Those corrupted thoughts are just like a seed planted deep in my heart growing bit by bit trying to take over me and I help in growing them by feeding them my negative feeling it's scary so scary that I feel numb frustrated i feel shackled to the point where death feel like the only place where I can rest where i can put my head and no whispering will be heard no murmuring will annoy me just eternal silence and I don't want to wake up in the morning and smile just to hide these dark thoughts i want to smile because I genuinely want to smile no alternative meaning to it a smile meant to show I'm happy
#review
#review
Who are you?
Oh dear, shall I tell you what you mean to me.. ?
I don't have the means to love you, but only a few words for now..
Can words be enough to express who you are?
Not some ordinary being, that's for sure
You are a giver in the city of receivers
A lover, in the world of beggars
My dear, your patience, your acceptance
All is beyond these limited words and the infinite worlds
Whatever makes you, as you
Delights me forever and always
I would let you be mine and accept you with open arms
Such sincerity that is embodied by you,
Would truly make any gentleman envious
Selfless, unconditional love is what you always spoke of
Never knew it could be this real
Now, seeing it all by myself
Makes my heart cry, feeling love so ideal
The freedom you offer to me
Is just so invaluable and lovely
Every girl on the planet dies for this love of thee
And you give that all to me
Ever so simply
Can words ever be enough to express the love you have within you?
My dear, I still can't express it right..
For you don't love, or love is not within you..
Oh you are love itself
You are love itself, my dear. ❤️
#lovepoem
#ecstatic
#review
Oh dear, shall I tell you what you mean to me.. ?
I don't have the means to love you, but only a few words for now..
Can words be enough to express who you are?
Not some ordinary being, that's for sure
You are a giver in the city of receivers
A lover, in the world of beggars
My dear, your patience, your acceptance
All is beyond these limited words and the infinite worlds
Whatever makes you, as you
Delights me forever and always
I would let you be mine and accept you with open arms
Such sincerity that is embodied by you,
Would truly make any gentleman envious
Selfless, unconditional love is what you always spoke of
Never knew it could be this real
Now, seeing it all by myself
Makes my heart cry, feeling love so ideal
The freedom you offer to me
Is just so invaluable and lovely
Every girl on the planet dies for this love of thee
And you give that all to me
Ever so simply
Can words ever be enough to express the love you have within you?
My dear, I still can't express it right..
For you don't love, or love is not within you..
Oh you are love itself
You are love itself, my dear. ❤️
#lovepoem
#ecstatic
#review
#poetry #review #venus
Let me tell you a tale
of girl held captive in her head
smiling to the whole world
And sulking at the corner of her bed
She's insecure of her possessions.
she's not safe at her home
she holds out a hand for every needy
friend
And screams in the silence but nobody really cares
Her life is not yet spared
of all the lies and fears
her very aplomb temper is retaliated
and her life turns to a convulsive event
Yet she stands everyday
smiling to the mirror world
promising affirmations
And shining like a sun
You think she's happy because she's smiling
but it's the easiest thing to do
If you looked a little closer
her eyes weren't happy too
she's dying to hear someone say
that she didn't need to try so hard
that she was perfectly enough
that she was prettily okay
And If you dare to love her
Let me tell you something
You can't go past her emotional intellect
so make her feel everything
she's not a witch but benware of her
All her beauty in her voice
so don't treat her like an option
or she'll leave you like a choice
Let me tell you a tale
of girl held captive in her head
smiling to the whole world
And sulking at the corner of her bed
She's insecure of her possessions.
she's not safe at her home
she holds out a hand for every needy
friend
And screams in the silence but nobody really cares
Her life is not yet spared
of all the lies and fears
her very aplomb temper is retaliated
and her life turns to a convulsive event
Yet she stands everyday
smiling to the mirror world
promising affirmations
And shining like a sun
You think she's happy because she's smiling
but it's the easiest thing to do
If you looked a little closer
her eyes weren't happy too
she's dying to hear someone say
that she didn't need to try so hard
that she was perfectly enough
that she was prettily okay
And If you dare to love her
Let me tell you something
You can't go past her emotional intellect
so make her feel everything
she's not a witch but benware of her
All her beauty in her voice
so don't treat her like an option
or she'll leave you like a choice
Title : "Playful Soul"
The rising sun and the nature cries,
Makes me feel like healing vibes.
They exclusively make me so enthusiastic,
As it's the beginning my astonishment is so drastic.
The deep ocean touches up my soul,
The extensive sky makes my essence so wide.
These all fulfil my desire as a whole,
As I feel myself in the bed on one side.
As I assume myself on the trip,
Laughing and Enjoying myself with my friends.
Glorifying, dancing, cheering and cherishing,
They will be the best memories I would be reminiscing.
Tomorrow is the day, the day which I dream,
After my all endeavours and planning.
It feels so steady with a sudden blow of stream,
Which brings about my eternal sentiments of hesitating.
Enduring my soul and controlling my exhilaration,
I felt a sensation of joy and a terror of tension.
As it's the life which teaches us on every point,
I recommend being prepared to acquire the teaching at every subsequent checkpoint. 💫✨
#review
#Cookie
#Dreamy_adventure
The rising sun and the nature cries,
Makes me feel like healing vibes.
They exclusively make me so enthusiastic,
As it's the beginning my astonishment is so drastic.
The deep ocean touches up my soul,
The extensive sky makes my essence so wide.
These all fulfil my desire as a whole,
As I feel myself in the bed on one side.
As I assume myself on the trip,
Laughing and Enjoying myself with my friends.
Glorifying, dancing, cheering and cherishing,
They will be the best memories I would be reminiscing.
Tomorrow is the day, the day which I dream,
After my all endeavours and planning.
It feels so steady with a sudden blow of stream,
Which brings about my eternal sentiments of hesitating.
Enduring my soul and controlling my exhilaration,
I felt a sensation of joy and a terror of tension.
As it's the life which teaches us on every point,
I recommend being prepared to acquire the teaching at every subsequent checkpoint. 💫✨
#review
#Cookie
#Dreamy_adventure
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Title : "Problem Child or Golden Child"
Shimmering alone from heaven,
Was wandering a divine soul,
Enclosed within a living corpse,
Struggling alone for liberty.
Is it a Problem Child or a Golden Child?
Shivering under eternal moonlight,
Protesting against the worldly foes.
Resisting extreme ailments for survival,
"Is there a place to reside?",
Said the Spiritual Soul of the Problem Child.
Residing in an awful body,
Which looks so messy has a Golden Soul.
In this materialistic world of possessions,
Where appearance matters the most,
Has still someone to care for?
Then, suddenly spiritual aura emerges,
Another soul dropped by & surges,
Who also have a similar fate,
Dressed up all the wounds in the divine soul,
It was none other than the soulmate.
Returning after ages to heaven,
The happiest soul was glinting Golden.
The wandering soul immersed in fantasies,
Who was very soon going to depart,
At last found a place in God's heart. 💫✨
#review #Cookie #soulful_poetry
Shimmering alone from heaven,
Was wandering a divine soul,
Enclosed within a living corpse,
Struggling alone for liberty.
Is it a Problem Child or a Golden Child?
Shivering under eternal moonlight,
Protesting against the worldly foes.
Resisting extreme ailments for survival,
"Is there a place to reside?",
Said the Spiritual Soul of the Problem Child.
Residing in an awful body,
Which looks so messy has a Golden Soul.
In this materialistic world of possessions,
Where appearance matters the most,
Has still someone to care for?
Then, suddenly spiritual aura emerges,
Another soul dropped by & surges,
Who also have a similar fate,
Dressed up all the wounds in the divine soul,
It was none other than the soulmate.
Returning after ages to heaven,
The happiest soul was glinting Golden.
The wandering soul immersed in fantasies,
Who was very soon going to depart,
At last found a place in God's heart. 💫✨
#review #Cookie #soulful_poetry
Sing with me;
There's no one around
to the rhythm of tune, it's just the breeze
Gently whistling...
Hold my hands;
And dance with me in the mild light, it's a smile from the moon
Melodiously glistening...
Kiss my lips;
And be in my arms, to fusion of sounds it's an applause from the night
Rhythmically fading...
#poetry #review
There's no one around
to the rhythm of tune, it's just the breeze
Gently whistling...
Hold my hands;
And dance with me in the mild light, it's a smile from the moon
Melodiously glistening...
Kiss my lips;
And be in my arms, to fusion of sounds it's an applause from the night
Rhythmically fading...
#poetry #review
Title : " Triumphing Adventure "
Adventure awaits the brave,
Who can risk the life to crave.
Pursuits revealing mysteries,
Eager to challenge for victories.
The desire for discovery,
With enough effort and bravery.
Who possess essential qualities,
Like optimism, capabilities and sensibilities.
Life itself is an adventurous journey,
The challenging soul inside is burning.
The ones who master this adventure,
Can set up a record for others to venture.
#review #Cookie #optimism
Adventure awaits the brave,
Who can risk the life to crave.
Pursuits revealing mysteries,
Eager to challenge for victories.
The desire for discovery,
With enough effort and bravery.
Who possess essential qualities,
Like optimism, capabilities and sensibilities.
Life itself is an adventurous journey,
The challenging soul inside is burning.
The ones who master this adventure,
Can set up a record for others to venture.
#review #Cookie #optimism
❤2
Realize
Why do we ignore the the chirruping of birds?
Why do we overlook the open sky?
Has all the beauty diminished?
Or is it us who are missing all this lately?
Why do we curb all the curiosity?
Why do we assume everything is for eternity?
Has all the freshness gone?
Or is it us who neglect?
Why do we lack gratefulness for love?
Why do we take our relationships for granted?
Has all the compassion, novelty, curiosity, beauty faded?
Or is it us who do not realize their presence?
Observe, feel, be grateful
And live this life to the fullest
#review
#poem
#ecstatic
Why do we ignore the the chirruping of birds?
Why do we overlook the open sky?
Has all the beauty diminished?
Or is it us who are missing all this lately?
Why do we curb all the curiosity?
Why do we assume everything is for eternity?
Has all the freshness gone?
Or is it us who neglect?
Why do we lack gratefulness for love?
Why do we take our relationships for granted?
Has all the compassion, novelty, curiosity, beauty faded?
Or is it us who do not realize their presence?
Observe, feel, be grateful
And live this life to the fullest
#review
#poem
#ecstatic
👍1
!THE SUDDEN CHANGE !
Life has changed a lot since last time we met
Now everything thing is different ,
Yet whatever has happened will remain recurrent ,
Once I was the river through which you wanted to flow ,
But now I am the cactus which you wish not to grow,
At some point I was the reason of your smiling face ,
But now I am the cause of your disgrace ,
At some instant I was the happiness , you required ,
But now I am the sorrow, you never aspired
I wish to be your happiness again ,
I want those clouds once More to rain ,
I again desire to be your medicine for every pain ,
Eventually, like blood I want to flow through your vein ,
To force all hatred and misunderstandings to drain .
-CH.Irfan.
#review
#poem
Life has changed a lot since last time we met
Now everything thing is different ,
Yet whatever has happened will remain recurrent ,
Once I was the river through which you wanted to flow ,
But now I am the cactus which you wish not to grow,
At some point I was the reason of your smiling face ,
But now I am the cause of your disgrace ,
At some instant I was the happiness , you required ,
But now I am the sorrow, you never aspired
I wish to be your happiness again ,
I want those clouds once More to rain ,
I again desire to be your medicine for every pain ,
Eventually, like blood I want to flow through your vein ,
To force all hatred and misunderstandings to drain .
-CH.Irfan.
#review
#poem
👍1
In the silence as the dead soul..
The sound of my voice calling your name in the void,
Woke up the sleeping nights..
The burning flames from the cry of an unspoken words,
The rage in an unexpressed feelings between the first kiss and the last good bye,,
the glow in the drops of painful tears,,,
the shade of bright colors in the bleeding heart,,,,
Made the twinkling stars feel a twinge of envy...
Everything turned to visual poetry,
When the smoke from floating cloud draw your portrait,
And never in my life my lungs ever craved more to inhale a smoke that toxic to life...
~failed engineer
#review
#poetry
The sound of my voice calling your name in the void,
Woke up the sleeping nights..
The burning flames from the cry of an unspoken words,
The rage in an unexpressed feelings between the first kiss and the last good bye,,
the glow in the drops of painful tears,,,
the shade of bright colors in the bleeding heart,,,,
Made the twinkling stars feel a twinge of envy...
Everything turned to visual poetry,
When the smoke from floating cloud draw your portrait,
And never in my life my lungs ever craved more to inhale a smoke that toxic to life...
~failed engineer
#review
#poetry
#review #poetry #venus
In this world of surprises
My life took a turn and I met you
Blessed with happiness you took me to the moon
But oh my mistrustfulness
You left me in a few
So For the sake of forgiveness
I have an apology
I don't know what's wrong with me
Still I say I'm sorry , really
I'm sure I caused a headache
For I'm trying to get distant
But I promise I'll try harder
But will you have my back at ends??
In this world of surprises
My life took a turn and I met you
Blessed with happiness you took me to the moon
But oh my mistrustfulness
You left me in a few
So For the sake of forgiveness
I have an apology
I don't know what's wrong with me
Still I say I'm sorry , really
I'm sure I caused a headache
For I'm trying to get distant
But I promise I'll try harder
But will you have my back at ends??
Title : " HAPPINESS "
Poor beggars out sauntering,
Lightening of the storms streaking,
Praying to God, with a desire of hope,
They all try to satisfy among them is what we call Happiness.
The rich experiencing their lavish life,
Wandering for something here and there,
Whether a trip or a tour for peace,
The sentiment they are seeking to enjoy is the feeling of Happiness.
Everyone in this society, from lavish to devilish,
Beseeching the culmination of their longings,
At the end of the endeavours,
Wants a feeling which portrays their Happiness.
When the soul is full of misery and distress,
And the world is under the shadow of gloominess,
Accompanying Shambles and turmoil all over,
The evocation we memories are the glances of Happiness.
When the cruelty exceeds temperament,
Provoking the mind to burst into tears,
Aggravating stress and burden on itself,
The medicine to cure it is referred to as Happiness.
#review
#Cookie
#Happiness
Poor beggars out sauntering,
Lightening of the storms streaking,
Praying to God, with a desire of hope,
They all try to satisfy among them is what we call Happiness.
The rich experiencing their lavish life,
Wandering for something here and there,
Whether a trip or a tour for peace,
The sentiment they are seeking to enjoy is the feeling of Happiness.
Everyone in this society, from lavish to devilish,
Beseeching the culmination of their longings,
At the end of the endeavours,
Wants a feeling which portrays their Happiness.
When the soul is full of misery and distress,
And the world is under the shadow of gloominess,
Accompanying Shambles and turmoil all over,
The evocation we memories are the glances of Happiness.
When the cruelty exceeds temperament,
Provoking the mind to burst into tears,
Aggravating stress and burden on itself,
The medicine to cure it is referred to as Happiness.
#review
#Cookie
#Happiness
The last time we met
The last words you Said
were not just words ,
But bullets in my lungs .
These beautiful clouds and cold Wheather ,
Reminds me of the moments we spent together .
Celebrating first Eid in your absence ,
Makes me guilty for my existence.
Scrolling through my WhatsApp
these days,
feels that life has left me no ways
I always felt happy whenever we met ,
But now ,
Your name forces me to regret ,
Your wait compels me to forget ,
And , even your thoughts pierces my heart.
-CH.Irfan.
#review
#poem
#feature
The last words you Said
were not just words ,
But bullets in my lungs .
These beautiful clouds and cold Wheather ,
Reminds me of the moments we spent together .
Celebrating first Eid in your absence ,
Makes me guilty for my existence.
Scrolling through my WhatsApp
these days,
feels that life has left me no ways
I always felt happy whenever we met ,
But now ,
Your name forces me to regret ,
Your wait compels me to forget ,
And , even your thoughts pierces my heart.
-CH.Irfan.
#review
#poem
#feature
It was 3am back then
I was laying on the bed
The Mullioned windows were open
The stars above in the night were gleaming
Suddenly onshore breeze had started
I turned off my phone and Started
Thinking of a dazzling Lady
I was devising a Scenario
of me and the graceful Lady
The scenario doesn't exist in real
But,
it gives peace In real
It gives me the Inner endearments
It gives a feeling that is forthcoming
I was fully Shifted to palace with her
That place was completely Magical
We were creating an album of Our life
And in an instant, it started Thundering
I Woke up from my pleasant Dream
The high wind started, The birds were
Moving from one tree to another
I closed my Windows
Gradually Heavy Downpour started
The Dream was left incomplete
But I made a Smile
And Thanked that period
For making me contented in
Today's Selfish World.
#review
#poem
#feature
I was laying on the bed
The Mullioned windows were open
The stars above in the night were gleaming
Suddenly onshore breeze had started
I turned off my phone and Started
Thinking of a dazzling Lady
I was devising a Scenario
of me and the graceful Lady
The scenario doesn't exist in real
But,
it gives peace In real
It gives me the Inner endearments
It gives a feeling that is forthcoming
I was fully Shifted to palace with her
That place was completely Magical
We were creating an album of Our life
And in an instant, it started Thundering
I Woke up from my pleasant Dream
The high wind started, The birds were
Moving from one tree to another
I closed my Windows
Gradually Heavy Downpour started
The Dream was left incomplete
But I made a Smile
And Thanked that period
For making me contented in
Today's Selfish World.
#review
#poem
#feature
Atticus Poetry,
on atticus in Love Her Wild:
There is nothing prettier in thewhole wide world than a girlin lovewith every breath she takes.
by @WritersClub | @WritersCafe
on atticus in Love Her Wild:
There is nothing prettier in thewhole wide world than a girlin lovewith every breath she takes.
by @WritersClub | @WritersCafe
My Silence, My Fear
Staring into silence, the sound of the unknown
Unrelenting noise, this silence - the fear of what's to come
Not a fear that brings dred, or flight from where I am
More of a respectful pose, to prepare for what's ahead
My mind has been prepared and trained for what to do
My body has been disciplined and strengthened to follow through
Years of thoughtless living, making decisions without reason
Took years of corrective thinking to shape this man for this season
Though some may see a broken man, the product of a system
Their sight is blinded by prejudice, committing shameful treason
For there are some who pretend and hide, judjing like they're god
Forgetting their own reflection, a self-image - a facade
The sound of their own silence, another fear to face
An opportunity placed before me, help or run away
Empathy on a new level, their fear becomes my own
Finding strength together, stronger than on my own.
#review
Staring into silence, the sound of the unknown
Unrelenting noise, this silence - the fear of what's to come
Not a fear that brings dred, or flight from where I am
More of a respectful pose, to prepare for what's ahead
My mind has been prepared and trained for what to do
My body has been disciplined and strengthened to follow through
Years of thoughtless living, making decisions without reason
Took years of corrective thinking to shape this man for this season
Though some may see a broken man, the product of a system
Their sight is blinded by prejudice, committing shameful treason
For there are some who pretend and hide, judjing like they're god
Forgetting their own reflection, a self-image - a facade
The sound of their own silence, another fear to face
An opportunity placed before me, help or run away
Empathy on a new level, their fear becomes my own
Finding strength together, stronger than on my own.
#review
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It was a dream
Met a girl in my dreams..
she said she could bring the sun and the moon together in arms..
May it was true, coz she was like a melody in the love song that Peirced your heart;
The one like a morning breeze, lazy sunset and colours of art..
She wandered my thoughts
like an undiscovered terrain,
preyed on my soul
with hope she’d sustain..
Erased my past memories
one by one
safe to say
new growth has begun
And she was in my dreams....
- failed engineer
#poetry
#review
#failedengineer
Met a girl in my dreams..
she said she could bring the sun and the moon together in arms..
May it was true, coz she was like a melody in the love song that Peirced your heart;
The one like a morning breeze, lazy sunset and colours of art..
She wandered my thoughts
like an undiscovered terrain,
preyed on my soul
with hope she’d sustain..
Erased my past memories
one by one
safe to say
new growth has begun
And she was in my dreams....
- failed engineer
#poetry
#review
#failedengineer
👍1
Eternal Love
I just opened the eyes,
Aloud tears filled the room,
That's the first time that,
I saw true form of love,
My Mother.
She hugged and kissed me,
With happiness and tears in her eyes,
That's the selfless love.
I have never seen 'her' before,
But I felt her touch in womb,
Her hands touched me,
Her womb protected me.
I have seen her and cried,
Her gentleness in heart,
Her intangible love,
Is the pinnacle in the whole world.
S NAVEEN
#poetry #SN #review
I just opened the eyes,
Aloud tears filled the room,
That's the first time that,
I saw true form of love,
My Mother.
She hugged and kissed me,
With happiness and tears in her eyes,
That's the selfless love.
I have never seen 'her' before,
But I felt her touch in womb,
Her hands touched me,
Her womb protected me.
I have seen her and cried,
Her gentleness in heart,
Her intangible love,
Is the pinnacle in the whole world.
S NAVEEN
#poetry #SN #review
👍1
Loving mistakes
They are
your old friends
right?
But
you found yourself could not like them
since they were strangers
in the first place
Oh dear
those are the ways
everyone should take
Go straight
with all the fears
which may frighten you
to shake
When
you look back
it’s an entire world
actually filled
with familiar smiling faces.
#philix #poetry #review
They are
your old friends
right?
But
you found yourself could not like them
since they were strangers
in the first place
Oh dear
those are the ways
everyone should take
Go straight
with all the fears
which may frighten you
to shake
When
you look back
it’s an entire world
actually filled
with familiar smiling faces.
#philix #poetry #review