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#review #poetry #Einstestine

Loving a lie too much
Hating to deny so much
The Builded madness, unraveled the path
The Builded hatred, bring forth the wrath
A short lived journey
like an empty Hourglass sand
A melancholy start and an abrupt end
#review

𝑯𝒂𝒑𝒑𝒊𝒏𝒆𝒔𝒔 𝒄𝒂𝒏 𝒃𝒆 𝒇𝒐𝒖𝒏𝒅,𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒏 𝒊𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒅𝒂𝒓𝒌𝒆𝒔𝒕 𝒐𝒇 𝒕𝒊𝒎𝒆𝒔, 𝒊𝒇 𝒐𝒏𝒆 𝒐𝒏𝒍𝒚 𝒓𝒆𝒎𝒆𝒎𝒃𝒆𝒓𝒔 𝒕𝒐 𝒕𝒖𝒓𝒏 𝒐𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒍𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕. ✨️🧡
Part 2
I wiped out my tears, kissed the wetted rug and received the call. He started shoutin in anger, I was silently listenin to his complaints and sorrows then after awhile he paused (as he realized he said alot). I left the prayer rug lyin there on the ground, went to bed and asked him for his dismay and he began to cry. Ya Allah! His wailin's sounded the same as of the one who just finished weepin and received the phone call. He wept awfully and I urged him to calm down. After sometime he was back to normal and accepted that he was wrong (or maybe even regret it) and we both exchanged apologies. It was so Peaceful and full of pleasure that we were both smilin again. I.was proud of myself that today i discovered the universal secret, the divine and meanwhile The Woman Of The DarkLand who can climb every mointain and cross every ocean just to fix what she's broken. Durin our conversation he mentioned that he's to leave for the England in next 2 weeks. Ah! As if a viper stung me but then again the woman inside me spoke out He's to go and achieve his every dream and only then he'll come back in order to stay forever. She continued by sayin that you've to wait wholeheartedly on tiptoes for the longest of the lifetimes and then you'll be payed off. Suddenly I realized she's right, love ain't supposed to be the reason of death of someone's beloved's dream (no matter what sorta love it is, besides it's true). Love aint stoppin him to chase his destiny, it's to let him go and pray for his safe return along with his dream turnt into reality. So I told him he must go and keep this charmin smile always on his face. We talked for 2 hour I think and then we both started feelin sleepy. After so long I heard "love you, take care " from himni felt blessed. At the end he said do call me early in the mornin and I switched off my phone and both of us fell asleep in peace. And I'm sure it was after a week that we were sleepin peabefully. In the mornin I woke up and 1st thing I remembered is that I have to call him. I could barely remember what happened to me last night (or maybe to both of us). I phoned him he received the call and his sweet voice made my day. We began to talk more comfortablely than the last night and were feelin much better. Again a point came where the word "Seperation was used, as he's to leave soon. I wanted to confess that it kills me to remind myself that he'll be off for 5 -6 years but then a sudden joy plunges into my soul and dances sayin "Prayer is a hope that knows no end and my Lord is the one who loves Patience". I promised him we'll meet one last time before he flies off. Albeit he didn't say much about how he'll feel in the distant lands but I could hear him sayin I miss my land and the woman of this darkland. The conversation lasted for an hour until he said I wanna sleep for another hour. We again said sincerely goodbye to each other and cut the call. It was 8:30 and I placed my phone on the cushion beside me and stood up in a fresh mood. As I was tyin my hair my eyes fell on the prayer rug. What a beautiful moment my God! I took the cloak that was on my bed, wrapped it around my body and sat on the prayer rug. It was still slightly wet and the airs flooded with perfumes of the woman of the DarkLand and her beloved one. "Alhumdulillah-i-rabbil-Aalamin!" it was all I can utter in His greatness.
#review #poetry #she #love
#poetry #review #Keith
The Apple Of My Eyes
Once I was alone wolf
Referred to as a calf
I went on a quest
Surprisingly it was a test
But only to find out that it was the best
I met u the apple of my eyes
#review #poetry #Einstestine

Loving a lie too much
Hating to deny so much
The Builded madness, unraveled
the path
The Builded hatred, bring forth the wrath
A short lived journey
like a broken Hourglass sand
A melancholy start and an abrupt end
#review #poetry #rune

Me, you and the meadow
Birds, berries and rustling willow
Gazing heart holding hands
Blowing wind kissing cheeks
Sinking reality breaching time
Choice's fell way too deeper
Too shallow as tomorrow
Far distant as yesterday
I was sittin quietly
In the shade, nop it was dark
I felt a sudden jerk
Felt like everything's fallin apart.....
I wasn't able to breathe
Seemed heart forgot to beat
For once I was cold
Saw my till life on repeat
Sheer scare of death
The struggle to survive
Every moment was delicate
I never felt so alive.......
In that rare moment
I got the taste
The taste of fear
The gently trickling tear
The sweaty palms
Warning me of immediate harm
I closed my eyes
To keep it all inside
Little did i know
These sensations can't be tied........
#poetry
#review
#ocean
Every night in agony I cry
What if I had another chance to try
Will the things be there like old times
Or I'll be focusing on your last lines
What went wrong was it me or you
If it was me just tell me what to do
Your favorite red sweatshirt still fits
I think about you with every puff of a cigarette that hits
It's not an excuse nor it is an escape
Your smell is still there no matter how hard I scrape
Every night at 2 am I decide I'll let you go
And the minute 3 am hits I again smoke like a pro
I still remember your pale face you didn't want me to see
And the tricks after that you pulled on me
It's raining cigarette ashes in my brain
And no matter what I do it still pain
How did I come here I think all night
Should I let you go or hold you tight
No matter how hard I cry to let it out
I tried everything I can to shut it out
Am I choosing a slow road to meet you now
Just tell me what to do and how
All I wish now is you to be in peace
And hoping that you listen because you are out of my reach
Will you let me drown in those black eyes of your
I'll wait for you with my bare feet on the cold floor

#review
#review #prose #Angela

UNASHAMED

My friends always laugh at me each time senior faith shouts and Chase me away, warning me never to come anywhere close to her.

They always warn me to stop listening to everything my mind tells me, else I will get into trouble, but I never listened to them.

Senior faith was a brainy personnel, she was good at everything, an exceptional being in the whole school.

One day I told my friends that I would make her my best friend, but they laughed hilariously mimicking me, well they never imagined that they would ever say a word to her, and here I am saying that I would make her my best friend.

Each time i greet her she would reply harshly cause she felt I wasn't her type neither was I in the same level with her

Not minding her attitude, I kept on greeting her lovingly, then one day she called me and said " why are you stubborn" was I really stubborn
" I like your ways"
I was extremely scared, not knowing how she will react "oh that's good, do you want to be like me" I took a deep breath before replying " yes, sure, I want to be like you" there was this sweet smile she gave, that melted my heart.

"No problem dear, I'm in ss3b, come see me later after dinning I would be waiting for you"
My missing rib has been found, I knew i wasn't complete, but now am over complete.

She isn't who people thinks she is, if only I covered myself in fear and doubt I wouldn't have gotten this opportunity, just like the woman with the issue of blood , despite her condition and the fact that she shouldn't be seen among the people she struggled hard until she touched him.

I was unashamed when I approached that senior
The woman with the issue of blood was
Unashamed cause she knew what she wanted.
Baby you can't ruin all the beautiful things
Stop doing all these suitable mood swings
Why did you think,
That way.
Sometime mind fucked up
And the heart has to pay.
I don't want to hate you
Please don't make me to say it.
We should forget bout us
And shall pretend like
we don't remember each other name.
You were behind the fame and
I understand.
I was in pain but
You didn't understand.

#piyush #review
Mera dil bhi itna pagal hai ye pyar tumhi se krta hai
#review
#review #Angela
SHOW ME YOUR FRIEND AND I WILL TELL YOU WHO YOU ARE

I never believed that proverb I've always doubt it saying"how would they get me from my friend, even olu can't be gotten from ola no matter how identical they look".

I have been a good girl all my life, my parents had this strong believe In me that I can never be accused of any wrong deeds.

Angel my friend loid me into doing something I've never done, something I've never thought of doing, she was fund of taking her parents money and spending it recklessly and unnecessary, I wasn't comfortable staying around her but she was the only true friend I got.

I've always adviced and warned her to cut off such act but she wouldn't listen, Instead she would crack a joke to it and we will all laugh hilariously.

despite the fact that she was a chronic theft and my close friend I've never had the urge of taking my parents things without their permission.
Not until one Monday morning Angel confronted me saying "my dear friend, why have You chosen to look odd"
" Odd"? I asked "how"?
" Can't you see how everybody in this arena is spending and making it"
"Angel, what do you mean"
"I mean what's stopping you from taking that which your mum is keeping carelessly".

I couldn't wait for her to go any further instead i walked out of her without uttering a word, on getting home I sat on the bed replaying every single thing she said meditating it one after the other
What did she mean by " that which my mum is keeping carelessly"?
what was she trying to incinerate
What's does mother keep carelessly?
Does she mean I should take Mama's money?

That was how it all ended, I became a chronic one as well, lost trust and parental love.

When I finally decided to meet Mrs uche for counseling, the only question she asked me was that "who is your friend"?
Hey!

Hey! Don't overthink
Hey! I know you care
Hey! I'm feeling special
Hey! It's just me & you
Hey! You never change
Hey! You're still a kid(a big one)
Hey! Do you really exist?
Hey! Is it imagination ?
Hey! I'll meet you soon
Hey! Never leave me alone
Hey! Stay here PLEASE
Hey! You talk to me PLEASE
Hey! You're the one
Hey! You're the love
Hey! You're my dhor
Hey!.......

~Ayush

#review #ayush
Hey!

Hey! Don't overthink
Hey! I know you care
Hey! I'm feeling special
Hey! It's just me & you
Hey! You never change
Hey! You're still a kid(a big one)
Hey! Do you really exist?
Hey! Is it imagination ?
Hey! I'll meet you soon
Hey! Never leave me alone
Hey! Stay here PLEASE
Hey! You talk to me PLEASE
Hey! You're the one
Hey! You're the love
Hey! You're my dhor
Hey!.......

~Ayush

#review
Why it's feels so alone?
Maybe cause of
I didn't hear my fav songs
It's night and it's so dark
It's feeling like I'm lost
When this night will end?
Stop living in my head!
What if I stay calm?
And what if you stay with me?
There are thousands of words to say
And you are not here to listen to me
One day you would come at any reason for me
And one day I'll be gone for many reasons and you won't see that coming..

But I know you'll Never leave me alone...

~Ayush


#review please
My tears,Your tears.
Our face grew hot as the fire.

This mood can strike .
Erupting in loud shouts,
Like an extra.
Wondering why we're here.

Our mouth leaks with affection.
My words,Your intention.
Let us know our feelings.
Electricity runs through our veins

Shadows seem to follow.
Snacking on sweet and sour lollies
Nobody understands
Defeated like deflated balloons

Cowering in the corner at night.
Our pains , we've future buzzing.
I find a smile,
It appears on your face.
But it only widens
When our heart flops together.

#review
#love
#yourreview
And as you fall and shatter.
Darling, think of the glory of your rise.
Think of the potential that lies.
You must gather all that lay scattered.
First on your knees
and then finally,
you stand on your feet.

#poetry #review #grace
When the moon goes high
And the fairy lights glow bright
I wish to hold you tight
Never letting go off my sight.

#poetry #review #Kyra
Every day people from all parts of the world would remind me how amazing their lives are and how mine isn't.

I notice most of the people around me are just pretending to be happy, they show me what they want me to see not what i'm needed to see. I somehow know the truth but it's just so tough to believe it. 

It's just that my heart is so used to being sad about every other single situation, now it finds it challenging to become something it has never been. 

Honestly, my heart gave up on me a long time ago because my dumbass would always try to find reasons to make myself feel like shit. 

With time I reached a point where I no more cared if I was happy or not.I had no idea about what I was trying to do with myself. 

I didn't care if I watched that tv show which I used to enjoy, I didn't care if I ate those chicken rolls that my mom prepared just for me because I would beg her to make them, I didn't care if I was healthy, I didn't care about my looks, desires, likes, dislikes. I reached a point where I had no more fucks left with me to give to the world or to myself. 

During one of the summer holidays my best friend who came to visit me after two whole years would scan my whole appearance with a concerned disgust in his eyes. 

"Well, you look like shit. I heard from your mom that you haven't eaten anything since last two days. Are you trying to kill yourself or some shit? " 

I smiled because I finally figured out what I was trying to do with myself.

 "Hopefully" 

#review #J # #promptWriting

(English isn't my first language, I need constructive criticism 😭)
Title: Forgotten Home pt1

The Earth is dying because of us. Man wants to have more, to produce more, to earn more. His greed pays no attention to anything but his own interests.
This world doesn't even belong to us, our existence is nothing compared to his. We are just tiny beings passing through this vast land.

This planet is not ours only because we have built a house on it. We are parasites: we pollute the waters, we cut down trees, we kill animals.
We have called it "civilization" but what it's civil about all this? We are not even able to throw our dirt in a dumpster instead of throwing it on the street.

We are the living being that dirties the most on this planet, this is because, compared to animals, we are aware of it but we don't care.
I'm just a teenager. One of those who, in theory, should fix this ruined world. I have often heard (and they made me understand) that money is everything, that without it you can't do anything and if you don't have it you are nobody.

But now I ask you: With those pieces of paper, which are so valuable to you, what can you do? Can you perhaps buy another planet Earth to destroy? Or maybe you can buy more time to fix it?

I have always wanted to travel and observe what mother nature has created but Amazon rainforest burns or it's destroyed a bit by bit to build on it.
I feel really bad when I think of my son when, looking at a book about animals, he will say: “I want to see Giant Pandas!” With a big smile on his face. They already are at risk of extinction because of us. I don't want to have to tell him: "I'm sorry, but they all died because we didn't care" and I don't even want to mask the truth with a lie, as adults like to do.
Or think of my daughter that she will wants to see the great barrier Reef. How can I put her in front of the ocean with more oil and garbage instead of fishes and corals? Maybe your money can guarantee a better future for your children but their happiness? Can you buy that too? And then where will they grow if this world is falling apart? On Mars?
So first let's destroy, consume and pollute this planet and your solution is to choose another planet in the universe as a new victim?

#review #astralumi #ForgottenHome
Title: Forgotten Home pt2

It really has to make you feel good to run away from this planet and pretend nothing happened. Cowards. The best way to solve a problem is to pretend that it doesn't exist or run away from it: this is the basic idea of ​​problem-solving that the human being has.

I borrow math since many don't like it. If you use a method to solve an equation but the result is wrong and you use it anyway to solve another one, you will never get the correct solution.
We have made mistakes and we keep doing them. On another planet it will end the same way, we are human here as we will be on Mars.
Problems do not disappear, they follow you and hinder you. Until you get up and fix them they will be always there.
We don't really need another commercial center, another skyscraper or another stadium. We just need a planet that lends us some space and bears our immeasurable stupidity, just for the time to be born and die. You can't keep asking, taking and demanding constantly, if you ask you must be willing to give otherwise there is no balance.
Covid and any other virus that has threatened us, from the appearance of man until now, they did the Earth a favor, well many of them.
I certainly don't doubt that good people died of covid, it's not the first time that innocents die. Just look at all the wars driven by man's thirst for power.
It isn't the first virus that threatens us and it will not be the last one. Floods, fires and other natural disasters will not cease. The man wanted to play and he played dirty. Between the Earth and the human beings we will surely be the ones to lose.
We have gone too far and this planet has endured so much for too long.
If I could make a wish I would like that humanity ceased to exist, including myself of course.

I am very sorry for this planet. He didn't do anything wrong, indeed, he had to be our home. Mine, but yours too, of your son, of your daughter who is about to be born, for your grandchildren for whom one day you will be a grandfather or grandmother.

Even with a virus we shouldn't forget about our home. If you really love this world find a way to save it, right now. Don't let the next generation to take care of it, because then it might be too late.

#review #astralumi #ForgottenHome