Writing 9 SAMPLES
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πŸ””Bularsiz New Writing Part 1 da hissiyotlarizni ayta olmaysiz, negative ma'noda.

I feel so down. – Kayfiyatim juda tushib ketdi.
I was really upset about it. – Bundan juda xafa boβ€˜ldim.
I feel miserable. – Oβ€˜zimni juda yomon his qilyapman.
It broke my heart. – Bu yuragimni ogβ€˜ritdi.
I felt really low. – Oβ€˜zimni juda yomon ruhda his qildim.
I was gutted. – Juda-juda xafa boβ€˜ldim.
I couldn’t stop crying. – Yigβ€˜lashimni toβ€˜xtata olmadim.


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πŸ””ENGLISH SPEAKING VOCABULARY 🀭

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HIT BY A TRACK- ustidan kamaz yurib ketganday(ya'ni inglizlar buni karaxt xolda uyg'onsa ishlatadi,ustimdan kamaz yurib ketganday hamma joyim karaxt degan ma'noda)
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#VocabularyπŸ”—

WRITING VOCABULARY πŸ“

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πŸ”₯ How to Write a great essay quickly ? 😳

Qanday qilib Writing ballimni oshirsam bo’ladi deb ortiq qiynalmaysiz.

Mana sizga exam darajasidagi baholash uchun SHABLON πŸ₯°

Rahmat aytmoqchi bo’lsez Yurakcha ❀️ bosib qo’ying

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πŸ“ΉCan You Fix This IELTS Speaking Answer?

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➑️ Writing task 1,2 Formal letter uchun barcha mavzuga tushadigan ideal universal sxema:

🟠Solutation
Dear Sir or Madam,


Introduction:
I am writing to express my concern / to request information / to apply for … / to complain about … / to give feedback on …
I am writing regarding your recent advertisement / announcement / letter about …

Body Paragraph 1:
Firstly, I would like to mention that …
I have recently experienced / noticed / read …
This has caused some difficulties / led to some confusion, such as …
Body Paragraph 2:
Furthermore, I believe that …
It would be helpful if …
I would appreciate it if you could …
I suggest that you should …
Closing Paragraph:
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you in advance for your assistance.
I hope this issue can be resolved promptly.
Your quick response would be greatly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
[Your full name]


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#Grammar #Writing9

πŸ’‘ Write economically (and usually more precisely ) by using single words instead of phrases
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Useful Phrases with "Moon" πŸŒ•

πŸŒ• Moonlit - oy nuri yoritgan
β€” The beach looks magical under a moonlit sky.

πŸŒ• Over the moon - juda baxtli
β€” I was over the moon when I heard the news.

πŸŒ• Catch the moon - erishish qiyin bo'lgan narsaga intilish
β€” Some people try to catch the moon, chasing impossible dreams.

πŸŒ• Once in a blue moon - kamdan-kam hollarda
β€” We only meet up once in a blue moon, but it’s always special.

πŸŒ• Moonlight - oydinda nurlanish
β€” The couple danced in the moonlight by the lake.

πŸŒ• Reach for the moon - katta narsalarga intilmoq
β€” Always reach for the moon; even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

πŸŒ• Supermoon - katta va yorqin oyni anglatadi
β€” Tonight’s supermoon is a rare sight; don't miss it!



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🌟 Writing task 1,2 Formal letter uchun barcha mavzuga tushadigan ideal universal sxema:

βœ…Solutation
Dear Sir or Madam,


Introduction:
I am writing to express my concern / to request information / to apply for … / to complain about … / to give feedback on …
I am writing regarding your recent advertisement / announcement / letter about …

Body Paragraph 1:
Firstly, I would like to mention that …
I have recently experienced / noticed / read …
This has caused some difficulties / led to some confusion, such as …
Body Paragraph 2:
Furthermore, I believe that …
It would be helpful if …
I would appreciate it if you could …
I suggest that you should …
Closing Paragraph:
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you in advance for your assistance.
I hope this issue can be resolved promptly.
Your quick response would be greatly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
[Your full name]


Ochishga ochdingiz endi reaksiya bosib ketingπŸ‘†πŸ³β€οΈπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜

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βœ… Multilevel Yangi Writing format Task 1.1 (Informal) va Task 1.2 (Formal) uchun exam atmospherasidagi sample

Shunchaki idea oling exam yaqin nasib foydasi tegasi βœ…

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qator Reaksiya bosganlar insha’alloh C1 olsin ilohim
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🌟 ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​IELTS Writing Task 2

Discuss Both Views [ Band: 8.0+ ]

βœ…Q: Many childhood diseases can now be prevented with vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

βœ…Answer:

In recent years, the public has been divided on the issue of making certain vaccinations compulsory for children, in both developed and developing countries. Although some believe the right to refuse vaccination should be respected, in my view, making such vaccinations a legal obligation appears more reasonable overall.

There are certain reasons why parents should have the right to refuse to vaccinate their kids. First, many vaccines are prohibitively expensive, which discourages parents from disadvantaged backgrounds from vaccinating their children. In fact, if low-income households were legally required to immunize their kids with those vaccines, many may choose to either delay or refuse vaccinations altogether, since the costs constitute a financial burden for them. In addition, many people are concerned about the side effects of various types of vaccines. For example, it is not advisable that kids with certain medical conditions  be vaccinated, as that may cause severe allergic reactions or even permanent damage to them.

Nevertheless, the benefits of vaccination clearly overshadow any potential drawbacks.  First, mass vaccination campaigns for children mean there would be fewer or no cases of some illnesses in the future, thus saving enormous amounts of time and effort to treat them. In fact, thanks to immunization programs backed by  governments, the incidence of various contagious diseases has been greatly reduced, and in certain cases such as small pox, totally eliminated. Besides, if vaccination regulations come into play, many kids, especially those in rural areas, will be able to survive widespread epidemics that affect plenty of communities. As a result, parents should be encouraged to get their kids immunized, thereby significantly improving their future health prospects.

In conclusion, although some parents may be reluctant to vaccinate their children because of concerns about costs or side effects, introducing laws with regard to vaccination should be encouraged, as it means reduced incidence of certain contagious diseases and is more cost-effective in the long term.

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🌟 Ielts Writing Task 2

Agree/Disagree [ Band: 8.5+ ]

βœ…Question: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

βœ…Answer:

Recycling waste materials should help tackle the mountains of domestic rubbish produced each year and our depleting natural resources. However, recycling programmes need the full cooperation of residents if they are to be effective. The question here is whether this can only be achieved by imposing restrictions.

Undoubtedly, far too many recyclable materials are thrown away with general waste and, as a result, damage the environment. To address this problem, we need to first consider the reasons behind people’s reluctance to recycle. One possible issue may be the process itself, which usually requires us to clean and sort waste into different categories based on their material. This is both time-consuming and confusing if we do not know whether certain types of glass, plastic or paper are recyclable. We naturally avoid tasks that take up too much time, so it is not surprising that so many people simply throw all their rubbish away in the same bin.

If the main problems are a confusing process and lack of time, then creating a law to govern this seems rather severe. It also seems unlikely to succeed, given that laws and fines generally lead to resentment rather than cooperation. Furthermore, as recycling must occur within the home, it is difficult to imagine how such a law could realistically be enforced. A better solution would be to find ways to simplify the recycling process and educate people about the benefits of recycling, both for the environment and for society as a whole.

To conclude, I believe that the most effective way to increase recycling is to make the task simpler and raise awareness of the impact that excessive amounts of waste are having on our planet. In my view, laws and fines should only be used as a last resort and when all other approaches have failed.

[308 words]

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🌟 Writing Task 2 Blog Post uchun tushish ehtimoli yuqori bo'lgan Topic lar, idea yig’ib qo’ying!

βœ…The Impact of the Internet on Human Life
βœ…Advantages & Disadvantages of Fast Food
βœ…Extreme Sports Should Be Banned
βœ…The Problem of Homelessness
βœ…Artificial Intelligence
βœ…Water Shortage
βœ…Advantages & Disadvan… of Remote Work
βœ…Youth Crime / Juvenile Delinquency
βœ…Globalisation
βœ…Hobbies
βœ…Air Pollution vs Traffic Congestion
βœ…Work-Life Balance
βœ…Volunteering
βœ…The Influence of Social Media on Teenagers
βœ…Online Education vs Traditional Education
βœ…Climate Change & Individual Responsibility
βœ…The Importance of Mental Health Aware…
βœ…Should University Education Be Free?


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Master IELTS Writing Band 9.0 Essays.pdf
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πŸ’›IELTS writing task 2 band 9 essays collection!

βœ…Opinion essays
βœ…Advantages & disadvantages
βœ…Problem and Solution essays
βœ…Discussion essays
βœ…Two-part Essays question

πŸ€— RAXMAT aytmoqchi bo’lsangiz 🐳🐳🐳 bosib keting πŸ‘‡πŸ‘‡πŸ‘‡

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🌟 ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​IELTS Writing Task 2

Discuss Both Views [ Band: 8.0+ ]

βœ…Q: Many childhood diseases can now be prevented with vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

βœ…Answer:

In recent years, the public has been divided on the issue of making certain vaccinations compulsory for children, in both developed and developing countries. Although some believe the right to refuse vaccination should be respected, in my view, making such vaccinations a legal obligation appears more reasonable overall.

There are certain reasons why parents should have the right to refuse to vaccinate their kids. First, many vaccines are prohibitively expensive, which discourages parents from disadvantaged backgrounds from vaccinating their children. In fact, if low-income households were legally required to immunize their kids with those vaccines, many may choose to either delay or refuse vaccinations altogether, since the costs constitute a financial burden for them. In addition, many people are concerned about the side effects of various types of vaccines. For example, it is not advisable that kids with certain medical conditions  be vaccinated, as that may cause severe allergic reactions or even permanent damage to them.

Nevertheless, the benefits of vaccination clearly overshadow any potential drawbacks.  First, mass vaccination campaigns for children mean there would be fewer or no cases of some illnesses in the future, thus saving enormous amounts of time and effort to treat them. In fact, thanks to immunization programs backed by  governments, the incidence of various contagious diseases has been greatly reduced, and in certain cases such as small pox, totally eliminated. Besides, if vaccination regulations come into play, many kids, especially those in rural areas, will be able to survive widespread epidemics that affect plenty of communities. As a result, parents should be encouraged to get their kids immunized, thereby significantly improving their future health prospects.

In conclusion, although some parents may be reluctant to vaccinate their children because of concerns about costs or side effects, introducing laws with regard to vaccination should be encouraged, as it means reduced incidence of certain contagious diseases and is more cost-effective in the long term.

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IELTS WRITING TASK 1 question ❀️

Question from the real IELTS exam on August 9th


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πŸš€ IELTS Academic Vocabulary

– speaking va writing uchun advanced
vocabulary
– 3000 dan ziyot eng kerakli lug’atlar
dan tashkil topgan

Yoqqan boβ€˜lsa 222 ta 🐳🐳 bosib
qoβ€˜ying πŸ‘‡


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πŸ””Bularsiz New Writing Part 1 da hissiyotlarizni ayta olmaysiz, negative ma'noda.

I feel so down. – Kayfiyatim juda tushib ketdi.
I was really upset about it. – Bundan juda xafa boβ€˜ldim.
I feel miserable. – Oβ€˜zimni juda yomon his qilyapman.
It broke my heart. – Bu yuragimni ogβ€˜ritdi.
I felt really low. – Oβ€˜zimni juda yomon ruhda his qildim.
I was gutted. – Juda-juda xafa boβ€˜ldim.
I couldn’t stop crying. – Yigβ€˜lashimni toβ€˜xtata olmadim.


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