#poetry #persephone #review

OH FLAWED POET!

Oh! Flawed poet,
I wish to bring you to perfection
And yeah, flawed poet
I know I'm not under your affection
but see here flawed poet,
We surely have a connection
So, flawed poet,
Let's move into the right direction.

Stars are still asking,
For your little confession
The Moon, and it's shine,
Does it's magnanimous reflection
Let us, in out time,
Destroy our imperfections.

But no, flawed poet,
Don't give me rejection,
And again, flawed poet,
For your own world, have a little possesion.
Yet, flawed poet,
This scarlett sheet knows your expression.

Come, let's fly,
I just wanna keep you under my protection
Don't waste your time,
Explore your fate's collection-
Of all the lucky diamonds
Which will rain your direction.

So, my dear flawed poet,
Don't make me a unused possesion
And oh! Flawed poet,
Time might not give you,
Another chance at perfection,
So flawed poet,
Grab every risk, make haste,
Let us destroy your imperfections.
Oh! Flawed poet,
I deserve your affection.

Note: The flawed poet here is me and my conscience or the inner voice is talking to me.

Drug

Dancing music chord,
On a Friday night
And sipping classic drugs
An euphoria between the eyes.

Attempted dance missed the legs,
Emptiness and hollow feelings.
The eyes are thin and might be red
Two more sips to do the biddings.

Life is short and no retry,
Anaesthesia to help feel fine
And a reminder for tonight,
That It's a beautiful Friday to be alive.

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#review #poetry #speakup #women

Domestic Violence.
Physical & Mental Harassment.
Biased Moralities. Prejudiced Priorities. Unwanted Principles.

The following poem is an attempt to express the feelings of a woman in pain by just being a part of our society.

SIN OF BEING PURE

No mirrors tell my story
None paint the pain I drown and die in
Time doesn’t stop, it doesn't heal
Introductions rot with a din 

I search for heartbeats
In battered pieces of flesh, they had soul
Bleeding tears of carrying your disgrace upon me
A lost one with a silent yowl 

Loathe me with all you’ve got
Profane grumblings, unprejudiced & unsure
Slayed dreams took all that was me
My only sin was of being pure

They say
Stay
the night may be dark
But it'll be a better tomorrow

The wind may be gone
But there are always
Hands on deck you can borrow

And i
The abandoned ship
sigh sadly
oh how innocent
times used to be
ignorant of the iceberg
where your mates said
a harbour
was supposed to be
Oh how lost in wanderlust
we took the poisoned cup
oh so full of virgin wonder
And trust
everything was to me
Oh to be young
wild
and free

Let me fly
sailing away
beyond the horizon
like a sparrow

Unchain me
from these waves
the heart must have
what it craves

Let me fly
From these premises
these pirates
No more promises
Of the dawn
of better tomorrow

𝘍𝘰𝘳 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘥𝘰𝘯'𝘵 𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘥 𝘸𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘵𝘰 𝘥𝘳𝘰𝘸𝘯,
𝘐𝘧 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘦𝘯𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩 𝘴𝘰𝘳𝘳𝘰𝘸..

- #AwaraAmber
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(I'd appreciate any critique/ comment, poured my vagabond soul out for this one.. 🙏🏽 love from india)

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In an eerie night
Those tunes light the heart up with their soothing ups and downs in music,
Yet there is strange thing about night
That the moon is sleeping in this beautiful lullaby.

While the melody is allying the fear
The breeze is pacifying the breathe,
The traditional airs in ears
Are filling the voids in the heart.

The poet put euphony lyrics
And the instruments played with tip-tap,
Gave my heart the longed peace
In an eerie night I found my quietude.

#review #essay

Today's topic : paper books vs e books
>In modern world, people are increasingly reading books online and the demand of printed books has declined.
>Now days people have two options either read e books or paper books.
>People choose option according to their comfort zone. Some people like to read e books and some people like to read paper books.
>Both books have some advantage and some disadvantage.
>If we talk advantage of e books then, Very less space required compare to paper books.
>We can easily store 100 e books in small pen drive or cd. Which is not possible in paper books.
>Another advantage is we can download e books online.When ever we want to read we read e books from our mobile.
>E books always available in cheap price compare to paper books.
>E books are also environment friendly because in paper books we have to cut trees for paper.
>>In recent times, people like to read news online. Most of people read news paper from online.
>People also like to read novel online. There are a lot of free application available for reading.
>The main disadvantage of e book is our eye. For constant reading online affect on our eye. Most of people have pain in eye just because of constant stare on screen.
>In paper books, you can easily mark the important points through marker pen or pencil. It's also possible in e books but require more time.

>In conclusion we can say that both books have their own aspects. We can not say that which book is good compare to other.

#review #poetry #love


I don't no am I right or wrong
But still I say sorry to you
I don't no am I good or bad for you but I love you truly

When it hurts so bad
Why does it feel so good
I wish this made all sense
I wish I understood
Not having you here with me is tearing me up inside
But I can't stop thinking about you no matter how hard I try

You know how I feel about you
And I know I want to spend rest of my life with you

Loving you feel so right
But at the same time
Knowing I can't have you keeps me awake at night
I just want this to be simple
to look into your eyes
Be held in your arms
Then I'd truly be happy.....

Chances are
i won't ever be 𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘦 to you
I think
Only you matter the most to you

And yet
here i am
Waiting patiently
As if every moment
Of your apathy
Wasn't an eternity
of agony

thinking of you
As if
The mere thought
Of your embrace
Wasn't just a
Fantasy

Chances are
You won't ever accept
my rose for you
but still
i won't be filling
Someone else's shoes for you

Not a distraction
No hobby
Not a used toy in the basement
Want me not?
Fine.
But i won't
Ever be just a replacement.

Chances are
I'm just a dopamine dose to you
You don't even notice
He who adores, bows to you
Chance are
I'm never gonna be close to you
and yet
why is it
that i can't quench this thirst
of longing
in my heart
That arose for you
Chances are
there won't ever be an 𝘜𝘴
Chances are
I won't
𝘌𝘷𝘦𝘳
𝘉𝘦 𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘺𝘰𝘶..



@AwaraAmber

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Chances are
i won't ever be 𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘦 to you
I think
Only you matter the most to you

And yet
here i am
Waiting patiently
As if every moment
Of your apathy
Wasn't an eternity
of agony

thinking of you
As if
The mere thought
Of your embrace
Wasn't just a
Fantasy

Chances are
You won't ever accept
my rose for you
but still
i won't be filling
Someone else's shoes for you

Not a distraction
No hobby
Not a used toy in the basement
Want me not?
Fine.
But i won't
Ever be just a replacement.

Chances are
I'm just a dopamine dose to you
You don't even notice
He who adores, bows to you
Chance are
I'm never gonna be close to you
and yet
why is it
that i can't quench this thirst
of longing
in my heart
That arose for you
Chances are
there won't ever be an 𝘜𝘴
Chances are
I won't
𝘌𝘷𝘦𝘳
𝘉𝘦 𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘺𝘰𝘶..



@AwaraAmber
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Between the wage of war,
And peace now flourished,
May the trumpets sing once more,
By the cry of man nourished.

It is truth to one self,
That mankind knows no limit,
To any kind of non-licit
activities to perpetuate himself

Don't sing O' poet of the sour
One day forgotten you will,
But sing and don't mourn,
People don't like the feelings who mill,
Once a upon a time it was lore.

A girl in red saree
Waiting to be loved
To be loved by beloved.
Like summer waiting for
a drop of water
To calm her desire 💕

✍Lata Garg

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A chariot of gold
Horns in the seat
Wheels of bones
No one to greet

Pulled by the slaves
Killed by the whip
A trip to the hell
For the tripped and weak

Stared by the lost
Followed by the dead
Gained by the lost
Pursuing the smile

Well, this is my first time writing something here i hope you will help me out

And i wrote this during my maths class 😅
Yeah it was that boring

A girl in red saree
Waiting to be loved
To be loved by beloved.
Like summer waiting for
a drop of water
To calm her desire 💕

✍Lata Garg

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𝙇𝙚𝙩 𝙜𝙤..

sometimes
you've had enough
of getting hurt
sometimes its ok not to fight
Sometimes the lines get blurry
between what you want
And what's right

I've long since lost
the way to peace
the choice to choose whatever i might
The only path
they say
Is surrender
And yet
I hesitate
I remember being me
I remember the wind on my hair
I remember
the resonance of my heart
with the rhythm of the nature
I remember being free
Oh i remember being me

I should perhaps
Choose to love
Or i could
Always choose to fight
But
Perhaps
𝘑𝘶𝘴𝘵 maybe
I could be me once more
I could fly away to eternity
free
𝘑𝘶𝘴𝘵 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘴
For the last time
I could see the light
And so

Hear ye!
Hear ye!
Hereby I decide
accepting the part of me
That i had cast aside
embracing the waves once more
As my worries get washed ashore
Hence a 𝘗𝘪𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘦 be i
Forevermore

You see
Sometimes it's okay to drown
So long as you swim alright
Sometimes it's okay
to fall away
If you can get back upright

And so
i smile
and let go
𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘢 𝘵𝘪𝘳𝘦𝘥 𝘴𝘢𝘪𝘭𝘰𝘳 𝘰𝘯 𝘢 𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘱
𝘩𝘶𝘮𝘮𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘩𝘺𝘮𝘯 𝘰𝘧 𝘯𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵..



#AwaraAmber #review #mypoem

(Please tell me before sharing my work🙏🏽)

#review, #mypoem --#mayrasaish

𝗙𝗲𝗲𝗹𝗶𝗻𝗴𝘀..

Joy in the pain,
peace in the chaos,
Soothing in the thunderstorm,
Satisfaction in the frustration.


Comfort of the soul,
Contentment of the heart ❤,
Pleasure of the eyes,
Reason of the smile.

Love is everything.. yet, nothing.

-𝗠𝗮𝘆𝗿𝗮 𝗦𝗮𝗶𝘀𝗵
(pen name)

#review
Very nice poem but please make poem longer

"THE HEROIC PRINCE"

He is beautiful , he is smart ,
he is something any father wants,
he is a swordsman , he is a scholar,
he is a man of steel blow like a cannon .
lonely so they feel, his many many lovers,
no one can own him ,
they already know it better.

But everything aside he is the kings eldest son ,
beside,
Run to his good side
He is modest in nature
Has to marry someones daughter
Must be pressured for a heir,
We will have our share.


He had a lot of romance ,
maybe he longed for love.
He also had his collection of sad songs unsunged
Patiently did he waited,
for every letter he send .
But a king cant seem to care
Of an unworthy boy's sham.
"Make him a MAN
or dont ever show him "
But the things that are shown dont have a will.
Will the prince meet his father or his king
One must think what the glory brings
Now he is what the king wanted,
now he is what every father wants.
He is, in that heroic stream
But he is everything what every person deemed.

END

The poem is about a scene where a prince return to his home after a long time
Everyone is cheering for him and hailing him.

The first para is sung by the scholars of how he will be remembered in history

The second pera is sung by the ministers or anyone with a high rank to sure favours from him

The third one is sung by an old woman who took care of him since birth . She is sad that no one will remember the part of prince that she knows as it will not be included in history

#Einstestine
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#review Your promise with that kiss on my cheek feels like from last night and your giggle all over my best still makes my heart warm, they tell me I have been thinking too long but I still remember you saying wait till I come home. It's not the pain anymore but dark silence in the night and the echo of your voice.
You told me I don't love you anymore!

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I have been waiting lighting to strike
I am hanging by a cliff just a little
I am drowning in the ocean breath by breath
At first I thought it's my time to escape
this prision like life.
But I found I m not done yet
there's more life is left
in my imprisonment and I have to
serve my time not for me
For the sake of balance between
order and chaos
right and wrong
light and darkness
because if not me then someone
else will suffer in my place
And so the another story start revolving.

#review
I have been waiting lighting to strike
I am hanging by a cliff just a little
I am drowning in the ocean breath by breath
At first I thought it's my time to escape
this prision like life.
But I found I m not done yet
there's more life is left
in my imprisonment and I have to
serve my time not for me
For the sake of balance between
order and chaos
right and wrong
light and darkness
because if not me then someone
else will suffer in my place
And so the another story start revolving.

MY-THE ONE

I met her as many strangers before,
but felt strange knock down on my hearts door.
Welcomed her as undesired guest,
but never thought ! she will reach to my core.
Sudden questions aroused out of my mind,
Is she is the one who join me to divine.
Shiny eyes like twinkling stars,
Lovely face as a blessing of mother nature,
Beautiful hairs as monsoon clouds creature,
A joyful pretty killer smile ,
Which could stop deadliest wars.
When she talks to me ,when she laughs with me,
My pain, my anger , disappears
Like there is nothing before like that.
I wonder that the moment will remain the same,
For the whole life till I remain.
With the passage of time I knew ,
A dream I imagined will never ever come true .
Later I decided to erase her memories,
But I can't keep her out of my mind,
Because of her deep imprints on my HEART .
I tried to sleep , but when I close my eyes
I saw her smiling face,
I heard her voice,
I remember the moments I spent with her .
"It's no one either, it's you , only you,
And my UNFATHOMABLE love."

#review #indranathbhagat