Sealed windows of my heart
Need a breeze to open them away
To conquer the rains and the clouds
Need a flight high in the sky
The lanes will become roads someday
The thoughts will become life someday
The night is dark
Deep black without the moon light
The fortnight is standing far far away
And I started the journey with a candle
Beyond the clouds
Beneath the sea
In my heart
There's Only victory
Give me my wings
Give me my flight
I am made up for the victory
Give me the right time

#lotus
#review

Tanka : 57577

If I do any crime!
If I hurt you more before:
Will you forgive me?
Like you forgave me before;
I like you because of these.

#ap #tanka #review

#review you hve nicely penned down. Nice collection of words with the clarity. I enjoyed a lot reading this

Chaos.

We all are lost in chaos. We know that, but we are frightened at finding ourselves face to face with this horrible reality. Furthermore, we often try to cover it over with a curtain of fantasy.

There are people or circumstances we point finger at, and we be the best storyteller in the scenario. Reason could be anything our fear, our will, ability to accept reality, Lack of clarity and many more. We are not even going to look at this and accept it. We often hide behind the cloud of being in certain ideas which are not true, always uses them as trenches for the defense of our existence. Not only that, but we will be far away from reality and light years away from our self.

It is not always about You vs them!! It is not even about you vs situation.!!

At the end it is about your ability to facing the truth. Will you be able to adapt or not?? Will you be able to overcome or not?? About your mind works for you or you work for your mind.!!

It is always about YOU vs YOU.

One of the kindest thing you can do for ourselves is that we need to accept that we are lost. And if we have accepted that,we will begin to find ourselves. By finding ourselves we will find the center of strength within, and we will be different person all together. This is what our society needs rather than ideas and inventions.

Always go a little further into the water than you feel you are capable of being in. Go a little out of your depth. And when you do not feel your feet are quite touching the bottom, you are just about in the right place to do something exciting.

#review

#yourreview #review
Could relate to the core!
'Filled with people deaf,dumb and blind'
Simple and impactful and apt

For courage is letting go of the fears that you reside in
and hope of a being

Gasp until your heart aches for the warmth of the love it once shared
Bawl to the agony of tragedy that flowed along with the blood through your veins

Fall into the symphony Edvard Grieg once made
Reach to the point of disgust and bathe in the trauma that surrendered to you its faith

Exist in seventeen out of hundred of your fears
For once, look closer into the mirror that is as real as it appears

Leer at The Starry Night, no Vincent could ever paint
Until your eyelids close to their suspense

Oath to the pores that your skin ever veiled
Behold the scars of your mother that never healed

Go slow in the heads of horror
Go deep in the dark philosophy in Arthur Schopenhauer’s honor

Plead to the lord of misery, for great sufferings of ever beyond and more
Wear the wisdom of the evil that history never wore

And then,

Let shadows of your beloved that long ago were burnt, sing you the last lullaby
Sleep to never wake up again in the dream of  demons, ode them the last goodbye

Gather  fragments of the courage you swore upon midst the million sufferings
Open the doors once latched, let bright of your brain lit the horizon of infinite dreams

#sans
#review

Tanka : 57577

I'm alone at my place
Perhaps, someone will come here
A beautiful lady, and
Will take my hand in her hand
Maybe will say I'm with you.

#ap #review #tanka

#review

the bearing braced walls
shuddered, shattered, shredded
not completely though
there are yet seeds to be sowed
in the heavenly abode

drop by drop, soon
in rivers, chaotic blood flowed
from the structure's doors
that now shut open
rivers in abandoned arbitrary flow
drop by drop, it stopped too

Bloooooooddddd
not the sparkling red glitters
but just the no r m a l endometrium
maybe crimson paint spilled on the canvas
but more b e a u t i f u l n beyond

this structure, not only has walls
but there's this boss lady
who makes all the calls
from the entry to exists
carrying on the proceedings

she comes once a month
to collect what is solely hers
upon not getting what she deserves she ends up creating a bloody mess & chaos

she is no harm, she means no harm
she is just here to calm you through the storms she wants you to believe her, promising that flowers will too bloom, pls hold on till spring

I have tried to metaphor "menstruation" here. But I am really not sure if I succeeded. Also I wanted to add a paragraph about how this structure will be a (king)dom or a fort(ress).
Please review this for me, and lemme know if it makes sense.

Thank You :)

#review

#review

the bearing braced walls
shuddered, shattered, shredded
not completely though
there are yet seeds to be sowed
in the heavenly abode

drop by drop, soon
in rivers, chaotic blood flowed
from the structure's doors
that now shut open
rivers in abandoned arbitrary flow
drop by drop, it stopped too

Bloooooooddddd
not the sparkling red glitters
but just the no r m a l endometrium
maybe crimson paint spilled on the canvas
but more b e a u t i f u l n beyond

this structure, not only has walls
but there's this boss lady
who makes all the calls
from the entry to exists
carrying on the proceedings

she comes once a month
to collect what is solely hers
upon not getting what she deserves
she ends up creating a bloody mess & chaos

she is no harm, she means no harm
she is just here to calm you through the storms
she wants you to believe her, promising
that flowers will too bloom,
pls hold on till spring

I have tried to metaphor "menstruation" here, stating the uterus as a kind of structure where there is lady (ovum) who takes all the decisions. But I am really not sure if I succeeded. Also I wanted to add a paragraph about how this structure will be a (king)dom or a fort(ress). I also wanted to convey more how it is beautiful n symbolic to life & not focus on society's prohibitions & perspectives

Please review this for me, and lemme know if it makes sense.

Thank You :)

#review

Longdrive

You roll down the windshield,
While I take the steering wheel,
Humming to music & talking for countless hours,
Let's disappear darling into a world far beyond the stars.

Travelling through various time zones,
Travelling across different landscapes,
A place so mystical and bewitching,
Where the moonlight ascends over the seawaves.

From camping to passing sleepless nights,
As we giggle,dance & cook together,
Cherishing every moment & leaving no regrets,
Making out love in the pleasant weather.

To getting lost in the mystical land,
With only the two of us,
In a place so nice for a secret rendezvous,
Though the outside powers might try to defy us.

#review #poem #San

I've been thinking of life
And it was raining season
Life is worse than the hell
Why? Couldn't get reason
How and when will i get rid
From this unbearable pain
People can shouting loudly
I could not cry in the rain

#ap #review #shortpoem

ALL I KNOW OF YOU

Was love supposed to be this?
When my arms,
All stretched out
But never reach you.
And my hands,
Stays deprived
Of holding yours.
My finger shrinks
In desperation
To touch your skin.
While just my body,
Confesses its needs
Shamelessly without denying.
My poor heart sits lonely
Releasing bubbles of
emotions in a sigh.
Till my helpless
mind rides the high
Intoxicated of you.
And your thoughts
Blames my stomach
Of sheltering a zoo.
This is what I know of love,
through the year and a two.
This is all I know of you.

26.08.2021
©Pakhi
#pm #poetry #Review #poemforhansen

Your Sight...

You came in my life like a blowing wind,
Took my heart to the shore like those flowing rills,
I saw your sight like a writer watches twilight,
In the midst of your eyes I attained pure delight...

You registered your name on the land of my heart,
You pierced my heart like a moving dart,
My being is mesmerised by your glowing fragrance,
Like a devotee raptured by God's reminiscence...

My entire being wants to assimilate in you,
Like a ripple on the surface of ocean,
The embers of my heart are revived by your shimmering sight,
Like living life again became worthwhile...

I am lost in you like sun and moon in eclipse,
I crave for your sight like a man begging for life,
Enchanting your name every moment like vedic hymns,
I want to be a devotee dissolving in your eyes and feel your mollifying vibes...

#san
#review
#poetry

"THE LAST MESSAGE"

Oh! poor soul you had time, but denied
Oh! poor your family you left behind
Oh! I envy those who could make amends
I envy Myself getting off your wrath
Is this the price for calmness
Or is this the deception of mahem
The old wise tree has shed
And the bird has lost it's egg

The heavy boxes are a burden now
But have to march out of house
The weaker ones would be thrown away
The stronger ones will find a way

My pain will never reach you
But who cares about that
So was your pain bigger
But it's me who is writing the poem
So don't haunt me with a new chapter
You don't have the power to make me read
I don't need your fake smiles anymore
Instead...., grace me with a good night sleep

#Einstestine #poetry #review


Feelings can't be measured and compared.


A friend thinks of a last message for his dead friend in form of a poetry at his funeral who has committed suicide. Though he feels an unimaginable pain, he still thinks it's his parents right to be in most pain for the moment so he expressed himself in this poetry but still mention his family first, at the end he couldn't control his pain and tells him that it hurts him more than anyone.

#review
#iwritesometimes
#poetry
#mans



Let me kiss your soul for once,
And gently cradle the corners of your heart,
Engrave you by colors, with your name between my lips,
And in a mirror you'll see the greatest masterpiece of art.

~ IWRITESOMETIMES

the bearing braced walls
shuddered, shattered, shredded
not completely though
there are yet seeds to be sowed
in the heavenly abode

drop by drop, soon
in rivers, chaotic blood flowed
from the structure's doors
that now shut open
rivers in abandoned arbitrary flow
drop by drop, it stopped too

Bloooooooddddd
not the sparkling red glitters
but just the no r m a l endometrium
maybe crimson paint spilled on the canvas
but more b e a u t i f u l n beyond

this structure, not only has walls
but there's this boss lady
who makes all the calls
from the entry to exists
carrying on the proceedings

she comes once a month
to collect what is solely hers
upon not getting what she deserves
she ends up creating a bloody mess & chaos

she is no harm, she means no harm
she is just here to calm you through the storms
she wants you to believe her, promising
that flowers will too bloom,
pls hold on till spring

I have tried to metaphor "menstruation" here, stating the uterus as a kind of structure where there is lady (ovum) who takes all the decisions. But I am really not sure if I succeeded. Also I wanted to add a paragraph about how this structure will be a (king)dom or a fort(ress). I also wanted to convey more how it is beautiful n symbolic to life & not focus on society's prohibitions & perspectives

Please review this for me, and lemme know if it makes sense.

Thank You :)

#sxm #review #poetry

To what I not know
#review #poem #poetry #Abhijit
This is a poem of a soldier who has lost the war and is trying to escape from it. Now he is so tired of running that he stops and looks behind but to his surprise no one is following him. So he starts walking and reflecting his own actions and emotions.

I walk,
Staggering falling and then again.
I walk.

I walk,
To feel the unfathomable pain,
The spikes of my disdain,
That goes through my heart and sail,
In the sea of unbroken vows,
I walk.

I walk,
Remembering the string of my thoughts,
Of friends and foes alike.
To kill and get killed,
To be brave and to fear alike,
I walk.

I walk,
Laughing and crying at the same time,
Knowing the invincible, inevitable time.
That even my soul shall rest soon,
In the midst of the many that came and shall come too.
I walk.

I walk and keep walking
To what I not know

-Abhijit Amin

An ode to lost

I am lost in the garth today,
I no longer know the place,
lone,
I hear your sounds echoes,
But when I go there,
Desolation It slowly grows,
I sit near the fountain,
and try to forget you,
But knowing that you are that memory,
I fail each time,
The space between us,
Its now infinitely defined,
The death, the stranger stares,
I realize deep down,
I am you.

#ode
#poem
#review

CLICKS

Times pass and people separate,
But memories remain forever....

It feels a lie when people say technical evolution took us apart,
For these heartfelt clicks helps to relive the warmth of heart,

Which otherwise seems lost in intricate web of thoughts,
Everyone becomes rigid with experiences,
It is these clicks which help to feel the fluidity of life again....



#sankalp
#poetry
#review

The Night.

The night is longer,
Longer than a distance,
From here to there,
Where you are!.

I can't sleep,
I can't sleep,
I'm stuck watching the picture of you,
The moon laughs at me for the whole night,
The stars stare at me whether i am right,
Can i be right?,
For all those days,
That you're out of my sight?.
Can i?.

No!, you don't have to worry,
It's my mistake, and hereby SORRY!.

#poetry
#review
#sbm