Letting go

This is a place
Where I pour my void away.
Please understand,
These are unchartered terrains.
These are all the things
I keep my doors closed to,
For these feelings I have never
Let myself feel up to.
I ask myself this question
Everyday, everytime.
If I am broken
Which part is whole of mine?
I come here in hope
To face the demons I feed;
To talk to my inner child,
Ask her if she's healed.
I come here, afraid I'd leave empty.
I come here, afraid I'd leave heavy and full.
This is my safe place,
But I come here in hopes-
To let go of my pain
To let go of all the pain...

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People see me as being lonely, quite and anti social.
They have the audacity to even tell that to me,
makes me wonder if they can feel empathy.
I don't need to be reminded that I don't behave like them, I know in myself how should I behave in connection to my personality.
Haven't they heard the word, introvert? Perhaps they don't,
Otherwise they would know better its no big deal.
For many, they like to go out and do adventures,
Others just like to lie down,
with their backs to the ceiling and their eyes fix to the book at hand.
Immersed in the waves of words feeding their minds.
Feeling at peace for the solitude, that for some find unhealthy.
Whenever I get asked whether I feel lonely, I answer never have I felt that.
Of course I get mixed reactions, others even raised their eyebrows.
I can't blame them, they must have been living in their own bubble all their life.
Get a needle and blow that bubble, otherwise they'll continue believing being you isn't normal.

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Hello, a five-letter word,
Too simple yet quite powerful

Probably the most used word
But always taken for granted

We say hello when we answer calls

I met my friends from simple hellos

Want to greet your crush? Well, saying hello ain't a bad start

Getting someone's attention doesn't sound off when you start with telling them hello

You see, these are some good things Hello gets you

It helps connect people
Better than Facebook does

Because you never start a conversation without saying Hello,

With that said,
always keep in mind
Words can look basic but have greater meaning

Single word that can make thousand words follow

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Loving a lie too much
Hating to deny so much
The Builded madness, unraveled
the path
The Builded hatred, bring forth the wrath
A short lived journey
like a broken Hourglass sand
A melancholy start and an abrupt end

(Pls do tell me your views on this , it's always interesting to hear different openions)

Corpses are now rotting in the catacomb
Now the moon is no longer round, but due to the dark clouds, it turned into decagon


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Under the chinaar
are my stories
and under the dark sky
are all my secrets
there are hands over my mouth
to supress my voice
everyone pretends deaf
so that the truth remains unheard
and the fear of loosing someone is making me believe
that this is not a cage
but my whole world
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Mind of mine
Happiness is genuine when shared.
Peace is real when you find solace in soltitude.
I am stuck in the middle because one denies the other.
Leading my path to existential crisis.

( please spill your words about it)
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Yours.
Xoxo
Wallflower

@keithkayled it hurt deep inside like a spindle
I myself feel like a swindle
No one to share my pain with when I slip and tremble
But with grace and mercy
I will achieve
Over this mischieve
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Heart is small, little hope Full of fun, naive hope Moon stars, hope to touch Hope to fly in anticipation) - Heart is small, top hope May I smell, like this today In the flower garden, the flowers are like I am a cloud of clouds Jhoom jaun main banke bawariya Bind the world in its top .. Heavenly earth blossoming like My mind is also blossoming like this Cuckoo's way, singing songs The way of fish, this desire is full Youth has brought colorful dream Heart is small ...#review

Heart is small, little hope Full of fun, naive hope Moon stars, hope to touch Hope to fly in anticipation- Heart is small, top hope May I smell, like this today In the flower garden, the flowers are like I am a cloud of clouds . the world in its top .. Heavenly earth blossoming like My mind is also blossoming like this Cuckoo's way, singing songs The way of fish, this desire is full Youth has brought colorful dream Heart is small ...#review .

Heart is small, little hope Full of fun, naive hope Moon stars, hope to touch Hope to fly in anticipation- Heart is small, top hope May I smell, like this today In the flower garden, the flowers are like I am a cloud of clouds . the world in its top .. Heavenly earth blossoming like My mind is also blossoming like this Cuckoo's way, singing songs The way of fish, this desire is full Youth has brought colorful dream Heart is small ...#review

He grapped her hips and pulled her close.
The shot of vodka made her vulnerable .
His kiss was full of lust and void of love.
But she gave in.
She woke up for breakfast and he for a different prey.

#review

Death of someone you know has the power to provoke all kinds of negative emotions in you , make you choose the dullest colors and never hope for recovery.
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I erased my past because it left me with infinite regrets.
I Dont forsee my future , cause it would make me live a cautious and fearful life.
I m running away in search of all the bright places to give me the freedom to live the present.
Call me wanderer, gypsy or Voyager.
I was here .
And into the wild I run.

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When you face your demon.



The day when you feel every possible pain, confusion, darkness, the negativity you can imagine. When you can't able to sleep when you can't able to breathe peacefully, and so on.

Consider this now you found your demon. You feel helpless, you feel so numb, you feel lost.

But you know what?

Even in the night of darkness, there is still hope of light that waiting for you.
Gautam Buddha once said, whenever you fall into the worst situation never forget to pursue something good from it.
Make your pain your best teacher your best friend. You're pain always trying to say become better than you used to be. Become stronger than you used to be.


• This Universe beyond our thinking and imagination.

In this universe, there is something or nothing. We don't know. No one does.
I don't know where you live but I know you live somewhere in the world in this tiny world, we don't know why we here, we don't know why we born.
We come into this world. We spend our lives with our loved ones, then we die they will cry and they will move on because this is very difficult to live with that pain and they also die one day. If you do something to help this world some more people remember you and some will cry some will not and they also move on.

Something always with you withing you but we always underestimate that sense of existence.
In this new world, we always greedy to feed logic and reasoning but our small brain not made out for that, this universe beyond our mind.

Thoughts come and goes.
Days come and goes.
The feeling comes and goes.
People come and goes.

What remains at this moment?

You!

When you're day will come you also leave this world. Understand this and be grateful for this precious life. Be kind, be honest add value to your life.

Find something that you can live or die for. Find your calling.
Suppose even if you don't achieve what you planned for the last day of your life, you will have a smile of satisfaction on your face that you never give up you always stand back when you fall. You always fight back. This only enough to make you smile on your last day.

When someone decides to give that precious life to something he/she loves, The great infinite universe starts giving them energy, potential, the courage to do that thing.

Then nothing seems that important than your purpose. Believe in yourself the more you hurt the more you will become stronger.

Have faith in my words, forgive yourself for everything and start again my love.



Thanks for reading.



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Reminder*
Among them*

Appreciate your way of thinking about human life
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#review #KC The more you become , The more you can gain, The finer the gust, The deeper the pain

I am still having a hangover of my last drink with you..#review

There's a twitching pain in my chest, 
Am I supposed to act out or wait, 
Tell them this ache is of my heart twisting, 
Not a miraculous twist of faith. 


I mourned over my ungrateful life, 
They consoled and said you write your own fate, 
I took a pen and paper and sat down alone, 
Writing happy stories of love and no hate.


I never wrote what I'm getting, 
I need to know who read what I wrote down that night.
I'll tell him maybe he has got the wrong stories, 
Mine had only peace and no fight. 


I'm roaming like a lost traveler in the woods, 
Who knows where he wants to go, 
Walks with hope and determination,
But every land mark has a wrong way to show. 


I'm crying my eyes out yet laughing, 
I'm lost and waited to be found,
I'll stay dark and dead inside, 
But will spread a life around.


Have a little life of me and smile, 
Show my mourning heart your glee, 
So when I sleep at night drenching in tears, 
I hope there's someone tomorrow waiting for me.


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#maans
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@IWRITESOMTIMES

Stab me in the heart and bury me in my garden.Place sunflowers on my gravestone. They were my grandmom's favorite. Ever since her passing it's been difficult to carry on in this plastic world among masked faces.This silence after separation is deafening. I break the silence by talking to the flowers.
Xoxo
Wallflower
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The Awakening

She lived across the beachside,
And saw the ocean with such glee,
As if the ocean was calling her,
And so did she wanted to flee,

She stood at the shore,
The waves called out her name,
And she knew this stormy ocean,
Can pull her out of the life's game,

While she stood there in chaos,
Wishing to be devoid and free,
A thought cascaded down her mind,
"What lied under this stormy sea?"

On the 10th of April evening,
She ran away into the light,
Packed up her wild intentions,
No longer she is in our sight

I hope she unfolded the secrets,
Buried a thousand feet beneath the land,
And found everything that this world had lacked,
Right under the stormy sand

It was a high tide September night,
When a bottle tucked my ankles,
Inside a note that said "To feel free,
I broke free from all the shackles"!

~IWRITESOMETIMES | Maansi
@Maansiibajaj


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