This week, as part of my ongoing Writing Marathon, Iβll be teaching Problem & Solution Essays.
As some of you may know, I create a comprehensive guide for each question type. For this weekβs guide, Iβve decided to include a quick formula for crafting an effective introduction.
While I usually advise against using memorized lines, these can be valuable for saving precious time during the exam.
As some of you may know, I create a comprehensive guide for each question type. For this weekβs guide, Iβve decided to include a quick formula for crafting an effective introduction.
While I usually advise against using memorized lines, these can be valuable for saving precious time during the exam.
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Out of Thin Air.pdf
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It is a 10-page long article, but can you guys find the part that describes the given process?
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Aug 31 CDI Exam.pdf
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#WritingQuestions
Hereβs another set of Writing Questions that appeared recently.
Interestingly, I had given this exact table as homework just a day before, purely by chance.
Hereβs another set of Writing Questions that appeared recently.
Interestingly, I had given this exact table as homework just a day before, purely by chance.
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WriteUP
Aug 31 CDI Exam.pdf
Let's talk about grouping (data separation) for task 1.
What do you think is the best way to group the given data?
What do you think is the best way to group the given data?
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WriteUP
Aug 31 CDI Exam.pdf
#grouping #DataSeparation #TaskOne
Thereβs no single correct approach, but you should always aim for the easiest and most logical one.
If you find yourself needing to explain your grouping to someone, itβs probably not the optimal way.
For this particular table, Iβd recommend writing three detailed paragraphs, each focusing on one column: female-dominant, first language not English, and born outside Australia. This approach ensures that the examiner can easily follow the logic of your grouping.
Thereβs no single correct approach, but you should always aim for the easiest and most logical one.
If you find yourself needing to explain your grouping to someone, itβs probably not the optimal way.
For this particular table, Iβd recommend writing three detailed paragraphs, each focusing on one column: female-dominant, first language not English, and born outside Australia. This approach ensures that the examiner can easily follow the logic of your grouping.
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#TaskTwo #AgreeDisagree
Here is a challenging Task 2 question:
Many people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences in earnings between the richest and the poorest members.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What do you think makes this question relatively harder for many candidates myself included?
Here is a challenging Task 2 question:
Many people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences in earnings between the richest and the poorest members.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What do you think makes this question relatively harder for many candidates myself included?
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A must-watch video for everyone whoβs always asking me to recommend good books to improve their writing skills.
https://youtu.be/NXLrsqjme7k?si=qgO8PmDlRIs0HSpN
https://youtu.be/NXLrsqjme7k?si=qgO8PmDlRIs0HSpN
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IELTS Writing 8.5 uchun TOP 5 ta Kitoblar | Bekzod Mirahmedov
Bu video da o'zimga IELTS Writing 8.5 olishimga yordam bergan TOP 5 ta kitob bilan bo'lishdim. Bu kitoblar albatta sizga ham IELTS Writing balingizni oshirishga yordam berishi mumkin.
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00:00 Intro
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00:00 Intro
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Forwarded from BM | IELTS 9.0
Hereβs what the former writing examiner commented regarding the updated public band descriptors: as anticipated, theyβve eased the minimum requirements, particularly for bands 8.0 and 9.0.
I had a look at the grading criteria for band nine and it's definitely softer than what it was. I've circled in blue some of the new wording that they have introduced. It's probably partly due to a realisation that some people actually need band nine and in the past... It was almost this kind of sacred cow that you don't give band nine unless you thought it was good enough to be a native writer. I haven't had a chance to go through all of it though.
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T2_ How to deal with Two-Part-Question Essays.pdf
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Iβm excited to share this PDF Iβve prepared as part of our ongoing Writing Marathon!
This week, weβre diving into two-part question essays for Task 2. In this comprehensive guide, Iβve chosen a Task 2 question that holds special meaning for me. Itβs the same question I received in 2017, the year I scored my first 8.0 in Writing (and the model answer included here is an improved version of the essay I wrote back then).
Personally, Iβve always found two-part question essays easier to manage because the structure feels more straightforward when it comes to paragraphing.
This week, weβre diving into two-part question essays for Task 2. In this comprehensive guide, Iβve chosen a Task 2 question that holds special meaning for me. Itβs the same question I received in 2017, the year I scored my first 8.0 in Writing (and the model answer included here is an improved version of the essay I wrote back then).
Personally, Iβve always found two-part question essays easier to manage because the structure feels more straightforward when it comes to paragraphing.
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Task 1 Process
Can you spot some useful language to describe the process of raising chicken for consumption?
Can you spot some useful language to describe the process of raising chicken for consumption?
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What if I were to offer a new Writing Essay Correction Service to a limited number of people?
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A payment is required for each submission.
We provide both Task 1 and Task 2 questions, allowing you to practice with authentic IELTS prompts. π
Each submission is carefully reviewed by two experts: BM and a former IELTS Writing Examiner. Youβll receive a comprehensive assessment and personalized feedback to help you improve your writing and reach your desired band score!
β οΈ Important:
Only 5 spots are available each day, so make sure to secure yours early!
A payment is required for each submission.
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Alright, I'm drawing up the instructions and the application form. Who is interested?
Stay tuned!
Stay tuned!
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β’ Authentic IELTS prompts for both Task 1 & Task 2.
β’ Essays reviewed by two experts: BM and a former IELTS Writing Examiner.
β’ Comprehensive feedback on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Vocabulary, and Grammar.
β’ Personalized suggestions and band score estimate based on official IELTS criteria.
π° Price: $16 per submission.
β οΈ Limited Availability:
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β’ Payment required to secure your spot.
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Sep 1, 2024 with Feedback.pdf
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This is the type of feedback and assessment you can expect.
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By the way, the first few days have already been filled. Very unexpected. By this rate, pretty soon you won't even be able to book a slot in the next week or so.
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