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Idea generation (using Choyxona method) โ€”> Idea selection
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1) Does it answer the question? (relevant or irrelevant)
2) Am I not repeating myself?
3) Is it extendable?
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Point/Topic sentence:
People who grow up in big families tend to have better relationships with their family members because they often interact with them on a daily basis.
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Explanation:
These interactions can include various activities together, such as having meals, watching TV, and discussing their day.
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Example: For example, family members might gather every evening for dinner, where they share their experiences and support each other.
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Link/Analysis: These daily interactions help to build strong bonds and foster a sense of closeness and understanding among family members. Additionally, older siblings often assist younger ones with their homework, which fosters a sense of responsibility and cooperation.
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Summary/concluding sentence: Overall, the constant interaction and shared experiences in large families contribute significantly to the development of social skills that are beneficial outside the family context as well.
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Band 5: Some main ideas are put forward but they are limited and are not sufficiently developed and/or there may be irrelevant detail.
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Addresses all parts of the task.
Presents a clear position throughout the response.
Presents, extends, and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to overgeneralize and/or supporting ideas may lack focus.
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Band 5 paragraph
Living in large families has many benefits. For example, people can have fun together and share things. There is always someone to talk to, which means you are never lonely. Also, large families have more members, so there is more support available when needed. Sometimes, having many people around can lead to disagreements, but overall it is a good experience. Additionally, big families often have more pets, which can be fun but also add to the responsibilities.
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Nima oโ€™rgana oldingiz ?
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Overview
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Choyxona
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