#review
A heartbreaker
Nothing beats a woman who wants to take revenge on a heart breaker. However, it was too late regardless of what I wanted to do. As I lay on my bed thinking back to the day before. I was an idiot. I couldn’t stop him. Not when I had dreamt of it happening numerously. But it turns out, he wanted one thing. Sadly, I let him take it and after we were done, he took out a cigarette, and smoked it while looking anywhere but my sorry figure. He then requested that I forget what had just happened between us.
A heartbreaker
Nothing beats a woman who wants to take revenge on a heart breaker. However, it was too late regardless of what I wanted to do. As I lay on my bed thinking back to the day before. I was an idiot. I couldn’t stop him. Not when I had dreamt of it happening numerously. But it turns out, he wanted one thing. Sadly, I let him take it and after we were done, he took out a cigarette, and smoked it while looking anywhere but my sorry figure. He then requested that I forget what had just happened between us.
Tree of Spirits
There is a world far beyond our own,
Where there is a tree and not a soul.
Planted on the dark side of the horizon
It harbors the spirits lost in tragedies
Struggling to find a place in Heaven.
When the moon sneaks above the sky
Looking like a black orb without radiance,
Looms out of the dark clouds with a sneer,
Then the tree glows in vibrant colors
With smoky hues of red, green and blue
Forming a grim nimbus around it.
This grotesque spectacle is conjured
By the occult of witches and warlocks
For the souls try to take forms of the past
In a hellish way to liberate themselves
From the leash of branches entwined
Within the hideous trunk from which
Beautiful faces and rotten skulls and
Mortified eyes peer into the darkness
In a despairing search for a glimpse
Of something that breathes.
(c) Amit Herlekar
#freeverse #review
There is a world far beyond our own,
Where there is a tree and not a soul.
Planted on the dark side of the horizon
It harbors the spirits lost in tragedies
Struggling to find a place in Heaven.
When the moon sneaks above the sky
Looking like a black orb without radiance,
Looms out of the dark clouds with a sneer,
Then the tree glows in vibrant colors
With smoky hues of red, green and blue
Forming a grim nimbus around it.
This grotesque spectacle is conjured
By the occult of witches and warlocks
For the souls try to take forms of the past
In a hellish way to liberate themselves
From the leash of branches entwined
Within the hideous trunk from which
Beautiful faces and rotten skulls and
Mortified eyes peer into the darkness
In a despairing search for a glimpse
Of something that breathes.
(c) Amit Herlekar
#freeverse #review
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I ran behind you
With a toren pair of shoes,
Tears flooding in my cheeks.
Baby I'm shattered
By your actions.
Why all these ignorance,
All sudden?
Some times I need the phase,
When you used to be mine,
Don't want to stalk you behind, again...
Come back again
Let our memories become a rainbow
Don't let the love story in the middle.
#poetry #review
With a toren pair of shoes,
Tears flooding in my cheeks.
Baby I'm shattered
By your actions.
Why all these ignorance,
All sudden?
Some times I need the phase,
When you used to be mine,
Don't want to stalk you behind, again...
Come back again
Let our memories become a rainbow
Don't let the love story in the middle.
#poetry #review
Gaze at, and see the glory of a dark sky filled with countless twinkling stars smiling at you.
The world laughs in your eyes when you get immersed in worried about tomorrow
Smile today, and let happiness go on.
Tomorrow will change in a day,
Smile in the highest of worries.
The moon dwells in your dream to get you higher to jump and fly with your wings.
Change what does not change.
You are the flame of your fire.
And wings of your dream.
Open your door for life.
Sing with morning light.
I am lovable and happy the way I am.
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The world laughs in your eyes when you get immersed in worried about tomorrow
Smile today, and let happiness go on.
Tomorrow will change in a day,
Smile in the highest of worries.
The moon dwells in your dream to get you higher to jump and fly with your wings.
Change what does not change.
You are the flame of your fire.
And wings of your dream.
Open your door for life.
Sing with morning light.
I am lovable and happy the way I am.
#review
Death: The end.
Death is the only experience that you can't ever share..
Because forever you are lost once life force disappear..
Having seen it once, still some people claim..
If they are still advice then how could they accertain..
The myths and beliefs of an afterlife are widespread..
Mainly to console the living soul missing the dead..
Death is that point where every life path converge..
Nothing can help anyone once death emerge..
We can prolong the life, not postpone the death..
Maintaining a good heath even with spending our wealth.
Can't affect the death but for the life we can..
So as to have no regrets when death really came
The End.
#poetry #review #WeepingINK
Death is the only experience that you can't ever share..
Because forever you are lost once life force disappear..
Having seen it once, still some people claim..
If they are still advice then how could they accertain..
The myths and beliefs of an afterlife are widespread..
Mainly to console the living soul missing the dead..
Death is that point where every life path converge..
Nothing can help anyone once death emerge..
We can prolong the life, not postpone the death..
Maintaining a good heath even with spending our wealth.
Can't affect the death but for the life we can..
So as to have no regrets when death really came
The End.
#poetry #review #WeepingINK
A brief love story.
Once feeling bored, I scrolled, and found her profile
Looked at her bio, and her photo, I fall for her smile
To try my luck, I hopelessly thought lets chat for a while
Left a hello, like a normal fellow, waited for her to reply
In a brief moment, the text she sent, ended my anxiety
Seeing her interest, forgetting rest, I admired her beauty
In euphoria, without any idea, I indulged in my fantasy
To make her mine, in due time, wrote lines very fancy.
With a casual chat and a lovely start, I wished to win her heart.
Oblivious to facts - this could be an act, Kept falling for her fast.
Out of nowhere, to me she swear, crypto currency is the best.
all hopes disappear, left in despair, you can imagine the rest.
Dedicated to all those innocent newbie who fall victim to online scam.
by #WeepingINK #review #poetry
Once feeling bored, I scrolled, and found her profile
Looked at her bio, and her photo, I fall for her smile
To try my luck, I hopelessly thought lets chat for a while
Left a hello, like a normal fellow, waited for her to reply
In a brief moment, the text she sent, ended my anxiety
Seeing her interest, forgetting rest, I admired her beauty
In euphoria, without any idea, I indulged in my fantasy
To make her mine, in due time, wrote lines very fancy.
With a casual chat and a lovely start, I wished to win her heart.
Oblivious to facts - this could be an act, Kept falling for her fast.
Out of nowhere, to me she swear, crypto currency is the best.
all hopes disappear, left in despair, you can imagine the rest.
Dedicated to all those innocent newbie who fall victim to online scam.
by #WeepingINK #review #poetry
The heartache
Near Valentine's day my heart dwell in that misery..
Where its my bestfriend and crush's first anniversary..
Its was the unfateful mistake, made by the cruel cupid..
As I was on standby and watched it, I was really stupid..
I stayed silent because they both were my best friend..
Yet our friendship ultimately came to an awkward end..
Time do heal, love do hurt, in a loop my heart got struck..
Would cycle of healing and hurting ever be able to stop...
Once was crush, now she is not, but an unrequired love..
I lost a piece of me that can neither outgrow nor evolve..
All the empty pages, my life's open book once had..
left her to paint it all with events only seemingly bad..
If I would have courage, I could have seriously fought..
She could have been mine, or so as often I have thought..
I had reached at an impasse, I could not choose anything..
For love and friendship I got lost somewhere in between..
#review #poetry #WeepingINK
Near Valentine's day my heart dwell in that misery..
Where its my bestfriend and crush's first anniversary..
Its was the unfateful mistake, made by the cruel cupid..
As I was on standby and watched it, I was really stupid..
I stayed silent because they both were my best friend..
Yet our friendship ultimately came to an awkward end..
Time do heal, love do hurt, in a loop my heart got struck..
Would cycle of healing and hurting ever be able to stop...
Once was crush, now she is not, but an unrequired love..
I lost a piece of me that can neither outgrow nor evolve..
All the empty pages, my life's open book once had..
left her to paint it all with events only seemingly bad..
If I would have courage, I could have seriously fought..
She could have been mine, or so as often I have thought..
I had reached at an impasse, I could not choose anything..
For love and friendship I got lost somewhere in between..
#review #poetry #WeepingINK
Do you see me?
Do you see my body?
Does it interest you?
Do you feel it too?
Do you see me?
Do you see my mouth?
Do you like the words?
Or just the way it sounds?
Do you see me?
Do you see these eyes?
Do you see the pain ?
Do you see what it hides?
Do you see me?
Do you see these scars?
Do you hear the stories they tell?
Do you think I have gone too far?
Do you see me?
Do you see my mind?
Do you think I'm crazy?
But isn't it just what you like?
Do you see me?
Do you see my imperfections?
Would you still love me?
I ask my reflection.
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Do you see my body?
Does it interest you?
Do you feel it too?
Do you see me?
Do you see my mouth?
Do you like the words?
Or just the way it sounds?
Do you see me?
Do you see these eyes?
Do you see the pain ?
Do you see what it hides?
Do you see me?
Do you see these scars?
Do you hear the stories they tell?
Do you think I have gone too far?
Do you see me?
Do you see my mind?
Do you think I'm crazy?
But isn't it just what you like?
Do you see me?
Do you see my imperfections?
Would you still love me?
I ask my reflection.
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LOVE &CARE
Called him,
Asked him
When getting back,
Darkness covered him,
Overall,
drained him.
My anxiety ended up increasing,
When he cited not to wait for.
Nothing left to speak
When grief got its place.
Blowing my top,
Hitting the roof
Saying
myself Things are good.
In a nutshell,
Fess up, there are
some mess-up.
Without any idea,
I indulge in suspicion,
Silence got loud
Loud got pain.
Called him,
Asked him
When getting back
Got the answer the same,
Explain not to wait for
Green wound held up
I got back home.
Aliya Nahid
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Called him,
Asked him
When getting back,
Darkness covered him,
Overall,
drained him.
My anxiety ended up increasing,
When he cited not to wait for.
Nothing left to speak
When grief got its place.
Blowing my top,
Hitting the roof
Saying
myself Things are good.
In a nutshell,
Fess up, there are
some mess-up.
Without any idea,
I indulge in suspicion,
Silence got loud
Loud got pain.
Called him,
Asked him
When getting back
Got the answer the same,
Explain not to wait for
Green wound held up
I got back home.
Aliya Nahid
#review
I see his blood upon the rose
And in the stars the glory of his eyes
His body gleams amid eternal snows
His leaves fall from the skies
I see his face in every flower
The thunder and singing of birds
Are but his voice ~and carven by his power
Rocks are his written words
All pathways by his feet are worn
His strong heart stirs the ever beating sea
His crown of thorns is twined with every thorn
His cross is every tree
#review #Linford
And in the stars the glory of his eyes
His body gleams amid eternal snows
His leaves fall from the skies
I see his face in every flower
The thunder and singing of birds
Are but his voice ~and carven by his power
Rocks are his written words
All pathways by his feet are worn
His strong heart stirs the ever beating sea
His crown of thorns is twined with every thorn
His cross is every tree
#review #Linford
Could I?
Could I feel the pain you have buried deep in your heart?
Even though I have not felt it,
Even though I can feel it,
Even though I can help you ease it,
Even though I might be stronger than you,
Even though I might just lift your spirits,
Even though you might feel better,
Even though you might walk away,
Even though you might discard me,
Treat me as a rag doll you found on the streets,
Even though I might experience,
A greater pain from you,
Could I just help you for that one moment?
Could I just suck all the pain away?
Could I just hold you close to me?
Could I feel your pain?
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Could I feel the pain you have buried deep in your heart?
Even though I have not felt it,
Even though I can feel it,
Even though I can help you ease it,
Even though I might be stronger than you,
Even though I might just lift your spirits,
Even though you might feel better,
Even though you might walk away,
Even though you might discard me,
Treat me as a rag doll you found on the streets,
Even though I might experience,
A greater pain from you,
Could I just help you for that one moment?
Could I just suck all the pain away?
Could I just hold you close to me?
Could I feel your pain?
#review.
Prince
Extend the arms for what
The death's innate
The mourns of light
Might awake the masters
You might be more
You can be more
Angel's melancholie dies at your doorstep
Who is loved and unloved
Morning nhilist burns in death's shadow
We dwell past the horrors and sadism
Blood and flesh tore up for prince
#review #poetry
Extend the arms for what
The death's innate
The mourns of light
Might awake the masters
You might be more
You can be more
Angel's melancholie dies at your doorstep
Who is loved and unloved
Morning nhilist burns in death's shadow
We dwell past the horrors and sadism
Blood and flesh tore up for prince
#review #poetry
Blue flowers
Withered soul i may
Row away
My body holds no more
We flying over the clouds
Like as if nothing goes
Your smile shines through
darkness as if it ain't no more
And those hazel eyes
Never lies though
Melancholie is recurring
How alone these blue flowers
And Who writes love
We write blues
As if malt takes ahold no more
Saxophones gently crying through the empty hallrooms
#review #poetry
Withered soul i may
Row away
My body holds no more
We flying over the clouds
Like as if nothing goes
Your smile shines through
darkness as if it ain't no more
And those hazel eyes
Never lies though
Melancholie is recurring
How alone these blue flowers
And Who writes love
We write blues
As if malt takes ahold no more
Saxophones gently crying through the empty hallrooms
#review #poetry
❤SHOW AND TELL💔. Heart poem.
I don't know how to show myself asked to show.
I belong to you, you belong to me.
I got shattered, felt blue,
When you had a blue day, Carried, lifted a stream of pain, hidden behind a smile when you were sad.
I am fragile but capable of giving you hand in your bad time if sth tugs at your heartstrings.
Here are no words to convey my pain, but always be filled to the brim with shattering, smashing unpleasant words.
Felt to get rid of these but I belong to you and you belong to me.
You don't cry too much, turn heartbreak into love and kindness, and plant them into wounds.
Someday, I would be flying higher with a smile all the way through knowing I was healed and loved by you.
I belong to you and you belong to me.
Aliya Nahid
#review
I don't know how to show myself asked to show.
I belong to you, you belong to me.
I got shattered, felt blue,
When you had a blue day, Carried, lifted a stream of pain, hidden behind a smile when you were sad.
I am fragile but capable of giving you hand in your bad time if sth tugs at your heartstrings.
Here are no words to convey my pain, but always be filled to the brim with shattering, smashing unpleasant words.
Felt to get rid of these but I belong to you and you belong to me.
You don't cry too much, turn heartbreak into love and kindness, and plant them into wounds.
Someday, I would be flying higher with a smile all the way through knowing I was healed and loved by you.
I belong to you and you belong to me.
Aliya Nahid
#review
Serenade
You strip me off all impurities
And all that of outside
Your eyes shine like
Neon lights hung over this bar
And sure we came afar, But,
the gravity sets motion
And I lost focus
The second you spoke endearingly
And it never be, too much
Disenthralled and Cerulean Love
That we made it up
The safe haven as you cover me up
And Sunniest Climes aren't brighter as much
As you're presence, stars are dull
I follow her like a stranded dog
Like a lantern in a misty fog
It's hard to seem my routine
Without her direction's gleam
I'm praying it seems we are one
Blisters sticking together when burnt
I want you at every cost it's certain
And I think you've learnt
#poetry #review
You strip me off all impurities
And all that of outside
Your eyes shine like
Neon lights hung over this bar
And sure we came afar, But,
the gravity sets motion
And I lost focus
The second you spoke endearingly
And it never be, too much
Disenthralled and Cerulean Love
That we made it up
The safe haven as you cover me up
And Sunniest Climes aren't brighter as much
As you're presence, stars are dull
I follow her like a stranded dog
Like a lantern in a misty fog
It's hard to seem my routine
Without her direction's gleam
I'm praying it seems we are one
Blisters sticking together when burnt
I want you at every cost it's certain
And I think you've learnt
#poetry #review
❤SHOW AND TELL💔. Heart poem.
I don't know how to show myself asked to show.
I belong to you, you belong to me.
I got shattered, felt blue,
When you had a blue day, Carried, lifted a stream of pain, hidden behind a smile when you were sad.
I am fragile but capable of giving you hand in your bad time if sth tugs at your heartstrings.
Here are no words to convey my pain, but always be filled to the brim with shattering, smashing unpleasant words.
Felt to get rid of these but I belong to you and you belong to me.
You don't cry too much, turn heartbreak into love and kindness, and plant them into wounds.
Someday, I would be flying higher with a smile all the way through knowing I was healed and loved by you.
I belong to you and you belong to me.
Aliya Nahid
#review
I don't know how to show myself asked to show.
I belong to you, you belong to me.
I got shattered, felt blue,
When you had a blue day, Carried, lifted a stream of pain, hidden behind a smile when you were sad.
I am fragile but capable of giving you hand in your bad time if sth tugs at your heartstrings.
Here are no words to convey my pain, but always be filled to the brim with shattering, smashing unpleasant words.
Felt to get rid of these but I belong to you and you belong to me.
You don't cry too much, turn heartbreak into love and kindness, and plant them into wounds.
Someday, I would be flying higher with a smile all the way through knowing I was healed and loved by you.
I belong to you and you belong to me.
Aliya Nahid
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#selfwritten
#notion
• 'Endangered ' •
The way I am
The best I could .
Inside me, there's chaos.
Slanting since childhood,
An unnatural force.
There are confessions
About the felonies i did
And impressions of situations.
I am sorry for being me
There's no way back home
With this psychedelic mind I own.
I may die before my span,
Before better days of my life.
Before knowing who I am.
- Irendu Bhardwaj©
#selfwritten
#notion
• 'Endangered ' •
The way I am
The best I could .
Inside me, there's chaos.
Slanting since childhood,
An unnatural force.
There are confessions
About the felonies i did
And impressions of situations.
I am sorry for being me
There's no way back home
With this psychedelic mind I own.
I may die before my span,
Before better days of my life.
Before knowing who I am.
- Irendu Bhardwaj©
#review
#selfwritten
#poetic
If I close my eyes,
we are still together.
Seeing this world says,
wow! what a lovely pair.
I know, it's just a dream now,
you're in someone else's arms
& loneliness is with me.
If I close my eyes,
we are still together.
#selfwritten
#poetic
If I close my eyes,
we are still together.
Seeing this world says,
wow! what a lovely pair.
I know, it's just a dream now,
you're in someone else's arms
& loneliness is with me.
If I close my eyes,
we are still together.
To The Seasons.
Seasons that pass me by in varied mood,
As the impressionable land you leave a trace,
Molding sometime a delicate flower's sweet face,
Touching again with green the sombre wood,
Or drawing all beneath a snowy hood,
Am I not worthy as they have a place,
In your remembrance? Am I too base,
To know what weed and thorn have understood?
Fair vernal time,I need your quickening,
Even as the sleeping Earth! O summer heat,
Make flower and fruit in me that I bring,
Full hands to autumn when above me beat,
The serious winds ; and winter, make me strong
Like the glad music of your battle song.
#review
#Linville
#poetry
Seasons that pass me by in varied mood,
As the impressionable land you leave a trace,
Molding sometime a delicate flower's sweet face,
Touching again with green the sombre wood,
Or drawing all beneath a snowy hood,
Am I not worthy as they have a place,
In your remembrance? Am I too base,
To know what weed and thorn have understood?
Fair vernal time,I need your quickening,
Even as the sleeping Earth! O summer heat,
Make flower and fruit in me that I bring,
Full hands to autumn when above me beat,
The serious winds ; and winter, make me strong
Like the glad music of your battle song.
#review
#Linville
#poetry