Hi everybody! I think I have just written my first HAIKU. If anyone is familiar with this kind of poem, please let me know if am I in the right way. Thanks in advance.

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The dawn is quiet.
Waken from a peaceful sleep,
energy springs up.

Coffee in the cup.
A fresh waft scent in the air.
A bright sunny day.

Excited to go
out for a leisurely stroll
along the seaside.

Twilight, when the day
and night comes into balance.
Light has gone away.

At night, time to stop,
to rest and regenerate.
Withdraw from duties.

Midnight, the first breath
of the new day arises
into full darkness.

Like that, life is now
renewed continuously
every single day.

Life is ample of up-downs,
Life is an ambivalence
Ample of prosperity,
Ample of darkness,
Sometimes you languish,
Sometimes you surge,
Eternity is trickling,
Eternity donot halt for everyone,
Dwell every moment of vitality,
Everyone accomplishes a misstep,
Comprehend from oversights,
Let go of the yore,
Render the existing generously,
Discover trivial prosperity,
Later you will recollect every eternity,
Donot know what destiny wields?
Donot know what will transpire forthwith and furthermore?
Vitality is unpredictable,
Just live every moment,
Later you donot regret,
Eliminate toxicity from your spirit,
Be robust to face everything,
Value folk those who virtue you,
Be sure to discern between phony and genuine,
Be sure to discern tenderness and lust,
You may have numerous routes to seize,
Prefer one wisely,
Oversee vitality without remorses,
Grudge and hatred destroy folk,
Donot let ego curb your existence,
One day everyone will perish,
One day you will expire,
Life is speculative!
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The Seven layered gown

Out of the bohemian Volkswagen
Popped a stage with ethnic drapes
The far-famed six-layered gown
Exhibits, at a 40 bucks ticket rate

Countless crowded in
The Magnum opus begins

Curtains open

The cosmetic wearer with bleached skin
Was going to lift each layer in every five spins

The fore reminded me of the tucked-in floral bedsheets

5 fast spins

Second had white flamingos perished from the hunger of crustaceans

5 faster spins

Third spun like a motion-picture viewed through a kinetoscope

5 faster spins

Fourth had koi carps dancing in the great waves off Kanagawa

5 faster spins

Fifth premiered an ancient epic that my parents always wanted to impart

5 fastest spins

The hypnotic sixth, gleaming, binding all the audience in a turquoise dream

But,
In this turquoise dream, right when I was about to live an eternal phantasy
A thought of that tragical face, broke it all with an overwhelming ecstasy

I saw

Below the wizardly layers, from her chest to her hips
A pattern of bleeding whip marks and wolf rips

Curtains closed

I asked the ticket collector about the understated seventh layer she wore
He grinned and said, "gimme twenty-ten-five, 35 bucks
More."
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Let me in

Oh u girl,u so pretty & sweet
You've been running in my head day & night,
You've been driving me insane,
You're not going out of my brain.
I've been trying hard to figure out what makes u so unique,
Trying hard to figure out what caused my silent feelings to speak.
The way u walk takes my breath away,
The way u smile,the way u look at me makes me feel to die for u for yet another day

Just like a ray of hope u came in,
I try hard not to but infront of your
grandeur I end up giving in.
Let me leave an impression of mine over your heart,
Which u wouldn't be able to erase even if u try hard.

It's not about losing it's not about winning
It's not about repenting it's not about sinning.
Through the narrow cracks in your heart just let me in
That day I'd enclose u in me from within.

Let me in,let me in.....


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DREAM AND BE HAPPY

I woke up swiftly,
soaking wet, breathing shortly,
bewildered and lost.

A mix of dream and
reality not yet clear.
It makes me wonder.

Life can be taken
from us at any moment.
I'm indeed frightened.

Should I dread it or
use it to motivate me?
Do I have a choice?

I really think
that here and now is the time
to do and be good.

To live is to dream
one dream after another.
All an illusion.

Only the value
given to every minute
counts as happiness.

I have to feel your voice;😊
I have to feel your tender touch;🙂
no other could take your place;
you're it; I have no choice🥰

WANTS to feel the arctic ice🥶
with you in my arms with your lips to taste;hoddles. everything is like magical spice👩‍❤️‍💋‍👨
Ohh your dance dance moves,
Enough to drive me crazy,😍
This chilled weather
Wants us something to do cozy.☺️

Wants to feel the heat of bonfire🔥
with me fondling you,
you fondling me❤️
Such a fire,
You my desire,
Your each sight
Electryfying like a wire.

#rg ❤️
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COURAGE

Why has the world become so ruthless
Have humans lost all humanity and morals?
Why can’t I be safe here, O mother Earth
Do daughters have no right to be

I am afraid to live now
I am afraid to love
I am afraid to trust,
and live independently

My soul cries, for each of us who was
ripped and raped and then blamed
Who was cursed for being brave
Crushed and made a slave
Who was punished for being beautiful
Shamed for being dutiful
Who was acid-attacked for denying
and raped when she was flying

By the hands of those monsters
who could not control their egos
and their hormones
What was our fault we appeal
upon whom the inhuman act was done

My soul reasons today
Does goodness at all exist?
Because in this era of ‘Kalyug’
Evil triumphs over truth
Inhumanity rules over the brainless humans

Don’t we have the right to live
Free of the fear of being ripped and raped
Free of the fear of being loved then cheated
Free of the fear of being attacked and shot, just because we denied
Free of the fear of being cursed and shamed, for being ‘the ME’ I am

How is it Sita and Draupadi’s fault?
It was Ravana who kidnapped her
and people who blamed her
It was the Kauravs who humiliated her
and Pandavs who stood silent

My soul shrinks when I realise
I’ve taken birth in a world
Where women are maltreated, cursed and blamed
Where men are free of all crimes they do
And people live in terror, and finally are buried in graves


©_wild_pen_

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Every writer was once

a child who knows nothing about grammar who

knows nothing about boundaries but he knows how to translate his feelings, his emotions into words he knows how to explain the pain, is sorrow, love, knowing grammar. or having any qualifications in language it's about realising your feelings your emotions and simply giving it words sometime a collection of words .

hate everything related to human emotions. Being a good writer or a poet is not about knowing grammar or having any qualifications in language it's about realising your feelings your emotions and and simply giving it words sometime a collection of words

Being natural is the key being real is the key

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Was that my mistake
Or "a mistake",
Whatever that was
But my love wasn't fake
If u think that was fake
Then,I am really sorry for my mistake
That day when,
My feelings were deceived
I hardly believed
I was in great pain
Waiting for some "love rain''
I tried to forget u
But I couldn't
I tried to hate u
But I couldn't
To live alone
I tried to be stone
But unfortunate me,you are so lovable!
My love grew more and more,
Even though, it was like
A bare ship on the shore.

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Was that my mistake
Or "a mistake",
Whatever that was
But my love wasn't fake
If u think that was fake
Then,I am really sorry for my mistake
That day when,
My feelings were deceived
I hardly believed
I was in great pain
Waiting for some "love rain''
I tried to forget u
But I couldn't
I tried to hate u
But I couldn't
To live alone
I tried to be stone
But unfortunate me,you are so lovable!
My love grew more and more,
Even though, it was like
A bare ship on the shore.

#poetry
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Tips for stress management 

A man asked the saint “I want Happiness”, saint replied First remove I, that is “Ego”, then remove want, that is “desires”, then you are left with only Happiness.
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Some of transformational and crucial tips for stress management in today's life are

-Time Management, Proper planning and Programming

-Do not compare yourself and your situation with others because comparing yourself with others is biggest mistake. Because everyone situation and circumstances is unique.

-Prioritize by Organizing, Streamlining, Economizing and Contributing its acronym for POSEC

-Do regular physical exercise and participate in sports, Spending time with nature, Meditation, Pranayam and Asan on daily basis.



-Change is the rule of life and Try to accept changes.

-don’t try to have control over the situations, circumstances and persons around you.

- To forgive and forget people who insult you or harm us.

-Develop some hobbies-Keep your mind get busy or occupied with something positive or creative-because empty mind is devil’s workshop



-Try to give some small levels of Philanthropic services/Donate some hours of your life for self-less social services without anything expecting back.



-Observe one day fast- one day fast is recommended in many religious texts but now medical science has documented and proved its beneficial effect on health.

-Do not interfere in other’s personal life or business



-Do not try to highlight yourself and crave for recognition

-Understand and accept your limitations
You can never manage or plan enough to anticipate all the future happenings

-Plan a MINI VACATION with friends or family

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Don’t do this please:
People have difference of opinions, people hate each other, people try to demolish opponents stature, all these drop them in a category where they are not considered decent ones. They might be tolerable, but for me, it is hypocrisy. I am often considered uncooperative among friends on the matters that involve hypocrisy and hate.
It was noon time when one of our classes was under proceeding and presentations were to be started. It was the first group comprising of 4 girls who had to elaborate the topic allocated to them. It was well-managed, completely elegant representation on Class’s platform and as usual, urged me to scribble down the important points enlightened by them. Economic globalization was talked over in comprehensive mode and each of the concepts was clarified in a precise manner. All in all, it was an inspiring effort and did require appreciation from the listeners.
A boy who retains a great respect to me, raised his concerns on the effort of the presenters and challenged their revelations openly in a manner that could diminish their confidence. In his 30 seconds address, the only focus was to spoil the good work done by them. But it looked as if the teacher was not taking it a reason to lessen the grades of students and offered no remarks in the defense of those opposing inquiries.
The class ended in a while, the opposing guy would be having charm after passing damaging comments, the students would be granted decent grades for their superb work, but they will be haunted by the thought that there was something that fumed that guy. If they are not enough mentally strong, it would lead them to psychological agony.
I know nothing on why it happens in our class? Why selective students are criticized and questioned in a manner that illustrates rage? I also wonder, why I have not been questioned, criticized or even stopped while presiding over my topic? It might be because I belong to a community that is highly respected and no one attempts to be remembered ruthless to a disabled person. But there must be some objections, some differences, some disagreements? These feelings have often dropped me in a situation from where I could glean no further observations.
I have always believed if someone is trying to make his mark, allow him. Never spoil his efforts just to amuse your heart. Everyone has to go through the phase, others are tackling with, then how good it would be if the focus should remain on polishing inner skills than to criticize others? Remember, the more positive you are, the more attractive your life will be.

"You owe me a thousand" She said

I started searching for my wallet

"I don't need money , you owe me a thousand hugs" she demanded , before shooting herself

Now

She is in my arms.
All red and white
She got those hugs
On her birthday night.

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Why do u love me still?

Sitting over the brow of the hill,
Wondering why do u love me still?
Even after when I broke your trust,
Might've pierced your heart and in your eyes made me worst.
Still u love me till the present day,
Even when I went too far away.
I left leaving u behind with tons of loads,
I went too far away leaving u all alone amidst the crossroads.

I just went too far,
Giving u a non-removable scar.
The memories that we created;the moments that we cherished,
Within a while everything just perished.
The special bond between us which once bloomed,
Cuz of one mistake it was all doomed.

I shouldn't have left soon I realised to my dismay,
I'd have rather chosen to stay.
The promises which I was never able to fulfill,
Wondering why do u love me still?
Those mistakes which u never did nor ever will,
Wondering why do u love me still?

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Why do u love me still?

Sitting over the brow of the hill,
Wondering why do u love me still?
Even after when I broke your trust,
Might've pierced your heart and in your eyes made me worst.
Still u love me till the present day,
Even when I went too far away.
I left leaving u behind with tons of loads,
I went too far away leaving u all alone amidst the crossroads.

I just went too far,
Giving u a non-removable scar.
The memories that we created;the moments that we cherished,
Within a while everything just perished.
The special bond between us which once bloomed,
Cuz of one mistake it was all doomed.

I shouldn't have left soon I realised to my dismay,
I'd have rather chosen to stay.
The promises which I was never able to fulfill,
Wondering why do u love me still?
Those mistakes which u never did nor ever will,
Wondering why do u love me still?

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She comes and he gets
She gets and he goes
What are we then,
Friends or foes?

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Patriarchy is a Cage

Bought by a Father
Guarded by a Brother
Rewelded by a Son

But Alas! It's taught and trained to them by their own mother's!
Oh what great Tragedy!

Was that my mistake
Or "a mistake",
Whatever that was
But my love wasn't fake
If u think that was fake
Then,I am really sorry for my mistake
That day when,
My feelings were deceived
I hardly believed
I was in great pain
Waiting for some "love rain''
I tried to forget u
But I couldn't
I tried to hate u
But I couldn't
To live alone
I tried to be stone
But unfortunate me,you are so lovable!
My love grew more and more,
Even though, it was like
A bare ship on the shore.

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My love
I see you when I close my eyes.
but can't when I open them..
They call me a fool..
But my love for you is a fool..
I tried to forget you.. Hii
But I noticed that I was moving towards you..
Does it happens only with me..
Or it happens with you too..
But the never changes..
Is that. " I love you "
@T65ts
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My love.
I see you when I close my eyes..
But can't when I open them..
They call me a fool..
But my love for you is a fool..
I tried to forget you..
But I noticed i was moving towards you..
Does it happens only with me..
Or it happens with you too..
But a thing will never change..
That " I love you "
#@T65ts
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#poetry

My love.
I see you when I close my eyes..
But can't when I open them..
They call me a fool..
But my love for you is a fool..
I tried to forget you..
But I noticed i was moving towards you..
Does it happens only with me..
Or it happens with you too..
But a thing will never change..
That " I love you "
#Trisha
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#poetry