Let’s first generate some arguments for both sides.

Can you suggest some ideas in favour of living in the city and living in the countryside?

For living in the city:

More employment opportunities
A wider range of amenities
Good schools

For living in the countryside:

Healthier lifestyle
Lower cost of living
Close-knit communities

Time to write!

Introduction:

1st sentence: paraphrase the statement using your own words.

It is argued by some that it is good to live in the outside of city, others, belief living in an urban area have more benefits.

Now write the second sentence: answer the question by making your position clear.

Intro:

It is argued by some that it is good to live in the outside of city, others, belief living in an urban area have more benefits. While it is understandable that city life can offer better living conditions and employment opportunities, I believe that living in the countryside is much better due to its healthy and less stressful environment.

Great! Moving on to our body paragraph one:

Write the topic sentence that conveys that there are 3 main advantages to living in the city.

1st Body paragraph topic sentence:

There are three clear advantages, mostly related to socioeconomic factors, to living in the city.

Now introduce the first main argument!

Full Body 1:

Firstly, cities offer a broader range of job opportunities for individuals seeking career advancement. Since most of the big companies are located in the cities, there is more need for the labor force. German cities such as Hamburg and Berlin are some of the pertinent examples, where both local and foreign workforce can secure relevant job positions in various fields. Additionally, cities are the home of educational facilities meaning that most of top-tier universities and well-known learning centers are located in urban areas. This is why the majority of urban dwellers can get quality education without having to spend to much time to commute.

We could have written a summarizing sentence as well but this is already good enough in terms of length. So why not focus on the second body paragraph now.

Write a topic sentence indicating your opinion.

2nd Body Topic Sentence: In spite of the abovementioned advantages, l believe that living in the countriside offers more benefits.

Now, let's introduce our first main idea.

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Firstly, living in rural areas can offer less polluted environment.

Let’s take a break for now.

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Alright, I am back! So, here is what we have so far:

2nd Body:
In spite of the above mentioned advantages, l believe that living in the countriside offers more benefits. Firstly, living in rural areas can offer less polluted environment.

Let's now continue with the next sentence where we should explain the first main argument further.

According to the statistics provided by the WHO, those who live in urban environments have 20% less likelihood of facing illnesses result from pollution such as asthma and anemia.

Ok, so moving on to the second point.

Generally lower prices in the countryside is another benefit for residents.

Ok, now explain what you mean by that!

These places can offer a cleaner environment and a more affordable lifestyle compared to cities.

Now, let’s move on to the conclusion paragraph.

1st sentence: write a sentence summarizing the main points from each body paragraph. You can just mention one argument from each side.

In conclusion, although cities offer more job opportunities and educational facilities, I'm still of the view that living in the countryside has more benefits, ranging from the healthy lifestyle to the lower cost of living.

It a bit wordy, but we can accept it. I would, however, write two separate sentences.

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Here is the full essay that you have all contributed.

I think this essay has turned out much better than the last time! Good job, everyone!

With a few tweaks here and there, the essay could be improved to band 7.0.

It is argued by some that it is good to live in the outside of city, others, belief living in an urban area have more benefits. While it is understandable that city life can offer better living conditions and employment opportunities, I believe that living in the countryside is much better due to its healthy and less stressful.

There are two clear advantages, mostly related to socioeconomic factors, to living in the city.Firstly, cities offer a broader range of job opportunities for individuals seeking career advancement. Since most of the big companies are located in the cities, there is more need for the labor force. German cities such as Hamburg and Berlin are some of the pertinent examples, where both local and foreign workforce can secure relevant job positions in various fields. Additionally, cities are the home of educational facilities meaning that most of top-tier universities and well-known learning centers are located in urban areas. This is why the majority of urban dwellers can get quality education without having to spend to much time to commute.

In spite of the above mentioned advantages, l believe that living in the countriside offers more benefits. Firstly, living in rural areas can offer less polluted environment. According to the statistics provided by the WHO, those who live in urban environments have 20% less likelihood of facing illnesses result from pollution such as asthma and anemia. Generally lower prices in the countryside is another benefit for residents. To be more precise, unlike in cities living costs are not so high in villages, since most products are first-hand and grown by villagers themselves. Likewise, villages are not overcrowded, which means accommodation is also affordable.

In conclusion, although cities offer more job opportunities and educational facilities, I'm still of the view that living in the countryside has more benefits, ranging from the healthy lifestyle to the lower cost of living.