Coming into my life
Talking for long in midnights
I kept my feelings hidden from you
Waiting for the apparent time to propose you
But you already had someone in your heart
In your life, I wasn't going to play any part
That fake friendship has reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
Your intentions were clear and I misunderstood them
I fall for you, don't know how and when?
All those moments of teasing each other
Showing solace and caring for each another
I was clear with my thoughts about you
And you showed colours which were true
That forged friendship has reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
No one can return those years spent for you
No one can return the efforts I made for you
My exhilaration to meet you reaching the clouds
Even almighty was glad up in the clouds
Every rain witness my thoughts about an amorous ride
I took the long way to drop you and spent some more time
But that friendship was fictitious and it's reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
I wore your favourite colour just to impress you
I followed the safe path to drop you just to protect you
My eye lashes to witness the wish I yearn for
The dark circles witness the sleepless nights I was awake for
My sweat witnessed the time I ran after you
My jean witness the first and last gift I got from you
But that friendship was counterfeit and it's reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
My eyes shed tears while remembering you
I can't date anyone, cannot love someone more than you
What person have I become?
I regret the time which has come.
That fake friendship has reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
You have forgotten those days when I used to drop you at your place
You have forgotten those days when I used to spend my pocket money on your birthdays
In my every prayer, I asked for you
Every beat of my heart beats for you
But that all was bogus and has reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
Today you are holding someone's hand and going to be his bride now
I wish and pray you to keep that you sow
He will also leave you as you left me long ago
You may marry him, but won't be able to fulfill its woe
Karma is a bitch you know that right?
Now your time to take its ride
Our friendship and my heart were broken that day
When you posted your Instagram story and tagged him as your bae.
Now my eyes are dry and there is no teary rain
My heart is no more working and all the decisions, I am taking from my brain
I will get someone better who can hold my hand
Unlike you, who follow the brand
I wish and pray from the depth of my heart
You won't be happy I pray from my heart
Your betrayal made me realize
We weren't meant to be together, I don't want to meet you not even in paradise
#review
#poetry
#auri
Talking for long in midnights
I kept my feelings hidden from you
Waiting for the apparent time to propose you
But you already had someone in your heart
In your life, I wasn't going to play any part
That fake friendship has reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
Your intentions were clear and I misunderstood them
I fall for you, don't know how and when?
All those moments of teasing each other
Showing solace and caring for each another
I was clear with my thoughts about you
And you showed colours which were true
That forged friendship has reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
No one can return those years spent for you
No one can return the efforts I made for you
My exhilaration to meet you reaching the clouds
Even almighty was glad up in the clouds
Every rain witness my thoughts about an amorous ride
I took the long way to drop you and spent some more time
But that friendship was fictitious and it's reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
I wore your favourite colour just to impress you
I followed the safe path to drop you just to protect you
My eye lashes to witness the wish I yearn for
The dark circles witness the sleepless nights I was awake for
My sweat witnessed the time I ran after you
My jean witness the first and last gift I got from you
But that friendship was counterfeit and it's reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
My eyes shed tears while remembering you
I can't date anyone, cannot love someone more than you
What person have I become?
I regret the time which has come.
That fake friendship has reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
You have forgotten those days when I used to drop you at your place
You have forgotten those days when I used to spend my pocket money on your birthdays
In my every prayer, I asked for you
Every beat of my heart beats for you
But that all was bogus and has reached its destination
And your real face is out with real intentions
Today you are holding someone's hand and going to be his bride now
I wish and pray you to keep that you sow
He will also leave you as you left me long ago
You may marry him, but won't be able to fulfill its woe
Karma is a bitch you know that right?
Now your time to take its ride
Our friendship and my heart were broken that day
When you posted your Instagram story and tagged him as your bae.
Now my eyes are dry and there is no teary rain
My heart is no more working and all the decisions, I am taking from my brain
I will get someone better who can hold my hand
Unlike you, who follow the brand
I wish and pray from the depth of my heart
You won't be happy I pray from my heart
Your betrayal made me realize
We weren't meant to be together, I don't want to meet you not even in paradise
#review
#poetry
#auri
❤1
Title:- Belonging
I belong to memories and melodies
not to people who think they have authority.
I belong to the days where dark clouds gather
and brew up a storm where I curl up to read with music blasting in my earphones.
I belong to the nights
where there is no moon and the lights are out.
I belong where I can't be seen.
I belong to the foggy mornings of winter
where the cold bites your skin until you go numb
and blurs your vision until I'm separated from the rest of the world
in my safe bubble.
I belong to my songs and stories that make me feel alive.
I belong to the places I have searched by myself
and made a home out of.
I don't belong to people because people come and go
I belong to myself and the things I love.
#review
#poetry
I belong to memories and melodies
not to people who think they have authority.
I belong to the days where dark clouds gather
and brew up a storm where I curl up to read with music blasting in my earphones.
I belong to the nights
where there is no moon and the lights are out.
I belong where I can't be seen.
I belong to the foggy mornings of winter
where the cold bites your skin until you go numb
and blurs your vision until I'm separated from the rest of the world
in my safe bubble.
I belong to my songs and stories that make me feel alive.
I belong to the places I have searched by myself
and made a home out of.
I don't belong to people because people come and go
I belong to myself and the things I love.
#review
#poetry
*No Gold , But A Rich Heart*
Neither I've got gold nor Apple Products , my bad I couldn't afford ,
But destiny had planned something different , wants to send this scholar abroad ;
Neither I've got smart watch nor new sneakers ,
If you underestimate my power , by challenging me , trust me , I'm the game changer ;
Never got a chance to enter KFC or Starbucks ,
Still , everyday , on my door , a new glory knocks ;
Till today , I use the same pencil box , brought by me seven years back ,
But still my pen never stops , my hand powerful enough to compete with time , fastest on the poetry track ;
Never got a wireless headphone , still my ears are sharp ,
Topper of the batch , keen sense of listening , can detect any trap ;
Not having crown of royalty , still my brain working in light speed ,
Curiousity to gain knowledge forever , pen and paper for poems , is all I need ;
Maybe not a millionaire , but rich from my heart's core ,
Tranquil waves worth more than a billion , with me standing on the sea shore ...
#review
#prose
Neither I've got gold nor Apple Products , my bad I couldn't afford ,
But destiny had planned something different , wants to send this scholar abroad ;
Neither I've got smart watch nor new sneakers ,
If you underestimate my power , by challenging me , trust me , I'm the game changer ;
Never got a chance to enter KFC or Starbucks ,
Still , everyday , on my door , a new glory knocks ;
Till today , I use the same pencil box , brought by me seven years back ,
But still my pen never stops , my hand powerful enough to compete with time , fastest on the poetry track ;
Never got a wireless headphone , still my ears are sharp ,
Topper of the batch , keen sense of listening , can detect any trap ;
Not having crown of royalty , still my brain working in light speed ,
Curiousity to gain knowledge forever , pen and paper for poems , is all I need ;
Maybe not a millionaire , but rich from my heart's core ,
Tranquil waves worth more than a billion , with me standing on the sea shore ...
#review
#prose
A Father put his 3 year old daughter to bed, told her a story and
listened to her prayers which ended by saying,
"God bless Mommy, God bless Daddy, God bless Grandma and good-bye Grandpa."
Family joke
The father asked, 'Why did you say good-bye Grandpa?'
The little girl said, "I don't know daddy, it just seemed like the thing to do."
The next day grandpa died.
The father thought it was a strange coincidence.
A few months later the father put the girl to bed and listened to her
prayers which went like this,
"God bless Mommy, God Bless Daddy and good-bye Grandma."
The next day the grandmother died.
"Holy crap" thought the father, "this kid is in contact with the other side."
Several weeks later when the girl was going to bed the dad heard her
say, "God bless Mommy and good-bye Daddy."
He practically went into shock. He couldn't sleep all night and got up
at the crack of dawn to go to his office.
He was nervous as a cat all day, had lunch and watched the clock.. He
figured if he could get by until midnight he would be okay.
He felt safe in the office, so instead of going home at the end of the
day he stayed there, drinking coffee, looking at his watch and jumping
at every sound. Finally midnight arrived; he breathed a sigh of relief
and went home.
When he got home his wife said,
"I've never seen you work so late. What's the matter?"
He said, "I don't want to talk about it, I've just spent the worst day
of my life."
She said, You think you had a bad day, you'll never believe what
happened to me. This morning my boss dropped dead in the middle of a
meeting
#story
#review
#humour
listened to her prayers which ended by saying,
"God bless Mommy, God bless Daddy, God bless Grandma and good-bye Grandpa."
Family joke
The father asked, 'Why did you say good-bye Grandpa?'
The little girl said, "I don't know daddy, it just seemed like the thing to do."
The next day grandpa died.
The father thought it was a strange coincidence.
A few months later the father put the girl to bed and listened to her
prayers which went like this,
"God bless Mommy, God Bless Daddy and good-bye Grandma."
The next day the grandmother died.
"Holy crap" thought the father, "this kid is in contact with the other side."
Several weeks later when the girl was going to bed the dad heard her
say, "God bless Mommy and good-bye Daddy."
He practically went into shock. He couldn't sleep all night and got up
at the crack of dawn to go to his office.
He was nervous as a cat all day, had lunch and watched the clock.. He
figured if he could get by until midnight he would be okay.
He felt safe in the office, so instead of going home at the end of the
day he stayed there, drinking coffee, looking at his watch and jumping
at every sound. Finally midnight arrived; he breathed a sigh of relief
and went home.
When he got home his wife said,
"I've never seen you work so late. What's the matter?"
He said, "I don't want to talk about it, I've just spent the worst day
of my life."
She said, You think you had a bad day, you'll never believe what
happened to me. This morning my boss dropped dead in the middle of a
meeting
#story
#review
#humour
Chapter 1:The cuckoo's nest
The irksome sound coming from someone's radio ,
"it must be morning " i muttered , tho i dont usually wake up this early on a holiday like this ,
so i tried to cover myself in the warmth of blanket but not enough to insulate that annoying noise and so i gave up on my dream.
The sun was dim today quite unusual day for a summer . A strong pingent smell caught my glemse ,
after using my brain and nose i was able to find the cordinates of its origin.
"Its coming from my balcony "i shouted , I jumped out of my blanket and opened the balcony ,
There was a dead cuckoo lying on the floor , might have fallen from its nest .
I usually come to see this cuckoo been feed by a small Canary , that was a quite appealing view to watch or rather entertaining.
The decaying body of cuckoo was alluring alot of bugs and ants, "Someone will live on someone's death" i said on a quavering voice ,
My neighbour was also in his balcony watching that cuckoo's , his balcony was just 1 feet away from mine .
Unlike me his balcony was been decorated with lot of flowers , pot were hanging on the side of his wall.
A green fluffy carpet all over his wall, giving more athestic look to his balcony ,
on the other hand my balcony have alot of poops of the birds which i never bothered to clean ,
a rusty chair which got its rust by weting in the rain , some clothes hanging here and there ,
being just 1 feet away and paying the same rent there was a lot of difference in our balconies , or rather alot of difference in our personality .
He usually come to water his plants tho we never talked before.
After spending few more minutes in balcony gloring the blueness of sky ,
I went back to my room , my stomach was starving by the time ,
I quickly went to check on my fridge for something to eat , even my bad luck is unlucky ,it just contains some rotten yogurts , broken beer bottles , a pouch of sous which is expired , a frozen
fish . I went to my kitchen and found that i was out of instant noodles too.
#review
#novel
#suggestions
The irksome sound coming from someone's radio ,
"it must be morning " i muttered , tho i dont usually wake up this early on a holiday like this ,
so i tried to cover myself in the warmth of blanket but not enough to insulate that annoying noise and so i gave up on my dream.
The sun was dim today quite unusual day for a summer . A strong pingent smell caught my glemse ,
after using my brain and nose i was able to find the cordinates of its origin.
"Its coming from my balcony "i shouted , I jumped out of my blanket and opened the balcony ,
There was a dead cuckoo lying on the floor , might have fallen from its nest .
I usually come to see this cuckoo been feed by a small Canary , that was a quite appealing view to watch or rather entertaining.
The decaying body of cuckoo was alluring alot of bugs and ants, "Someone will live on someone's death" i said on a quavering voice ,
My neighbour was also in his balcony watching that cuckoo's , his balcony was just 1 feet away from mine .
Unlike me his balcony was been decorated with lot of flowers , pot were hanging on the side of his wall.
A green fluffy carpet all over his wall, giving more athestic look to his balcony ,
on the other hand my balcony have alot of poops of the birds which i never bothered to clean ,
a rusty chair which got its rust by weting in the rain , some clothes hanging here and there ,
being just 1 feet away and paying the same rent there was a lot of difference in our balconies , or rather alot of difference in our personality .
He usually come to water his plants tho we never talked before.
After spending few more minutes in balcony gloring the blueness of sky ,
I went back to my room , my stomach was starving by the time ,
I quickly went to check on my fridge for something to eat , even my bad luck is unlucky ,it just contains some rotten yogurts , broken beer bottles , a pouch of sous which is expired , a frozen
fish . I went to my kitchen and found that i was out of instant noodles too.
#review
#novel
#suggestions
STEP 1
randomly comes nothing
you should give your sole entire
It's a game of life
Just give it a good try
Writing calm the sole
Creativity is required
Instead of writting everything
Just go for something
Don't get pressurize
It's a game patience is required
In the end it's you
Who convert everything into new.
Help your pen to impress
The paper with the
Thoughts that you aquire
If anyone finds the message inside, may reply.
#review
#mystery
#ansh2_4
randomly comes nothing
you should give your sole entire
It's a game of life
Just give it a good try
Writing calm the sole
Creativity is required
Instead of writting everything
Just go for something
Don't get pressurize
It's a game patience is required
In the end it's you
Who convert everything into new.
Help your pen to impress
The paper with the
Thoughts that you aquire
If anyone finds the message inside, may reply.
#review
#mystery
#ansh2_4
Contemporary Helplessness and Belated conceptions – Part A
A1
What my soul looks at me,
What do you see
Mirroring features of people in street
How degrading would it be
If you roll out now on an chilling breeze
If you texted and never Roll up your sleeves
Don’t you see,
every man is greed
And every Penny is stolen
Like those unfeasible please
You know it’s guided destruction
Your worth is more than molten
Bodies under the sunlight reaping souls
A virtuous suicide
Kind of thinking when you eat
It’s the stories of sunkissed memories
And unfiltered adventures elders speak of
You never feel in this sanitary ward.
The rocks make you happy only
How you live so long
How you know so much of me ?
Aren’t I buried you deep in that winter snow
When unable to find her cost of life
When unable to find a way of life
How unable it felt when expectations
That can’t be avoided as I did many before
How young feel like
How is it to feel old
It’s a life of mediocre
In a limbo of Money and gold
A2
It’s not magic, it’s ravenous growth
Over my shoulder, it’s cold and jittery
You felt it when you touched
And the phone’s battery is dead
You want the cable, is it ?
Nocturnes, playing silently ripping the lazuli
In lights of unknown
Won’t you wanna see it, One more time
The speaker works as a charm like it used to
Mariage d’amore
Won’t your subtle sarcasm sting me
One more time
Won’t you come home with stiff shoulders
And I sweep through your head as if
Everything’s alright
It ain’t much, but the home is an idea we cherished
It’s not magic, it’s sweet like candies
It’s Ruh Gulab, your presence is like a shadow
Engulfing in unending embrace
Eurydice, how might I not look to you again.
How might I not mourn the instrumentality of this mortal chase
It’s not as bad as the poet said
It’s not killing to smoke cigarettes
But there was a time you stopped me
My threshold is in my pocket
And my legacy is my debt.
God bless me, as I end this chain.
A3
Not everyone falls in love twice
As Same is not the man, nor the love he conceived
The cerulean sky this morning
Brandishing memories
those breakfasts she made
Her hands were bruised as I saw her with turmeric laid on it.
As a child, when I discovered eventually
Loved ones go away, as my grandma on her deathbed
I was scared but it past away.
As I kneel for mercy oh lord.
He takes away, with hands on hands
They walk past my life like oh man
Nature does fucks me up sometimes
I was tied to Small ponds longing for an Oceanside
Waves now blow me away again to the roots I had
She said stories of witches and demons
In the forest, they pull out my desire
To showcase my propensity of violence
Do they exist downtown
In these Arches and columns
In the Palace of Gods of Greece
In this Malevolent magnificent
System under the fleece.
Sickly frost bites on the
Whitest of the hearts.
And I am the greatest pretender
Of having a Say
What I became is lesser than my parents
Half my age.
Youthful reveries of Assignment delays and procrastinating.
Mirages of self accomplishments
What they worth in value
What value is love.
Commodities on the Shelf
On the corner is found a box of chocolates
And a ring of platinum
What price is love
Quite a lot
Rituals are there ?
Quite a lot
Boost to match up more
Subscribe to the dating store.
There are distances and alienations
Yesterday I put a cap on a bottle
Who knows what was in it.
I ate a meal from microvave
TV Dinner they say.
And a glass of Gatorade
What does that make of me.
The Irritating questions of ambitions.
Like as if existing wasn’t ambitious enough.
#review #poetry
A1
What my soul looks at me,
What do you see
Mirroring features of people in street
How degrading would it be
If you roll out now on an chilling breeze
If you texted and never Roll up your sleeves
Don’t you see,
every man is greed
And every Penny is stolen
Like those unfeasible please
You know it’s guided destruction
Your worth is more than molten
Bodies under the sunlight reaping souls
A virtuous suicide
Kind of thinking when you eat
It’s the stories of sunkissed memories
And unfiltered adventures elders speak of
You never feel in this sanitary ward.
The rocks make you happy only
How you live so long
How you know so much of me ?
Aren’t I buried you deep in that winter snow
When unable to find her cost of life
When unable to find a way of life
How unable it felt when expectations
That can’t be avoided as I did many before
How young feel like
How is it to feel old
It’s a life of mediocre
In a limbo of Money and gold
A2
It’s not magic, it’s ravenous growth
Over my shoulder, it’s cold and jittery
You felt it when you touched
And the phone’s battery is dead
You want the cable, is it ?
Nocturnes, playing silently ripping the lazuli
In lights of unknown
Won’t you wanna see it, One more time
The speaker works as a charm like it used to
Mariage d’amore
Won’t your subtle sarcasm sting me
One more time
Won’t you come home with stiff shoulders
And I sweep through your head as if
Everything’s alright
It ain’t much, but the home is an idea we cherished
It’s not magic, it’s sweet like candies
It’s Ruh Gulab, your presence is like a shadow
Engulfing in unending embrace
Eurydice, how might I not look to you again.
How might I not mourn the instrumentality of this mortal chase
It’s not as bad as the poet said
It’s not killing to smoke cigarettes
But there was a time you stopped me
My threshold is in my pocket
And my legacy is my debt.
God bless me, as I end this chain.
A3
Not everyone falls in love twice
As Same is not the man, nor the love he conceived
The cerulean sky this morning
Brandishing memories
those breakfasts she made
Her hands were bruised as I saw her with turmeric laid on it.
As a child, when I discovered eventually
Loved ones go away, as my grandma on her deathbed
I was scared but it past away.
As I kneel for mercy oh lord.
He takes away, with hands on hands
They walk past my life like oh man
Nature does fucks me up sometimes
I was tied to Small ponds longing for an Oceanside
Waves now blow me away again to the roots I had
She said stories of witches and demons
In the forest, they pull out my desire
To showcase my propensity of violence
Do they exist downtown
In these Arches and columns
In the Palace of Gods of Greece
In this Malevolent magnificent
System under the fleece.
Sickly frost bites on the
Whitest of the hearts.
And I am the greatest pretender
Of having a Say
What I became is lesser than my parents
Half my age.
Youthful reveries of Assignment delays and procrastinating.
Mirages of self accomplishments
What they worth in value
What value is love.
Commodities on the Shelf
On the corner is found a box of chocolates
And a ring of platinum
What price is love
Quite a lot
Rituals are there ?
Quite a lot
Boost to match up more
Subscribe to the dating store.
There are distances and alienations
Yesterday I put a cap on a bottle
Who knows what was in it.
I ate a meal from microvave
TV Dinner they say.
And a glass of Gatorade
What does that make of me.
The Irritating questions of ambitions.
Like as if existing wasn’t ambitious enough.
#review #poetry
A4
Djinns are in the counter
Fulfilling your wishing
Come to the mall
Or Go online
Discounts on things you never needed
You want it, like Sugar
Diabetic nation, how beautiful it is
Hello there, the name is Luci
You seem distraught
You crying ?
this tissue with military grade fabric might help
This medicine for your mental health might help
You want more of it, everything all at once
Processed to the point of void at lunch
The Authority is mine And the Hostile
Fuckers are kneeling down throwing away their pride
It’s nothing but Money
#review #poetry
Djinns are in the counter
Fulfilling your wishing
Come to the mall
Or Go online
Discounts on things you never needed
You want it, like Sugar
Diabetic nation, how beautiful it is
Hello there, the name is Luci
You seem distraught
You crying ?
this tissue with military grade fabric might help
This medicine for your mental health might help
You want more of it, everything all at once
Processed to the point of void at lunch
The Authority is mine And the Hostile
Fuckers are kneeling down throwing away their pride
It’s nothing but Money
#review #poetry
Twenty years pass by
Still thinking of her request
Will you marry me?
Thirty dozen times her mechanism
I searching for true meaning
Was so hard, beyond the ceiling
Couldn't stop her advances
And its not enough
To tell me you'd care
I should have tried, picturesque
Her half piece of heart
As it rejoined with my refurbished half
For haven't felt this way
At least for a younger lad in linen
Seeing the passion right from the start
Contemplated right to the star
I feel so close to you now
For that's where the destiny holds us
Looking forward to embrace you
Kiss you smoothly, hug you warmly
Reflecting the union of a lifetime
That we were destined for love
#review
#Linford
#Destined for Love
Still thinking of her request
Will you marry me?
Thirty dozen times her mechanism
I searching for true meaning
Was so hard, beyond the ceiling
Couldn't stop her advances
And its not enough
To tell me you'd care
I should have tried, picturesque
Her half piece of heart
As it rejoined with my refurbished half
For haven't felt this way
At least for a younger lad in linen
Seeing the passion right from the start
Contemplated right to the star
I feel so close to you now
For that's where the destiny holds us
Looking forward to embrace you
Kiss you smoothly, hug you warmly
Reflecting the union of a lifetime
That we were destined for love
#review
#Linford
#Destined for Love
WATER AND FIRE
Shower of beauty,
Simple, cute and pretty
Facing him is a dream desire
A medicine that never expires
Never felt exhausted
She never felt tired
Her smile brings peace to my soul
Like water calming fire
Every time in good mood
She enjoyed her life entire
I feel happy for her
Like water calming fire
Have I seen her
I think not require
What I get from her thoughts
Is way more important
Then the outer beauty
That the world admires
As she is a blessing
There is no end to kindness
She aquire
Her smile brings peace to my sole
Like water calming fire..
Like water calming fire..😊
#review
#ansh2_4
#friendship
Shower of beauty,
Simple, cute and pretty
Facing him is a dream desire
A medicine that never expires
Never felt exhausted
She never felt tired
Her smile brings peace to my soul
Like water calming fire
Every time in good mood
She enjoyed her life entire
I feel happy for her
Like water calming fire
Have I seen her
I think not require
What I get from her thoughts
Is way more important
Then the outer beauty
That the world admires
As she is a blessing
There is no end to kindness
She aquire
Her smile brings peace to my sole
Like water calming fire..
Like water calming fire..😊
#review
#ansh2_4
#friendship
A LETTER FOR YOU
A letter which describe how much u r to me
A letter saying that I miss u in every conversation I have someone. Thinking about how would have react, say. How we have laugh
A letter saying that how I plan to go on every vacations with u
A letter saying that whenever we fight.. How I check whether u r online or not every now and then
A letter confessing you that I imagine u in every love story I see I read.. N u r shaping in my romantic fanasty
A letter confessing u that u r not much to me.. U r whole of me.... U r the one whom I want everyday
A letter from my heart saying ....u r my everything and nothing together
#review #pain #PSP
A letter which describe how much u r to me
A letter saying that I miss u in every conversation I have someone. Thinking about how would have react, say. How we have laugh
A letter saying that how I plan to go on every vacations with u
A letter saying that whenever we fight.. How I check whether u r online or not every now and then
A letter confessing you that I imagine u in every love story I see I read.. N u r shaping in my romantic fanasty
A letter confessing u that u r not much to me.. U r whole of me.... U r the one whom I want everyday
A letter from my heart saying ....u r my everything and nothing together
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Dear folks, this is a translation of one famous poem of one famous poet into English.
Can you please review it and let me know, if it sounds correct, or does it contain enything weird, odd ?
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I like to feel that I'm not sick with you
I like to know that sickness yours is yours not mine
That heavy ball of earth won’t stray off from its course
Away from our footprints , fading in sunshine
I love that I could funny be
Bewildered, clumsy , not wordplaying
not turning red upon sleeves touching game
not turning pale when see you on your knees
I love to see you hugging someone else
Before my eyes , reposefully and calmly
Not sending me to fire glowing hell
To burn forever for not kissing me , my darling
I like that mentioning my name is not your habit
That tender name you don't utter day-and-night in vain
That no one's gonna sing Hallelujah on our wedding
In silence of the church, one sunny autumn day
Thank you for love, with all your heart and soul
That brings me peace at night, unconscious, unaware
Thank you for rare meetings if at all
So nice, That never in the moonlight do we stroll
So great that sun warms not us, soaring high elsewhere
So pity, that I am not sick with you
So bad, that sickness yours is yours not mine
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#friendship
Can you please review it and let me know, if it sounds correct, or does it contain enything weird, odd ?
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I like to feel that I'm not sick with you
I like to know that sickness yours is yours not mine
That heavy ball of earth won’t stray off from its course
Away from our footprints , fading in sunshine
I love that I could funny be
Bewildered, clumsy , not wordplaying
not turning red upon sleeves touching game
not turning pale when see you on your knees
I love to see you hugging someone else
Before my eyes , reposefully and calmly
Not sending me to fire glowing hell
To burn forever for not kissing me , my darling
I like that mentioning my name is not your habit
That tender name you don't utter day-and-night in vain
That no one's gonna sing Hallelujah on our wedding
In silence of the church, one sunny autumn day
Thank you for love, with all your heart and soul
That brings me peace at night, unconscious, unaware
Thank you for rare meetings if at all
So nice, That never in the moonlight do we stroll
So great that sun warms not us, soaring high elsewhere
So pity, that I am not sick with you
So bad, that sickness yours is yours not mine
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#friendship
WATER AND FIRE
Shower of beauty,
Simple, cute and pretty
Facing him is a dream desire
A medicine that never expires
Never felt exhausted
She never felt tired
Her smile brings peace to my soul
Like water calming fire
Every time in good mood
She enjoyed her life entire
I feel happy for her
Like water calming fire
Have I seen her
I think not require
What I get from her thoughts
Is way more important
Then the outer beauty
That the world admires
As she is a blessing
There is no end to kindness
She aquire
Her smile brings peace to my sole
Like water calming fire..
Like water calming fire..😊
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#ansh2_4
#friendship
Shower of beauty,
Simple, cute and pretty
Facing him is a dream desire
A medicine that never expires
Never felt exhausted
She never felt tired
Her smile brings peace to my soul
Like water calming fire
Every time in good mood
She enjoyed her life entire
I feel happy for her
Like water calming fire
Have I seen her
I think not require
What I get from her thoughts
Is way more important
Then the outer beauty
That the world admires
As she is a blessing
There is no end to kindness
She aquire
Her smile brings peace to my sole
Like water calming fire..
Like water calming fire..😊
#review
#ansh2_4
#friendship
Broken pencil,
Broken stencil,
Broken pen still,
Writes to break hearts,
To mend hearts.
Broken ones are both fire and fog,
Might burn you till you scream,
Might choke you till you dream,
They're both dangerous and beautiful,
Might kill you and laugh,
Might save you and cry,
The question remains why, do they do this,
Why do they misbehave?
Maybe that's just what it is with the broken ones,
They don't know themselves.
-- विषेक
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#review
Broken stencil,
Broken pen still,
Writes to break hearts,
To mend hearts.
Broken ones are both fire and fog,
Might burn you till you scream,
Might choke you till you dream,
They're both dangerous and beautiful,
Might kill you and laugh,
Might save you and cry,
The question remains why, do they do this,
Why do they misbehave?
Maybe that's just what it is with the broken ones,
They don't know themselves.
-- विषेक
#vishek
#review
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Sing with me;
There's no one around
to the rhythm of tune, it's just the breeze
Gently whistling...
Hold my hands;
And dance with me in the mild light, it's a smile from the moon
Melodiously glistening...
Kiss my lips;
And be in my arms, to fusion of sounds it's an applause from the night
Rhythmically fading...
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There's no one around
to the rhythm of tune, it's just the breeze
Gently whistling...
Hold my hands;
And dance with me in the mild light, it's a smile from the moon
Melodiously glistening...
Kiss my lips;
And be in my arms, to fusion of sounds it's an applause from the night
Rhythmically fading...
#review
Title : "Aura of Queen"
Stars gaze Moonlight,
Moonlight strikes ocean,
Ocean merges nature,
Nature causes aura,
Aura chases queen,
Queen hums song,
Song chases listener,
Listener writes poem,
Poem includes queen,
Queen notices ambience,
Ambiance resembles dreams. 💫✨
#review
#brevette_poetry #Cookie
Stars gaze Moonlight,
Moonlight strikes ocean,
Ocean merges nature,
Nature causes aura,
Aura chases queen,
Queen hums song,
Song chases listener,
Listener writes poem,
Poem includes queen,
Queen notices ambience,
Ambiance resembles dreams. 💫✨
#review
#brevette_poetry #Cookie
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Title : "Problem Child or Golden Child"
Shimmering alone from heaven,
Was wandering a divine soul,
Enclosed within a living corpse,
Struggling alone for liberty.
Is it a Problem Child or a Golden Child?
Shivering under eternal moonlight,
Protesting against the worldly foes.
Resisting extreme ailments for survival,
"Is there a place to reside?",
Said the Spiritual Soul of the Problem Child.
Residing in an awful body,
Which looks so messy has a Golden Soul.
In this materialistic world of possessions,
Where appearance matters the most,
Has still someone to care for?
Then, suddenly spiritual aura emerges,
Another soul dropped by & surges,
Who also have a similar fate,
Dressed up all the wounds in the divine soul,
It was none other than the soulmate.
Returning after ages to heaven,
The happiest soul was glinting Golden.
The wandering soul immersed in fantasies,
Who was very soon going to depart,
At last found a place in God's heart. 💫✨
#review #Cookie #soulful_poetry
Shimmering alone from heaven,
Was wandering a divine soul,
Enclosed within a living corpse,
Struggling alone for liberty.
Is it a Problem Child or a Golden Child?
Shivering under eternal moonlight,
Protesting against the worldly foes.
Resisting extreme ailments for survival,
"Is there a place to reside?",
Said the Spiritual Soul of the Problem Child.
Residing in an awful body,
Which looks so messy has a Golden Soul.
In this materialistic world of possessions,
Where appearance matters the most,
Has still someone to care for?
Then, suddenly spiritual aura emerges,
Another soul dropped by & surges,
Who also have a similar fate,
Dressed up all the wounds in the divine soul,
It was none other than the soulmate.
Returning after ages to heaven,
The happiest soul was glinting Golden.
The wandering soul immersed in fantasies,
Who was very soon going to depart,
At last found a place in God's heart. 💫✨
#review #Cookie #soulful_poetry
My views about love is quite sorted out.
No, I will never say "I love you" because I believe it's only the beginning.. When something starts it eventually ends and I don't want the story to end I just want a never ending story.
"Sometimes I may hold your hand tight in the crowd, or I will wrap my arms around me pouring some self love
Either I share my umbrella with you or we get drenched together
Maybe I will fight for window seat with you or I will let you have it
Okay I am this person who loves adding extra sugar to her tea but with you I can have no sugar tea. Just like the sugar free tea taste better with you similarly I am better version of me with you. I am me without you too but with you I am just the ~better~ best version."
#review
#auri
#love
No, I will never say "I love you" because I believe it's only the beginning.. When something starts it eventually ends and I don't want the story to end I just want a never ending story.
"Sometimes I may hold your hand tight in the crowd, or I will wrap my arms around me pouring some self love
Either I share my umbrella with you or we get drenched together
Maybe I will fight for window seat with you or I will let you have it
Okay I am this person who loves adding extra sugar to her tea but with you I can have no sugar tea. Just like the sugar free tea taste better with you similarly I am better version of me with you. I am me without you too but with you I am just the ~better~ best version."
#review
#auri
#love
Title : "Playful Soul"
The rising sun and the nature cries,
Makes me feel like healing vibes.
They exclusively make me so enthusiastic,
As it's the beginning my astonishment is so drastic.
The deep ocean touches up my soul,
The extensive sky makes my essence so wide.
These all fulfil my desire as a whole,
As I feel myself in the bed on one side.
As I assume myself on the trip,
Laughing and Enjoying myself with my friends.
Glorifying, dancing, cheering and cherishing,
They will be the best memories I would be reminiscing.
Tomorrow is the day, the day which I dream,
After my all endeavours and planning.
It feels so steady with a sudden blow of stream,
Which brings about my eternal sentiments of hesitating.
Enduring my soul and controlling my exhilaration,
I felt a sensation of joy and a terror of tension.
As it's the life which teaches us on every point,
I recommend being prepared to acquire the teaching at every subsequent checkpoint. 💫✨
#review
#Cookie
#Dreamy_adventure
The rising sun and the nature cries,
Makes me feel like healing vibes.
They exclusively make me so enthusiastic,
As it's the beginning my astonishment is so drastic.
The deep ocean touches up my soul,
The extensive sky makes my essence so wide.
These all fulfil my desire as a whole,
As I feel myself in the bed on one side.
As I assume myself on the trip,
Laughing and Enjoying myself with my friends.
Glorifying, dancing, cheering and cherishing,
They will be the best memories I would be reminiscing.
Tomorrow is the day, the day which I dream,
After my all endeavours and planning.
It feels so steady with a sudden blow of stream,
Which brings about my eternal sentiments of hesitating.
Enduring my soul and controlling my exhilaration,
I felt a sensation of joy and a terror of tension.
As it's the life which teaches us on every point,
I recommend being prepared to acquire the teaching at every subsequent checkpoint. 💫✨
#review
#Cookie
#Dreamy_adventure
She was totally surprised that I’d “let her go” after she admitted the cheating. She had expected a long intensive fight.
But I did not want her back. In fact never, ever.
She had turned into a liar — someone who had lied for months and months, each and every day.
The irony is: the literal second before she told me the truth (which I had suspected for almost six months, but which she had virgorously denied), I would have done anything for her.
I had fought for many months over a period which felt like one long nightmarish night with everything I got, but as soon as the truth — and nothing but the truth — was out, the fight was over.
She was a liar. Had become one. Would always be one.
So I did not fight anymore.
That is to say: not for her.
That had become a war I could not win anymore, and one she had already lost.
So she was gone forever, and I realized I had to start all over again, trying to walk to new horizons and not knowing what to expect. After 10 fucking years.
The nights became cold, and silent.
And she smelled blood, smelled my weakness, so she went for the kill, for the money, for the house, thinking that now I was lying in my own pool of stinking tears, she might as well bash in my head and get it over with.
She announced it to her friends, to her family. She would get the money. She would ruin me — she was a new person now, and would not care about her old life, ever again. (Her words.)
And, dear friend, I will end my little sermon now with my own three beautiful words.
She lost again.
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#breakup
#auri
But I did not want her back. In fact never, ever.
She had turned into a liar — someone who had lied for months and months, each and every day.
The irony is: the literal second before she told me the truth (which I had suspected for almost six months, but which she had virgorously denied), I would have done anything for her.
I had fought for many months over a period which felt like one long nightmarish night with everything I got, but as soon as the truth — and nothing but the truth — was out, the fight was over.
She was a liar. Had become one. Would always be one.
So I did not fight anymore.
That is to say: not for her.
That had become a war I could not win anymore, and one she had already lost.
So she was gone forever, and I realized I had to start all over again, trying to walk to new horizons and not knowing what to expect. After 10 fucking years.
The nights became cold, and silent.
And she smelled blood, smelled my weakness, so she went for the kill, for the money, for the house, thinking that now I was lying in my own pool of stinking tears, she might as well bash in my head and get it over with.
She announced it to her friends, to her family. She would get the money. She would ruin me — she was a new person now, and would not care about her old life, ever again. (Her words.)
And, dear friend, I will end my little sermon now with my own three beautiful words.
She lost again.
#review
#breakup
#auri
Title : "The Mysterious Nightmare"
The nightmare I got a day before,
Was full of science and plenty more,
The world of progress that we think of tonight,
The robots were working, it was a dreadful night.
It was when the human were servants,
Robots were having bungalows or villas,
We were that time the only vagrants.
The humans were robots and the robots were humans,
They all were having parties and we were being summoned.
They were instructing us as if we were dolls,
But the reality was that it was they robotic dolls.
They were the ones we then pray to God,
The one who takes our ease and comfort and many more.
Suddenly, with a jerk of dream, I saw someone with spiritual rays,
I was unable to see the face but was feeling the sense of gaze.
The voice says," Oh my dear child, calm your mind and enjoy the note of nature".
I then opened my eyes to the end of this dreamy adventure.
In the morning dawn,
With the closet of bizarre dreams and an upset mind,
I woke up on the verge of a melancholic night.
Suddenly, I heard the crazy cries of birds,
It was so blissful that I can't express it within a few words.
Enjoying the subtlety of nature,
I realised the existence of each creature.
Praying to God I would never have such dream,
I started my routine work with an energising scream.
#review
#Cookie
#Nightmare
The nightmare I got a day before,
Was full of science and plenty more,
The world of progress that we think of tonight,
The robots were working, it was a dreadful night.
It was when the human were servants,
Robots were having bungalows or villas,
We were that time the only vagrants.
The humans were robots and the robots were humans,
They all were having parties and we were being summoned.
They were instructing us as if we were dolls,
But the reality was that it was they robotic dolls.
They were the ones we then pray to God,
The one who takes our ease and comfort and many more.
Suddenly, with a jerk of dream, I saw someone with spiritual rays,
I was unable to see the face but was feeling the sense of gaze.
The voice says," Oh my dear child, calm your mind and enjoy the note of nature".
I then opened my eyes to the end of this dreamy adventure.
In the morning dawn,
With the closet of bizarre dreams and an upset mind,
I woke up on the verge of a melancholic night.
Suddenly, I heard the crazy cries of birds,
It was so blissful that I can't express it within a few words.
Enjoying the subtlety of nature,
I realised the existence of each creature.
Praying to God I would never have such dream,
I started my routine work with an energising scream.
#review
#Cookie
#Nightmare