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Sweet were our snaps,
Etched forever in my mind like the city maps.
Laying down in the sun,
Together the walks we had were fun.
Separate we always made a mess,
Together everyone can guess.
Our tale were the envies of the fairies,
But now all left are the memories;
These are now buried treasure,
Which are priceless beyond measure
©Adi

#review
Haiku

Look at the prim rose
Rain-soaked, wind-kissed and enticed
Emanating joy!


#haiku #review #Florence
Loved you more than dearly
Yet you treated mah love cavalierly,
I made you my world
And you made me travel through the netherworld
Everything that you made me feel, I guess,
The undying love you professed
Must say your love had me impressed
Whereas the truth was you couldn't care less.
Today your ignorance hit me like a truck,
To fall for your lies guess I really was a schmuck.
But now that your true self has come to light,
I think I'll take leave from your life outright;
Leaving you at your plight,
I'll now soar like a kite.
© Adi

#review
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I place the bouquet on her coffin, all yellow, white and red, hand-picked without harming the stem, still fresh, just like she has always liked. If she wasn't gone, she would take all these flowers and put them in a pot on her desk in her room right beside her window, she used to say she felt like she was in the garden.
She barely left her room anyways, she didn't quite like the outside world, just she and her passion.
Tears stream down my cheeks as I turn away from her cold grave, it's been a whole year now.

"Be strong bro" my older brother Andy tells me pressing my shoulder. I bury my head in his shoulder and cry even harder, "this wasn't supposed to happen, we were at such a happy place, we were finally at such a happy place."
"I know, I know brother." He says patting my back, trying to sooth me.
"Come, it's about to rain, we must leave." He says and drives me out of the graveyard.

He was right, soon as we get inside the home it starts to rain cat and dog. "I love this weather" I almost hear her say, I look around for her but there's no one. I sit beside the window and stare outside perhaps for hours, my eyes hurt and so does my heart.
'C'mon Ronny, how long are you going to sit in there, come get your dinner." My mom calls me.
"I'm not hungry" I tell her without even looking in her direction
"Enough of this already!" she yells. Well that's my mom, she goes from anger 0 to 120 degree in a heartbeat.
"How long are you going to sulk for that half broken girl?" She yells and this time I look at her furiously ready to launch myself on her but my brother intervenes
"Mom you can't say that!" he shouts at her.

"And tell me young man why can't I state the obvious, wasn't she half broken, wasn't she on a wheelchair for a long time, what is wrong with saying that huh!? What good she would have been for your brother." She says staring point blank at me
"Mom not now, can't you see he is still hurting?" My brother tells her
"Yes, that's the problem here, that he is still hurting after a year, it's about time he finds himself another girl." I give her dry look like she just poured sour milk into my mouth
"Look at your brother Andy, he is handsome and smart, he earns well, which girl won't want him. There he is sulking for an ugly lamb."
"Mom!" I scream in protest, enough about her. I storm off the room, I might end up forgetting my dignity if I stay here any longer.

I drive aimlessly on the rain beaten path, unable to tell where I should turn next or where should I go. I would have drove straight to her he if only..... My thoughts get fuzzy. When I finally stop I open my car's gate and get outside to breathe, somehow magically I have ended up in a painfully familiar place, her favourite ice cream parlor. I close my eyes tightly, I can't look inside, for whenever I do, I just find myself sitting with her in her wheelchair merrily chugging at her ice cream. I try to take a spoon out of her sundae and she slaps my hand away. Then she takes a spoonful and very careful puts it in my mouth, pursing her lips like she was about to hit me with an arrow. All her features tight in concentration only come to rest when I've finally taken the ice-cream in my mouth. Then she looks around as though to make sure nobody saw us but indeed a lot of people have and she blushes, her cheeks turning a prettier hue of red then her top. My heart lurchs out my chest as a cruel drop of rain that falls at the top of my head reminds me that I can never see this happen again.

#tm #review #story
NOTHINGNOTHING


There is so much to see, so much to feel.
So much to talk, so much to do.
So much to take, so much to give.
So much to make, so much to break.
So much of so much that makes time scarce.
And then there is nothing.
Nothing that withholds all the nothings that makes everything.
Nothing that subsumes everything we'll ever be.
Nothing that consumes everything as it sees.


#Hope... #poem #review
Haiku

The storm raged outside
Frightening the little blue birds
And rain fell sideways.

#haiku #review #Florence
Attitude! Misguide



I loved rose not its colour
I loved you not your colour
Never misguide my attitude
My attitude is better than your
I can leave you not my attitude
I am topper every body knows
It is my attitude & I had to follow
Mine attitude comes from my core of heart
But you comes from crust of heart
Crust & core make a difference
If you are intelligent you may learnt
I love shadow not its colour
I love attitude not its favor
My heart is simple but attitude is complex
Misguide mine heart not my attitude


#Self respect
#Review
#Nahiya
Haiku - Life at seaHaiku - Life at sea

We follow the flow
Wherever the wind may blow
The captive of sea


#haiku #review #Hope...
Drugs maybe able to cure our bodies, but what about the soul?

One can recover from the deadliest disease, if he's a happy soul, but the damaged soul crumbles inside.

There's only one cure for the broken souls, LOVE.


"What's better than a warm bath---" Chen Xixi stopped dead in her tracks when she noticed a man lying on her bed, with his head on his palm.

"Welcome back baby~" Jiang Sheng purred in a deep voice.

"The fu*k you doing here?" Chen Xixi was so angry that she could faint.

"Chill darling. I'm here to surprise you. Don't you like it?"

"Yeah I loved it. Let me return the favor."

Xixi pounced at Jiang Sheng and locked him in a choke hold.

"How many times I have told you to get lost?" Xixi gritted her teeth while suffocating the man below her.

"Let go you stupid girl. You'll leave marks on my beautiful neck"

Chen Xixi wasn't able to hold him for a long time though.

"Crazy woman! Are you that jealous of my appearance?." Sheng was checking in the mirror if his neck had any marks.

"Hah! Stop spouting nonsense and get your dumbass out of my room. You contaminated my bed with your germs. Ewww"

"I'm trying to do my job ok? I was instructed to surprise my 'fan' who stays in this hostel room. It was by someone whom I can't refuse. Heavens must hate me that you're my fan."

"Your fan? You've finally lost it. I'll gladly kiss a pig then to see your face one more time. Who told you I'm your fan?"

"Your family."

'What the actual heck!'


You're welcome to join this hate-love relationship journey of Chen Xixi and Jiang Sheng.

Will they find together a cure called LOVE?




I improved my synopsis a bit so please review it.
DM me for the link~~
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You never know with whom you red string of fate is connected to.

They may be right in front of you for your whole life, but you fail to recognize them, until the right moment.

It just takes a moment to fall in love, but a lifetime to maintain it.


"I told you, you can't escape me baby. Your fate has been entangled with me since that day."

Kim Yoona was shocked by the words uttered by Lee Jihun. He sounded so controlling and cold. He wasn't like this before. But after that day, everything changed between them.


This is another novel of mine. DM me if you're interested in reading it~
#review
Unspecable acts of emotion, mysteriously hid beneath the deepened edges of the  hardened heart
With great desires to be acknowledged, to be felt , to be longing for the touch of warmth

Sleeved and covered enough , dying in the words never spelled beyond the need,
Oh indeed!
Two in silence ranging to bawl, into floods of  sensation never ever reached

Deficient of the courage
Wounded in mysterious clutches of the timid brain and the nerval curves

Wondering in the woosy land of unsaid words and unexpressed feelings

How little could it be taking,
and
How so in plenty could it be giving

But in greatly dense thoughts,
In suspicious condition of the human heart,
There lay a reason,
An
Unreachable start, of an anew feeling, blossoming disgustedly but is be fitted inside,
Yearning to come out and emblaze all around


#review
I lost
I lost in stars
I lost in wonders of life
I lost in my own vision
I lost in the way i know
I lost in brightness of day
I feel no pain, no sorrow, no bad, no worries, no gilt, no good, no bad, no joy, no happiness, nothing
But it still me.
I'm always this just pretending it's not me.
I find
I find this after all good
I know this from staring
And finally i'm aware. Still
I'm lost

#review
Haiku

Sunshine after rain,
Droplets on the spider web
Glisten on and off.

#review #haiku #Florence
It wasn't that bright anymore,
The purplish pink lines of cloud shimmering.
Earth ready to turn off into the darkest mode.
Sign made, for the lush curtain of life to fall down.
Done with the pain it brings today, but wasn't sure for tomorrow.

Can I survive again

There's no single question mark.

Because I'm not asking when I know the answer.

#review
*To the love of my life*

You came into my life when I was alone another time
Sowed the seed of love in my barren soul
Made me feel what love is for another time
Made me know what it feels like to be loved
Made me understand what true love is
I felt good about myself for the first time
I made sure I was apt for you in all possible ways I could
I was willing to give up everything for you expecting only one thing return
That you would stay with me
You are that one person made me alive after years of mournful love stories
For the first time I thought those who left may not deserve me
You shaped me in every way most surprisingly without your knowledge
I learnt me
I learnt love
I learnt companionship
I learnt trust
I learnt care
I learnt affection
But I am still in the process of learning you
You surprise me every day
You made sure if I am okay even if you weren't
You took care of me in a way that you wanted to be taken care of
You had love for me in various layers
You expressed yourself in various manners
You reached the bottom tip of my soul and nourished me from inside
I saw a new figure in the mirror after your arrival in my life

And now I have spoiled everything in a fraction of second
I don't want to lie saying that I did without knowing
I wanted to do it so I did
I thought it would be better for us
I thought it would always keep you near me
I thought it can make sure you are mine
Yes first time ever since I met you
I thought of myself and not you
For the first time my selfishness possessed me that I couldn't think of it's aftermath
I don't ask you to come again to me
I don't compel you to forgive me
I don't argue that what I did wasn't a big deal
But just remember
I am used to be alone
But you aren't
I am used to be abandoned
But you aren't
I am used to be sad
But you shouldn't
Because pure souls like you should be
loved, cared, kept sacred
All that I want to say is
I have had people in my heart before you
But ever since I met you
It is permanently reserved for you
You can come whenever you wanna see it again
And I am ready to apologize my entire life
For what I've done
Because
I know your love for me
You know my love for you


Come back when you feel like my heart!

#review
#lsm
#openletter
#review I think you really fall in a love. It's great letter expressed your feelings and a good start. You explored the love and it's feelings thoroughly. It looks like personal experience. Great
• Quatrain •

The world can't see inside's pain
And, tears are hidden in the rain
Even if the world calls me stupid
But, Her voice affects like music

#ap #quatrain #review
#_Demon__

As I saw you again after years The mere sight sent me shivers.

Yes, I was very young and naive.

But I could decipher that you weren't nice.

The way you touched me was so wrong Never imagined that it will leave a scar for lifelong.

What was so sexual in me? for god sake, I was sever 1 spet nightmares and you are the demon.

There weren't any bra straps, nor my frock was revealing Then what did I do to arouse your lustful feeling?

Family is a shelter, I have always learned But all my innocence that day you burned.

What haunts me more is the smile you still give It seems as if you are still peeping deep within.

Reading #Metoo posts, I wished to acream too But the mere imagination of aftermathi, made me withdrew.

Now I cover myself extra, I don't get too close.

For I don't want another scar in the name of "happy dose".

Now every touch is scary and every man looks like you Because even slightest of closeness brings back that view.

I miss my innocence when the world seemed like a paradise But I am born with a vagina and I have to pay the price.

✍️🏻——Pooja Dewan #PD #review
It's Father's Day👨 and I wish every ones father a happy and blessed life.
This is to request every member of this worthy group to write few lines about your Dad.
#review #fathersday #Happyfathersday
The rainy night

The breezy night, dark sky glorified with it's own stars and moon making me drown in some flashbacks. The drizzling of rain drops is taking me to those days, where everything of me revolved around you, where everything seemed so pleasant and pleasing, where you and I were the only beings of my world.

Everything seemed to be perfect and easy. I really thought you were the one I was meant to be with. all you could give me was HAPPINESS happy moments happy days happy nights happy conversations happy tears... I have never even dreamt of being away from you. all i thought was we were destined to meet, we were destined to be together…

I really don't get what happened then! all of a sudden we started drifting apart. I don't know whose fault it was, maybe it was the universe'! there existed confusions in our comfortness, there was misunderstanding in our understanding. I started realizing it was not the US any more, it was YOU and I. It was a hell kinda pain I had gone through accepting the bitter reality. The real struggle was to forget our promises that we've made...the distance between you and me taught me so very much.

As the days went by, maybe it could have been a three digit number of days since we drifted... your name still remained at the top of my chat list. My diary felt difficult to breathe as it was fully loaded since I lost my human diary. My laughter vanished, the happy soul inside me flew away, my tears turned to smiles. My eyes didn't stop to search your vehicle in all that traffic I got struck. my neck never stopped to turn around whenever I crossed your street. my heart never stopped expecting you whenever i hear a calling bell sound. my brain never stopped to bring back memories whenever i hear OUR songs…

As time passes i also taught myself that days and nights come and go with or without our loved ones' gm and gn texts. i understood that we cannot always have what we want with us forever. For the first time I realized that priorities change. I felt that every forEVER has an END. i took the point that changes are inevitable in EVERYTHING. my heart felt the quote "some people can stay in our hearts but not in our lives".

Even now i'm personifying the rain from the sky as YOU, running abruptly to the land which could be luckily ME... here, while writing this, my blurry tear filled eyes expect to see you, the sinking heart still hopelessly hopes to be with you once again, but my brain silently consoles me saying "THIS TOO SHALL PASS"


#review
#lsm
#openletter
#CA #review #shortStory
Listening to the rustling of the trees. Feeling the warmth of the sun. A moment a thousand words couldn’t describe. A stillness so profound she could feel the energy beneath the ground. Stirring below her feet. A vibration that traveled through her limbs and into her soul. She sighed with relief. A smile appearing at the corners of her mouth. A light within her eyes. This was perfect. She thought of how many moments wasted. Always staying busy. Having a mindset of lack. A constant want for more. How disturbing to be in that whirlwind. Never alone yet always cut away. She wondered how many others were in this realization. This dawning of a wisdom beyond age and time. She glanced at her palms as she turned them to the sky. Feeling the wind but never seeing it, all it’s wonder and beauty. A contentment filled her as she closed her mouth only letting her thoughts become her sound speaking to the energy all around and patiently waiting for its echo from the ground.