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آموزش writing برای زبان‌آموزان B1 تا B2 , علاقه‌مندان به آشنایی با writing در زبان انگلیسی، معلم‌های که علاقه به آشنایی بیشتر با Writing دارند.
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درس 23: A Concluding Sentence
🎯 به این پاراگراف دقت کنید:

Topic Sentence: My city is a great place to live.
Supporting Sentences: The people are very friendly and helpful. There are many beautiful parks and green spaces. Public transportation is also excellent and cheap.
Concluding Sentence: To summarize, my city has friendly people, beautiful parks, and good transportation.
🎯Conclusion Signals (with a comma after!):

✅ In short,


✅ To summarize,


✅ In brief,


✅ To sum up,
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🎯 حالا نوبت شماست:

کدام گزینه ( Concluding Sentences ) برای پاراگراف هست؟

Taking care of a pet is a big responsibility. You have to feed them every day and give them fresh water. You also need to take them for walks and play with them to keep them healthy. Finally, you must take them to the vet when they are sick.

📌Concluding Sentences (choose one):

🔶In conclusion, dogs are the best pets.

🔷In short, having a pet requires a lot of time and care.
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📌 The answer:

In short, having a pet requires a lot of time and care.
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درس 24: run-on sentences
🔶 I woke up late I missed the bus.

🔷 She loves chocolate she eats it every day.

🔶 The store was closed we went home.

🔷 He doesn't speak French he speaks Spanish.

🔶 The test was difficult I studied very hard.
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📌شکل درست شده را ببینید👇👇
✅I woke up late. I missed the bus.
(Or: I woke up late, so I missed the bus.)

✅She loves chocolate. She eats it every day.
(Or: She loves chocolate, and she eats it every day.)

✅The store was closed. We went home.
(Or: The store was closed, so we went home.)

✅He doesn't speak French. He speaks Spanish.
(Or: He doesn't speak French, but he speaks Spanish.)

✅The test was difficult. I studied very hard.
(Or: The test was difficult, but I studied very hard.)
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📌نوبت شماست. جملات زیر را به صورت درست بنویسد.

🔶My father works in a hospital he is a doctor. ___

🔷I bought a new phone and I am very happy with it. ___

🔶She sings beautifully she wants to be a famous singer. ___

🔷The sun was shining we decided to go to the park. ___

🔶He exercises every morning and he eats healthy food. ___

🔷My sister lives in London she visits us every summer. _
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درس 25: Comma Splices
Example 1 — AND

❌ The restaurant was crowded, we decided to eat somewhere else.



✅ The restaurant was crowded, so we decided to eat somewhere else.



Example 2 — BUT

❌ I wanted to buy the jacket, it was too expensive.

✅ I wanted to buy the jacket, but it was too expensive.



Example 3 — AND

❌ Sarah finished her homework, she watched TV.

✅ Sarah finished her homework, and she watched TV.



Example 4 — SO

❌ It was raining heavily, we stayed at home.

✅ It was raining heavily, so we stayed at home.



Example 5 — OR

❌ You can take the bus, you can walk to the station.

✅ You can take the bus, or you can walk to the station.



Example 6 — YET

❌ He studied very hard, he didn't pass the exam.

✅ He studied very hard, yet he didn't pass the exam.
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📌نوبت شماست:

🎯 جملات زیر را یا با کاما و یا کلمات ربط، وصل کنید.

🔶I was hungry, I made a sandwich.


🔷Mary wanted to go shopping, the stores were closed.


🔷Tom missed the bus, he arrived late for work.


🔶We can watch a movie, we can play a game.


🔷She is very young, she is extremely responsible.


🔶The weather was terrible, we went hiking anyway.
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📌پاسخ‌های درست:

✅ I was hungry, so I made a sandwich.

OR: I was hungry. I made a sandwich.

✅ Mary wanted to go shopping, but the stores were closed.

✅ Tom missed the bus, so he arrived late for work.

✅ We can watch a movie, or we can play a game.

✅ She is very young, yet she is extremely responsible.

✅ The weather was terrible, but we went hiking anyway.
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درس 26: Sentences Fragment
1

❌ Because I was sick.
✅ I stayed at home because I was sick.

2

❌ Went to the park with my friends.
✅ I went to the park with my friends.

3

❌ My brother very friendly.
✅ My brother is very friendly.

4

❌ Although the exam was difficult.
✅ Although the exam was difficult, I passed it.

5

❌ After I finished my homework.
✅ After I finished my homework, I watched TV.

6

❌ The students in the classroom.
✅ The students are in the classroom.

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❌ Because the weather was bad.
✅ We didn't go outside because the weather was bad.