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متن زیر رو ChatGPT بده تا برات رایتینگای آیلتست رو تخصصی تصحیح کنه.👇🏻
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متن زیر رو ChatGPT بده تا برات رایتینگای آیلتست رو تخصصی تصحیح کنه.👇🏻
@SaharCast
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Detailed Feedback Request for IELTS Writing Task 2:
Please evaluate my IELTS Writing Task 2 essay based on the official band descriptors:
1. Task Response:
- Does my essay address all parts of the prompt?
- Is my position clear throughout the essay, and do I support my main points with relevant examples and details?
- Is my answer well-developed, and have I avoided unnecessary repetition or irrelevant details?
2. Coherence and Cohesion:
- Are my ideas logically organized, with each paragraph clearly contributing to the overall argument?
- Have I used linking words and cohesive devices effectively to guide the reader through my argument?
- Is my essay easy to follow, and do my transitions between ideas or paragraphs feel smooth and natural?
3. Lexical Resource:
- Have I used a wide range of vocabulary appropriately for the topic?
- Are there any issues with word choice, collocations, or overuse of certain words or phrases?
- Have I avoided informal language, overused expressions, or incorrect use of vocabulary?
4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy:
- Have I used a variety of sentence structures, including complex and compound sentences, appropriately?
- Are there frequent grammatical errors, such as mistakes with verb tenses, punctuation, articles, or subject-verb agreement?
- Is the grammar generally accurate, or are there errors that may affect meaning or readability?
Additionally, please provide a band score estimate (0-9) for each criterion and any general advice or suggestions for improving my essay further.
My essay
question
@SaharCast
Please evaluate my IELTS Writing Task 2 essay based on the official band descriptors:
1. Task Response:
- Does my essay address all parts of the prompt?
- Is my position clear throughout the essay, and do I support my main points with relevant examples and details?
- Is my answer well-developed, and have I avoided unnecessary repetition or irrelevant details?
2. Coherence and Cohesion:
- Are my ideas logically organized, with each paragraph clearly contributing to the overall argument?
- Have I used linking words and cohesive devices effectively to guide the reader through my argument?
- Is my essay easy to follow, and do my transitions between ideas or paragraphs feel smooth and natural?
3. Lexical Resource:
- Have I used a wide range of vocabulary appropriately for the topic?
- Are there any issues with word choice, collocations, or overuse of certain words or phrases?
- Have I avoided informal language, overused expressions, or incorrect use of vocabulary?
4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy:
- Have I used a variety of sentence structures, including complex and compound sentences, appropriately?
- Are there frequent grammatical errors, such as mistakes with verb tenses, punctuation, articles, or subject-verb agreement?
- Is the grammar generally accurate, or are there errors that may affect meaning or readability?
Additionally, please provide a band score estimate (0-9) for each criterion and any general advice or suggestions for improving my essay further.
My essay
question
@SaharCast
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دورههایآبانماه@SaharCast.pdf
سلام سلام💛
بچه ها دوره بحث آزاد این ماه دو نفر دیگه ظرفیت داره اگه دوس دارین شرکت کنین بهم پیام بدین.
زمان، اطلاعات، هزینه دوره
توضیحات من درباره دوره
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بچه ها دوره بحث آزاد این ماه دو نفر دیگه ظرفیت داره اگه دوس دارین شرکت کنین بهم پیام بدین.
زمان، اطلاعات، هزینه دوره
توضیحات من درباره دوره
@SaharCast_Admin
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📍دوره های آبان ماه
اطلاعات کامل دوره های جدید
شروع همه دوره ها هفته اول آبان ماه
📌دوره های این ماه:
1️⃣کلاس اسپیکینگ آیلتس در دو کد
2️⃣کلاس رایتینگ آیلتس تسک ۲
3️⃣کلاس بحث آزاد
اطلاعات کامل دوره های جدید
شروع همه دوره ها هفته اول آبان ماه
📌دوره های این ماه:
1️⃣کلاس اسپیکینگ آیلتس در دو کد
2️⃣کلاس رایتینگ آیلتس تسک ۲
3️⃣کلاس بحث آزاد
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SpeakingTopics|Sep-Dec2024|@SaharCast.pdf
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📍لیست جدیدترین موضوعات اسپیکینگ
دوره Sep-Dec
این لیست رو یرای خودتون پرینت بگیرین و هر موضوعی که کار کردین جلوش تیک بزنین.✅
@SaharCast
دوره Sep-Dec
این لیست رو یرای خودتون پرینت بگیرین و هر موضوعی که کار کردین جلوش تیک بزنین.✅
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🟡جزوه اسپیکینگ آیلتس🟡 برای تهیه جزوه اسپیکینگ آیلتس شامل جدیدترین و قطعی ترین سوالات این دوره، نمونه جواب برای پاسخ دهی به سوال و آموزش لغات،عبارات،ایده و گرامر هر سوال با بالاترین کیفیت برای پرینت دیدن نمونه های رایگان یادت نره! به ادمین پیام بدین @SaharCast_Admin
حالا اگر دوس دارین برای همه این موضوعات نمونه جواب نمره ۷+ داشته باشین و کلی ایده و لغت و ساختار خفن میتونین جزوه اسپیکینگ من رو تهیه کنین.
این جزوه علاوه بر کیفیت بالای طراحی ونظمی که داره، درکنارش عضو کانالی میشین که پادکست های توضیحات من رو خط به خط به فارسی و انگلیسی دارین برای کلی از موضوعات.
🔎اطلاعات بیشتر روی لینک زیر بزن:
نمونه رایگان جزوه
اطلاعات بیشتر
نمونه پادکست
لیست موضوعات جزوه
این جزوه علاوه بر کیفیت بالای طراحی ونظمی که داره، درکنارش عضو کانالی میشین که پادکست های توضیحات من رو خط به خط به فارسی و انگلیسی دارین برای کلی از موضوعات.
🔎اطلاعات بیشتر روی لینک زیر بزن:
نمونه رایگان جزوه
اطلاعات بیشتر
نمونه پادکست
لیست موضوعات جزوه
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🟡جدید ترین سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس پارت یک: Teachers🟡
توی این جزوه پرتکرارترین و قطعی ترین سوالات اسپیکینگ دوره سپتامبر تا دسامبر رو دارین به همراه لغات، عبارات، گرامر و نمونه جواب ها. این جزوه بر اساس اپلیکیشن IELTS speaking assistant
با طراحی بالا و با کیفیت…
توی این جزوه پرتکرارترین و قطعی ترین سوالات اسپیکینگ دوره سپتامبر تا دسامبر رو دارین به همراه لغات، عبارات، گرامر و نمونه جواب ها. این جزوه بر اساس اپلیکیشن IELTS speaking assistant
با طراحی بالا و با کیفیت…
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دو اپیزود پادکست دیگه با @SaharCast درباره جدیدترین موضوعات اسپیکینگ آیلتس🌻
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همه چیز درباره ثبت نام آزمون در دبی و مراحلشو براتون ویدیو گرفتیم و کامل سوالاتتون رو پاسخ میدیم.🌝
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❤️🔥داغ ترین موضوع اسپیکینگ آیلتس ❤️🔥
🪙Coins سکه ها🪙
حتما چندین بار بدین و لغاتش رو نوت بردارین.
@SaharCast
🪙Coins سکه ها🪙
حتما چندین بار بدین و لغاتش رو نوت بردارین.
@SaharCast
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🪙سوالات جدید پارت اول با موضوع سکه
Part 1 Coins🪙
Sample answers with vocabulary and ideas 🌝
1. Do you use coins in your daily life?
If I'm honest, I can barely recall the last time I used notes in my country, let alone metal coins. It's all been superseded by cashless payments these days.
2. Do you often carry coins with you?
Not really, aside from when I'm on holiday, and I always seem to get them back whenever I use paper currency.
3. Have you ever collected coins?
I have, and I still do, from the different countries I've been to over the years. I have cedi from Ghana and dollars from the US, and now lira from Turkey, just to name a few. It's a nice little souvenir that costs next to nothing and doesn't take up too much space in my luggage.
4. Is it convenient to use coins?
Not these days, unless cashless payments aren't an option. Why would you haul around a load of metal with you when you can just pay for everything via credit or debit card? There's not much point in it, at least in the short term.
5. Did you use coins as a child?
Definitely more compared to now. I think we were given one pound a week as pocket money or an allowance. It's not worth much now, but back then, for a child that would buy you a lot of things to make your weekend more fun.
@SaharCast
Part 1 Coins🪙
Sample answers with vocabulary and ideas 🌝
1. Do you use coins in your daily life?
If I'm honest, I can barely recall the last time I used notes in my country, let alone metal coins. It's all been superseded by cashless payments these days.
2. Do you often carry coins with you?
Not really, aside from when I'm on holiday, and I always seem to get them back whenever I use paper currency.
3. Have you ever collected coins?
I have, and I still do, from the different countries I've been to over the years. I have cedi from Ghana and dollars from the US, and now lira from Turkey, just to name a few. It's a nice little souvenir that costs next to nothing and doesn't take up too much space in my luggage.
4. Is it convenient to use coins?
Not these days, unless cashless payments aren't an option. Why would you haul around a load of metal with you when you can just pay for everything via credit or debit card? There's not much point in it, at least in the short term.
5. Did you use coins as a child?
Definitely more compared to now. I think we were given one pound a week as pocket money or an allowance. It's not worth much now, but back then, for a child that would buy you a lot of things to make your weekend more fun.
@SaharCast
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زشت نیست به مناسب 100k شدن پیج اینستاگرام تخفیف روی همه دوره ها نذاشتیم؟🌝
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