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"A PSYCHO"
Part-1

Why did you shoot all those people ! - inspector john shouted as he hit the table with his hand

Simon smiled as he put his cuffed hands on the table

There is no point in asking this scum, he is a psycho, should have shooted him on the sight - said inspector charles as he opens his watch and throwed it on the table

Simon keeps smiling

There were childrens, women, somebody's family, you took them away, away from their loved ones, just to calm those chemicals in your head? - said john, demanding answers to his questions

Simon rolled his eyes and yawned

I am gonna break that fuc**ng mug of yours - said john as he leaped towards simon

Wait! - charles shouted as he hold john from the back

Beating him is'nt going to take us anywhere we need to stay calm and think this through -charles shouted while struggling to hold john back

Stay calm? Said john as he pushed charles in the wall

Did'nt you said we should have shooted him? Now you want me to stay calm while he rub that fu**ing smile in our faces - said john angrily while pushing charles in the wall

Do you think it concerns me less, than it does you ? Charles Shouted

I was there too, i too saw bodies of childrens shot in the head, i also saw people crying and trying to find the bodies of their beloved. But we can't change what happened, we are powerless - said charles as he stares in john's eyes

The only think we could do is to put this motherfu*** on that rope, but to do that we have to follow law , we can't lose this chance, people are counting on us - said charles in a calming voice

John let out a deep sigh as he let go of charles

Let's go, get some rest it's been a very stressful day, we can continue this later - said charles as he put his hand on john's shoulder

Yeah, you are right i feel like i could throw up anytime - said john as he rubbed his eyes

Come - said charles as he opens the door

It seems...., the show is over -said simon while swinging on the chair

Both john and charles stared at him

You were asking me something, it would be rude of me not to answer now, after such a spectecular performance - said simon with a grin
#review
#Einstestine #shortstory
"A PSYCHO"
Part-2

Now listen to me you son of bi***, we are done with your games, if this is another one of your acts, we have other ways too and this time i won't stop my friend here . Said charles as he kicked the chair

I believe you - said simon as he raised his cuffed hands in the air

Charles took a deep breath and sat on the nearby chair

where did you get the guns from? - asked charles as he starts the tape recorder

Ummm....,There was this guy an old aquantice of mine. He introduced me to these bunch of black market dealers, we had a deal, i bring them 50k and the shiny AK would be mine - said simon

Where did you get such amount? Asked charles

You know it's really is a work of heaven when both parties has something they need and they trade it for eachother's. In our case i had a friend with me and they needed some organs as fast as they can

Sick bastard - said john

How did you decided on the place of your mass shooting? - asked charles

How...., it's not that complicated i heard childrens laughing, i went in, simple. - said simon

John clenched his fist again but somehow controled himself

Next - said simon

Who else was part of this plan? - asked charles

No one, just this pretty face guy right here - said simon as he points towards himself

Why you did it? - asked charles

Why....may be demons in my head told me to do it - said simon as he laughed

No, no, it just seemed fun and it..., actually was - said simon scratching his cheeks

Do you regret your actions? - asked charles

Nope, no, not at all your honour i mean what will happen even if i did, i am gonna enjoy it till the end - said simon as he giggled

That's enough - said john and stopped the tape recorder

I can not hear this madness any longer this recording is sufficient as a proof. Right? - Said john

So it seems - said charles

charles took out the tape and started walking outside of the room

Madness? Said simon

Both john and charles turned towards him

They say, madness comes from degradation of ones character, i say that's very poetic. Have you ever sit alone in a room with a gun in your mouth ? And thought OH!, a bullet is all it takes to explode this mere existance , and one thought is all it takes to act on that, but when you stop thinking about living and alive and when you started to feel a chill inside your bones and you ask yourself what is the meaning of punishment when you have already succumed to it. Then it will came out of you, madness? No! I say Sympothy for those poor souls that still remained stucked and then you will heard it in your head
"SEND THEM TO ME" said simon as his laugh echoed in the whole room he hit his head five times on the table's edge repeatedly and killed himself

John and charles could swear to see a shadow behind simon whose hand was on his head the whole time while he hit his head on the desk, then the shadow disappeared.
#review
#Einstestine #shortstory
Just you and me sitting alongside the seashore,
The actual perfect moment with romance galore.
Getting lost by seeing in each other's eyes,
Being a victim of that enchanting moment the blushing skies.

The birds started chirping as if signalling an approval to our love,
Fishes also dancing with their tails above.
Such a magical moment being created at a picturesque location,
For all the new couples our love story isn't gonna be less than immense motivation.

Time passed by and soon the Sun started to kiss the surface of the sea (Sunset),
Experiencing that mesmerising moment just u and me.
Dazzling stars covered the sky,
Don't care about the ones
criticising cuz haters gonna cry.

With your head over my lap and the fire burning by,
Such a romantic moment that even Moon started to shy.
With my hands on your waist and playing music of your taste,
Dancing freely for hours cuz there's nothing to haste.

The frogs began croaking in the puddle,
And we lost in the darkness of the night to cuddle.
Kissing and getting cosy under the moonlight,
Never wanna lose u girl so just hold me tight.

#review

#San
Knock knock
please let me in
I said it loud
In order to begin

I was ready to confess
With all my heart
Wrapped in the warmth of
Writing's art

I tried my best
To make a rhyme
But faltered a little
in the initial lines

So I started typing
Lines too easy
Neither so classy
nor too cheesy

But I kept on writing
For long enough
Before finding new words
Became too tough

I finally found
alo lovely wuote to end
And hurriedly pressed
The button 'send'

I expected a reply
Which was gentle and true
Something that would
Contain words of love for me too

Exactly 30 minutes later
The ticks turned blue
Something that was like
My dream come true

But all of a sudden
Your dp was gone
Only after a message
' Shut Up You Moron'

What happened next
Almost anybody can tell
And I heard a deafening sound
My friend's call it my Love's death knell

So in the future
If we meet
Don't mention any of this
I repeat

Neither talk to me
about love
Because I can throw punches
From Right , Centre and Above

#poem #everyone #rvd #review

_~RVD_
Knock knock
please let me in
I said it loud
In order to begin

I was ready to confess
With all my heart
Wrapped in the warmth of
Writing's art

I tried my best
To make a rhyme
But faltered a little
in the initial lines

So I started typing
Lines too easy
Neither so classy
nor too cheesy

But I kept on writing
For long enough
Before finding new words
Became too tough

I finally found
a lovely quote to end
And hurriedly pressed
The button 'send'

I expected a reply
Which was gentle and true
Something that would
Contain words of love for me too

Exactly 30 minutes later
The ticks turned blue
Something that was like
My dream come true

But all of a sudden
Your dp was gone
Only after a message
' Shut Up You Moron'

What happened next
Almost anybody can tell
And I heard a deafening sound
My friend's call it my Love's death knell

So in the future
If we meet
Don't mention any of this
I repeat

Neither talk to me
about love
Because I can throw punches
From Right , Centre and Above

#poem #everyone #rvd #review

_~RVD_
She turned her back on the world just to face you,
to have the touch of your skin at her fingertips.

Her arms enclosed you
as she spread her wings,
so the world behind her,
and its arrows,
were visible to you no more.


#review #noob #prose
Once upon a time long long a ago there lived peacock and a dove who were friends. They eat together, talk together and go in search for food together. They always think that they are very beautiful and never talked with other birds. One day a new crow from other forest came to the forest where the peacock and Dove lived. It saw the real friendship bond between peacock and Dove and it was keen to join them. It went straight to the house where dove and peacock lived and asked them for their friendship but they disagreed and they also insulted the crow. One day a hunter saw the place where dove and peacock usually come for collecting food and kept an net a spreader some seeds on it. As usually the peacock and Dove went the place where hunter kept net and got caught. The crow whom the peacock and Dove disagreed to accept hime as a friend saw all this and called all other crows. As,the hunter came to collect peacock and doves all crows attacked on him untill he kept the peacock and Dove free. The hunter realised the dove and peacock and ran away from forest. The dove and peacock realised a thing that colur or beauty doesn't matter in friendship and accepted crow as their friend.

#story #rotom #review
#review #aa

Sometimes I go astray
Even my conscience lies to me
And lead me to dangerous paths
Of impurity and disrespect

Afterwards I feel deepest regrets
But nothing keeps me calm
Even my damn heart
And my damn past too
I'm there for u

It immensely satisfies me to have a girl who makes me lose myself in her,
When she's around me all focus shifts to her while everything else becomes blur.
I want to be a man who can give u a hanky to wipe off any tear's trace.
But I prefer to be a man who could mould himself into a clown just to bring a smile onto your face.

Having u along with me fills my face with glee,
I love to be close to you,as close as possible and protest and to make u feel the same about me.
In winters when you're shivering out of extreme cold,
I wanna be someone to provide u warmth and those hands which u could hold.

Whenever you're low and bending down on the rug,
I wanna be someone who could hold u up and give a tight hug.
No need to look for someone else when u have a type of friend,
To no matter where ever u go he'll be waiting at the end.
Someone whose existence never makes u miss your dad,
Who could protect u from ones who intend bad.

#review

#San
I was robbed
My words, my feelings, my confidence
Stood there staring at you weakening my masculinity
All the pores on my skin opened for a cool down of what was to be
Beauty is what they would use to describe you
But for me not a single world that was fit to describe you
It's a moment that will never be staged.
I will only describe it once and that's by saying that it was a moment on the mirror

#review

#samir
Precious

When everything was going wrong had no clue,
She came in my life when I was blue.
When my brain was in complete haze,
Felt like I was stuck in a maze.
When life was driving me insane,
Wasn't in a state to swallow down the pain.

In a world with full of people saying "I'm done with you",
I found someone who held my hands and said "whatever the problems are we'll solve it together,the life which seems torn together we'd sew".
All those wounds got healed,
She always stood in front of me like a shield.
I found a woman stronger than me,could see my future in her eyes,
We both share the best friendship ties.

And whenever I'm about to fall,
There's always someone beside me to hold me up standing strong like the Great Wall.
I found a person who can bring the best out of me,
In company of whom all those negative thoughts flee.

#review #poem #San
Precious

When everything was going wrong had no clue,
She came in my life when I was blue.
When my brain was in complete haze,
Felt like I was stuck in a maze.
When life was driving me insane,
Wasn't in a state to swallow down the pain.

In a world with full of people saying "I'm done with you",
I found someone who held my hands and said "whatever the problems are we'll solve it together,the life which seems torn together we'd sew".
All those wounds got healed,
She always stood in front of me like a shield.
I found a woman stronger than me,could see my future in her eyes,
We both share the best friendship ties.

And whenever I'm about to fall,
There's always someone beside me to hold me up standing strong like the Great Wall.
I found a person who can bring the best out of me,
In company of whom all those negative thoughts flee.

#review #poem #San
#review #LucianadeLemos #poetry

IT WAS A DAY LIKE ANY OTHER

Not long ago, it was a day
like any other.
Still feeling my mother's
presence, deep into the heart.
Hearing her sweet whispers
which always brought peace
to my lonely soul.

It was a day
like any other.
An unexpected twist
turned my life upside down.
Things became meaningless.

It was a day
like any other.
Tears were inevitable
while being brave,
gathering pieces,
trying to solve
life's unsolvable riddle.

It was a day
like any other
The sunrise was overcast
by clouds, as myself
trapped in thoughts,
body astray
in the midst of nowhere.

It was a day
like any other.
As in birth, the bond
between us was being ruptured.
A new life had begun.

It was a day
like any other.
A muddle of abandon and fear.
Many doubts, one single sureness.
It was time to face
the ineludible death.
It was a day
like any other.
Though believing that
life never comes to an end,
there was I, saying goodbye
to my beloved mother.
.......So long

It's been so long since we last hung out in bars,
So long since we last sat under the sky covered by dazzling stars.
So long since we last talked,
So long since we last walked holding hands in hands,
So long since we last danced on our favourite bands.
So long since we last watched horror movies till late nights,
So long since we last had pillow fights.
So long since we last giggled,
So long since we last cuddled.
So long since we last kissed,
Your presence still remains missed.
So long since u last flirted with me by your eyes,
Not seen u since we had the last goodbyes.
So long since we last camped in the woods,
Not seen u since we both chose different routes.
I miss u,I miss your mellifluous voice which still echoes in my ears,
All those beautiful memories that we made together rolls down my eyes in the form of tears.

.......So long

It's been so long since we last hung out in bars,
So long since we last sat under the sky covered by dazzling stars.
So long since we last talked,
So long since we last walked holding hands in hands,
So long since we last danced on our favourite bands.
So long since we last watched horror movies till late nights,
So long since we last had pillow fights.
So long since we last giggled,
So long since we last cuddled.
So long since we last kissed,
Your presence still remains missed.
So long since u last flirted with me by your eyes,
Not seen u since we had the last goodbyes.
So long since we last camped in the woods,
Not seen u since we both chose different routes.
I miss u,I miss your mellifluous voice which still echoes in my ears,
All those beautiful memories that we made together rolls down my eyes in the form of tears.

#review

#San
I try

I try to erase the memories that we together made,
I try to hate those places where we together stayed.

I try to forget the time that we together spent,
But they always end up leaving me behind to lament.

I try to burn all emblems of our love,
My soul tends to flee away & seek refuge in the sky above.

I try hard to redeem my soul,
I try hard to patch my life's hole.

I try to edit the moments of my life that are already gone.
I try to find out that disguised smile which I once worn.

I try to lead a life full of peace & tranquility,
I try to destroy all those things which led to my insanity.

I try to move on,
I try to await a new dawn.

#review #San #poem
Drop by drop
Crop by crop
One came & gave me a rope..
Creep by creep
Ship by ship
I take off for a trip..
Shine by shine
Brine by brine
I got to realise about mine..
Crust by crust
Trust by trust
I came out of frust..
Will by will
Sin by sin
I make myself win...
#review
They say," i gaze a lot at those stars that rarely shine"
"Am lost in an own world of mine",
.
"where my eyes constantly stare the dark yet silent unending sky",
"and that my face reflects everything in the sky that passes by".
.
Blank face and silent eyes,
Contain most deadly chaoatic vibes,
.
Lost smile yet overall peaceful,
A rare view of the calm and distressful,
.
At the same time in the same me,
Do they see.
.
But there's something they aren't aware of,
I stare at the sky cause,on land, a part of my soul i have already lost,
.
When someone finds peace in the galaxy,
It means,
The world have given them enough pain,
To leave them totally broken.
But the stars Know all those tales left unsaid,
Unspoken!
~shahnaaz.zameer

#review #san #poem
t was a wonderful summer evening and the sun was going down by inches.
I reached the destination where we purposed to meet. It was merely twenty footsteps from her
apartment. Though the meeting itself was unexpected, I was very eager for it. I stood there
waiting, hoping she did not judge me by my looks. I was suddenly awed by a beautiful girl
approaching me from the side. It was Natalia.
I shall never forget my first sight of Natalia. Her slender feminine form, outlined against the
bronze light of the setting sun. I was caught in mid-breath, suspended by a sense of slumbering
fire in those wonderful brown eyes of hers. Eyes that were different from any other woman's that
I have ever known. They were glimmering pools of intense dark mocha with flecks of amber
which gave movement to stillness. She gave me a shy smile which conveyed the impression of a
wild untamed spirit in an exquisitely sensitive body. Natalia burnt herself into my memory. I
shall never forget that day. The lustre of her hair, glowing as if every strand was lit from within.
Not by the sun-drenched sky. But by the feminine fire in her.
I could not help admiring the cascading loose waves of her glossy hair and the smallness and
whiteness of the hand she held out to take mine. My heart shuddered and dropped from my chest
to somewhere below my ribs.
"Hi, I am Natalia."
I could not remember my response. I wish I could. But I was too much in shock to be cool.
Coolness had fled scorched by her fire.
We sat on the black bench which was right at the corner of the little dusty ground.
Natalia: "How do I look"
Andrew: "Awesome, Is it your natural look"
She stared resolutely unimpressed as if I didn't notice her makeup.

#review
Why do we haunt you, you ask?

Because we pay back the deed. The deed of the blade you used to carve a smile on our faces.

A smile we never asked for.


#review #noob #prose

Author's note: This is from a pumpkin's point of view on Halloween night
If u aren't with me I feel like suffocation,
It leads to my frustration,
This all happens without any provocation,
Just u start appearing all around that I know is mere hallucination,
It's not infatuation,
Rather it's a sacred connection,
Waiting every single second for your approbation,
Winning over your love is my life's only determination,
To whom so ever asks about u I end up with your immense appreciation,
I'm on the way of a long journey u being the destination,
You're my most beautiful imagination,
To all my mistakes you're the much needed rectification,
I need u along with me in every situation,
You're my only source of motivation,
I'll be running on the streets shouting that how deeply I love u without any hesitation,
No matter if someone puts on me any allegation,
Once you're along with me I won't care about any implication.


#review

#poem
I hope

I hope one day u realise that how lovely u look,
When u carry that simple look.
U don't need make up or any filters bae,
Cuz you're special in a different way.
I hope one day u realise that the love and care you're seeking for in others,
I'm the one to end your hunt and also the one to protect u from those lightening and thunders.


I hope one day u realise that how much efforts I put in just to bring a smile on your face,
To fulfill all your dreams I'm always on the chase.
I hope one day u realise that seeing u sad,
Makes me feel extremely disheartened and bad.


I hope one day u realise that when u say those lies,
It breaks me from within and the poor soul cries.
I hope one day u realise that when you're close to me,your touch how it feels
Wounds & cuts,if any heals.
I hope one day u realise that you're the most important person of my life,
Someone whom I wanna see as my wife.

#review

#poem