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Once I had a school life.......

Once I had a school life,
Where I high fived with nuts,
Who were my knives,
Whom I used as body guards!
None of us knew, its value,
Until corona came, to rescue!
School was high,
And friends were sigh!

Rush to toilet,
Only when bell rings after interval!
Rush to canteen,
Only when we don't feel to sit in class!
Playing stone-paper-scissors,
During Friday noon long breaks!
Are all a mere memory now,
Are all a great missing for now!

As bus comes, all run,
When bus stops far ahead, we run,
When bus stops far behind, we run,
When bus starts all of a sudden,
We hang,
Or bang,
To each others bags or shoulders!
Hearing all sorts of swears and wraths!

As bell rings,
And still we hang around the grills,
Principal or class teacher comes running with sticks,
Shouting, ' why aren't you inside the class,
And we sing in a monotone, ' sorry sir!',
When classmates come and tell with a yell,
Do what you wanna do for teacher is busy as hell,
We jump in happiness to all well!

In between the class when teacher shouts,
' O, you! Is this your bed to sleep?',
The sleeping back bencher stands and points,
At himself and say, 'present sir!',
All laugh at once!
When none do homework,
And teacher ask us to get out,
We go out with a witty smile!

On the day of open houses,
All friends mouths,
'All the best!',
In between math classes,
When teacher gives a break for ten minutes,
To freshen our minds from sleepiness,
We rest our head on our benches,
And immediately fall asleep!

When teacher questions who mocked him,
Everyone points at the ones next to him!
When sir say, we will go play to a silent class,
The entire class becomes violent!
When he says , its holiday from next week,
All clasps,
When in home during holidays,
One asks, why isn't the school opening?!

When teacher distributes the exam papers,
All get ready to copy the answers with staplers!
When he asks her for a date,
She accepts him to leave him soon!
When parties arrive,
All strive,
To get the joy,
To eat the sweety cake!

All these are memories,
Which plays a huge disaster,
In this corona time,
School life is something entirely different,
And school mates are something to never miss for,
School teachers are something to weep for now,
For online classes are a big headache now,
And each want their school life and old memories to be backed up

#review #schoollife #aa
"Be confident to your feeling while your wit is not out it's shape; If is, don't be." -penned by me.

Ill events like bully, break-up, a major fight between two friends is so hard and heavy to deal with. People can’t get over their one person of worth of attention in their life, as well you can’t either. Your brain will advise you to move on. Here you get confused between the wish of your heart and your mind. Even so your heart will keep explaining to you, you love those significant person.

It might feel like you’ll never make it out of the heart-shattering sadness. You will distract yourself and will get far from your emotions. It’ll be a big carelessness that you will not be capable to give yourself time, while there will be bad and good days nearby. Then you will be in possession of someone else and will lose your independence and your freedom as well.

To deal with these problems, first things first don’t stay away from yourself. Keep your brain and yourself noiseless and go against what your mind wills you to think and do. Hand a lot of seconds to yourself and always try to see the good side of things. Reach out to your family. They will love and support you anyhow, no matter.

“You will get, what you are deserved for.” – You have your family with you who stake everything they have, for you. Remember this!

#review #quotes #inspiration
Love of my life
It seems to be
Through you Crystal eyes
You are to see me

Love of my life
I feel you inside me
Getting more close to heart
Everywhere , it's you who I see

Distance is a lot
But not more than my love
The day will come
A long waited love will meet another love.

- Irendu Bhardwaj

#review #poem
#review #Nandinithakar #poem
I was looking
And there it was
Indestructible and flawless
A smile that could
Bring back a smile
I did not utter a word
Yet I was understood
I got my answers
Even if I didn't ask anything
Sometimes there were lies
And sometimes some bitter truths
Suddenly I was told
What was I made of
And what I was looking at
Was silver and erect
I was looking at my own reflection
I was looking at Mirror
#review
#pravika


Winged with hope

Filled with delight

Stars shine brightly

In the clear night sky

I dance with freedom

Not thinking about tomorrow

Listening to my heart and

Breaking all the shackles

To live my amazing dreams

refreshing my tired soul

Ready to find my own voice

To become mentally strong

And filling my new life

With new and bold feelings.
#review
#ishmita


Let them cherish all these memories of the times you led me to believe,
You are the same, you felt this comfortable arrhythmia..
A tell-tale love, perfect for a hopeless man.
And yet let me cherish everything, you felt behind to me.
All the times I was mished that it was the destiny. As you hold the hand of another, not even kiss me goodbye!
Howbeit, I'll treasure it..
Like a fantasy!
#review #prakriti

Eris ( I uploaded this on my blog a few days ago but I was hoping for some critics)

misty eyes like clouds on a rainy day

your breath folded in lavender sheets

I feel like days have passed since we last met

it has only been hours yet

jars of honey mixed with roses

mirthful melodies you hum in my ears

leaving me aching for your touch

while you, my harmony set sail to find love

misty eyes like clouds on a rainy day

your untainted soul running wild

poundage on my soul, remains your uncanny sage

I settle down and wrap my arms around my bleeding body

the monotone of my existence intertwined with colours

rendering me rotten, while you bloom from my ashes

rise to the heaven and release mayhem

afterall Eris, chaos is what makes you
the misty eyes like clouds on a rainy day

are mine.
His heart
Could not take more
Of her love again
And it began
To get spilled
Into his blood vessels
It took over
The control of his hand
Forcing him to write
A poem for her.



#poem #review #AhmadMusa
There lived an ant!....

There lived an ant,
Who wore a pant!,
But lived in a hole,
Made of coal,
Still, all made him into a sand!

#review #aa #limericks #poem #funnypoem
In Orwell's 1984 ... His main character Winston Smith ... Disfigured and disgusted by the food he would routinely consume had asked himself ... Why should one feel it to be intolerable unless one had some kind of ancestral memory that things had once been different? .... Well ... this got me thinking, Is human life unbearable for the individual because of a distant ancestral memory of a far greater truth of what we had once been? Instead of such a disgraceful and deceptive existence, had we truly been in the Garden of Eden? Did pleasure reign at its highest in the time of Adam and Eve? Did an apple cost us such greatness? From consumer trends to so-called relationship goals of today we can agree that our happiness had surely transcended all trade and ideologies of life and relationships. From the present ministries and politics we can also agree that true justice ruled ... For in fact a justice so true, that the single crime committed was all redeemabily forgiven after both the ruler and the ruled as one, conferred to the penalty that was then and always is death.

#review #article #sy
#review #bhumi

Dear dandelions

Oh! Gorgeous golden dandelions,
You make me envious you know;
Needs just a blow of wind,
Traveling as far as you go.

I heard the crowd once
You carry dreams with you,
straight to our loving ones,
So, is that okay, if I believe you too?

How simple and humble,
yet strong and proud.
Enduring all stumbles,
Wheeling forth the clouds.

Oh! how far I wish to go alongside with you,
In a hope to find myself along the way.

Maybe you're just a weed.
Or maybe a seed of belief....
Rain, please Rain,
Come, pour like a train,
Shine, taking away my sin,
Help, making arise my chin.

Shower, the blessings of happiness,
Cover, the disaster of sadness,
Wave, to make my smile grow bigger,
Sigh, to make my sigh more lighter.

Rain, come like a wind,
Rain, go like a hint,
Love, come visit me sometimes,
Dear, to make my mind afresh anytime!

#review #rain #poem #aa
Read this, after long time I'm here to say hi



It's not ok
Baby told me it's not ok when I showed him it's ok
It's not ok
When I found out my way
But he held me back that day
I laugh to cover
Don't tell I suffer
I act not sober cause I need to chill someday

#review #notok #
It's fine, it's ok for me that my beloved threw me away.
It's great, it's ok for me that I found out my own way.
It's madness, it's ok for him to get me back next day.
I'm always under cover
I never say that I suffer
But he knows he can't find another
So let's play, it's ok that he's mine, I'm his, we pray.

#review #pieceofasong #itsok #thraichard
"THE TOWN CALLED EMBIL"
Part- 1

What do you think - said Hough a 45 years old watchman of a cemetry in a small town called 'EMBIL,

A bear? - said john a 50 year old grave digger

Have you ever seen a damn bear in your whole life, where would one come from here in this town? - said Hough

Hey i am just saying, i mean what else could do such thing? - said john

What do you say should we allert the authorities? - said Hough

Hell no, i am not losing my job over something like this, i am saving for my retirement, losing the job is the last thing i want to happen - said John in a panick

So.... put it back then - said Hough as he tossed a shovel towards John

But still, what could it be ? - said John as they both stared at the decapitated corpse dragged outside of it's coffin

Let's hope no one opens this coffin as long as we are around - said Hough while dusting his clothes off
Cheers to that - said John as he level the soil around the grave

Oh god have mercy on our poor soul thy we have sinned, let us in your holy arms once again as we plead, amen - John prayed and kissed the cross hanging around his neck

I am telling you man strange things are happening since that strange doctor came into the town, something is very wrong about him - said Hough

You mean the one who wears all black, a black hat hiding his face, a black long coat, black shoes and black gloves, the guy sure is a mystery, but i doubt he has anything to do with this -said John

Mark my words one of these days you will be seeing him running for his life, who knows what kind of black magic is this science, his days are numbered if he keep getting in the way of the church - said Hough as both of them walked away from the grave

The same man they were talking about who wears all black clothes jumped of the tree beside the grave and looked at them as they left he then bends and collected the dirt around the grave in a jar and started walking in the opposite direction while whisteling under the full moon

#review #shortstory
#Einstestine
#review

The Underated kid


Quite and beautiful, sitting in a corner.

Rapunzel like hair... Preoccupied in her own thoughts

Billion of dreams encased in her eyes.. she looked like a dreamer

Scolded and compared ... Lento she became a rebel with a pebble.

Glimmer of our eyes again  shimmered as time passed by

With her ameliorated skills she is crème de la crème

Again she is Torpid as the crowd doesn't appraise her finesse 

Underrated even with all the skills at its best .

Judged by the past , juxtaposed at last.

Oh Lord! Yarn of every second kid .. Underrated and differentiated

Why can't we  keep everyone in different slot with their own skills and capabilities

A kid so underrated still embrace his dream to be fulfilled and praised.
The underrated kid
#review

Quite and beautiful, sitting in a corner.

Rapunzel like hair... Preoccupied in her own thoughts

Billion of dreams encased in her eyes.. she looked like a dreamer

Scolded and compared ... Lento she became a rebel with a pebble.

Glimmer of our eyes again  shimmered as time passed by

With her ameliorated skills she is crème de la crème

Again she is Torpid as the crowd doesn't appraise her finesse 

Underrated even with all the skills at its best .

Judged by the past , juxtaposed at last.

Oh Lord! Yarn of every second kid .. Underrated and differentiated

Why can't we  keep everyone in different slot with their own skills and capabilities

A kid so underrated still embrace his dream to be fulfilled and praised.
The Fire Between Us

The texture of your lipstick,
Still shining around my lips.
The traces of your fragrance,
Still dissolving inside my skin.

My eyes rolling around,
Trying to touch your body.
Every cell of my skin ready
To go through that heaven again.

Your smile starting a fire
Burning all my secrets down.
Your hair all unsettled
Shouting warnings in vain.

My fingers taking your consent,
Daring to touch you where you want.
My heart tossing around like a coin,
With a touch of yours, it's gone...

~Abhinav

#review
#wroteforher
"Don't cry" They say
You will be weak if u say 'Nay'
Be like this and not that.

But I cried today.
I opened that bottle of emotions.
As it was already on verge of breaking
I opened that dam.
Yes I cried today.

"You are a weakling" Said my mom
But I felt stronger mom.
"You are a coward " Said my brother.
But I felt better, as I appreciated myself today,
I appreciated myself because I could endure that all.
"You are unreliable" Said friends.
I feel reliable enough to depend on myself.
So I cried today.
And I didn't feel guilty.

#review #fading_betelgues
They circled him menacingly
Taunting and kicking him frequently.
He beared it all with great tolerance.
They didn't even passed with a narrow,
Because it was just a baby of sparrow.

All of them just snickered in the back.
Some of them cared , but they were all scaredy cats.
No one defended ,
And looked through the shadow...
As it was just a baby of sparrow.

As it grew bigger everyday,
Reliving the past , remembering it all.
He grew stronger day by day.
Now he stands tall from all.
With an aim in mind and a passion in eyes.
He showed them all  ,
As now they bowed,
That he was not just a baby of sparrow.

#review #fading_betelgues