You were fire, i wasn't ice
I was supposed to but it wasn't nice
I was magma that was piquant
Why was our bond so highly turbulent?
The violent gesticulation of air around your flames
Wasn't any good for my fever but i got used to the games
We were bonded the way we weren't meant to be
Was it destiny, i wondered or was it our will that was the key
You're no good for me, i know, said she
But it was too late for her to be set in the world again like a bird, free
If we're meant to do it together, yes my love, we suffer like the way we suffered
You'd be the flame of my candle that demolishes my wax, he uttered
Afterall, diamonds dice diamonds, they are suited together
Shouldn't be befuddled with types different but stay where they belong, forever

#Snowy
#review

She's one in a billion!!

Her smell's like rosemary perfume,
And golden hair's like sonagachi;
The lips are looking like amaryllis;
The face is like the morning sun;
Body is as soft as the balloon;
Her voice is as sweet as elaichi;
Brown eyes are like killing us –
And such beauty is only one!!


• Difficult Words •

Sonagachi - known as Golden Tree
Amaryllis - known as Red Beautiful Flower
Elaichi - Cardamom


#AkashAP #review #poem #oldone #noshare

Some nights I think about being a ghost yk? It'd be so much better. Maybe if I were a ghost I won't have these tears to hide? Maybe I won't feel any of this pain? Maybe I'll stop having these nightmares? Maybe it'll all stop? I'll just exist without actually having to have an existence. Maybe I'll live longer? Maybe I'll survive?

#review

From a blank page to, 'you are the reason for this book'.
He realized,
She was his poem! #review

Once we lived in a dark realm,
Striving for happiness and surviving until we found our soul.
Searching for paths with scars,
We found the most anxious one and the most unpredictable one.
It was our past and our future… #review

His surviving words had lifeless meaning.
But her music was certain.
Mysteriously, their song gave hope! #review

What's wrong with the light?
Have I gone blind?
Why can't I see it anymore?
Why can't I see it entering inside me, Wiping off all this emptiness?
Why doesn't it burn my soul anymore?
Have I lost my soul or the light ?

#review #generalthought

His surviving words had lifeless meaning.
But her music was certain.
Mysteriously, their song gave hope! #review

Noesis (vi)

i pour out
love where
sadness pelts
because i've felt
how drained
it tastes
to be starved
of the world
you deserve.

#amtupu_ #poetry #review

He scribbled.
She gave meaning to it.
Mysteriously they became an art!
#review

When your hands
Trail on my soft skin,
I lose myself
With you
My love.
What else can I ask,
For this eternity,
Than our entwined bodies,
Into one, forever...
#review #my

How shall I live within this secrecy,
That my petal should only bloom under a canopy?
Oh, He, above—who claims to love me,
Why can't you let me be?
#review #poetry

Today I saw death in the eyes, she smiled at me and told me that he loved me.
Today I saw death in the eyes, I felt fragile and small.
Today I saw death in the eyes, I don't want to look at it again.
Today I saw death in the eyes and she looked back at me.
I'm not prepared for the slow walk of her.
I'm scared, for all the things I left behind.
I let out a slow sigh! I don't want to stop breathing.
But here I face her, with a true sigh.
And I suffer at the same time, for what I lack to love.
Oh! Death now that you are looking at me, touch my soul and spare my life.
Oh! Reason in misery, focus your mind, death is not looking at you.
#review

He smiled to know she'd never find him again,
And no longer he needs a forest to hide,
Everything she wished to find in a person,
Was his true self she asked him to keep burried inside .

~ IWRITESOMETIMES :)

#review #poetry

Good one. Use #review for others to review ur work

Agoni
Betrayel
Kriticisms
Destrooyed
Elliminated
Failled
Groundead

Thank god I ve learnt to spell "Confidence" before these!
They didn't make much sense!!!

#Dhruv
#review
#thoughts

Hello there all. Good morning.
I'm a student and I write sometimes. This is something that I just wrote and share here. Please give your reviews on it.


Title: Fate

I chose to be burn in hell
I chose to swim the ocean
I chose the pain.
All that I chose.

I can't blame thou for my suffering,
You are the reason tho.
I can't play with thou,
You played tho.

I chose you over entire world.
I chose death. Accepted it. As it is.
Now all I hope is to wait till the last day.
A day when I'll reach the bottom of the ocean.
A day when you will no longer be able to see me.
A day when I'm suffering will end. A day I'll meet my master in hell.

But the only regret I will have there is,
You will not be there. Because I accept that fate,
So you can live and enjoy.


#review
#poetry
#prashant

When your hands
Trail on my soft skin,
I lose myself
With you
My love.
What else can I ask,
For this eternity,
Than our entwined bodies,
Into one, forever...
#review #my

#myreview ... Use #review for others to review your work. Other than that. Vera level poem. You have a good command of words. Felt like a song.. keep up the good work

Why am i so addled, i seek retort through this creation.
Can't understand a thing, anymore. I just need Salvation
What am i gonna gain, if anything, why do i need revelation.
I do just fine without mass, getting back to isolation?
Why is it so important, why look for identification?
Is it the curiosity or the fear of seperation?
There is inspiration, there is recreation, there is manipulation, sensation, violation & frustration but is there anything that's necessary? Is there any elevation?
I know it bothers none but please, tell me, where am i heading to, what is my destination?

#Snowy #review