Love..❤️

Are u the one who made my feelings grow..
When is see you I start to lose control..❤️

My heart starts beating faster..
When my love arises..❤️

Those feelings who are sleeping..
Open their eyes only for you..❤️

My heart saying..
To keep you always in front of me..❤️

Is it the love, everyone afraids of..
Or the love iam blessed of..❤️


#Trisha
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#poetry

We Both Are Liars

Fell in love like the rain
Before my mind came to sense,
That was hardest thing to tell you
But you made me fly when said "I love you too".
One meter was too far then
When youthful love was in our vain.

Spring in life never stay longer
Because this is reality not Disney, O' my lover.
Things got complicated
And lead to a dead end,
"This is over forever," we told
But never meant the same.

This feeling we bear
Is dragging us to deeper,
Fighting hard to hide it
Still love is showing its cover
I know this isn't fair
Because we both are liars...

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#review #LucianadeLemos #poetry

WE ARE LOSING THE GAME

An invisible critter
is startling people everywhere.
It arose from nowhere
and carries on challenging
the world of science.

Alongside this riddle,
there is another dare.
Dealing with the gruff change
in life rhythm as the future
becomes a huge question mark.

While the critter scatters
a fraught dubious scenario
scares weakened people
struggling against the unknown
and fighting to stay alive.

Rulers opt for their self-preservation in disregard of people insofar they act with no shame,
unabashedly, in order to keep the power
and preserve shady deals
at any cost even massive death.

The lack of leadership committed to
the right to life is propelling the critter
to seize power, to control
the game, letting people adrift,
forsaken in their own luck.

The Rim
#Abhijit #review

It is the rim
It may overflow
It’s at the bottom edges of my eyes
And if it falls it may glow.

I never thought I will leave you
I thought you would cry
I believed you to be my Mud house
But you were just a sand castle which would vanish as the waves goes by

Now turning towards the past, I see
What a fool was I
For I was the one to think that unsolicited love would be enough
But it occurred to me now that even your beautiful eyes were a bluff.

Why you kept your nature in clandestine?
Why did you even care?
I may forgive you but never forget
Because for me it was never fair

Now drops are flowing from my eyes
But the pain is beyond compare
The dam has broken, the flood has started
I can’t stop it anymore. My heart is impaired.

Fake love..💔

So afraid to love anyone again..
With a face expressing all in vain..😔

Feeling bad for my own feelings..
With a sad and broken heart..💔

Unable to understand anything..
Not able to share how iam feeling.😣

Why played with until I broke..
And later left me and forgotten..😥

My love still so kind..
Waiting for you to say it's all lie..😢

But the bitter truth never changed..
Your fake love is more bitter than any thing else..😒

May this day will never repair..
In any other life..😖

I wish no one will suffer..
With the curse of fake love like mine..🥺

#Trisha
#poetry
#review

Oh, there were many before you,
Nothings special about you,
Apart from the day you rejected me.
Then I found another,
The count keeps getting bigger,
Why do you want to relive me!
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The Rising Dead

The ashes of the rising dead
Never seem to sway
From the wind that clears all the trace
Of the cynical and the dispondent.
Coz the rising dead isn’t a waste
It’s the ramification of the rampant taste
No doubt it was more than just a residue
Yet it trashed all its virtues
To show the ignoring and the one who
Showed it the living death
That it never deserved to pursue
It now had no bounds
From the world that ironically
So creepy that sounds
It now had a new recognition of own
Which the people once sealed
But now none can behead it
Coz it was like a dragon in the tomb
You too remember you died fella
None can knock you down to your legs
Until you allow them to
Coz the graveyard’s just place
Of your beloved one’s graves
The one that broke your heart
Was now buried away
You have no one to live for and no one to die
Coz for you to love someone
It may take a seven night’s birth
So get up for yourself
And for the ones not in the grave
Coz NOW you are captain of your soul
And the master of your fate, mate.
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Recollections!
Life is like a caravan
It ceases at numerous destinations
At every destination, we convene strangers
They evolve from strangers to pals
Pals to closed ones,
From a weak bonding to a vital one
Every eternity with them evolves a remembrance
We move on, vitality stirs on
Some remain in vitality,
Some say goodbye
Only recollections persist,
Some good memories,
Some awful memories,
Good memories carve us smile,
Good memories compel us to realize to go back,
Yearning to go behind and dwell again,
Bad remembrances bestowing courage,
Bad recalls earning us robust,
I just hope to go back,
Dwell life again,
The reality is it's yore now...
#poetry #review #ae

Life is a doomed endeavor,
Whoever undertakes it
Looks for meaning and what not,
A few pierce into the kernel ,
To find something they don’t Need.
Some others hesitate to bite into it.
The joyful ones are those who have
Heard let it be.
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It was love at first sight
#Abhijit #review

She was a flower of spring, or that is what I thought
Her smiling face
Her dazzling gaze
Just as I dreamt of

Every day I watched her from the corner seat of our class
What a surreal experience it was,
A tinkling sensation, a drop of anxiety.
I was a trouble for myself and she was the cause.

I could never talk to her
I could never see myself worthy
She was not from this world
She was Heavenly

She was like a Diamond,
Her beauty admired by many but at last it sits at the crown
She was like the reflection of moon on the midnight lake
Lake in which I was ready to drown

It was love at first sight

I am burning,
Or should I say hotter.
I am shinning,
Or should I say brighter.
I am loud,
Or should I say thurder.
I am repenting,
That's because am a sinner.
I am introducing me,
Am no longer an imposter.
#samir #review

I am burning,
Or should I say hotter.
I am shinning,
Or should I say brighter.
I am loud,
Or should I say thurder.
I am repenting,
That's because am a sinner.
I am introducing me,
Am no longer an imposter.
#samir

Life
#Abhijit #review

Hindering through the forest
Talking to the trees
I wonder what life would be
To encounter it as it is
Without our fallacies

Winds whistling through my ears
Transpiring through my nerves
Bestowing my brain with the music of antiquity
Giving my life a sense of ambiguity
What a feeling it was!

Not everlasting but still so alluring
The miracle that is life
Enjoy it till it last
Till the last bite

Na jane kyu khayal aa rahe tum ko dekh kar bus yuhi soche ja rahe hai ..Dekha tha isi jagah tum ko bus ab dekhte ja rahe hai .Na jane tume pata hai ki nahi lekin hum to tumhare diwane hote ja rahe hai .Intazar hai bus us ghadi ka jab tujhe pata chale . Tumhari vo katilana najre kar rhhi hai mujhe ghayal kya kahu tumhare baree tum ho royal .Bus yuhi soch raha hu tumhare bare me is liya likh diya hai poem😊
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Sinner in the darkness
Liar In the church
Dead man’s silence
The blind man’s search
Teardrop Falling
Memory recalling
Ghost in your dreams
And your secret recordings
Patch over holes
In my weakened heart
Which angels hold
And the devils pull apart
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Friend zone

Maybe I'd never be able to express u my feelings oh baby
I know it's hard but tryin' hard to make u mine
Can't express that how much I love u in a single line
Can't afford to give up on ya cuz you're super valuable baby

I hesitate to say what's in my heart
Cuz I fear you'd walk away
Take it easy on me darling don't go hard
I've been into u since the very first day

Some words are better unspoken
Bonds can never be mended once broken
So I rather prefer not to say
Cuz I don't want u to walk away

To walk away through the doors of my heart
And away from my eyes
Rips me apart
Just the mere thought of u making the last goodbyes

I wanna come out from the friend zone,
You're the queen of my throne.
Hand u over the crown,
The day you're down.
💝🧚

#review #San

Friend zone

Maybe I'd never be able to express u my feelings oh baby,
I know it's hard but tryin' hard to make u mine,
Can't express that how much I love u in a single line,
Can't afford to give up on ya cuz you're super valuable baby.

I hesitate to say what's in my heart,
Cuz I fear you'd walk away,
Take it easy on me darling don't go hard,
I've been into u since the very first day.

Some words are better unspoken,
Bonds can never be mended once broken.
So I rather prefer not to say,
Cuz I don't want u to walk away.

To walk away through the doors of my heart,
And away from my eyes,
Rips me apart,
Just the mere thought of u making the last goodbyes.

I wanna come out from the friend zone,
You're the queen of my throne.
Hand u over the crown,
The day you're down.
💝🧚

#review #San

#review #iwritesometimes #poetry

" Lily Seeds "

I saw tear stains in your room,
So I planted lily seeds on your floor,
Now when you cry the flowers all bloom,
and remind you, you're worth so much more.

~iwritesometimes

My first kiss
#Abhijit #review

The clouds were heavy and grey
Revealing the silver lining as they sway
Tiny little drops started to pour
Then came the heavy drops and the thunder clouds roar.

Everyone was running for a cover
Except the two of us enjoying the rain
Something got me curious however
It was her lips in particular

After the rain we sat down
Her hair wet, her eyes brown
We were at the bridge alongside a bus stop
She noticed me gazing at her and my heart popped

We were alone,
Only the river below and crickets surround
Sun was setting giving her an orange tinge
Me watching in disdain tried to turn around

Then her hand touched my arms
A shiver went through my spine,
She looked at me and I looked at her
Our gaze was intertwined

I kept my hand around her neck touching her wet hair
She closed her eyes; I brought her close
Then our lips were a pair

It was my first kiss

#habash #review

But assuefaction minorates atrocities (as Tully saith of his darling Stoics) and Hamlet his father showeth the prince no blister of combustion.