Here I stand on the sea shore,
Fearless, Rageous.
The tides trying to scare me,
With their monstrous waves.
They're gigantic,
But not more than my courage.
They're furious,
But not more than my rage.
They're blue,
But not more than my youth.
And I stand there staring at the sea,
It stares back at me.
Scared, obligated.
The waves still come to me,
But bow when the come near.
The thunderous sound of it,
Is like it's crying.
Because the storm in my eyes,
It bigger than the storm in the sea.
#review
#mans
Fearless, Rageous.
The tides trying to scare me,
With their monstrous waves.
They're gigantic,
But not more than my courage.
They're furious,
But not more than my rage.
They're blue,
But not more than my youth.
And I stand there staring at the sea,
It stares back at me.
Scared, obligated.
The waves still come to me,
But bow when the come near.
The thunderous sound of it,
Is like it's crying.
Because the storm in my eyes,
It bigger than the storm in the sea.
#review
#mans
Will you ever be mine?
#Abhijit #review
From the distance
In the dark
I see you in the very view
That I saw in my dreams
Thinking of your astounding beauty
Unable to distinguish what illusion and reality it seems
Then a thought passes through my mind
Will you ever be mine?
Its true that I may be poor by riches
Its true I may be poor by fame
But I have treasures of love
Hidden in the dungeons of my castle
Where I am the master of it
As well as I am the prisoner
Even the judge is me
And the executioner
That castle is my heart
Then my day dream ends
A thought passes through my mind
Will you ever be mine?
I shall never bring you the moon and stars
To you I may never show my concealed heart
Because of the fear of a broken love
Like petals from a broken flower
The thing which I feel for you ?
The emotions I ponder upon
Do you search for those in me
When this happen and you bestow a smile while watching me
Then a thought will pass by my mind
One day you will be mine
#Abhijit #review
From the distance
In the dark
I see you in the very view
That I saw in my dreams
Thinking of your astounding beauty
Unable to distinguish what illusion and reality it seems
Then a thought passes through my mind
Will you ever be mine?
Its true that I may be poor by riches
Its true I may be poor by fame
But I have treasures of love
Hidden in the dungeons of my castle
Where I am the master of it
As well as I am the prisoner
Even the judge is me
And the executioner
That castle is my heart
Then my day dream ends
A thought passes through my mind
Will you ever be mine?
I shall never bring you the moon and stars
To you I may never show my concealed heart
Because of the fear of a broken love
Like petals from a broken flower
The thing which I feel for you ?
The emotions I ponder upon
Do you search for those in me
When this happen and you bestow a smile while watching me
Then a thought will pass by my mind
One day you will be mine
The sunset is so beautiful,
From this broken glass pane,
The yellows oranges and reds,
Staining each other,
Like a three passionate lovers,
In a love triangle.
Me and my glass pane, both broken
Sit there in silence.
Looking at this beautiful,
Yet painful scene.
We see the colours loving and giving in.
And then,
Losing everything.
Now they're broken like us.
And they're gone.
Like we went away.
Now there's darkness.
Complete darkness.
Because the stains of love,
Are black.
#review
#mans
From this broken glass pane,
The yellows oranges and reds,
Staining each other,
Like a three passionate lovers,
In a love triangle.
Me and my glass pane, both broken
Sit there in silence.
Looking at this beautiful,
Yet painful scene.
We see the colours loving and giving in.
And then,
Losing everything.
Now they're broken like us.
And they're gone.
Like we went away.
Now there's darkness.
Complete darkness.
Because the stains of love,
Are black.
#review
#mans
Please take my eyes.I can't stop looking at these shattered pieces . The pieces I was left with , when you broke my young heart.On my doorstep I saw you . Red roses , red cheeks . Eyes soothing like the moonlight and smile like warm sunrays . Now you're gone . All I have are pieces . On my couch | saw your lips and your perfect torso.Every edge so perfectly carved , My sight melting down from your neck , fingers craving for touch Now you're - gone . All I have are pieces . I saw you on the right - side of my bed making that puppy face.Pulling me over you when I said i wanna sleep left . Now you're gone . All I have are pieces . These pieces are heart to collect . The more I touch them the more they break . I wish to fix them.Everytime I see them lying all around me.I want to love again . want to fall again.I want to give my heart to someone but nobody needs a heart in pieces . So there's no hope for love now , because the pieces won't get back together . Their sight kills me . So take my eyes.
#review
#mans
#review
#mans
"All men are the same",
Are they ?
Some tall and dark,
Some fair and handsome,
Some emotional,
Some devotional,
Some will take care of you,
Some may ignore you,
Tough from the outer side,
Soft on the inner heart,
They might not feel,
Appreciated sometimes,
As they deserve.
But here I am,
To deduce them.
It's brave how they,
Tolerate all our tantrums.
It's courageous to bear the pain,
Without shedding a tear.
All you men are,
Unique and special in your
Own ways.
It's hard to get surrounded by
Responsibilities and attain stability.
Cannot blame the whole kind,
Due to a few men.
We speak of equality,
If women are deity,
You are no lesser,
Than Lord.
ALL MEN ARE NOT SAME
#review
#nandini_thakar
Are they ?
Some tall and dark,
Some fair and handsome,
Some emotional,
Some devotional,
Some will take care of you,
Some may ignore you,
Tough from the outer side,
Soft on the inner heart,
They might not feel,
Appreciated sometimes,
As they deserve.
But here I am,
To deduce them.
It's brave how they,
Tolerate all our tantrums.
It's courageous to bear the pain,
Without shedding a tear.
All you men are,
Unique and special in your
Own ways.
It's hard to get surrounded by
Responsibilities and attain stability.
Cannot blame the whole kind,
Due to a few men.
We speak of equality,
If women are deity,
You are no lesser,
Than Lord.
ALL MEN ARE NOT SAME
#review
#nandini_thakar
will a block be laid
before the end of time
if clearing the site
has lasted till date
and to fulfill the dream
our ancestors had
the site must taste
diggers and spades
perhaps no generation
will see the first block
to be used
in the building of science
#AhmadMusa #review #poem
before the end of time
if clearing the site
has lasted till date
and to fulfill the dream
our ancestors had
the site must taste
diggers and spades
perhaps no generation
will see the first block
to be used
in the building of science
#AhmadMusa #review #poem
Topic : Bloody Sorceress
Underneath my skin.. There resides a bloody sorceress,
she knows how to trick me as well as others.
Her soul is greedy agonizing for something that's not hers.
I don't know whether this "something" Is hers or not,
But as people say it's a curse so it's better to get her away from that.
Desire for honor and her self esteem is a thirst.
Which she doesn't want to let go not even once.
She's even so inobedient that barely obeys her guardians.
And so impolite that always desperated to make her own guidelines.
Which she gives priority more than geeta hymns.
She thinks she's so versatile, I need to laugh on her dumb mind,
Cause just because she knows how to drive
(Even Not Men).
She can't think like a blind.
As if she learns how to make up mind to give a second chance to imposters
Or as if she learns to chastise her molesters.
People blame me for her mischievous impure deeds.
But how can I tell them neither she's me nor I'm she.
She's just a skin inside me, a skin made up of fat.
Although deposited by aftermath of a tragedy which started right after my birth.
#review #rks #poetry
Underneath my skin.. There resides a bloody sorceress,
she knows how to trick me as well as others.
Her soul is greedy agonizing for something that's not hers.
I don't know whether this "something" Is hers or not,
But as people say it's a curse so it's better to get her away from that.
Desire for honor and her self esteem is a thirst.
Which she doesn't want to let go not even once.
She's even so inobedient that barely obeys her guardians.
And so impolite that always desperated to make her own guidelines.
Which she gives priority more than geeta hymns.
She thinks she's so versatile, I need to laugh on her dumb mind,
Cause just because she knows how to drive
(Even Not Men).
She can't think like a blind.
As if she learns how to make up mind to give a second chance to imposters
Or as if she learns to chastise her molesters.
People blame me for her mischievous impure deeds.
But how can I tell them neither she's me nor I'm she.
She's just a skin inside me, a skin made up of fat.
Although deposited by aftermath of a tragedy which started right after my birth.
#review #rks #poetry
If u think that I was wrong
Darling if u think that I was wrong,
If u think that your heart isn't the place where I belong,
Clearly our bond tended to break when it wasn't that strong,
Maybe our love wasn't meant to last long.
If u think that I was wrong,
I won't stay here anymore,
Simply I'd walk away,
While u close the door.
If u think that I was wrong,
Then I'm ready to apologise,
It's upto u whether u forgive me,
Or give me a reason to further traumatize.
You'd stay reluctant on the fact that I was wrong,
When deep inside u know that u were wrong too,
But your ego was smth that came in between,
That's why now you're in a condition in which u should've never been.
#review #San #poetry
Darling if u think that I was wrong,
If u think that your heart isn't the place where I belong,
Clearly our bond tended to break when it wasn't that strong,
Maybe our love wasn't meant to last long.
If u think that I was wrong,
I won't stay here anymore,
Simply I'd walk away,
While u close the door.
If u think that I was wrong,
Then I'm ready to apologise,
It's upto u whether u forgive me,
Or give me a reason to further traumatize.
You'd stay reluctant on the fact that I was wrong,
When deep inside u know that u were wrong too,
But your ego was smth that came in between,
That's why now you're in a condition in which u should've never been.
#review #San #poetry
#review #poetry Mansi iwritesometimes :)
Sometimes I'd sit in silence,
And wonder if I'm being real,
Are my feet tied to ground,
Or Am I trapped by my fear?
Do I really fear losing you?,
Or is it all inside my head,
Or Am I haunted by the same monsters,
Which once lived beneath my bed
The longing feels like forever,
It doesn't let me get through.
But I know If you are happy,
Then I'll be happy too
They say this pretty thing is called LOVE,
And for it I'll have to stay tough,
But you can't feel my legs melting,
You haven't been there for long enough
Whenever you are out of my sight,
Why do I feel like crying?
Is it okay to feel all this,
Or maybe I'm slowly dying.
Why did you pour empty words to drink,
When you had planned to leave too soon,
And only wanted to know me,
When the sky was bright and the moon was full
But I will never blame you,
For the tear stains on my floor,
As I was the one who thought,
A person owes me to be so much more !
Sometimes I'd sit in silence,
And wonder if I'm being real,
Are my feet tied to ground,
Or Am I trapped by my fear?
Do I really fear losing you?,
Or is it all inside my head,
Or Am I haunted by the same monsters,
Which once lived beneath my bed
The longing feels like forever,
It doesn't let me get through.
But I know If you are happy,
Then I'll be happy too
They say this pretty thing is called LOVE,
And for it I'll have to stay tough,
But you can't feel my legs melting,
You haven't been there for long enough
Whenever you are out of my sight,
Why do I feel like crying?
Is it okay to feel all this,
Or maybe I'm slowly dying.
Why did you pour empty words to drink,
When you had planned to leave too soon,
And only wanted to know me,
When the sky was bright and the moon was full
But I will never blame you,
For the tear stains on my floor,
As I was the one who thought,
A person owes me to be so much more !
~iwritesometimes | mans *-*Auther
PA
Im done
im done trying to please everyone
becuz im losing myself
i hate the way people push you into being someone else
i used to love being myself now i hate being myself
people are breaking me down
then they don't understand why i have 6 ft walls around me
so im asking you to stop breaking me down
im done with you
stop im done
#review #iam
PA
Im done
im done trying to please everyone
becuz im losing myself
i hate the way people push you into being someone else
i used to love being myself now i hate being myself
people are breaking me down
then they don't understand why i have 6 ft walls around me
so im asking you to stop breaking me down
im done with you
stop im done
#review #iam
All I want is nothing more
To find myself not breaking down
On the bathroom floor.
Cause if i could know what's really wrong
I would have found a way out I'm sure.
When u said you'll be my side.
My mind assumed it's all a lie.
I'm sorry I don't like ppl getting tied
The part of me that trusts has died
I lay in bed awake all night,
Feeling the chaos covering me from the all the sides
Wondering if things would ever be alright.
But if you loved me
I'm setting you free
From this mess
Even if u disagree.
All I want is
And all I need is
To find my lost self
To find my lost self
I'm sorry--
You gave all of you to me,
Became the reason for all my glee.
You held my hands
And showed me places
That holds the beauty
One can't unsee.
So when I feel my feelings running dry
I stand and stare at the sky
Counting stars or watch birds fly
And watch the horizon until I cry.
And then when the world goes by
I sit in a corner thinking who am i
I don't know what's happening
And what am I seeking
Give me the sunshine
that lights up my soul please.
All I want is
And all I need is
To find my lost self
To find my lost self.
©Warisha
#review #iam
To find myself not breaking down
On the bathroom floor.
Cause if i could know what's really wrong
I would have found a way out I'm sure.
When u said you'll be my side.
My mind assumed it's all a lie.
I'm sorry I don't like ppl getting tied
The part of me that trusts has died
I lay in bed awake all night,
Feeling the chaos covering me from the all the sides
Wondering if things would ever be alright.
But if you loved me
I'm setting you free
From this mess
Even if u disagree.
All I want is
And all I need is
To find my lost self
To find my lost self
I'm sorry--
You gave all of you to me,
Became the reason for all my glee.
You held my hands
And showed me places
That holds the beauty
One can't unsee.
So when I feel my feelings running dry
I stand and stare at the sky
Counting stars or watch birds fly
And watch the horizon until I cry.
And then when the world goes by
I sit in a corner thinking who am i
I don't know what's happening
And what am I seeking
Give me the sunshine
that lights up my soul please.
All I want is
And all I need is
To find my lost self
To find my lost self.
©Warisha
#review #iam
All I want is nothing more
To find myself not breaking down
On the bathroom floor.
Cause if i could know what's really wrong
I would have found a way out I'm sure.
When u said you'll be my side.
My mind assumed it's all a lie.
I'm sorry I don't like ppl getting tied
The part of me that trusts has died
I lay in bed awake all night,
Feeling the chaos covering me from the all the sides
Wondering if things would ever be alright.
But if you loved me
I'm setting you free
From this mess
Even if u disagree.
All I want is
And all I need is
To find my lost self
To find my lost self
I'm sorry--
You gave all of you to me,
Became the reason for all my glee.
You held my hands
And showed me places
That holds the beauty
One can't unsee.
So when I feel my feelings running dry
I stand and stare at the sky
Counting stars or watch birds fly
And watch the horizon until I cry.
And then when the world goes by
I sit in a corner thinking who am i
I don't know what's happening
And what am I seeking
Give me the sunshine
that lights up my soul please.
All I want is
And all I need is
To find my lost self
To find my lost self.
©Warisha
#review #iam
To find myself not breaking down
On the bathroom floor.
Cause if i could know what's really wrong
I would have found a way out I'm sure.
When u said you'll be my side.
My mind assumed it's all a lie.
I'm sorry I don't like ppl getting tied
The part of me that trusts has died
I lay in bed awake all night,
Feeling the chaos covering me from the all the sides
Wondering if things would ever be alright.
But if you loved me
I'm setting you free
From this mess
Even if u disagree.
All I want is
And all I need is
To find my lost self
To find my lost self
I'm sorry--
You gave all of you to me,
Became the reason for all my glee.
You held my hands
And showed me places
That holds the beauty
One can't unsee.
So when I feel my feelings running dry
I stand and stare at the sky
Counting stars or watch birds fly
And watch the horizon until I cry.
And then when the world goes by
I sit in a corner thinking who am i
I don't know what's happening
And what am I seeking
Give me the sunshine
that lights up my soul please.
All I want is
And all I need is
To find my lost self
To find my lost self.
©Warisha
#review #iam
Prayer Of Life
Never Recited
Died On The Lips Of Time Long Ago
Mercy upon the Souls of Accumulators,
Curse upon the Shield of Distractors,
Hope for the Dawn of the Day,
For which tons of nights went empty,
Along with their Black Fate Sky Moon,
And many many Prayers for the day,
When You may become what you said yesterday for your Tomorrow,
And with the recitation of this prayer's verse 13,
The eternal effect shall prevail upon you,
Upon the inner darkness of your deranged soul forever & Ever……
May & May…….
Execution Noted…..
Verse Recited…….
Effect transferred into Subject Soul……
Wait for What will happen??????
#review #Iam
@Hazelwrites
Never Recited
Died On The Lips Of Time Long Ago
Mercy upon the Souls of Accumulators,
Curse upon the Shield of Distractors,
Hope for the Dawn of the Day,
For which tons of nights went empty,
Along with their Black Fate Sky Moon,
And many many Prayers for the day,
When You may become what you said yesterday for your Tomorrow,
And with the recitation of this prayer's verse 13,
The eternal effect shall prevail upon you,
Upon the inner darkness of your deranged soul forever & Ever……
May & May…….
Execution Noted…..
Verse Recited…….
Effect transferred into Subject Soul……
Wait for What will happen??????
#review #Iam
@Hazelwrites
Never give in
I didn't sleep for nights,
I leapt over all heights.
Never gave in;I wrote down my own fate,
Never let my morale to abate.
Underneath my steps where the dangers stood,
Took me out from my comfort zone for good.
I worked hard day in and day out,
In order to make it count.
There were instances where I was about to stumble,
Sturdily I walked,never let my morale to crumble.
The path was misty;visibility ahead wasn't quite clear,
Fiercely determined I was,through all the odds was able to steer.
They were jealous of me,they tried to block my way,
But I kept myself strong and made it to the top one day.
#review #San #poetry
I didn't sleep for nights,
I leapt over all heights.
Never gave in;I wrote down my own fate,
Never let my morale to abate.
Underneath my steps where the dangers stood,
Took me out from my comfort zone for good.
I worked hard day in and day out,
In order to make it count.
There were instances where I was about to stumble,
Sturdily I walked,never let my morale to crumble.
The path was misty;visibility ahead wasn't quite clear,
Fiercely determined I was,through all the odds was able to steer.
They were jealous of me,they tried to block my way,
But I kept myself strong and made it to the top one day.
#review #San #poetry
If u think that I was wrong
Darling if u think that I was wrong,
If u think that your heart isn't the place where I belong,
Clearly our bond tended to break when it wasn't that strong,
Maybe our love wasn't meant to last long.
If u think that I was wrong,
I won't stay here anymore,
Simply I'd walk away,
While u close the door.
If u think that I was wrong,
Then I'm ready to apologise,
It's upto u whether u forgive me,
Or give me a reason to further traumatize.
You'd stay reluctant on the fact that I was wrong,
When deep inside u know that u were wrong too,
But your ego was smth that came in between,
That's why our relationship is in a situation now where it should've never been.
#review #San #poetry
Darling if u think that I was wrong,
If u think that your heart isn't the place where I belong,
Clearly our bond tended to break when it wasn't that strong,
Maybe our love wasn't meant to last long.
If u think that I was wrong,
I won't stay here anymore,
Simply I'd walk away,
While u close the door.
If u think that I was wrong,
Then I'm ready to apologise,
It's upto u whether u forgive me,
Or give me a reason to further traumatize.
You'd stay reluctant on the fact that I was wrong,
When deep inside u know that u were wrong too,
But your ego was smth that came in between,
That's why our relationship is in a situation now where it should've never been.
#review #San #poetry
#Iam
Prayer Of Life
Never Recited
Died On The Lips Of Time Long Ago
Mercy upon the Soul of Accumulators,
Curse upon the Shield of Distractors,
Hope for the Dawn of the Day,
For which tons of nights went empty,
Along with their Black Fate Sky Moon,
And many many Prayers for the day,
When You may become what you said yesterday for your Tomorrow,
And with the recitation of this prayer's verse,
The eternal effect of those verse shall prevail upon you,
Upon the inner darkness of your deranged soul forever & Ever.....
May & May…….
Execution Noted…..
Verse Recited…….
Effect transferred into Subject Soul……
Wait for What happens??????
#review
Prayer Of Life
Never Recited
Died On The Lips Of Time Long Ago
Mercy upon the Soul of Accumulators,
Curse upon the Shield of Distractors,
Hope for the Dawn of the Day,
For which tons of nights went empty,
Along with their Black Fate Sky Moon,
And many many Prayers for the day,
When You may become what you said yesterday for your Tomorrow,
And with the recitation of this prayer's verse,
The eternal effect of those verse shall prevail upon you,
Upon the inner darkness of your deranged soul forever & Ever.....
May & May…….
Execution Noted…..
Verse Recited…….
Effect transferred into Subject Soul……
Wait for What happens??????
#review
[Untitled]
I was broken.
I thought you cared.
I don't know where I'd be
If you were still here.
When you walked out
It was all clear as day.
What I'm trying to say
is I grew and nurtured off your love turned to hate.
There's no point in holding on to the past.
Holding on to a broken heart.
When I can walk without a weight.
When I can walk free and learn to love myself.
#review #salonikulkarni
I was broken.
I thought you cared.
I don't know where I'd be
If you were still here.
When you walked out
It was all clear as day.
What I'm trying to say
is I grew and nurtured off your love turned to hate.
There's no point in holding on to the past.
Holding on to a broken heart.
When I can walk without a weight.
When I can walk free and learn to love myself.
#review #salonikulkarni
You left first
Then I left
Still my night tastes like blood
That I shed all along
Turning my dreams into nightmare
You'll never know
Or maybe you're aware
You never really held me
You never were really there
You left only scars on the walls of my heart
You kept breaking me until I fell apart
With that smirk on your face
You burnt my home
It was only me
All alone
Entangled in my own thoughts
No shoulder to lean on
Nobody to count on
All alone drenched in forlorn.
#elegy
#review
My first poetry ... Here in! :)
Then I left
Still my night tastes like blood
That I shed all along
Turning my dreams into nightmare
You'll never know
Or maybe you're aware
You never really held me
You never were really there
You left only scars on the walls of my heart
You kept breaking me until I fell apart
With that smirk on your face
You burnt my home
It was only me
All alone
Entangled in my own thoughts
No shoulder to lean on
Nobody to count on
All alone drenched in forlorn.
#elegy
#review
My first poetry ... Here in! :)
[Untitled]
I was broken.
I thought you cared.
I don't know where I'd be
If you were still here.
When you walked out
It was all clear as day.
What I'm trying to say
is I grew and nurtured off your love turned to hate.
There's no point in holding on to the past.
Holding on to a broken heart.
When I can walk without a weight.
When I can walk free and learn to love myself.
#review #salonikulkarni #poetry
I was broken.
I thought you cared.
I don't know where I'd be
If you were still here.
When you walked out
It was all clear as day.
What I'm trying to say
is I grew and nurtured off your love turned to hate.
There's no point in holding on to the past.
Holding on to a broken heart.
When I can walk without a weight.
When I can walk free and learn to love myself.
#review #salonikulkarni #poetry