#review #Linville
Give thanks to Almighty
Everyday you wake up
Full of self driven energy
Eyes red as berries
Not forgetting to picturesque
In middle of nightmare you were
Safe and sound still breathing
But at least for once,in the morning
Give thanks to Almighty
Everyday you wake up
Thinking of filling stomach
Faithfulness,self control,hard work
Sweat will set the stage,foreseeing
The possibilities of setting food
On the table for your kids
But at least for once,during afternoon
Give thanks to Almighty.
Everyday you wake up
It's not a priffling duty
To work tirelessly all day
For coins to fill the pocket
And supper be in provision
Thinking of tomorrows troubles
Before laying head on pillowcase
But at least for once,at night
Give thanks to Almighty.
#give thanks to Almighty for gift of life given
#Linville
Give thanks to Almighty
Everyday you wake up
Full of self driven energy
Eyes red as berries
Not forgetting to picturesque
In middle of nightmare you were
Safe and sound still breathing
But at least for once,in the morning
Give thanks to Almighty
Everyday you wake up
Thinking of filling stomach
Faithfulness,self control,hard work
Sweat will set the stage,foreseeing
The possibilities of setting food
On the table for your kids
But at least for once,during afternoon
Give thanks to Almighty.
Everyday you wake up
It's not a priffling duty
To work tirelessly all day
For coins to fill the pocket
And supper be in provision
Thinking of tomorrows troubles
Before laying head on pillowcase
But at least for once,at night
Give thanks to Almighty.
#give thanks to Almighty for gift of life given
#Linville
Wandering with a slightly numb head, coffee getting cold. I remember your fight over coffee with less sugar & caffeine more. The unending war over the opposite taste of music leaves me frowned unless you caress me into arms. Though enjoy the taste of this sweet-bitter love.
I used to be very interested in listening to unsung war stories until you leave me after the holidays. Strangely, this time, it was kinda difficult to let you go, I don't know where my potential was lost. Though you never had a choice. You were lying next to me still my eyes were wide open with the fear of untimely orders to return to duty. By the dawn, I kept holding you from the back, pampering my trembling soul. Watching you dressing up raising my heartbeat as time is fleeting. Your steps heading towards outside filling emotions into my eyes. I ran to hug you as if this was the last hug.
Till now it takes me long to realise, that was the last hug but I keep myself moving with the essence of your strong coffee with less sugar & caffeine more.
#sanjana
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I used to be very interested in listening to unsung war stories until you leave me after the holidays. Strangely, this time, it was kinda difficult to let you go, I don't know where my potential was lost. Though you never had a choice. You were lying next to me still my eyes were wide open with the fear of untimely orders to return to duty. By the dawn, I kept holding you from the back, pampering my trembling soul. Watching you dressing up raising my heartbeat as time is fleeting. Your steps heading towards outside filling emotions into my eyes. I ran to hug you as if this was the last hug.
Till now it takes me long to realise, that was the last hug but I keep myself moving with the essence of your strong coffee with less sugar & caffeine more.
#sanjana
#review
#shortstory
The bird
Earth unbearable and unclear
Coming forth direction disguise
Trampled lifeline obsessed
Zero pressure formidable composure
Susceptibility sneaking agility
Bronze angel outspread wings
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
There is looking up prawn
Saboteur precast ruthlessly
Precedence tilted nobility
Precept extirpate certainty
Learning from experience
Gain and lack the expertise
Past and previous despondent
Gradual rapid development
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
Condemn and bless
Gustatory pleasures sour
Missing piece fiction
Like a puzzle parlour
The reason I'm this way
Is because I'm finicky
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
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Earth unbearable and unclear
Coming forth direction disguise
Trampled lifeline obsessed
Zero pressure formidable composure
Susceptibility sneaking agility
Bronze angel outspread wings
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
There is looking up prawn
Saboteur precast ruthlessly
Precedence tilted nobility
Precept extirpate certainty
Learning from experience
Gain and lack the expertise
Past and previous despondent
Gradual rapid development
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
Condemn and bless
Gustatory pleasures sour
Missing piece fiction
Like a puzzle parlour
The reason I'm this way
Is because I'm finicky
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
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The realisation of thoughts
No sooner than later
I was owned and disowned
Worthy of admiration arouse
Now suppose I'm sold
To the new and old.
No sooner than later
I was unyielding and uncompromising
Track and field traduced
Like a dice either tossed
To save all lost souls.
No sooner than later
I was top notch and tropical
On mountain being topmost
Like a terminator am terminated
To the jungle survival native.
No sooner than later
I was theoretical and periodical
Strike and wounded lightning
Now a stream of consciousness
To rise and fall always salvation.
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No sooner than later
I was owned and disowned
Worthy of admiration arouse
Now suppose I'm sold
To the new and old.
No sooner than later
I was unyielding and uncompromising
Track and field traduced
Like a dice either tossed
To save all lost souls.
No sooner than later
I was top notch and tropical
On mountain being topmost
Like a terminator am terminated
To the jungle survival native.
No sooner than later
I was theoretical and periodical
Strike and wounded lightning
Now a stream of consciousness
To rise and fall always salvation.
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It was zephyr till you're beside me,
The way you left me
Everything around me became havoc
With the hurricane you left me in.Long ago , he grabbed my hands and said "I will be there with you when you need me , holding your hands tightly ! "
After few years he betrayed me , pushed me down the hill , I jus dragged him down with me ... I'm still holding his hands tightly !
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After few years he betrayed me , pushed me down the hill , I jus dragged him down with me ... I'm still holding his hands tightly !
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Mapping things
Everything we fix gets broken again ,
It's like time is itself a big loophole ,
Sometimes in quest for something , you lose yourself;
Finding pleasure in things which are temporary anomaly ,
Is just like finding mistakes in crimes you have not committed.
Trying to find the fourth dimension,
Which is that one perfect moment ,
When you will say that this is the time ;
And you have got everything of it .
When you try to map out tiny little things ,
You get something which was missing from a long time .
It could be your that segment which makes the time fourth dimensional.
#review #Shruti #poetry
Everything we fix gets broken again ,
It's like time is itself a big loophole ,
Sometimes in quest for something , you lose yourself;
Finding pleasure in things which are temporary anomaly ,
Is just like finding mistakes in crimes you have not committed.
Trying to find the fourth dimension,
Which is that one perfect moment ,
When you will say that this is the time ;
And you have got everything of it .
When you try to map out tiny little things ,
You get something which was missing from a long time .
It could be your that segment which makes the time fourth dimensional.
#review #Shruti #poetry
Hello guys, please check out my novel on Wattpad, light Reader and Inkitt. It's called Illicit by Danny Fischer#df and please #review
SHE
I met a girl beautiful and bold,
She was much sweeter then i was told.
Whenever i saw her she had blushing smiles,
Which preserved her secret files.
Her looks gave me breathless days and sleepless nights,
Without her i was like a dark room without any lights.
There were many similarities between us,
I think ,thats the reason why she became my crush.
She is very afraid of losing me,
But i'll tell you,she is the girl for whom i will be bending on my knee.
There is much more to say,
But i think i should end it up for today.
#review #adi
I met a girl beautiful and bold,
She was much sweeter then i was told.
Whenever i saw her she had blushing smiles,
Which preserved her secret files.
Her looks gave me breathless days and sleepless nights,
Without her i was like a dark room without any lights.
There were many similarities between us,
I think ,thats the reason why she became my crush.
She is very afraid of losing me,
But i'll tell you,she is the girl for whom i will be bending on my knee.
There is much more to say,
But i think i should end it up for today.
#review #adi
HORROR
It was a chilling night,
Though the moon was shining very bright.
I was in a village in Bihar,
Lying on the terrace and admiring the brightest star.
Then suddenly, I got some strong vibes,
That someone was staring me with his cruel eyes.
I was on my legs in a fraction of a second,
Searching for the person every corner and end.
But he was nowhere to be seen,
Again I lied on the terrace and soon went into a deep dream.
While I was sleeping,
I could make it out that somebody sitting beside me was weeping.
As soon as I opened my sleepy eyes,
I could no longer hear the cries.
This time I was pretty sure of his presence,
So I stood up with my angry face which was lacking in patience.
I walked to the centre and cried,
"If you dare to test my patience then come in front and try".
As soon as I finished saying this,
A man appeared in front ,crawling on his elbows and knees.
My angry eyes soon filled up with tears for mercy,
But he didn't care and kept on moving with eyes full of fiery.
My heartbeat was growing faster,
I became more depressed after hearing his wicked laughter.
I was so frightened that I fainted under the moon,
When I opened my eyes I was in my dad's room.
After asking a bunch of questions,
I got to know that my dad bought me down and indirectly saved me from the situation.
I have never said anyone about that dreadful night,
Due to which I am still afraid to go alone on terrace in bright daylight.
#adi #review #horror
It was a chilling night,
Though the moon was shining very bright.
I was in a village in Bihar,
Lying on the terrace and admiring the brightest star.
Then suddenly, I got some strong vibes,
That someone was staring me with his cruel eyes.
I was on my legs in a fraction of a second,
Searching for the person every corner and end.
But he was nowhere to be seen,
Again I lied on the terrace and soon went into a deep dream.
While I was sleeping,
I could make it out that somebody sitting beside me was weeping.
As soon as I opened my sleepy eyes,
I could no longer hear the cries.
This time I was pretty sure of his presence,
So I stood up with my angry face which was lacking in patience.
I walked to the centre and cried,
"If you dare to test my patience then come in front and try".
As soon as I finished saying this,
A man appeared in front ,crawling on his elbows and knees.
My angry eyes soon filled up with tears for mercy,
But he didn't care and kept on moving with eyes full of fiery.
My heartbeat was growing faster,
I became more depressed after hearing his wicked laughter.
I was so frightened that I fainted under the moon,
When I opened my eyes I was in my dad's room.
After asking a bunch of questions,
I got to know that my dad bought me down and indirectly saved me from the situation.
I have never said anyone about that dreadful night,
Due to which I am still afraid to go alone on terrace in bright daylight.
#adi #review #horror
Day & Night
This is a tale about "day" and "night",
who loves each other with all their might.
Both of them have qualities which are extremely differential,
yet the amount of passion they share is just unconditional.
Their love is too unlucky and cruel,
the only time they meet is for a duel.
Evenings are just a glimpse of their togetherness,
without each other they are always surrounded by emptiness.
Staring at the pain in their lover's eyes,
trying to comfort each other with their fake smiles,
the level of sadness is so high that sometimes even their pain cries.
Yet they somehow find hope in their despair,
that tomorrow they wont shed any tear,
but when the eyes meets their pair,
they weep just like a kid does for a bear.
Even the mornings need night to hear them cry,
Even the nights need morning to motivate them to try.
But at last in the world full of similar lovers,
they will always stand in corner with their feelings covered.
#adi #review #day&night
This is a tale about "day" and "night",
who loves each other with all their might.
Both of them have qualities which are extremely differential,
yet the amount of passion they share is just unconditional.
Their love is too unlucky and cruel,
the only time they meet is for a duel.
Evenings are just a glimpse of their togetherness,
without each other they are always surrounded by emptiness.
Staring at the pain in their lover's eyes,
trying to comfort each other with their fake smiles,
the level of sadness is so high that sometimes even their pain cries.
Yet they somehow find hope in their despair,
that tomorrow they wont shed any tear,
but when the eyes meets their pair,
they weep just like a kid does for a bear.
Even the mornings need night to hear them cry,
Even the nights need morning to motivate them to try.
But at last in the world full of similar lovers,
they will always stand in corner with their feelings covered.
#adi #review #day&night
Used to be a rainbow,
And painted ourselves to show,
So everyone could see our beauty,
From above to below.
Colours got stolen again and again,
We had to mourn and weep.
Can we have a place somewhere,
Where our colours are safe to keep?
Then we met each other,
Two clouds raining apart ,
Learnt to hide the rainbows,
And paint each other's heart.
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#poetry
#mans
And painted ourselves to show,
So everyone could see our beauty,
From above to below.
Colours got stolen again and again,
We had to mourn and weep.
Can we have a place somewhere,
Where our colours are safe to keep?
Then we met each other,
Two clouds raining apart ,
Learnt to hide the rainbows,
And paint each other's heart.
#review
#poetry
#mans
#Linville #review
So sunny so funny
Old fashioned quaint serenity
Write ups still alive
Behind the scenes i survive
Questionable memories satire
Put together plan thwarted
Smoking cigar Saturday fever
To be or not to be
Can't feel a bit put-upon.
Fresh off market sale
Fragile glass extensive
Remember fragrance so expensive
To negotiate better discrepancy
Cries pocket great goodwill
Happening harbour rare and care
To be or not to be
Can't feel a bit put-upon.
It's Friday tender toddler
Hold you warm and closer
Nobody's migraine potential
Value added consequential
Decision of being possessive
Was in accordance acade
To be or not to be
Can't feel a bit put-upon.
#review #Linville. #poetry
So sunny so funny
Old fashioned quaint serenity
Write ups still alive
Behind the scenes i survive
Questionable memories satire
Put together plan thwarted
Smoking cigar Saturday fever
To be or not to be
Can't feel a bit put-upon.
Fresh off market sale
Fragile glass extensive
Remember fragrance so expensive
To negotiate better discrepancy
Cries pocket great goodwill
Happening harbour rare and care
To be or not to be
Can't feel a bit put-upon.
It's Friday tender toddler
Hold you warm and closer
Nobody's migraine potential
Value added consequential
Decision of being possessive
Was in accordance acade
To be or not to be
Can't feel a bit put-upon.
#review #Linville. #poetry
Lost
I am trying to find myself in this world ;
Filled with the series of uncertain things ,
Trying to find difference between volatile & non - volatile things ,
Trying to find answers of deepest question,
Trying to find essence in lost beauty ,
Trying to consume the truth ,
Trying to find peace in the crowded areas,
Trying to feed myself with happiness,
Trying to satiate the hunger with pleasure,
Trying to run away from reality,
Trying to escape from miserable situations,
Trying to accept the failure ,
Trying to get where I want ,
Trying to reach my final destination.
#Shruti #review #poetry
I am trying to find myself in this world ;
Filled with the series of uncertain things ,
Trying to find difference between volatile & non - volatile things ,
Trying to find answers of deepest question,
Trying to find essence in lost beauty ,
Trying to consume the truth ,
Trying to find peace in the crowded areas,
Trying to feed myself with happiness,
Trying to satiate the hunger with pleasure,
Trying to run away from reality,
Trying to escape from miserable situations,
Trying to accept the failure ,
Trying to get where I want ,
Trying to reach my final destination.
#Shruti #review #poetry
I was held accused by myself the sin's I committed, Still drowning in old one's, bumfuzzle me tryin' to figure out. Hell ya, bipolar disorder.
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