It's 4am-

It's so dark and lonely
And my room feels so small
It's 4 am I try to escape from thoughts
But there is nothing left at all

All the good things I think about
And the safe places I go around
They all are filled with you now
And now I'm sleeping on the cold ground

My warm blanket suffocates
And the pillows are wet from crying
The cold floor let me feel alive
But it still feels like I'm dying

I'm wearing your sweatshirt
And now using your teddy as a pillow
Your thoughts are strong wind
And my heart bend like a Willow

There is too much to say
And too much to talk about
But it's all echoing in my head
And I'm on the floor in my close room and nowhere to shout.
#review #vinash

Lights.......all around me.
Blue, green, yellow.....all sort of lights.
So bright that they make me blind.
They befool me into some kind of happiness.
They Make the world..........oh so luminous.
A place so adorable just behind me.
That's a temple........now i see.
The festival's gone... and so the lights will.
Once again dark.......dark enough, so to kill.
They are a delusion, they remain so.
I've felt it all my life, again i go.
Feel caged.......no where my soul is.....
M stuck........ wanna role the dices.
Torn into pieces....... can't fine one
Where did they go, leaving me alone.
My senses........
I feel numb, don't feel nothing at all.
It's frozen out here.... waitin for the autumn fall.
Wanna shed some tears.......wanna shed some pains spring would come to hold my mains.
Coz im drained......im tired.......im not me.
Where's my home.......i can't see......
........Lights all around me.
Take me to myself........
Take me to my senses......
My home.......my soul.

29.10.19
#review #poetry

#yourreview
It's quite straightforward, but isn't it the simplest of the things that makes us feel the most? The most of Everything.
Yes. I liked it...but couldn't connect to it.
It's just me, I guess.

Demon

Putting the pieces back to life
I stumbled on another piece of lie.
While drawing the pictures for you,
I witnessed another demon just in sight.

A queen or a demon?
You gave me memories that torments.
To wonder if you're still human,
Is the shame I have to live by.

To change you might not be easy;
Since you're the demon I help created.
I want it to stop so badly
And I'll pierce my heart if ever needed.
💔

#review #poem #Oba

Old work

When you are into someone--
You don't count the falling leaves--
Whether gold, red or brown
Your heart comes at a standstill--
In the calm brush of a breeze--
With the fragrance of love--
That shows the promised land of the Autumn

#review #Sbh

Slumber land lacking sleep,
Retina dull will flashes bright in eyes deep

Pricking pain now going numb,
Perpetual peace in my head burning fumes, liting scum

Colossal tornado heading towards the chest so quiet,
Charcoal lungs consuming crisp air as a sweet delight

Filtered kidney now shrinking tight,
Filthy bones building up calcium height

Is it a dead soul, body alive?
Or a body dead, soul alive?

#review
#sans

Perfect

You're the absolute perfection with much to commend,
With utterly no flaws in u there's nothing to amend.
I'd hand over the world my resignation,
Staying in your arms would be my only designation.

That angelic beauty,that great charm to which no one could resist,
Such the addiction which continues to exist.
The rare gem which only few deserved,
Lucky enough to have got it which needs to be preserved.

Love wasn't my thing until I found u and started it to embrace,
You're the one on whom I could rely upon for solace.
Wish to have u along with me in my every single birth,
To me such is your worth.
Wish to give u happiness of my part,
Not possible to stay even for a second from u apart.
#review #poetry #San

Hopes are fading
Snow has frozen the rose
The warmth that I keep under the root--
May go deep--
As the winter grows--

Back to the spring of Feb--
Shining red-clad from head to toe;
My eyes went blank--
But I never fell with leaves--
though I didn't count the rest--

Summer was sweet;
Still painted in red
Budding warmth;
Brightened rose
What else could I wish for?

Wish I could dig deep--
At least up to six feet--
Shivering heart; no clothes
Wish I could see again--
Under the November rain--
The blooming rose

#review #Sbh

Title: Redundant/Severance


I was walking away
From what I thought was redundant
But as I strolled farther,
I realised—
Redundancy is temporary
But severance, not.

—RK

#review
#poetry
#rk

(uploading again cuz didn't get many reviews)

You pursue me as your final destiny
A qualification that I am to you, you certify me , a Lauren maybe gold

A small world that you seek within
A pity on how you can't witness wonders and I see

How obsessed are you and how Cascade is my fluid brain , for your obsession being just an acrylic little rock to it , me poring rain

I deviate the 'I' from you,
A boomerang  , a pendulum for you, it bounces back

A come and go you think the 'I' is,
A 'stay' you  demand for it

I wish for you a vision
I wish for you a life

#review

I wish we could talk
All about the stuff and lores
Though you had less
I had many more
It would have been nice
I would keep talking
You keep on listening
Though being decietful
But i would have loved that
To keep you interested
To make you laugh
Along with playing mine...
I could also play your part
I wish you had time
To listen all that...
But since you got none
The convos we had are long forgone

#review
#poetry
#ocean

If we ever meet in the woods,
We will write fantasies galore,
Of how I sang to the breezes of the sky,
While your soul danced on the forest floor!

~iwritesometimes

#review
#poem
#iwritesometimes

EVER MET A STRANGER

Ever met a stranger
That made you feel so good
Happiness glowed on your face
Laws of chemistry relatively
Shown as the two of you bond
Like collective solid electrons

Ever met a stranger
You could lose your morals for
I kissed him
Or I think I did
Held his hand till morning
Took his number and promised
To never forget

But then he never replied
As I’m sitting here falling
For him he is out there
Forgetting me

#Nosii
#review

Title : Picture perfect view
Sit back on this soft and comfy ground,
Filled with the scents of flowers all around,
And the birds singing producing a melodious sound.

With the gust of breezes the daffodils waving high,
The sun shining brightly in the clear blue sky,
And a crystal clear river running by,
Appearing & hiding behind the rocks rabbits so shy.

Mountains that looks beautiful being covered with snow,
As we kiss slow while sitting underneath the mistletoe.
When a colourful butterfly comes & sits on your finger tip,
Smile wide as I say cheese to click a perfect pic.
#review #poetry #San

I am hungry for some food,
Something which I can chew,
With salts and sugar,
I thought I could feed my hunger,
Oh how wrong was I,
I am hungry for some food.

So I go to my first neighbor,
Ask some of theirs and
Begging and pleading
But I get just a little more
Not as much as could fill my stomach,
And then Get shoo’ed off.

Then I go to my third neighbor....

#review

Hunt me down--
With the sharp curve
of your soul
Let me be the smell of your prey--
It's the only fragrance of my love

#review #Sbh

Guilty Conscious


It haunts you about the past
About the happiness that didn't even last
About the happiness that was obtained
Through methods wrong and aghast

The deed is done
But this feeling will never end,
At the back of your mind
It will ever fend

Like stays on the early morning grass
A drop of dew
it'll stay
And that's guilty conscious for you

#poetry
#review
#rk

Serenity

I can hear the sound of the sea
The voice of the skimmers,
Down by the empty shore
Along the wave that shivers,
Among the rare butterflies
The feeling of belonging,
With the sweet taste of berries
With the lovely book I'm reading,
Wind that keeps on getting cold
sky that keeps on getting wide,
I'm starting to feel it here
Even tho it's in my mind,
The joy of the singing birds
silence haunting the city
I want to feel It all, 'till eternity.
Serenity.

#review

Guilty Conscience


It haunts you about the past
About the happiness that didn't even last
About the happiness that was obtained
Through methods wrong and aghast

The deed is done
But this feeling will never end,
At the back of your mind
It will ever fend

Like stays on the early morning grass
A drop of dew
it'll stay
And that's guilty conscious for you

#review
#rk
#poetry

Guilty Conscience


It haunts you about the past
About the happiness that didn't even last
About the happiness that was obtained
Through methods wrong and aghast

The deed is done
But this feeling will never end,
At the back of your mind
It will ever fend

Like stays on the early morning grass
A drop of dew
it'll stay
And that's guilty conscious for you

#review
#rk
#poetry

#review #asher

Title : The Diamond Devotion

I am looking for that perfect love story.

A love story between two beloveds in which the bond of trust lasted for atleast two decades.

The two decades where the undivided passion for each other was alive every moment.

Where these two love birds never doubted the disappearance of this wholehearted ardour in their other half for even a second, because they were certain, that it will stay.

A bond in which both had common interests that allowed them to spend good times together.

Where it was not just about internal love, but external circumstances were conducive for them as well.

Where financial, family, social or political blockades did not separate them from each other.


But I think such love stories can only be found in heaven.

Because the circumstances in hell, they always separate two sweethearts from each other.