You left first
Then I left
Still my night tastes like blood
That I shed all along
Turning my dreams into nightmare
You'll never know
Or maybe you're aware
You never really held me
You never were really there
You left only scars on the walls of my heart
You kept breaking me until I fell apart
With that smirk on your face
You burnt my home
It was only me
All alone
Entangled in my own thoughts
No shoulder to lean on
Nobody to count on
All alone drenched in forlorn.
#elegy
#review
My first poetry ... Here in! :)

[Untitled]
I was broken.
I thought you cared.
I don't know where I'd be
If you were still here.
When you walked out
It was all clear as day.
What I'm trying to say
is I grew and nurtured off your love turned to hate.
There's no point in holding on to the past.
Holding on to a broken heart.
When I can walk without a weight.
When I can walk free and learn to love myself.

#review #salonikulkarni #poetry

The voice of silence--
Dreadful--
For God's image--
With the heavy tread--
In a windless night--
When Heaven whispers--
Her secret plan

#review #poetry #Sbh

Has your young moon lost it's glitter to gleam ?
Dingy darkness taking it's prolonged way,
Blue and Black , scarlet and Ruby hues bleam,
Cordial wishes and Hopes at it's bay.

Highs and lows , silent muzzled moments between,
Mind at war, but sensitive soul at peace,
Phenomenal turns , twists , sometimes unseen,
Theoretical thoughts , abstract prayers at lease.

Loud yet silent hushes , time , how it plays,
Soon , glitters , the nautical star twinkle,
Eternal Sunshine takes you out of maze,
And silent songs seems playful , lyrical.

Move with tune , maneuver , every minute,
Vow to dire , sky is the only limit

#review
#nandini_thakar
#sonnet

'Message from an Angel"

𝘗𝘦𝘰𝘱𝘭𝘦 𝘸𝘳𝘪𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘱𝘢𝘪𝘯, 𝘧𝘦𝘢𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘢𝘥𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘴. 𝘊𝘢𝘯'𝘵 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘬 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘦 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘴?

𝘐 𝘴𝘦𝘦 𝘢 𝘣𝘶𝘯𝘤𝘩 𝘰𝘧 𝘣𝘳𝘰𝘬𝘦𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘴 𝘸𝘩𝘰𝘴𝘦 𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘦'𝘴 𝘩𝘢𝘳𝘥 𝘴𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵'𝘴 𝘸𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘐'𝘭𝘭 𝘥𝘰 𝘮𝘺 𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘵

𝘚𝘱𝘢𝘯 𝘮𝘺 𝘸𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘶𝘯𝘥𝘦𝘳 𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘮𝘵𝘩, 𝘮𝘢𝘺𝘣𝘦 𝘪𝘵 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘥 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 bleeding heart.

#review #poetry #ud

#review #poetry #loftymuse

Goodnight

Goodnight chickens
Goodnight numbers
I'll count you all again
In the morning

And if it was any wonder of yours
It was mine too
Still
I chose to slumber

To find my rest
No pillow
No breast
Only solitude to console me
And so
And so again I would go

A far away place
Not in space
Or time
Though it helps
To be alone

Like the ones who
So desperately crave
To be alone
But first
To find someone
To be alone with

This search that drives
So many around the bend
It must be like the Truth
To know anything at all
You must begin by forgetting
Everything
So everything can find you

In the End

Our love-bed was still warm
But--
Our hearts became cold
The house you always wished for--
Turned out to be a graveyard--
Of two starving ghosts...

#review #Sbh #poetry

When the mill runs ,
The crowds flock to it
To get their share,
And to share it with their kin.
One found a fly,
The other cried it was stone not flour,
Now the crowd is empty,
Guessing that’s the end of the mill.
#review

RandomnessRandomness

Still remember the day we met.

My heart was saying all these things.

It never meant.




As I was watching you, I was dying in your debt.

Those black earrings,

Killing me like a cigerrate,




You were sitting in that cafe.

Drinking your coffee sip by sip,

Ignoring the redness on the cup and my cheeks, due to your lips.


#review#review
#asthir#asthir

Waking up in the morning
To the freshly brewed aroma
Drawing the curtains
To invite the bliss around
Blinded by the shining sun
Deftly chasing away the darkness in and out

Musing about the day before
Dreaming about the one ahead
I relish in the flush of daylight
Weaving it's path in all it's rite

#review
#pooj

[Untitled]

If I could take your hand
Steal you away and elope
To a life filled with dreams and hopes
Darling you know I would.
If I could follow you around
Even if in circles we go round and round
Darling you know I would.
If I could take you on a cruise
On an infinite ocean of the universe
Darling we could live peacefully
Because amongst the stars is a wonderful place to be.

#review #salonikulkarni #poetry

[Randomness]

Still remember the day we met.

My heart was saying all these things.

It never meant.

#review #asthit #poetry




As I was watching you, I was dying in your debt.

Those black earrings,

Killing me like a cigerrate,




You were sitting in that cafe.

Drinking your coffee sip by sip,

Ignoring the redness on the cup and my cheeks, due to your lips.

[Randomness]

Still remember the day we met.

My heart was saying all these things.

It never meant.




As I was watching you, I was dying in your debt.

Those black earrings,

Killing me like a cigerrate,




You were sitting in that cafe.

Drinking your coffee sip by sip,

Ignoring the redness on the cup and my cheeks, due to your lips.

(Had to repost this, as it was deleted by bot :/ )

#poetry #review #asthir

Łøve øf mÿ lìfe

You're the absolute perfection with much to commend,
With utterly no flaws in u there's nothing to amend.
I'd hand over the world my resignation,
Staying in your arms would be my only designation.

That angelic beauty,that great charm to which no one could resist,
Such the addiction which continues to exist.
The rare gem which only few deserved,
Glad to have got it which needs to be preserved.

Love wasn't my thing until I found u and started it to embrace,
You're the one on whom I could rely upon for solace.
Wish to have u along with me in my every single birth,
To me such is your worth.
Wish to give u happiness of my part,
Not possible to stay even for a second from u apart.
#review #San #poetry

{My last poetry}




she said to me ,

"why don't you write anything for me? "




" we are friends na thats why," I said smirking.




That was 3 weeks before i told her how i felt for her.




She said no.




I felt something different,

I...felt like crying, 

Uh..those tears..

Broken, sad started writing for her..

Without her..




Wrote about her hairs,

Maybe she still cares?




Wrote about her eyes,

Oh those little lies,




Wrote about her lips,

Deleted our clips from school trips,




Wrote about her smile,

It's been a while,




Then after some years ,

She saw me through the window of social media,

Broken me posting sad poetry,




Only if i could undo,




Loving she asked

"you write so well, but for who?"

#review #asthir #poetry

{My last song}




she said to me ,

"why don't you write anything for me? "




" we are friends na thats why," I said smirking.




That was 3 weeks before i told her how i felt for her.




She said no.




I felt something different,

I...felt like crying, 

Uh..those tears..

Broken, sad started writing for her..

Without her..




Wrote about her hairs,

Maybe she still cares?




Wrote about her eyes,

Oh those little lies,




Wrote about her lips,

Deleted our clips from school trips,




Wrote about her smile,

It's been a while,




Then after some years ,

She saw me through the window of social media,

Broken me posting sad poetry,




Only if i could undo,




Loving she asked

"you write so well, but for who?"

#review #asthir #poetry

{My last song}

she said to me ,

"why don't you write anything for me?"




" we are friends na thats why," i said




That was 3 weeks before i told her how i felt for her.


She said no.


I felt something different,

I...felt like crying, tearing me apart

Uh..those tears..

Broken, sad , started writing for her..

Without her..




Wrote about her hairs,

Maybe she still cares?




Wrote about her eyes,

Oh those little lies,




Wrote about her lips,

Deleted our clips from school trips,




Wrote about her smile,

It's been a while,




Then after some years ,

She saw me through the window of social media,

Broken me posting sad poetry,




Only if i could undo,




Loving she asked

"you write so well, but for who?"

(Fictional)

#review #poetry #asthir

[Tale]

Where are you?
Ive been following your trail,
Remember that tattoo?
You showed me , just like a tale,
There are people around me but few,
You hiding behind my heart's curtain,
Your cheeks glowing with redness hue,
Is this a fairy-tale?

Cause i know its not true.

#review #asthir #poetry

[You]

Where are you?

Ive been following your trail,

Remember that tattoo?

You showed me , just like a tale,

There are people around me but few,

You hiding behind my heart's curtain,

Your cheeks glowing with redness hue,

Is this a fairy-tale?

Cause i know its not true.Where are you?

Ive been following your trail,

Remember that tattoo?

You showed me , just like a tale,

There are people around me but few,

You hiding behind my heart's curtain,

Your cheeks glowing with redness hue,

Is this a fairy-tale?

Cause i know its not true.

#review #asthir #poetry

He held my hand and looked into my eyes,
Said " I want to be the first one you kiss"
And I realised I wasn't the only canvas
That was painted on by his lips
I stood there in misery ,
Looking at the colours he left on me.
So I took my colours and brushes,
Painted myself black and free.




#review
#mans

SWEET MORNING HUSH


Out of the suffocating crowd, 
When I'm all alone at last.
I put off everything I wore for the world,
My clothes and my mask.
I look at the mirror on my bathroom wall,
I find myself all alone,
Lying with my mind at ease,
On the cold bathroom floor.
I look at my reflection painted on the mirror,
Utterly beautiful yet so painful. 
My eyes filled with pouring grace, 
That's healing yet baneful.
I run my fingers through my short hair,
And then to my high held neck.
I look at the eternal womanly beauty,
Residing on my flesh. 
I looked at the stars like marks on my back,
My own beautiful constellation.
You might have not seen them,
Actually, they don't like much invasion.
My sight melts down to my legs,
Long, symmetric and freshly shaved.
Yet some wounds on them appear so clear,
Like memories peeking out that earlier encaved.
And as I caress my legs my focus,
Suddenly shifts on my left arm,
That have beautiful parallel lines engraved,
Possessing an unignorable charm.
And I sit there in complete silence,
Hearing the voices inside my head,
Admiring the womanly beauty I've got,
On both sides of my flesh,
The morning light barges in from the little window,
Making my pinks and browns of my skin glow,
Reminding me I have to put the clothes and masks again.
It's morning so it's time to go.



#review
#mans