Your persistence offers some resistance ,
You thrive on your thoughts ;
Cause you never let them die .
Comes with a purpose & goes away ,
You repose it in your mind .
Never understood what it was exactly,
But got applied to me aptly .
Someday haunting my thoughts ,got what I really wanted .
Cause my persistence also offers insistence.
Insists me to put myself in the forefront ,
So that I can confront things ,
Some things can be in favour , while some are added for savour .
Sometimes it sucks you , other times you chuckle to wipe out the things .
Wiping out things , cause I wanted to ripen it next time .
Got myself the sour taste , but some sugar also added on it .
Seems nothing is impossible , till everything seems possible .
#Shruti #review #poetry
You thrive on your thoughts ;
Cause you never let them die .
Comes with a purpose & goes away ,
You repose it in your mind .
Never understood what it was exactly,
But got applied to me aptly .
Someday haunting my thoughts ,got what I really wanted .
Cause my persistence also offers insistence.
Insists me to put myself in the forefront ,
So that I can confront things ,
Some things can be in favour , while some are added for savour .
Sometimes it sucks you , other times you chuckle to wipe out the things .
Wiping out things , cause I wanted to ripen it next time .
Got myself the sour taste , but some sugar also added on it .
Seems nothing is impossible , till everything seems possible .
#Shruti #review #poetry
Nigeria Independence Celebration
They said "call it the joyful day"
But why not instead the starry night?
With the few well fed stars
That glowed in peace
And the gloomy smoke
Which was filled with cries -
As eyes of the masses
Melted in sorrow,
Their stomachs grumbled of hunger
And had their hearts
Encaged with terror -
Shouldn't it be the night of mourning?
Where leaders express
Regrets
Over their failures.
#review #AhmadMusa #poem
They said "call it the joyful day"
But why not instead the starry night?
With the few well fed stars
That glowed in peace
And the gloomy smoke
Which was filled with cries -
As eyes of the masses
Melted in sorrow,
Their stomachs grumbled of hunger
And had their hearts
Encaged with terror -
Shouldn't it be the night of mourning?
Where leaders express
Regrets
Over their failures.
#review #AhmadMusa #poem
I'm here at least for now
The sheer coming
Will it be traumatizing
Or still ill be jumping in ecstasy
The one guys are here
In ever possible race
I try to set the pace
Now everything seems nasty and hectic
But for now its stopped
The one guys are here
You will know it
When the time comes
But for now ,keep the gaze
Until the forfeited misfortune swindles,for sure
The one guys are here
This time for real
Only for the elite and professional
But the peasants will still be digging the unfathomed truth
That is written on their dusty hands
Will they unearth it?maybe
For it seems ,
The one guys are here
Why change everything?
For the folks to divide
Why seal everything?
For the truth to be hidden
Why consume everything?
For the thirsty not to quench
But as the saying goes
The one guys are here
#Linville #review
The forsaken
The sheer coming
Will it be traumatizing
Or still ill be jumping in ecstasy
The one guys are here
In ever possible race
I try to set the pace
Now everything seems nasty and hectic
But for now its stopped
The one guys are here
You will know it
When the time comes
But for now ,keep the gaze
Until the forfeited misfortune swindles,for sure
The one guys are here
This time for real
Only for the elite and professional
But the peasants will still be digging the unfathomed truth
That is written on their dusty hands
Will they unearth it?maybe
For it seems ,
The one guys are here
Why change everything?
For the folks to divide
Why seal everything?
For the truth to be hidden
Why consume everything?
For the thirsty not to quench
But as the saying goes
The one guys are here
#Linville #review
The forsaken
It's arm twisting
Many questions legalistically approved
For the lost can never legalize
But legume morning stood legal tender
Myriads of thoughts mainstream miffed
Washing mid-life crisis for decades
After all,why do this?
Perhaps,despite all
Keep perfectionist and still inside.
After perfidious during spring
My beckoning eyes perforated
You lack something,you need something
Wish granted perennial in the ashes
It's not fair,first and foremost
Had to accept the outcome
Since this time round,my plover recalled
Perhaps, despite all
Keep perfectionist and stillness inside.
Why use the internal locus of control
Underneath my heart im convinced
My emphasis still on convictions
Through my fantasies should be contented
I try it in every way
As I looked rakishly outside
Waiting for the ramification of faith
Perhaps, despite all
Keep perfectionist and stillness inside.
I knew me ,myself and i
Had an outstanding rectitude
But to rectify my impossible mission
Tend to solidify my alternate recourse
Wait! an iPod of alternative rock
Of course would listen and roll
Perhaps,despite all
Keep perfectionist and stillness inside.
Well, a sigh of relief and hope
Will refurbish my show and tell
Just stay focused,rethink,figure
In the end,you need to showcase
Probably,that my heart beats per minute
Perhaps,despite all
Keep perfectionist and stillness inside.
#Linville
#review
It's arm twisting.
Many questions legalistically approved
For the lost can never legalize
But legume morning stood legal tender
Myriads of thoughts mainstream miffed
Washing mid-life crisis for decades
After all,why do this?
Perhaps,despite all
Keep perfectionist and still inside.
After perfidious during spring
My beckoning eyes perforated
You lack something,you need something
Wish granted perennial in the ashes
It's not fair,first and foremost
Had to accept the outcome
Since this time round,my plover recalled
Perhaps, despite all
Keep perfectionist and stillness inside.
Why use the internal locus of control
Underneath my heart im convinced
My emphasis still on convictions
Through my fantasies should be contented
I try it in every way
As I looked rakishly outside
Waiting for the ramification of faith
Perhaps, despite all
Keep perfectionist and stillness inside.
I knew me ,myself and i
Had an outstanding rectitude
But to rectify my impossible mission
Tend to solidify my alternate recourse
Wait! an iPod of alternative rock
Of course would listen and roll
Perhaps,despite all
Keep perfectionist and stillness inside.
Well, a sigh of relief and hope
Will refurbish my show and tell
Just stay focused,rethink,figure
In the end,you need to showcase
Probably,that my heart beats per minute
Perhaps,despite all
Keep perfectionist and stillness inside.
#Linville
#review
It's arm twisting.
#review
#aarushi
#shortpoem
This is a part of the poem I'm planning to complete, your reviews please :)
Instead of surrendering to the light,
which sometimes makes my wounds feel sore,
I opened myself up to the dark today,
so that the darkness inside me won't feel lonely anymore.
#aarushi
#shortpoem
This is a part of the poem I'm planning to complete, your reviews please :)
Instead of surrendering to the light,
which sometimes makes my wounds feel sore,
I opened myself up to the dark today,
so that the darkness inside me won't feel lonely anymore.
You named yourself after some french bathtub because well, who knows. I'm startled because I guess somewhere, some point in your life you were impulsive and even spontaneous. I feel like I need to ask what happened? And who happened for you to be this careful and calculated now? So bound by two rules. The ones they set: your parents, your friends and the whole godamn society that acts like they know more about living in your shoes than you do. And the ones you set: the hard shells you built out of the broken pieces of your heart and lined with the tattered fragments of your soul. You named yourself after a bathtub because you wanted an identity you could use to wash all of your past sins. You named yourself after a French bathtub because you had taste. Or maybe for some other reason, but I wish it was as spontaneous as I thought it out to be.
- New Small 2
#shortstory #review
- New Small 2
#shortstory #review
#review
#Linville
Never meant to be
Starting by being the click
Before my clear sighted
Navigated the cliff-top
Becoming my closely guarded secret
Deep down,cloistered barracks
Younger than she thought
Despair made me desolate
Will she accept me
Stream of endless questions infinite
I might as well say
I was destined for destiny
Interest preoccupied me
As I stood watching you standing besiged on balcon
In my mind I was versed
You'll be my newest version
Probably verify during vernal
A few yards away homestead
You too stood corner angle
Way you smiled and blushed
Was a wish fulfillment to my wishful thinking
That were were meant for each
Making forfeited glances every
Physical approach a seizure
The proliferated men advanced
With prolific material wealth
Overture has to work
No matter what
The separation inevitable
After proceeding to high school
For sure engrossedly I was
But the feelings enfeebled
And bondage never breakaway
For leeway to incapacitate
Limit no longer the sky
But now to the sun
To spray my love for you
Since my only exception was you
Certain after my return
Sudden silence gripped me
My heart petrified,traumatized
Six feet underneath surface
Contemplated your new home
Couldn't make irreparable again
Or neither irretrievable
But the only thing I wanted to tell you,
Is how much i loved you.
#poetry #Linville
#Linville
Never meant to be
Starting by being the click
Before my clear sighted
Navigated the cliff-top
Becoming my closely guarded secret
Deep down,cloistered barracks
Younger than she thought
Despair made me desolate
Will she accept me
Stream of endless questions infinite
I might as well say
I was destined for destiny
Interest preoccupied me
As I stood watching you standing besiged on balcon
In my mind I was versed
You'll be my newest version
Probably verify during vernal
A few yards away homestead
You too stood corner angle
Way you smiled and blushed
Was a wish fulfillment to my wishful thinking
That were were meant for each
Making forfeited glances every
Physical approach a seizure
The proliferated men advanced
With prolific material wealth
Overture has to work
No matter what
The separation inevitable
After proceeding to high school
For sure engrossedly I was
But the feelings enfeebled
And bondage never breakaway
For leeway to incapacitate
Limit no longer the sky
But now to the sun
To spray my love for you
Since my only exception was you
Certain after my return
Sudden silence gripped me
My heart petrified,traumatized
Six feet underneath surface
Contemplated your new home
Couldn't make irreparable again
Or neither irretrievable
But the only thing I wanted to tell you,
Is how much i loved you.
#poetry #Linville
#review #Linville
Give thanks to Almighty
Everyday you wake up
Full of self driven energy
Eyes red as berries
Not forgetting to picturesque
In middle of nightmare you were
Safe and sound still breathing
But at least for once,in the morning
Give thanks to Almighty
Everyday you wake up
Thinking of filling stomach
Faithfulness,self control,hard work
Sweat will set the stage,foreseeing
The possibilities of setting food
On the table for your kids
But at least for once,during afternoon
Give thanks to Almighty.
Everyday you wake up
It's not a priffling duty
To work tirelessly all day
For coins to fill the pocket
And supper be in provision
Thinking of tomorrows troubles
Before laying head on pillowcase
But at least for once,at night
Give thanks to Almighty.
#give thanks to Almighty for gift of life given
#Linville
Give thanks to Almighty
Everyday you wake up
Full of self driven energy
Eyes red as berries
Not forgetting to picturesque
In middle of nightmare you were
Safe and sound still breathing
But at least for once,in the morning
Give thanks to Almighty
Everyday you wake up
Thinking of filling stomach
Faithfulness,self control,hard work
Sweat will set the stage,foreseeing
The possibilities of setting food
On the table for your kids
But at least for once,during afternoon
Give thanks to Almighty.
Everyday you wake up
It's not a priffling duty
To work tirelessly all day
For coins to fill the pocket
And supper be in provision
Thinking of tomorrows troubles
Before laying head on pillowcase
But at least for once,at night
Give thanks to Almighty.
#give thanks to Almighty for gift of life given
#Linville
Wandering with a slightly numb head, coffee getting cold. I remember your fight over coffee with less sugar & caffeine more. The unending war over the opposite taste of music leaves me frowned unless you caress me into arms. Though enjoy the taste of this sweet-bitter love.
I used to be very interested in listening to unsung war stories until you leave me after the holidays. Strangely, this time, it was kinda difficult to let you go, I don't know where my potential was lost. Though you never had a choice. You were lying next to me still my eyes were wide open with the fear of untimely orders to return to duty. By the dawn, I kept holding you from the back, pampering my trembling soul. Watching you dressing up raising my heartbeat as time is fleeting. Your steps heading towards outside filling emotions into my eyes. I ran to hug you as if this was the last hug.
Till now it takes me long to realise, that was the last hug but I keep myself moving with the essence of your strong coffee with less sugar & caffeine more.
#sanjana
#review
#shortstory
I used to be very interested in listening to unsung war stories until you leave me after the holidays. Strangely, this time, it was kinda difficult to let you go, I don't know where my potential was lost. Though you never had a choice. You were lying next to me still my eyes were wide open with the fear of untimely orders to return to duty. By the dawn, I kept holding you from the back, pampering my trembling soul. Watching you dressing up raising my heartbeat as time is fleeting. Your steps heading towards outside filling emotions into my eyes. I ran to hug you as if this was the last hug.
Till now it takes me long to realise, that was the last hug but I keep myself moving with the essence of your strong coffee with less sugar & caffeine more.
#sanjana
#review
#shortstory
The bird
Earth unbearable and unclear
Coming forth direction disguise
Trampled lifeline obsessed
Zero pressure formidable composure
Susceptibility sneaking agility
Bronze angel outspread wings
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
There is looking up prawn
Saboteur precast ruthlessly
Precedence tilted nobility
Precept extirpate certainty
Learning from experience
Gain and lack the expertise
Past and previous despondent
Gradual rapid development
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
Condemn and bless
Gustatory pleasures sour
Missing piece fiction
Like a puzzle parlour
The reason I'm this way
Is because I'm finicky
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
#review #Linville #poetry
Earth unbearable and unclear
Coming forth direction disguise
Trampled lifeline obsessed
Zero pressure formidable composure
Susceptibility sneaking agility
Bronze angel outspread wings
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
There is looking up prawn
Saboteur precast ruthlessly
Precedence tilted nobility
Precept extirpate certainty
Learning from experience
Gain and lack the expertise
Past and previous despondent
Gradual rapid development
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
Condemn and bless
Gustatory pleasures sour
Missing piece fiction
Like a puzzle parlour
The reason I'm this way
Is because I'm finicky
Unless you take my meaning
Will take no for an answer.
#review #Linville #poetry
The realisation of thoughts
No sooner than later
I was owned and disowned
Worthy of admiration arouse
Now suppose I'm sold
To the new and old.
No sooner than later
I was unyielding and uncompromising
Track and field traduced
Like a dice either tossed
To save all lost souls.
No sooner than later
I was top notch and tropical
On mountain being topmost
Like a terminator am terminated
To the jungle survival native.
No sooner than later
I was theoretical and periodical
Strike and wounded lightning
Now a stream of consciousness
To rise and fall always salvation.
#review #Linville #poetry
No sooner than later
I was owned and disowned
Worthy of admiration arouse
Now suppose I'm sold
To the new and old.
No sooner than later
I was unyielding and uncompromising
Track and field traduced
Like a dice either tossed
To save all lost souls.
No sooner than later
I was top notch and tropical
On mountain being topmost
Like a terminator am terminated
To the jungle survival native.
No sooner than later
I was theoretical and periodical
Strike and wounded lightning
Now a stream of consciousness
To rise and fall always salvation.
#review #Linville #poetry
#review
It was zephyr till you're beside me,
The way you left me
Everything around me became havoc
With the hurricane you left me in.