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Title: The blood moon of wedding night. Part TWO

Meanwhile, at Jwala's home, a girl could be seen in the mirror, in the traditional bridal dress and beautiful jewelry. That's Jwala, an orphan. Everyone who knew her saw her as a mysterious and secretive girl who didn't ask for any help from her relatives after her parents' demise, when she was just eleven and decided to fend for herself. Being the best student she was, she took tuitions of junior students and ran some errands, about which she wouldn't tell anyone.

Growing up strong and independent, marriage wasn't something in her to do list. So, when Shaurya approached her for the first time, she denied. But when Shaurya proved that he loved and trusted her blindly on numerous occasions, she had finally agreed. What she planned to do with Shaurya did require his blind trust, after all, so that no one is suspicious of her when she is done with her work.
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Title: The blood moon of wedding night. Part THREE

" The auspicious time is on the blood moon's night, but before the moon becomes red. So please make sure that the bride enters the house before that, or else evil might befall on the family " - Such had been the priest's words, and Shaurya never believed them. Right now, the formal wedding party had ended, and everyone headed towards the " mandap ", to perform the traditional wedding rituals.

Shaurya was elated, while Jwala, on the other hand, seemed nervous, and the only thing going on in her mind was " I just hope my minions do their job perfectly ".



" Now , from today onwards, you both are husband and wife, go and take the blessings of your elders." As the pair went to each and every elder of their family, touching their feet, the moon was now a brilliant shade of red.

" Lay down on the bed and have your milk, I'll lighten these candles and freshen up first "- said Jwala while lighting the last candle in the room.
When she came back from the bathroom, Shaurya laid on the bed, eyes closed.
Jwala opened her bag, and took out a pair of surgical gloves.
She opened all the windows of the room first.
Heart beat - check
Pulse: check
Breathing: check
Now, Shaurya Goyenka was officially dead.
Yes, her minions had done their job perfectly, they had poisoned the milk and poured a chemical which releases poisonous fumes on burning on the candles.
What she planned to do with Shaurya was to kill him, and the errands she ran for an income were dealing in the underworld, so smartly that Shaurya never knew it.
Yes, she had became the queen today, but without the king.
And, somewhere in India's underworld, there was another Jwala, working her way up from an underlay to the top dog.
The End
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With the flow of pain
I lived, with hope in my Swain.
When I was being back stabbed
I believe stabs heal with time.

The time flew,
With time my pain also inclined,
This time my heart was hardened,
With the fierce of pain in blood.

The glowing eyes lost charm,
But still shining red,
The magma was raising with every stab,
When it erupts as lava,
Before it hardens it'll make you into ashes in the igneous anger of mine.

When pain turns into anger,
You'll become ashes in the flames of wrath.
When anger turns into pain,
I'll be flooded into tears of ocean.
Though I know both doesn't have worth,
I can't control them.
They're emotions which controls me
More than my intelligence,
Cause my heart works more than brain.
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#thought

Being the characters of such a story is not everyone's cup of tea, as it requires an iron-clad determination, steeled dedication and a clear mindset. But, as said earlier, not everyone can succeed in playing for this story.
#review #rant #anmol

And again,
one more time,
I let myself completely in,
Accepting if it hurts,
Accepting if it’s tearing me apart,
Piece by piece.
As my actions, my feelings and my care everything was real.
For once, I felt this thing which asked me to stay, which said: “it’s okay! she’ll take care of you, she’ll restore it piece by piece just the way it was torn apart”
#review #rant #anmol

And again,
one more time,
I let myself completely in,
Accepting if it hurts,
Accepting if it’s tearing me apart,
Piece by piece.
As my actions, my feelings or my care everything was real.
For once, I felt this thing which asked me to stay, which said: “it’s okay! she’ll take care of you, she’ll restore it piece by piece just the way it was torn apart”
|NOTHING IN PROMPTICULAR|
DAY 31
PROMPT: Write a short story that is less than 25 words.
CONDITION: ROMANCE

"Kane, my leg, it's stuck!"

"Denise, I'll get you out."

"No! The roof. It's caving in. SAVE YOURSELF!"

"You're my heart
I'm going nowhere."

#shortstory #review #MA
|NOTHING IN PROMPTICULAR|
DAY 31
PROMPT: Write a short story that is less than 25 words.
CONDITION: ROMANCE

"Kane, my leg, it's stuck!"

"Denise, I'll get you out."

"No! The roof. It's caving in. SAVE YOURSELF!"

"You're my heart.
I'm going nowhere."

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#review #mythfiction #chapter1 #part 1 #HostOfZodiac

CHAPTER 1 – Daniel Kainos

August 18, 2020 23:17 here I’m sitting in front of my 9 years old laptop looking back into memories that hurt me deep inside. I’m not sure how to react with this feeling but how I wish time has stopped on July 29, 2014.

I want to scream to the world how miserable is my life but there is a quote saying “As bad as your situation may be, someone else always has it worse than you” by George Foreman. I hate those word, every time I gave up, that word pushing me back up where I barely to keep ongoing. I hate myself for knowing those word, I hate myself for keep reminding me with those word. There not a single day I wished my life will end in a tragic accident.

Why?

I’m giving up but unfortunately I has been taught since I was born, committing a suicide is the most brutal sin in the world where you will end up in the worse part of HELL. I hate myself for being taught about heaven and hell.

I hate that about myself for take everything so serious. No matter how many times I denying what I been taught, at the end of the day I end up praying before consuming my meal. Why would I not be praying, my dad is god second in command and I probably has been taught before the day I become a sperm.

It is all in my blood now. Maybe if I peal my skin, there is some bible scripture beneath it. Hahaha. Not so funny for someone who really devoted. If my father know about this he probably going to send me back to Sunday school.

Forgive me father for I have sin. I keep repeating those word in my mind but I am not catholic to use that phrase anyway.

All I want is someone to listen for what I have been dealing with. Somehow, when there is someone to listen, I has no idea what I am supposed to say or where to begin. It feel like the world is torturing me so I will end my own life. It will be not that complex if my mind is determine to do so. All I need is just open my bedroom window and jump. Simple as that. No biggie.

Drop dead, brain smashed like a pie thrown on somebody face, blood spatter all over the place in someone garden at level 1 of my resident building, but again like I said before, I will be in hell for eternity and that part is not going to be fun at all. The worst case scenario I ever imagine is by my bike and being drag under a trailer truck, and that will not be cool way to die. Body part all over the road, some stuck under the truck, organ all over the place smash into pieces. That really not a good way to die and still end up in hell for attempting suicide or maybe I end up become a ghost that hunt on the road and will become some ghost story for bedtime. I want some cool way to die where it doesn’t hurt, I didn’t know it coming and my body is fully attached in a coffin when people buried me.

Thinking about dying and terrible life, I have been thinking what about the other people who going with worse in life. How they stay sane? How they keep moving forward?

How?

All I can think as a solution to easy my life, to win a jackpot grand prize and buy a land on mountain cliff where it have a beautiful view, away from the bustling city with a small house with a transparent glass walls, alone and peace or maybe with my love one to spend the rest of our life together and maybe make one or two children along the way may add some joy in it. With all of that I only need go to town if necessary. That maybe can make me happy or maybe not.

Probably, when I win the jackpot I will end up with sport cars and sport bikes in the garage with some girls who not really love me, only for the fun and money. Maybe with the prize I won, I can work my ass up to become a billionaire make my way to be among the richest man in the world, to be known by the world so I have the access to meet Selena Gomez and maybe then I have my chance to make her my wife.
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Maybe.

Why her? It is not because of her songs or movies. Somehow her voice make me feel calm and happy. Her smile is enough to make me forget my terrible day and I won’t lie she the eighth most beautiful women in my life after my mother, my grandmas and my sisters.

Maybe then I will be happy. Who knows? Nothing work according to plan right. Only tv shows or movie does.

If life will be so easy, there will be no city, no jobs to work on, no money needed for buying, there is no modern world to be worried on.

Why the fuck did Eve took the forbidden fruit at the first place and why the fuck did god created the earth at the first place.

Oh yeah, they will be no me if all of those never happened. It all for a reason right? If it never happened then there is no today. If god did not created the earth god probably be so boring right now. If Eve never took the forbidden fruit, maybe both of them I mean her and Adam still playing with all the animal in the garden without the knowledge both of them were naked.

If we are the evolution of the great ape, why the fuck did we evolve become human with all this thought in our head, with all of our need today? If we are the human revolution, why the fuck we don’t stay as ape? Today we still be playing around the tree throwing feces at each other. Chase by the predator that trying to eat us.

Why the fuck gave up all that just to kill the earth today with all the rubbish in the sea, with the melting of the great glacier, with all the burning forest and with all this fucking global warming.

Well, that only one man thought, with his stupid point of view. Blaming all that happened to the world without thinking that he is the problem to begin with. Maybe if he appreciate a little maybe he can enjoy the world more or maybe if he going out from his room more often, hanging out at the bar more often like he used to be maybe he will not feel like this, you stupid lazy bastard and maybe he probably already meet the women who he think that will be his wife again by now, if he not laying on the bed all the time dreaming to be dating with some chick from all the movies or tv shows he watched. Stupid bastard. You know you are talking about yourself right? You are the guy who you are addressing stupid bastard. Well this make me feel little bit happy then before, so no biggie.

Well, enough for all today bulshit. Just go to bed and maybe tomorrow will give me new experience or I will win the lottery jackpot. Finger cross.

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Well, don’t wished for what you don’t mean. Anything can happened and that thing will change your life no matter how much you don’t like it, you cannot change the pass. This is how my view about my life change from suicide to surviving.

“New day same old nothing new. I woke up, go to work and wait the clock to reach 5pm. Only the different is, I took the highway route to go home, I have this aching feeling that telling me something is wrong but I am not sure what is. That time it kind of weird, I feel like I need to rush and I ride my bike at maximum speed and for unknown reason, my 150cc bike, which usually maximum speed is 135km per hour goes to 220km per hour and it feel so exciting for me since the road is clear. Out of nowhere, something appeared in front of me. That’s when I lost control and fall of my bike and slide all the way to the opposite direction of the road. The last thing I remember, I was about to get hit by a truck and that is it. When I woke up, I am lying in this hospital bed with all those peoples with camera in front of that door with some police officers outside and explaining this all over again with different people and you.”

“All the witness also said the road is clear then you just lost control for no reason and also don’t you feel something is off with your story Mr. Danie Kainos? Your bike scatter all over the road, the four by four Chevy that hit you? The cooling system burst, front bumper badly dented and the other car, Toyota Camry, follow from behind same thing happened. You hit by 2 car in high speed. The report from this evening says your blood is all over the place, when they put you in the ambulance, the report said you barely breathing and loss lots of blood. But when they clean you up in emergency room, they did not found any excessive injury on you. Two hour after the accident, you woke up like nothing happened. Can you explain that?”

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#review this is so, realistic what every person think once a time in his life...
#handwriting #review

She was always very disappointed of her
poor handwriting.

Today, with 250 patients
waiting outside her door,
it does not matter!
#thought
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#Aarushi
Dear M.K. Gandhi,
Maybe you regret dying, while serving this nation, when you look at what has become of India, from the heavens up above.
I do not have a proper idea, of what were your ideologies for this country, the country you were ready to die for, but when I look at today's India, I am very sure, THIS is not for what you, and lakhs of other Indians gave their lives.
Democracy is being slaughtered, rights are being taken away and millions suffer, with their suffering going unnoticed.
People don't even know all this is happening, will you please come back?
Wordcraft

Spin the tale wordweaver
Spin it well
From the depths of your core
the bottomless 𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘭

Pour out the musings of your mind
Splintered thoughts you dwell
we are the heathens forgotten
The mystics unwell

Let loose the ward of your void
Open the dungeons of hell
Spin the tale wordweaver
Spin it well

The craving paper calls
echoes into the 𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘭
𝘲𝘶𝘦𝘯𝘤𝘩 𝘪𝘵'𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘳𝘴𝘵 𝘰𝘩 𝘸𝘪𝘻𝘢𝘳𝘥
Like a rain in the desert
So
With the ink of your feelings
Engrave your spell

From the depths of your core
the bottomless 𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘭
Spin the tale wordweaver
Spin it well


- @AwaraAmber

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YOU.

Your sickness is from you, but you do not perceive it and your remedy is within you, but you do not sense it.

You presume you are a small entity, but within you is enfolded the entire Universe. You are indeed the evident book, by whose alphabets the hidden becomes manifest.


Therefore you have no need to look beyond yourself. What you seek is within you, if only you reflect.

#thought #review # AB_M
Wordcraft

Spin the tale wordweaver
Spin it well
From the depths of your core
the bottomless 𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘭

Pour out the musings of your mind
Splintered thoughts you dwell
we are the heathens forgotten
The mystics unwell

Let loose the ward of your void
Open the dungeons of hell
Spin the tale wordweaver
Spin it well

The craving paper calls
echoes into the 𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘭
𝘲𝘶𝘦𝘯𝘤𝘩 𝘪𝘵'𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘳𝘴𝘵 𝘰𝘩 𝘸𝘪𝘻𝘢𝘳𝘥
Like a rain in the desert
So
With the ink of your feelings
Engrave your spell

From the depths of your core
the bottomless 𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘭
Spin the tale wordweaver
Spin it well


- @AwaraAmber

#AwaraAmber #review #mypoem
#review #thatsal #poetry #poem
I am sorry,
I don't believe in fairy tales,
I seek manifestation but I am realistic.
I am coin with both sides innate,
Flip as I see my belief, reckoning.
I am sorry,
I am not fancy as you speak,
I speak truth, flaunt reality as I saw,
I criticize because sugar coating
Is abnormal and demeaning.
I reconcile my traits,
I choose to be better version of me.
I won't buzz for your appearance,
If you've more than fakeness to show,
I am all up for buying a ticket.
She is fire burning
So is her children
Leaves to ashes turning
She is mother nature
Mother of so many creatures
And also the mother of humans-
Her greatest trust breacher
Birds animal her only preachers
They are the nature's greatest teachers
But it's the humans
Arrogant and ignorant
Stinky, not at all fragrant
Violent, destructive and mind so stagnant.
Man will definitely ruin himself
In a way so shameless and flagrant.

© Abhinaba Dutta

#everyone #review #Abhinabadutta
She is fire burning
So is her children
Leaves to ashes turning
She is mother nature
Mother of so many creatures
And also the mother of humans-
Her greatest trust breacher
Birds animal her only preachers
They are the nature's greatest teachers
But it's the humans
Arrogant and ignorant
Stinky, not at all fragrant
Violent, destructive and mind so stagnant.
Man will definitely ruin himself
In a way so shameless and flagrant.

© Abhinaba Dutta

#review #Abhinabadutta