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Who else marvels at the sight of the flickering weary air from the burning tip of a cigarette? Be it Tobacco or Cannabis they all seem to prance about with the gases in the air and create flaring patches. Who is to say plants don't have spirits? That when you burn them in their wrapped paper, they flee, slightly exposed? Who is it to say, that's every last part of them? I must reckon that some piece of its soul has gushed past the filters, into my mouth, down my throat, and across my lungs, to swirl and mix with my blood.

#review
Shy in the sky

Clock touches the twelve
It's the fresh Sunday, again!
Oh! I can see the moon
With his new suit,
It happens all the day
But something is special on Sundays, moon with a finest coat
And sun with a bright fit,
He always wants to
Tell something to the sun
But he always runs away when He saw her.

© TEJ

#review #poetry
MY EVERLASTING LOVE

On the ocean bed's I saw your shadow self seeking for an eternal touch of freshness.
You were once tangible in my life, now a phantom.

A fading memories haunting my mind and heart. We could stay overnight watching the Orion belts of the heavenly pleiades.

Once you said "I will love you forever". Now, it is a mirage on the road to mount Sharon.

I wish those experiences never happened, only my innocent soul living alone. Many saw how great we were living together without a fight but I was in pains because you never heeded to my piece of advice.

You prefer to listen but never acted on what I say. You got me worried only to be separated by a great storm. where are you my everlasting love?

My everlasting love has dissolved in the ocean like a pint of salt. My soul cried out to embrace her but she's gone forever. The only thing I can remember is to take on a journey to myself inorder to meet her in my consciousness.

She's completely at one with the ocean, indeed she's the ocean. So I seek a way to become like her.

The darkness taught me a great lesson and I chose to be the light in a difficult world and I have known pains growing up. But now I am fully ready and opened to embrace my strengths and flaws. Let me dissolve in the stormy sea of love knowing I will forever unite with my LOVER.

Oh my LOVER, receive me into your everlasting bosom!!

#review ALL
Shy in the sky

Clock touches the twelve
It's the fresh Sunday, again!
Oh! I can see the moon
With his new suit,
It happens all the day
But something is special on Sundays, moon with a finest coat
And sun with a bright fit,
He always wants to
Tell something to the sun
But he always runs away when He saw her.

© TEJ

#review #poetry
MY EVERLASTING LOVE

On the ocean bed's I saw your shadow self seeking for an eternal touch of freshness.
You were once tangible in my life, now a phantom.

A fading memories haunting my mind and heart. We could stay overnight watching the Orion belts of the heavenly pleiades.

Once you said "I will love you forever". Now, it is a mirage on the road to mount Sharon.

I wish those experiences never happened, only my innocent soul living alone. Many saw how great we were living together without a fight but I was in pains because you never heeded to my piece of advice.

You prefer to listen but never acted on what I say. You got me worried only to be separated by a great storm. where are you my everlasting love?

My everlasting love has dissolved in the ocean like a pint of salt. My soul cried out to embrace her but she's gone forever. The only thing I can remember is to take on a journey to myself inorder to meet her in my consciousness.

She's completely at one with the ocean, indeed she's the ocean. So I seek a way to become like her.

The darkness taught me a great lesson and I chose to be the light in a difficult world and I have known pains growing up. But now I am fully ready and opened to embrace my strengths and flaws. Let me dissolve in the stormy sea of love knowing I will forever unite with my LOVER.

Oh my LOVER, receive me into your everlasting bosom!!

MAXAGBE
#review All
MY EVERLASTING LOVE

On the ocean bed's I saw your shadow self seeking for an eternal touch of freshness.
You were once tangible in my life, now a phantom.

A fading memories haunting my mind and heart. We could stay overnight watching the Orion belts of the heavenly pleiades.

Once you said "I will love you forever". Now, it is a mirage on the road to mount Sharon.

I wish those experiences never happened, only my innocent soul living alone. Many saw how great we were living together without a fight but I was in pains because you never heeded to my piece of advice.

You prefer to listen but never acted on what I say. You got me worried only to be separated by a great storm. where are you my everlasting love?

My everlasting love has dissolved in the ocean like a pint of salt. My soul cried out to embrace her but she's gone forever. The only thing I can remember is to take on a journey to myself inorder to meet her in my consciousness.

She's completely at one with the ocean, indeed she's the ocean. So I seek a way to become like her.

The darkness taught me a great lesson and I chose to be the light in a difficult world and I have known pains growing up. But now I am fully ready and opened to embrace my strengths and flaws. Let me dissolve in the stormy sea of love knowing I will forever unite with my LOVER.

Oh my LOVER, receive me into your everlasting bosom!!

MAXAGBE
#review
#review #mythoughts

Maybe the Devil looks as good as a human being
And not how people potray him in paintings
After all, even he was hurt I guess
Hurt by his Pride.
That's why Hurt people hurt people.
I pray that he finds his peace

#KP
Hello guys, please can you review the blurb/summary of my book 'Mystical Mutant'
If you liked it you can find it on wattpad @kikibtsstan

BLURB
Several years ago, legend had it that only two mystical creatures existed in the world. The Elevanas and the Glorindians.
They lived together in peace for decades until the day that the Glorindians claimed to be more powerful and superior than the Elevanas. It caused the leaders of the clans to create boundaries between them.

"Who dares fight science with nature?" The Glorindians boasted.
On the other hand, the Elevanas were certain they were stronger. Nature is like a masked devil, so beautiful yet so deadly.

...

A terrible war wiped out the entire species. But there was a survivor, and her name was Fiona.
She must overcome all obstacles to live a normal life forever in the human world.
But the question is,
How long can she hide? How long can she keep this up? How long can she keep pretending to be something she's not? How long is forever?
#review
Ever After

How long will it last? They ask,
Maybe this verse would suffice.
He, like the morning sun,
Would continue to shine.
I, be the most-awaited,
Full moon fortnights.
Till the day love stops,
To lure a poet's mind.
And the brush of an artist,
Falls deprived.
He, and I, shall never part,
Till our souls decide to die.
And the love must go on, and on,
Ever after our demise.

26/02/2022
10:20 pm
©Pakhi

#review #poemforhansen #lovepoem #pm
#review #mythoughts

Maybe the Devil looks as good as a human being
And not how people potray him in paintings
After all, even he was hurt I guess
Hurt by his Pride.
That's why Hurt people hurt people.
I pray that he finds his peace

#KP
#review #ad #article
Creating a Balance: Mental Health and Physical Fitness


We see that there is a huge emphasis put on physical fitness. Creating body images that are accepted and some that are not has shaped the perspective of today’s world. In this article, we shed light on the importance of a balance between mental health and physical fitness. We will give you some handheld tips to assist you while you find a middle ground to give mental health and physical fitness equal importance.

Why should there be a balance between mental health and physical fitness?
We are trained to be masters of our bodies, but never masters of our minds. We come with a pamphlet of instructions when what we really need is a manual. We are often taught that we run our lives, although we love to believe that it is scientifically proven that we do not!

Did we get your attention with that one? We are right! Our actions, both planned and unplanned, our wild spirit of spontaneity, and more, are all designed by experience, exposure, and perspective. Also, nothing is random.

So, how do you curb uncertainty?
Creating a balance between mental health and physical fitness can only be done by creating a way of life. These two elements should be incorporated into our lives. It should not be inserted, but rather a transformation or fusion should take place.

The manner in which this issue can be eliminated is by creating a steady pattern. This will help remove areas of daily challenges when motivation is down and your body and mind are not pumped up to do them.

This can be done by
Creating habits
Setting routines
Planning
Balancing
How to balance mental health and physical fitness?
#1 Walk as much as you journal
How to do it? In the morning, when there’s fresh air and quiet to take a walk in. We do not recommend that you walk miles every morning. Keep it short and brisk. A short 20-minute walk is more than sufficient to maintain a balance between mental health and physical fitness.

Physical benefits - Keeps you fit, gets your blood running.
Mental benefits - Clears your head, gives you thinking time.
#2 Play as much as you read
Choose a sport. This doesn't have to be every day. Instead, choose a few days in the week where you dedicate an hour to playing a sport. The goal here is not to make it to the Olympics but to allow you to clear your head, meet people, laugh, have fun, and most of all, move your body.

Physical benefits - Move your body, energise and revitalise.
Mentel benefits - Destress the mind, gives the cerebrum a break.
#3 Run as much as you meditate
Taking a short jog at the end of the day will not only tone your body, but give you the time to destress. We are aware that the day would have demanded a little more than what you could give, but you made it. Push yourself to physically make it to the end of the target. It teaches you to be persistent. Along with strengthening your mind.

Physical benefits - Moves your body, tones your body.
Mental benefits - Strengthens the mind in persistence, master discipline.
Bottomline
Maintaining a balance between physical health and mental fitness has a reciprocal effect. Physical fitness allows you to feel confident, have good self-esteem, and be aware of yourself. It removes the limitations and every opportunity that passes your way can be accepted because you will be in the right physical and mental state to accept it.

Conclusion
We have plenty more where this came from. In this article, we discussed the importance of maintaining a balance between mental health and physical fitness. Along with its importance, we also have the coinciding effects it has and the progress you will experience. Prowritist strongly believes in striking a balance between mental health and physical fitness.
CRUSH
You are like fire in a lamp /
I can't live without  seeing you, can not touch you /
I can come to you but can not reach you /
Your life is my memory and the light of my life /
I am feared to say words in my heart, if can't say i became crazy/
I afraid of you, i like you, i can't live without you /
Because you was a fire in a lamp/

01/03/2022
11:58 PM
@abhi

#review #lovepoem #abhi
I lie in bed by night
Wondering if I could have
Just one feel of the universe
Having just one thing working in
My favor.

I lie in bed by night
To feel the war scars across my
Heart, war scars I got from
Being life's strongest soldier

I look on, on how
I dived into the trenches of life
Head first, and I as a soldier of life
I found my way to the war front

I look on, on how
I was ready to shoot any opponent
How I held my gun filled with bullets of love
Trying to love my opponent into giving up
On their pursuit to ruin me

I look on, on how
Every duck and dive I omitted
Placed me deeper in the trenches of war
I gave my opponents more grace

I look on, to see how
I lost myself in the war
How it all started with me losing my mind
Then I turned into the scars I would
Never inflict on my opponents

Now, I lie in bed by night
Counting each scar as a step closer
To my death.

#Review
My heart aches
My body inches
For your love
Beloved

#Poetry #Review
Emotional chargers

Indian railways teaches you lessons on human behavior. The other day I had to travel through one of the SUPER FAST trains. The SF train arrived 2 hours late to the station where it was meant to start. Testing Patience 😋

The general waiting room is actually a classroom which the schools don't include in their syllabus. 10 plug points for a room of the size of a spacious 3 BHK. Testing opportunist character of a human.

Well, the people sitting near the plug points start using the phone more than they regularly do. This is to show off so that no other person comes n asks for the charging point or the charger. This is when the warrior within wakes up. PUBG was never so intense or the never noticed hero of a movie written off the cinema history wall becomes inspirational.😳

Lastly the dictator of the charging point invades. That person pulls out a charger of another person and plugs his own. The war begins. The GOC(Game of Chargers) theme music plays and the crowd is now all charged up to witness the epic battle. Testing your integrity and morale.

That is when the announcement comes the train has arrived at the platform. Everything is forgotten and people run to catch their train.

Indian railways, testing your mental health from 1850s.

#justathought
#review
"I'm rose without it's essence,
I'm a bouquet of autumn leaves,
I'm a tree without it's texture,
I'm glass without it's fragility,
I'm a sidewalk without grafitti,
A plain white coral,
I'm a scenery without a painter,
You see;
I still exist without you,
But It's not beautiful..."

#review #nilu
Sometimes we feel pain
All angst and hunger
Satiated
Smokes and Spirit
Through and out
Faded, my god
It's like warm coffee
with an insomniac inspiration
We don't fell apart
Tis the tides
Plucking the strings
Of the windy Palm trees
And a lonely cricket rings
Like a drop of a leaf
And honk of a bus
Its not crowded but us
Why not, never
Why not, never
Roaming to somewhere in Rome
With soulless white , sculpture of bones
And folds of such
Like ballad of bombs
And Toes are clipped
Even the legs
Why not , feel sometimes
Like everyone else
Like anyone and yet
Why not, feel more
Like colourful it were
Even the blackest blotch appear
My Lord, just once on this magenta and white halls.
Even the hardest blocks It stands upon
We feel Pain Sometimes
#review #poetry
It's hurts when no one understands you
It Hurts when you have to bottle down your feelings,,when you have to shut out your thoughts...when you only scream in your mind and yet you feel like screaming literally to calm yourself down...it hurts when people call you a weirdo and you just want to be normal...when their normal is not your normal they shun it...they make it sound like it's a disease..
They make it seem like it's virus...they start treating you differently and act weird in your presence,,,act as if you're some anomaly...you try to let them accept you by opening up but what they want is to interpret you or try to find a reason for everything that you do...they try to explain you like you're an experiment or a study...
It hurts when it doesn't hurt physically...It hurts to experience hurt without hurting literally...
It hurts to be the odd one out(though sometimes it feels sweet ...most of the time it's depressing)
I have already gotten out of context maybe...this is not what I was supposed to write...this is not how it played in my mind... If I wrote what I wanted to,, you would definitely tear up...you would feel pity for me and that's too hurts sometimes...you make one feel like unwanted human when you pity someone as if they're helpless...your pity hurts me more and makes me shut out the world...
I don't understand a thing that's happening in my life and that hurts too
It hurts not to have a solution and have an ocean of problems
It hurts when you compare other people's problems with mine making mine seem as if they're insignificant and as if they shouldn't matter...as if I'm not experiencing them
And when I try to make you understand me you will definitely get tired of me and think I'm a burden...you will think about for sure but subconsciously.
I could keep on writing without stopping but I know you don't give a damn about what I say...
#thoughts #review
コークス

The fine glass
Of morality
Let's shrug off those glass shards
Let's meet in the night
With the tragic farce
And the coke is pretty bland, cold
Like your feet in the sand
Let's meet where the death lies
In a dreary state
And drunkenness of us
May fill the abyss innate
I Guess love is answer
But the long elevators don't lie
With it's charming jingles
It shares melancholy, don't cry
It hurts, don't die , Coward,
Why don't the hangover goes
And we sleep forever
This may as far as it goes
This may the never-ending goal
#review #poetry
My best nights are nights
I slept with your murmurs and kisses in my head.
My best mornings are mornings
I woke up beside you in my bed.

#Poetry #Review
Your Sight...

You came in my life like a blowing wind,
Took my heart to the shore like those flowing rills,
I saw your sight like a writer watches twilight,
In the midst of your eyes I attained pure delight...

You registered your name on the land of my heart,
You pierced my heart like a moving dart,
My being is mesmerised by your glowing fragrance,
Like a devotee raptured by God's reminiscence...

My entire being wants to assimilate in you,
Like a ripple on the surface of ocean,
The embers of my heart are revived by your shimmering sight,
Like living life again became worthwhile...

I am lost in you like sun and moon in eclipse,
I crave for your sight like a man begging for life,
Enchanting your name every moment like vedic hymns,
I want to be a devotee dissolving in your eyes and feel your mollifying vibes...

#san
#review
#poetry