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Living in large families has many benefits. For example, people can have fun together and share things. There is always someone to talk to, which means you are never lonely. Also, large families have more members, so there is more support available when needed. Sometimes, having many people around can lead to disagreements, but overall it is a good experience. Additionally, big families often have more pets, which can be fun but also add to the responsibilities.
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Sizda marafonga qo’shilish uchun bugun ham imkoniyat bor.

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Hurmat bilan,
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Nihoyat 🎉🥳 Online Writing Marathon ga BUGUN START beriladi.


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Xabaringiz bor, kecha Online Writing Marathon ning 1- jonli darsi bo’lib o’tdi



Biz kursda shu vaqtgacha quyidagilarni ko’rib chiqdik⬇️

— Marking criteria | Writing task 1
— Marking criteria | Writing task 2


Line graph da📈📉
— Qanday effective introduction yozish
— Qanday effective overview ni yozish
— Qanday effective paragraph ni yozish

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Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues.

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Kelilar bitta o’yin o’ynaymiz.

Har bitta odam bittadan gap yozib inshoni davom ettirib ketadi. Introduction ni birinchini gapini kim boshlab beradi?

Keyin oxirida o’zim train qilgan Writing Examiner AI bn tekshirib beraman.
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Intro:
(By one one of our subscribers here)

Most of the people think that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, weather others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money that could be used for important issues.

Now write the next sentence, and don’t use GPT
. Let’s keep it human.
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Intro: (By one one of our subscribers here) Most of the people think that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, weather others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money that could be used for important issues. Now write…
In my view, Olympic games truly can help to make more twisted nations.

I think we are done with the intro. Let’s move on to the first sentence of our body paragraph.
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In my view, Olympic games truly can help to make more twisted nations. I think we are done with the intro. Let’s move on to the first sentence of our body paragraph.
On the one hand, Olympic games present some talented people to us.

Next: explain this topic sentence
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On the one hand, Olympic games present some talented people to us. Next: explain this topic sentence
With the help of media and interest to the tournament, more people will be able to see the competence of the sportsmen.

Next: you can give an example or explain it further.
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