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WATER AND FIRE

Shower of beauty,
Simple, cute and pretty
Facing him is a dream desire
A medicine that never expires

Never felt exhausted
She never felt tired
Her smile brings peace to my soul
Like water calming fire

Every time in good mood
She enjoyed her life entire
I feel happy for her
Like water calming fire

Have I seen her
I think not require
What I get from her thoughts
Is way more important
Then the outer beauty
That the world admires

As she is a blessing
There is no end to kindness
She aquire
Her smile brings peace to my sole
Like water calming fire..
Like water calming fire..😊

#review
#ansh2_4
#friendship
Broken pencil,
Broken stencil,
Broken pen still,
Writes to break hearts,
To mend hearts.
Broken ones are both fire and fog,
Might burn you till you scream,
Might choke you till you dream,
They're both dangerous and beautiful,
Might kill you and laugh,
Might save you and cry,
The question remains why, do they do this,
Why do they misbehave?
Maybe that's just what it is with the broken ones,
They don't know themselves.

-- विषेक

#vishek
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Sing with me;
There's no one around
to the rhythm of tune, it's just the breeze
Gently whistling...
Hold my hands;
And dance with me in the mild light, it's a smile from the moon
Melodiously glistening...
Kiss my lips;
And be in my arms, to fusion of sounds it's an applause from the night
Rhythmically fading...

#review
Title : "Aura of Queen"

Stars gaze Moonlight,
Moonlight strikes ocean,
Ocean merges nature,
Nature causes aura,
Aura chases queen,
Queen hums song,
Song chases listener,
Listener writes poem,
Poem includes queen,
Queen notices ambience,
Ambiance resembles dreams. 💫

#review
#brevette_poetry #Cookie
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Title : "Problem Child or Golden Child"

Shimmering alone from heaven,
Was wandering a divine soul,
Enclosed within a living corpse,
Struggling alone for liberty.
Is it a Problem Child or a Golden Child?

Shivering under eternal moonlight,
Protesting against the worldly foes.
Resisting extreme ailments for survival,
"Is there a place to reside?",
Said the Spiritual Soul of the Problem Child.

Residing in an awful body,
Which looks so messy has a Golden Soul.
In this materialistic world of possessions,
Where appearance matters the most,
Has still someone to care for?

Then, suddenly spiritual aura emerges,
Another soul dropped by & surges,
Who also have a similar fate,
Dressed up all the wounds in the divine soul,
It was none other than the soulmate.

Returning after ages to heaven,
The happiest soul was glinting Golden.
The wandering soul immersed in fantasies,
Who was very soon going to depart,
At last found a place in God's heart. 💫

#review #Cookie #soulful_poetry
My views about love is quite sorted out.

No, I will never say "I love you" because I believe it's only the beginning.. When something starts it eventually ends and I don't want the story to end I just want a never ending story.

"Sometimes I may hold your hand tight in the crowd, or I will wrap my arms around me pouring some self love

Either I share my umbrella with you or we get drenched together

Maybe I will fight for window seat with you or I will let you have it

Okay I am this person who loves adding extra sugar to her tea but with you I can have no sugar tea. Just like the sugar free tea taste better with you similarly I am better version of me with you. I am me without you too but with you I am just the ~better~ best version."

#review
#auri
#love
Title : "Playful Soul"

The rising sun and the nature cries,
Makes me feel like healing vibes.
They exclusively make me so enthusiastic,
As it's the beginning my astonishment is so drastic.

The deep ocean touches up my soul,
The extensive sky makes my essence so wide.
These all fulfil my desire as a whole,
As I feel myself in the bed on one side.

As I assume myself on the trip,
Laughing and Enjoying myself with my friends.
Glorifying, dancing, cheering and cherishing,
They will be the best memories I would be reminiscing.

Tomorrow is the day, the day which I dream,
After my all endeavours and planning.
It feels so steady with a sudden blow of stream,
Which brings about my eternal sentiments of hesitating.

Enduring my soul and controlling my exhilaration,
I felt a sensation of joy and a terror of tension.
As it's the life which teaches us on every point,
I recommend being prepared to acquire the teaching at every subsequent checkpoint. 💫

#review
#Cookie
#Dreamy_adventure
She was totally surprised that I’d “let her go” after she admitted the cheating. She had expected a long intensive fight.

But I did not want her back. In fact never, ever.

She had turned into a liar — someone who had lied for months and months, each and every day.

The irony is: the literal second before she told me the truth (which I had suspected for almost six months, but which she had virgorously denied), I would have done anything for her.

I had fought for many months over a period which felt like one long nightmarish night with everything I got, but as soon as the truth — and nothing but the truth — was out, the fight was over.

She was a liar. Had become one. Would always be one.

So I did not fight anymore.

That is to say: not for her.

That had become a war I could not win anymore, and one she had already lost.

So she was gone forever, and I realized I had to start all over again, trying to walk to new horizons and not knowing what to expect. After 10 fucking years.

The nights became cold, and silent.

And she smelled blood, smelled my weakness, so she went for the kill, for the money, for the house, thinking that now I was lying in my own pool of stinking tears, she might as well bash in my head and get it over with.

She announced it to her friends, to her family. She would get the money. She would ruin me — she was a new person now, and would not care about her old life, ever again. (Her words.)

And, dear friend, I will end my little sermon now with my own three beautiful words.

She lost again.


#review
#breakup
#auri
Title : "The Mysterious Nightmare"

The nightmare I got a day before,
Was full of science and plenty more,
The world of progress that we think of tonight,
The robots were working, it was a dreadful night.

It was when the human were servants,
Robots were having bungalows or villas,
We were that time the only vagrants.
The humans were robots and the robots were humans,
They all were having parties and we were being summoned.

They were instructing us as if we were dolls,
But the reality was that it was they robotic dolls.
They were the ones we then pray to God,
The one who takes our ease and comfort and many more.

Suddenly, with a jerk of dream, I saw someone with spiritual rays,
I was unable to see the face but was feeling the sense of gaze.
The voice says," Oh my dear child, calm your mind and enjoy the note of nature".
I then opened my eyes to the end of this dreamy adventure.

In the morning dawn,
With the closet of bizarre dreams and an upset mind,
I woke up on the verge of a melancholic night.
Suddenly, I heard the crazy cries of birds,
It was so blissful that I can't express it within a few words.

Enjoying the subtlety of nature,
I realised the existence of each creature.
Praying to God I would never have such dream,
I started my routine work with an energising scream.

#review
#Cookie
#Nightmare
Those corrupted thoughts are just like a seed planted deep in my heart growing bit by bit trying to take over me and I help in growing them by feeding them my negative feeling it's scary so scary that I feel numb frustrated i feel shackled to the point where death feel like the only place where I can rest where i can put my head and no whispering will be heard no murmuring will annoy me just eternal silence and I don't want to wake up in the morning and smile just to hide these dark thoughts i want to smile because I genuinely want to smile no alternative meaning to it a smile meant to show I'm happy
#review
Who are you?

Oh dear, shall I tell you what you mean to me.. ?
I don't have the means to love you, but only a few words for now..


Can words be enough to express who you are?
Not some ordinary being, that's for sure
You are a giver in the city of receivers
A lover, in the world of beggars
My dear, your patience, your acceptance
All is beyond these limited words and the infinite worlds

Whatever makes you, as you
Delights me forever and always
I would let you be mine and accept you with open arms
Such sincerity that is embodied by you, 
Would truly make any gentleman envious

Selfless, unconditional love is what you always spoke of
Never knew it could be this real
Now, seeing it all by myself
Makes my heart cry, feeling love so ideal
The freedom you offer to me
Is just so invaluable and lovely
Every girl on the planet dies for this love of thee
And you give that all to me 
Ever so simply

Can words ever be enough to express the love you have within you? 
My dear, I still can't express it right..
For you don't love, or love is not within you..
Oh you are love itself
You are love itself, my dear. ❤️

#lovepoem
#ecstatic
#review
#poetry #review #venus

Let me tell you a tale
of girl held captive in her head
smiling to the whole world
And sulking at the corner of her bed

She's insecure of her possessions.
she's not safe at her home
she holds out a hand for every needy
friend
And screams in the silence but nobody really cares

Her life is not yet spared
of all the lies and fears
her very aplomb temper is retaliated
and her life turns to a convulsive event

Yet she stands everyday
smiling to the mirror world
promising affirmations
And shining like a sun

You think she's happy because she's smiling
but it's the easiest thing to do
If you looked a little closer
her eyes weren't happy too

she's dying to hear someone say
that she didn't need to try so hard
that she was perfectly enough
that she was prettily okay

And If you dare to love her
Let me tell you something
You can't go past her emotional intellect
so make her feel everything

she's not a witch but benware of her
All her beauty in her voice
so don't treat her like an option
or she'll leave you like a choice
Title : "Playful Soul"

The rising sun and the nature cries,
Makes me feel like healing vibes.
They exclusively make me so enthusiastic,
As it's the beginning my astonishment is so drastic.

The deep ocean touches up my soul,
The extensive sky makes my essence so wide.
These all fulfil my desire as a whole,
As I feel myself in the bed on one side.

As I assume myself on the trip,
Laughing and Enjoying myself with my friends.
Glorifying, dancing, cheering and cherishing,
They will be the best memories I would be reminiscing.

Tomorrow is the day, the day which I dream,
After my all endeavours and planning.
It feels so steady with a sudden blow of stream,
Which brings about my eternal sentiments of hesitating.

Enduring my soul and controlling my exhilaration,
I felt a sensation of joy and a terror of tension.
As it's the life which teaches us on every point,
I recommend being prepared to acquire the teaching at every subsequent checkpoint. 💫

#review
#Cookie
#Dreamy_adventure
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Title : "Problem Child or Golden Child"

Shimmering alone from heaven,
Was wandering a divine soul,
Enclosed within a living corpse,
Struggling alone for liberty.
Is it a Problem Child or a Golden Child?

Shivering under eternal moonlight,
Protesting against the worldly foes.
Resisting extreme ailments for survival,
"Is there a place to reside?",
Said the Spiritual Soul of the Problem Child.

Residing in an awful body,
Which looks so messy has a Golden Soul.
In this materialistic world of possessions,
Where appearance matters the most,
Has still someone to care for?

Then, suddenly spiritual aura emerges,
Another soul dropped by & surges,
Who also have a similar fate,
Dressed up all the wounds in the divine soul,
It was none other than the soulmate.

Returning after ages to heaven,
The happiest soul was glinting Golden.
The wandering soul immersed in fantasies,
Who was very soon going to depart,
At last found a place in God's heart. 💫

#review #Cookie #soulful_poetry
Sing with me;
There's no one around
to the rhythm of tune, it's just the breeze
Gently whistling...
Hold my hands;
And dance with me in the mild light, it's a smile from the moon
Melodiously glistening...
Kiss my lips;
And be in my arms, to fusion of sounds it's an applause from the night
Rhythmically fading...
#poetry #review
Title : " Triumphing Adventure "


Adventure awaits the brave,
Who can risk the life to crave.
Pursuits revealing mysteries,
Eager to challenge for victories.
The desire for discovery,
With enough effort and bravery.
Who possess essential qualities,
Like optimism, capabilities and sensibilities.
Life itself is an adventurous journey,
The challenging soul inside is burning.
The ones who master this adventure,
Can set up a record for others to venture.

#review #Cookie #optimism
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Realize

Why do we ignore the the chirruping of birds?
Why do we overlook the open sky?

Has all the beauty diminished?
Or is it us who are missing all this lately?

Why do we curb all the curiosity?
Why do we assume everything is for eternity?

Has all the freshness gone?
Or is it us who neglect?

Why do we lack gratefulness for love?
Why do we take our relationships for granted?

Has all the compassion, novelty, curiosity, beauty faded?
Or is it us who do not realize their presence?

Observe, feel, be grateful
And live this life to the fullest

#review
#poem
#ecstatic
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Promises are broken someday
Secrets are spoken someday
Lies lead to truth one day
Nothing was hiden yesterday
Nothing will be today..
Its a manifest world of actuality anyway
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!THE SUDDEN CHANGE !


Life has changed a lot since last time we met
Now everything thing is different ,
Yet whatever has happened will remain recurrent ,
Once I was the river through which you wanted to flow ,
But now I am the cactus which you wish not to grow,
At some point I was the reason of your smiling face ,
But now I am the cause of your disgrace ,

At some instant I was the happiness , you required ,
But now I am the sorrow, you never aspired
I wish to be your happiness again ,
I want those clouds once More to rain ,
I again desire to be your medicine for every pain ,

Eventually, like blood I want to flow through your vein ,
To force all hatred and misunderstandings to drain .

-CH.Irfan.

#review
#poem
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In the silence as the dead soul..

The sound of my voice calling your name in the void,
Woke up the sleeping nights..

The burning flames from the cry of an unspoken words,
The rage in an unexpressed feelings between the first kiss and the last good bye,,
the glow in the drops of painful tears,,,
the shade of bright colors in the bleeding heart,,,,
Made the twinkling stars feel a twinge of envy...

Everything turned to visual poetry,
When the smoke from floating cloud draw your portrait,
And never in my life my lungs ever craved more to inhale a smoke that toxic to life...

~failed engineer
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#poetry
#review #poetry #venus

In this world of surprises
My life took a turn and I met you
Blessed with happiness you took me to the moon
But oh my mistrustfulness
You left me in a few

So For the sake of forgiveness
I have an apology
I don't know what's wrong with me
Still I say I'm sorry , really

I'm sure I caused a headache
For I'm trying to get distant
But I promise I'll try harder
But will you have my back at ends??