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Chapter 1:The cuckoo's nest

The irksome sound coming from someone's radio ,
"it must be morning " i muttered , tho i dont usually wake up this early on a holiday like this ,
so i tried to cover myself in the warmth of blanket but not enough to insulate that annoying noise and so i gave up on my dream.
The sun was dim today quite unusual day for a summer . A strong pingent smell caught my glemse ,
after using my brain and nose i was able to find the cordinates of its origin.
"Its coming from my balcony "i shouted , I jumped out of my blanket and opened the balcony ,
There was a dead cuckoo lying on the floor , might have fallen from its nest .
I usually come to see this cuckoo been feed by a small Canary , that was a quite appealing view to watch or rather entertaining.
The decaying body of cuckoo was alluring alot of bugs and ants, "Someone will live on someone's death" i said on a quavering voice ,
My neighbour was also in his balcony watching that cuckoo's , his balcony was just 1 feet away from mine .
Unlike me his balcony was been decorated with lot of flowers , pot were hanging on the side of his wall.
A green fluffy carpet all over his wall, giving more athestic look to his balcony ,
on the other hand my balcony have alot of poops of the birds which i never bothered to clean ,
a rusty chair which got its rust by weting in the rain , some clothes hanging here and there ,
being just 1 feet away and paying the same rent there was a lot of difference in our balconies , or rather alot of difference in our personality .
He usually come to water his plants tho we never talked before.
After spending few more minutes in balcony gloring the blueness of sky ,
I went back to my room , my stomach was starving by the time ,
I quickly went to check on my fridge for something to eat , even my bad luck is unlucky ,it just contains some rotten yogurts , broken beer bottles , a pouch of sous which is expired , a frozen
fish . I went to my kitchen and found that i was out of instant noodles too.
#review
#novel
#suggestions
STEP 1

randomly comes nothing
you should give your sole entire

It's a game of life
Just give it a good try

Writing calm the sole
Creativity is required

Instead of writting everything
Just go for something

Don't get pressurize
It's a game patience is required

In the end it's you
Who convert everything into new.

Help your pen to impress
The paper with the
Thoughts that you aquire


If anyone finds the message inside, may reply.

#review
#mystery
#ansh2_4
Contemporary Helplessness and Belated conceptions – Part A

                                     A1

What my soul looks at me,

What do you see

Mirroring features of people in street

How degrading would it be

If you roll out now on an chilling breeze

If you texted and never Roll up your sleeves

Don’t you see,

 every man is greed

And every Penny is stolen

Like those unfeasible please

You know it’s guided destruction

Your worth is more than molten

Bodies under the sunlight reaping souls

A virtuous suicide

Kind of thinking when you eat

It’s the stories of sunkissed memories

And unfiltered adventures elders speak of

You never feel in this sanitary ward.

The rocks make you happy only

 How you live so long

How you know so much of me ?

Aren’t I buried you deep in that winter snow

When unable to find her cost of life

When unable to find a way of life

How unable it felt when expectations

That can’t be avoided as I did many before

How young feel like

How is it to feel old

It’s a life of mediocre

 In a limbo of Money and gold

                                   A2

It’s not magic, it’s ravenous growth

Over my shoulder, it’s cold and jittery

You felt it when you touched

And the phone’s battery is dead

You want the cable, is it ?

Nocturnes, playing silently ripping the lazuli

In lights of unknown

Won’t you wanna see it, One more time

The speaker works as a charm like it used to

Mariage d’amore

 Won’t your subtle sarcasm sting me

 One more time

Won’t you come home with stiff shoulders

And I sweep through your head as if

Everything’s alright

It ain’t much, but the home is an idea we cherished

It’s not magic, it’s sweet like candies

It’s  Ruh Gulab,  your presence is like a shadow

Engulfing in unending embrace

Eurydice, how might I not look to you again.

How might I not mourn the instrumentality of this mortal chase

It’s not as bad as the poet said

It’s not killing to smoke cigarettes

But there was a time you stopped me

My threshold is in my pocket

 And my legacy is my debt.

God bless me, as I end this chain.

   

                                 A3

Not everyone falls in love twice

As Same is not the man, nor the love he conceived

The cerulean sky this morning

Brandishing memories

 those breakfasts she made

Her hands were bruised as I saw her with turmeric laid on it.

As a child, when I discovered  eventually

Loved ones go away, as my grandma on her deathbed

I was scared but it past away.

As I kneel for mercy oh lord.

He takes away, with hands on hands

They walk past my life like oh man

Nature does fucks me up sometimes

I was tied to Small ponds longing for an Oceanside

Waves now blow me away again to the roots I had

She said stories of witches and demons

In the forest, they pull out my desire

To showcase my propensity of violence

Do they exist downtown

In these Arches and columns

In the Palace of Gods of Greece

In this Malevolent magnificent

System under the fleece.

Sickly frost bites on the

Whitest of the hearts.

And I am the greatest pretender

Of  having a Say

What I became is lesser than my parents

Half my age.

Youthful reveries of Assignment delays and procrastinating.

Mirages of self accomplishments

What they worth in value

What value is love.

Commodities on the Shelf

On the corner is found a box of chocolates

And a ring of platinum

What price is love

 Quite a lot

Rituals are there ?

Quite a lot

Boost to match up more

Subscribe to the dating store.

There are distances and alienations

Yesterday I put a cap on a bottle

Who knows what was in it.

I ate a meal from microvave

TV Dinner they say.

And a glass of Gatorade

What does that make of me.

The Irritating questions of ambitions.

Like as if existing wasn’t ambitious enough.

 #review #poetry
A4

Djinns are in the counter

Fulfilling your wishing

Come to the mall

Or Go online

Discounts on things you never needed

You want it, like Sugar

Diabetic nation, how beautiful it is

Hello there, the name is Luci

You seem distraught

You crying ?

this tissue with military grade fabric might help

This medicine for your mental health might help

You want more of it, everything all at once

Processed to the point of void at lunch

The Authority is mine And the Hostile

Fuckers are kneeling down throwing away their pride

It’s nothing but Money

 

#review #poetry
Twenty years pass by
Still thinking of her request
Will you marry me?
Thirty dozen times her mechanism
I searching for true meaning
Was so hard, beyond the ceiling
Couldn't stop her advances
And its not enough
To tell me you'd care

I should have tried, picturesque
Her half piece of heart
As it rejoined with my refurbished half
For haven't felt this way
At least for a younger lad in linen
Seeing the passion right from the start

Contemplated right to the star
I feel so close to you now
For that's where the destiny holds us
Looking forward to embrace you
Kiss you smoothly, hug you warmly
Reflecting the union of a lifetime
That we were destined for love

#review
#Linford
#Destined for Love
WATER AND FIRE

Shower of beauty,
Simple, cute and pretty
Facing him is a dream desire
A medicine that never expires

Never felt exhausted
She never felt tired
Her smile brings peace to my soul
Like water calming fire

Every time in good mood
She enjoyed her life entire
I feel happy for her
Like water calming fire

Have I seen her
I think not require
What I get from her thoughts
Is way more important
Then the outer beauty
That the world admires

As she is a blessing
There is no end to kindness
She aquire
Her smile brings peace to my sole
Like water calming fire..
Like water calming fire..😊

#review
#ansh2_4
#friendship
A LETTER FOR YOU

A letter which describe how much u r to me
A letter saying that I miss u in every conversation I have someone. Thinking about how would have react, say. How we have laugh
A letter saying that how I plan to go on every vacations with u
A letter saying that whenever we fight.. How I check whether u r online or not every now and then
A letter confessing you that I imagine u in every love story I see I read.. N u r shaping in my romantic fanasty
A letter confessing u that u r not much to me.. U r whole of me.... U r the one whom I want everyday
A letter from my heart saying ....u r my everything and nothing together

#review #pain #PSP
Dear folks, this is a translation of one famous poem of one famous poet into English.
Can you please review it and let me know, if it sounds correct, or does it contain enything weird, odd ?
/********************************************/
I like to feel that I'm not sick with you
I like to know that sickness yours is yours not mine
That heavy ball of earth won’t stray off from its course
Away from our footprints , fading in sunshine


I love that I could funny be
Bewildered, clumsy , not wordplaying
not turning red upon sleeves touching game
not turning pale when see you on your knees


I love to see you hugging someone else
Before my eyes , reposefully and calmly
Not sending me to fire glowing hell
To burn forever for not kissing me , my darling

I like that mentioning my name is not your habit
That tender name you don't utter day-and-night in vain
That no one's gonna sing Hallelujah on our wedding
In silence of the church, one sunny autumn day


Thank you for love, with all your heart and soul
That brings me peace at night, unconscious, unaware
Thank you for rare meetings if at all
So nice, That never in the moonlight do we stroll
So great that sun warms not us, soaring high elsewhere

So pity, that I am not sick with you
So bad, that sickness yours is yours not mine

#review
#friendship
WATER AND FIRE

Shower of beauty,
Simple, cute and pretty
Facing him is a dream desire
A medicine that never expires

Never felt exhausted
She never felt tired
Her smile brings peace to my soul
Like water calming fire

Every time in good mood
She enjoyed her life entire
I feel happy for her
Like water calming fire

Have I seen her
I think not require
What I get from her thoughts
Is way more important
Then the outer beauty
That the world admires

As she is a blessing
There is no end to kindness
She aquire
Her smile brings peace to my sole
Like water calming fire..
Like water calming fire..😊

#review
#ansh2_4
#friendship
Broken pencil,
Broken stencil,
Broken pen still,
Writes to break hearts,
To mend hearts.
Broken ones are both fire and fog,
Might burn you till you scream,
Might choke you till you dream,
They're both dangerous and beautiful,
Might kill you and laugh,
Might save you and cry,
The question remains why, do they do this,
Why do they misbehave?
Maybe that's just what it is with the broken ones,
They don't know themselves.

-- विषेक

#vishek
#review
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Sing with me;
There's no one around
to the rhythm of tune, it's just the breeze
Gently whistling...
Hold my hands;
And dance with me in the mild light, it's a smile from the moon
Melodiously glistening...
Kiss my lips;
And be in my arms, to fusion of sounds it's an applause from the night
Rhythmically fading...

#review
Title : "Aura of Queen"

Stars gaze Moonlight,
Moonlight strikes ocean,
Ocean merges nature,
Nature causes aura,
Aura chases queen,
Queen hums song,
Song chases listener,
Listener writes poem,
Poem includes queen,
Queen notices ambience,
Ambiance resembles dreams. 💫

#review
#brevette_poetry #Cookie
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Title : "Problem Child or Golden Child"

Shimmering alone from heaven,
Was wandering a divine soul,
Enclosed within a living corpse,
Struggling alone for liberty.
Is it a Problem Child or a Golden Child?

Shivering under eternal moonlight,
Protesting against the worldly foes.
Resisting extreme ailments for survival,
"Is there a place to reside?",
Said the Spiritual Soul of the Problem Child.

Residing in an awful body,
Which looks so messy has a Golden Soul.
In this materialistic world of possessions,
Where appearance matters the most,
Has still someone to care for?

Then, suddenly spiritual aura emerges,
Another soul dropped by & surges,
Who also have a similar fate,
Dressed up all the wounds in the divine soul,
It was none other than the soulmate.

Returning after ages to heaven,
The happiest soul was glinting Golden.
The wandering soul immersed in fantasies,
Who was very soon going to depart,
At last found a place in God's heart. 💫

#review #Cookie #soulful_poetry
My views about love is quite sorted out.

No, I will never say "I love you" because I believe it's only the beginning.. When something starts it eventually ends and I don't want the story to end I just want a never ending story.

"Sometimes I may hold your hand tight in the crowd, or I will wrap my arms around me pouring some self love

Either I share my umbrella with you or we get drenched together

Maybe I will fight for window seat with you or I will let you have it

Okay I am this person who loves adding extra sugar to her tea but with you I can have no sugar tea. Just like the sugar free tea taste better with you similarly I am better version of me with you. I am me without you too but with you I am just the ~better~ best version."

#review
#auri
#love
Title : "Playful Soul"

The rising sun and the nature cries,
Makes me feel like healing vibes.
They exclusively make me so enthusiastic,
As it's the beginning my astonishment is so drastic.

The deep ocean touches up my soul,
The extensive sky makes my essence so wide.
These all fulfil my desire as a whole,
As I feel myself in the bed on one side.

As I assume myself on the trip,
Laughing and Enjoying myself with my friends.
Glorifying, dancing, cheering and cherishing,
They will be the best memories I would be reminiscing.

Tomorrow is the day, the day which I dream,
After my all endeavours and planning.
It feels so steady with a sudden blow of stream,
Which brings about my eternal sentiments of hesitating.

Enduring my soul and controlling my exhilaration,
I felt a sensation of joy and a terror of tension.
As it's the life which teaches us on every point,
I recommend being prepared to acquire the teaching at every subsequent checkpoint. 💫

#review
#Cookie
#Dreamy_adventure
She was totally surprised that I’d “let her go” after she admitted the cheating. She had expected a long intensive fight.

But I did not want her back. In fact never, ever.

She had turned into a liar — someone who had lied for months and months, each and every day.

The irony is: the literal second before she told me the truth (which I had suspected for almost six months, but which she had virgorously denied), I would have done anything for her.

I had fought for many months over a period which felt like one long nightmarish night with everything I got, but as soon as the truth — and nothing but the truth — was out, the fight was over.

She was a liar. Had become one. Would always be one.

So I did not fight anymore.

That is to say: not for her.

That had become a war I could not win anymore, and one she had already lost.

So she was gone forever, and I realized I had to start all over again, trying to walk to new horizons and not knowing what to expect. After 10 fucking years.

The nights became cold, and silent.

And she smelled blood, smelled my weakness, so she went for the kill, for the money, for the house, thinking that now I was lying in my own pool of stinking tears, she might as well bash in my head and get it over with.

She announced it to her friends, to her family. She would get the money. She would ruin me — she was a new person now, and would not care about her old life, ever again. (Her words.)

And, dear friend, I will end my little sermon now with my own three beautiful words.

She lost again.


#review
#breakup
#auri
Title : "The Mysterious Nightmare"

The nightmare I got a day before,
Was full of science and plenty more,
The world of progress that we think of tonight,
The robots were working, it was a dreadful night.

It was when the human were servants,
Robots were having bungalows or villas,
We were that time the only vagrants.
The humans were robots and the robots were humans,
They all were having parties and we were being summoned.

They were instructing us as if we were dolls,
But the reality was that it was they robotic dolls.
They were the ones we then pray to God,
The one who takes our ease and comfort and many more.

Suddenly, with a jerk of dream, I saw someone with spiritual rays,
I was unable to see the face but was feeling the sense of gaze.
The voice says," Oh my dear child, calm your mind and enjoy the note of nature".
I then opened my eyes to the end of this dreamy adventure.

In the morning dawn,
With the closet of bizarre dreams and an upset mind,
I woke up on the verge of a melancholic night.
Suddenly, I heard the crazy cries of birds,
It was so blissful that I can't express it within a few words.

Enjoying the subtlety of nature,
I realised the existence of each creature.
Praying to God I would never have such dream,
I started my routine work with an energising scream.

#review
#Cookie
#Nightmare
Those corrupted thoughts are just like a seed planted deep in my heart growing bit by bit trying to take over me and I help in growing them by feeding them my negative feeling it's scary so scary that I feel numb frustrated i feel shackled to the point where death feel like the only place where I can rest where i can put my head and no whispering will be heard no murmuring will annoy me just eternal silence and I don't want to wake up in the morning and smile just to hide these dark thoughts i want to smile because I genuinely want to smile no alternative meaning to it a smile meant to show I'm happy
#review
Who are you?

Oh dear, shall I tell you what you mean to me.. ?
I don't have the means to love you, but only a few words for now..


Can words be enough to express who you are?
Not some ordinary being, that's for sure
You are a giver in the city of receivers
A lover, in the world of beggars
My dear, your patience, your acceptance
All is beyond these limited words and the infinite worlds

Whatever makes you, as you
Delights me forever and always
I would let you be mine and accept you with open arms
Such sincerity that is embodied by you, 
Would truly make any gentleman envious

Selfless, unconditional love is what you always spoke of
Never knew it could be this real
Now, seeing it all by myself
Makes my heart cry, feeling love so ideal
The freedom you offer to me
Is just so invaluable and lovely
Every girl on the planet dies for this love of thee
And you give that all to me 
Ever so simply

Can words ever be enough to express the love you have within you? 
My dear, I still can't express it right..
For you don't love, or love is not within you..
Oh you are love itself
You are love itself, my dear. ❤️

#lovepoem
#ecstatic
#review
#poetry #review #venus

Let me tell you a tale
of girl held captive in her head
smiling to the whole world
And sulking at the corner of her bed

She's insecure of her possessions.
she's not safe at her home
she holds out a hand for every needy
friend
And screams in the silence but nobody really cares

Her life is not yet spared
of all the lies and fears
her very aplomb temper is retaliated
and her life turns to a convulsive event

Yet she stands everyday
smiling to the mirror world
promising affirmations
And shining like a sun

You think she's happy because she's smiling
but it's the easiest thing to do
If you looked a little closer
her eyes weren't happy too

she's dying to hear someone say
that she didn't need to try so hard
that she was perfectly enough
that she was prettily okay

And If you dare to love her
Let me tell you something
You can't go past her emotional intellect
so make her feel everything

she's not a witch but benware of her
All her beauty in her voice
so don't treat her like an option
or she'll leave you like a choice
Title : "Playful Soul"

The rising sun and the nature cries,
Makes me feel like healing vibes.
They exclusively make me so enthusiastic,
As it's the beginning my astonishment is so drastic.

The deep ocean touches up my soul,
The extensive sky makes my essence so wide.
These all fulfil my desire as a whole,
As I feel myself in the bed on one side.

As I assume myself on the trip,
Laughing and Enjoying myself with my friends.
Glorifying, dancing, cheering and cherishing,
They will be the best memories I would be reminiscing.

Tomorrow is the day, the day which I dream,
After my all endeavours and planning.
It feels so steady with a sudden blow of stream,
Which brings about my eternal sentiments of hesitating.

Enduring my soul and controlling my exhilaration,
I felt a sensation of joy and a terror of tension.
As it's the life which teaches us on every point,
I recommend being prepared to acquire the teaching at every subsequent checkpoint. 💫

#review
#Cookie
#Dreamy_adventure
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