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🗓 Key Vocabulary from IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay

Here’s a list of important keywords from the essay, along with their definitions ⤵️

1️⃣ Contemporary society
➡️Definition: The modern social environment and cultural context in which people live today.

2️⃣ Debate
➡️Definition: A discussion or argument about a particular topic, where opposing viewpoints are presented.

3️⃣ Primary purpose
➡️Definition: The main reason or objective for which something exists or is done.

4️⃣ Practical skills
➡️Definition: Abilities that are useful and applicable in real-world situations, often related to specific tasks or jobs.

5️⃣ Economic stability
➡️Definition: A condition in which an economy experiences steady growth, low inflation, and low unemployment, providing security for individuals and businesses.

6️⃣ Professional success
➡️Definition: Achieving one's career goals and advancements in a chosen profession.

7️⃣ Transcend
➡️Definition: To go beyond the limits or boundaries of something, in this case, moving past basic vocational training.

8️⃣ Personal growth
➡️Definition: The ongoing process of self-improvement and development in various aspects of life, including emotional and psychological well-being.

9️⃣ Social competence
➡️Definition: The ability to interact effectively with others in social situations, demonstrating understanding and adaptability.

1️⃣0️⃣ Career-oriented education
➡️Definition: An educational approach focused on preparing students for specific careers and job markets.

1️⃣1️⃣ Specialized knowledge
- Definition: In-depth understanding and expertise in a particular field or subject area.

1️⃣2️⃣ Competitive job market
➡️Definition: A labor market where many individuals are vying for limited job opportunities, requiring candidates to stand out.

1️⃣3️⃣ Human development
➡️Definition: The process of improving individuals' quality of life and capabilities, encompassing physical, emotional, and social growth.

1️⃣4️⃣ Well-rounded individuals
➡️Definition: People who possess a diverse set of skills, knowledge, and experiences, allowing them to adapt to various situations.

1️⃣5️⃣ Holistic education
➡️Definition: An approach to education that addresses the development of the whole person, including intellectual, emotional, social, and physical aspects.

💻 Feel free to use these keywords to enhance your vocabulary for the IELTS exam!


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🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄 Writing task 2 using keywords on the topic "WORK"

💻 Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work.


🤎Discuss both views and give your opinion🤎

Sample Essay 🤎

⏪Some people believe that teenagers can learn fundamental skills by working part-time. While others say that teenagers must spend their time by taking rest. Though teenagers can earn money and learn how to be disciplined, in my opinion, they have to spend their time on leisure activities and school activities for their intellectual and creative development.

On the one hand, people believe that teenagers should focus on their after-school time for part-time work. They can learn to be disciplined by working for someone and meeting the deadlines. Also, they can earn additional money for their expenses. For example, if a student earns some amount of money on their own, they can learn to manage their own finances and give them confidence to stand on their own leg.

On the other hand, some people think that time is better spent for rest and school assignments. They can regain their energy when they are resting. It helps them to learn and create better. Also, devoting time to school activities can improve their intellectual skills. For example, when someone is at rest, he or she can write or draw. This serves them as an opportunity to explore different skills and talents.

To conclude, even though students can gain money by doing work, it could create pressure among them. So, it is better to focus on their studies and improve their knowledge. It can create a better future for them. If a student becomes a part of an organization, he or she will lose educational opportunities.⏩

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📍📍IELTS Writing Task 2. Advanced Vocabulary for Essays Scoring 7+

✅One of the criteria for the writing section is Vocabulary range. To achieve a good score, as stated in the criteria, we should use a range of vocabulary.

A range of vocabulary refers to diverse language enriched with synonyms and advanced words.
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❤️‍🔥 We suggest noting down synonyms for the most popular words:

1️⃣ Advantages – benefit, positive sides

2️⃣ Disadvantages – drawbacks, negative sides

3️⃣ Many - a large number of, numerous, plenty of, a wide range of
Important – crucial, essential, vital

4️⃣ Some people - SEVERAL people / CERTAIN people

5️⃣ Some people think that … – people claim that / argue that / hold the view that / believe

6️⃣ Children - youngsters

7️⃣ Teenagers - adolescents

8️⃣ Interesting - educational, entertaining, engaging

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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Band 8 Essay Sample. Topic: Health & Diet

📣 Today, we will analyze an 8-point essay. In the essay text, We will highlight the key words in bold and underline the important linking words/introductory phrases.


📝Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet.

➖Discuss both views and give your opinion.➖

Sample Essay 🔚

⏪1️⃣ Nowadays an increasing number of people are becoming concerned about their health and the quality of their diet. There are two diametrically opposed opinions on the matter. Some people believe that each and every individual is responsible for their own health while others state that it is the government that must ensure that the citizens have healthy eating habits.

2️⃣ Personally, I believe that people bear full responsibility for their diets for a number of reasons. First, nowadays there is a vast variety of products that everyone can choose from, ensuring a balanced diet consisting of different types of products with sufficient vitamins, proteins, carbohydrates and fats. Everyone can balance their diets according to these factors and also based on their taste preferences. For example vegetarians will prefer beans rich in protein while omnivorous eaters might opt for meat instead. Secondly, while governments cannot considerably vary in their healthy eating programs usually adhering to 'one size fits all' approach, individuals know exactly what they need in order to keep fit and healthy both generally speaking and in terms of food. We take tailored approach as we know exactly what we need to succeed in life, be strong and healthy.

3️⃣ However, others argue that the government is fully responsible for the kind of food its population consume because they make decisions regarding the quality of food their country produce and import as well as prices. For instance, in many developing countries people rarely have access to high quality food, thus being forced to choose something cheap like fast food. Moreover, the government can introduce legislation as regards to what kind of food can be promoted, seen for example in many European countries where the advertising of fast food, alcohol and cigarettes is prohibited. These measure, it is argued, can affect the way we eat and control the diets of the whole population.

4️⃣ In conclusion, while the governments may play a role in the choice of food of its citizens, it is still the responsibility of every individual whether to eat healthy diet or not due to many reasons being that a variety of methods to balance their diets or their finances. After all our life is in our hands!⏩

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❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 Vocabulary for IELTS Writing Task 2

Useful vocabulary/phrases to open/start the essay⬇️

🔘 Many/some people claim/opine/believe that…

🔘 There is no denying that…

🔘 It is often said that…

🔘 These days…/ Nowadays…/ In this day and age…

🔘 It goes without saying that…

🔘 It is universally accepted that…

🔘 We live in an age when many of us are…

🔘 People are divided in their opinion regarding…

🔘 …. is one of the most important issues…

🔘 Whether …. or …. is a controversial issue…

Useful vocabulary/phrases to end the Introduction part
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✅ Let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision.

✅ The following paragraphs discuss whether …… or …… and reach a reasonable conclusion.

✅ The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.

✅ However, I strongly believe that…

✅ I oppose the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

✅ I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

✅ I personally believe that…

✅ Thus the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages…

✅ I wholeheartedly believe that this trend should be changed.

➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖

🔖Example of an introductory paragraph:

▫️ Mobile phones and the Internet are two fantastic innovations of science for communication and have facilitated people for a long time. These two technologies are widely used almost worldwide and have become a part of our daily lives. We can’t deny the usefulness of these technologies as they have made our life more accessible than ever before. In my opinion, these two devices’ advantages far outweigh their demerits.▫️

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📌What is a significant drawback of over-relying on a limited range of simple linking words (e.g., "and," "but," "so") in your writing?
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18%
✅It increases your word count unnecessarily.
0%
✅It makes your essay seem too formal.
0%
✅It suggests you have strong opinions.
82%
✅It hinders coherence and cohesion, making your arguments less sophisticated.
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🩵🩵🩵🩵 Part 2 Academic & General. Connecting words

🗣️ We will provide you with keywords that you can use in the written part of the exam.

✅ The words are divided into categories for easier understanding.


Addition

🔴 Likewise…
🔴 In addition…
🔴 Moreover…
🔴 Furthermore…
🔴 Additionally…
🔴 On top of that…

Cause and effect

🔴 Therefore…
🔴 As a result…
🔴 Accordingly…
🔴 Consequently…
🔴 On that account…
🔴 For that reason…

Comparison/Contrast

🔴 However…
🔴 In contrast…
🔴 Meanwhile…
🔴 Alternatively…
🔴 Nevertheless…
🔴 On the other hand…

Conclusion

🔴 Finally…
🔴 In the end…
🔴 To sum up…
🔴 To conclude…
🔴 To summarize…
🔴 In conclusion…

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↪️↪️ Sample response:

🗣️ Keywords are highlighted in bold, and introductory words/linking words are underlined.


▶️Technology is advancing at a breakneck pace, opening up new doors for us while keeping us informed about the latest news and events. As a result, many people believe that traditional newspaper reading will become obsolete. I disagree since the easiest and cheapest way to obtain news is through a traditional newspaper.▶️

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