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Quietly quietly..
i smoulder and burn,
The void inside, feeding on me..

Shackles of society,
Straining me numb.
Debts of duty,
a burden to bear.
Weighing me
dragging me
Down
...down
......down

Quietly quietly..
I seethe and rage,
The void inside, gaining on me.
Ever empty eyes,
Devoid of joy
stare through,
Their fake smiles, subtle ploys.

Quietly quietly..
I weep inside,
sobbing in silence
Muffling my screams
Regrets of choices
Of drowning my dreams

quietly quietly..
I smoulder and burn,
The void inside, feeding on me.


#review #AwaraAmber #thoughts
Sarcastic

I do not have much to tell the world,
So I pose,
I write gibberish words,
That will show case me as an intellectual,
I write how dark my life is,
Then once finished, I will ask mom
"Why my coffee is cold today ?"
I write how I miss the one I love,
Then I go text my 5 concubines,
I would say, I don't want attention,
But I go seek and suck up on everything.

Deep inside I would know that,
I'm mediocre and want to be appreciated,
But the only way I could do that,
Is pose.
Lies, fakes and utter non sense to
Make myself feel,
How great am,when im nothing.

#review #poem. #modernday poets
I used my money to Creat my empires
But some people destroy this and give me flowers
I don't know how do take revenge on them
But one day I will destroy them

They have taken away my business from me.
But I know the whole world with me
Some people call me a fugitive.
But one day I will proof that I'm native.

Nobody feel my pain
Because may be in future I will go in jail
IPL will start from tomorrow
But I'm not there because of covid

All guys pray for me
I wil return and pay back all money
And review my poetry
Than you will get a job in my factory..
( don't take last line seriously)

#review #poetry #mallaya
The world is a void, the darkness all the miseries
You give, you get and you get what you give.
Build your walls, draw your lines,
But break the one. That one that stops you.

The thorn that pricks you from touching your soul.
The storm that scares you from riding the waves of life.
The heart that pumps hate in your blood,
Trapping your delicate words, choking you up.

The wall you built, you break it down
Start to love, and start to own
Be your own wrecking ball,
Easier said, but you won't fall.

Start to love your self. Start to own your self.
Be your wrecking ball, and break the wall for good.
- #Gayathry

#review #poem
#review #poetry #collaboration #Volfortat #The_Lost_Poet

A Girl of a unknown land,
In the winter a scarf she had.
But a fang, like a little lamb,
between a tree she sat.
Questioning the intrinsic value,
of being alive and obligations.
Her beauty would knife you,
until you're out of sensations.

She asks the light if she can stay
Her mind is blank, thoughts disarrayed
Longing to find her role in this play
She's a weakened spirit and fades.

Her eyes look up with her soul well worn
A heavy heart and a recurrent sigh is the norm
But a mystical smile cuts through her scorn
Tears that cut her cheeks now be pearls that adorn.

But sudden was the feeling that goes,
As the water in a blink of an eye flows,
That same question perpetuating,
For which her misery she was reverberating

"I don't exist, as such i deny my existing.
I don't believe as a being i am living,
not for my own rambling apart sinning.
And such existence isn't a bell ringing.
i deny it for you because you need belief
And this mediocre existence is but a leaf."

And a being, no man, from the sky appeared:
"Don't worry, child for you have yet to sin,
but no greater than man's own selfish beard.
I am not a dictator nor an atrocious god nor grim,
You shall from me expect no face within afraid"
These were the words from which god was made.

"I only take from you, your freedom, faith i request,
And thinking is prohibited," — He said.

But as she thought and thought, patience was over,
And then she said: "I want a mind with no rover"
And by her heart, she followed, denying god once more,
Denying her fate, her treason to herself and her lore.
For she is not too late, and as such she went,
God's disappearing, to heaven him she had sent.
He broke the glass
And held the knife,
He cut himself
to bleed tonight...

He wants it all to go right.
But somehow, he always falls into the fight.

#review #lines #poetry #guide
This aching feeling in my heart,
Devastating my soul slowly.
I'm lonely.

I wanna Rejoicing my self,
But I always find my self anxiously.
I'm lonely.

Yes, I have so many people around,
Still I'm lonely. Lata Garg #review
#review
#quote
#Aarushi
Every second of your life is auspicious if you use it for a good deed,
and even the best time isn't auspicious if the deed isn't good.
#review
#jessica
#poem
I will love till I remember everything I give is going to come back.
Every time I love,
I remember I am feeling all that essence.
No matter we don't talk,
I just close my eyes and feel your presence..
I know we don't have that official love affiliation,
But inside I want to have a good liaison.
I am so much in love that I start visualising...
"What will happen when we meet?
I will have no words how will I greet!"
There is all this story I have to keep in my arms..
I have my pen and paper that gives me a chance.
It does not remain the same,
The story is now changed.
Today I have no happy
feelings to be framed.
Only a sad love story written above my name.
No love is left between us it seems,
Still I know you love me and that is what it means..
I don't know whether it's right or wrong,
But I will love till I ain't gone
I want to repeat, loving and writing is what special I have.
I will write lovely till I remember everything I give's gonna come back.

-jessica Vishwakarma
Betrayal

She was love of my life
I thought so
Love was sweet
no wonder I got a new visual of life
Felt good! World seemed colourful.
Lyrics of all the love songs I heard
Started making sense.

Love became addiction
Worse than dope.
friends were ignored
Family was forgotten.
weight of the wallet got low than my self esteem
At her feet.
Money and my time
Raced to extinction.

You weren't good enough for me..
she said again and again and again
she needed her space.
I had lots in my heart. Still not enough!

"Let's break up" she said
Too tired to beg. Too hard to accept.
My Beading eyes searched for my pal

He was there. He was there.
There he stood. Smiling
Oh my friend!
I needed his shoulders.
The very shoulders
She was holding with joy..

Turning back without a word
I had all the time in the world
Though too tired to walk.
My mind raced to find out.
Whose betrayal cuts too deep?
So called friend or
Soul sucking fiance.


#poetry
#review
#sanjaik
#review
#Aarushi
#quote
Remember, no matter what names people call you, you will never become what they call you until you start believing what they say.
#review
#poem
#waiting

WaitWait

It was a winter then, when we spoke.. Words that were truth, pure as snow..
Spring is here now as I woke.. Silence amidst just like the wind it flows..

Time passes like a sand from hand... And it's been a desert long..
Days and nights and month ends.. Must've missed the few as I counted wrong..

But your presence is like that chill breeze..
That one could feel in the summer's eve..
Leave me calm and free and my heart's at ease..
And I'll live it again and this is what I believe..
#review
#quote
#thoughts

Is it a balance game of some sort?
Why one has to cry for other to smile?
Why can't everyone around me be happy?
While I'm all laugh, why someone's having a break down?
Why we smile when it's just a lie?
Why nothing's simple which lies in a plain sight?
For the happiness does someone really has to pay the price?
#review
#short_tales

"Which sky do you see?"
"One made of blue squares", said the bird in a cage.
#review
#poem #ashes
Ocean of Burning Sand.

Across the still waters, a fleet of boat; 
broken are the oars broken are the men ,
A feeling settles and sinks in the heart 
a little ray of hope din't make it to the dark den , 
Every times the scotch mist drizzles on the skin, 
sad are the bleeding heart waiting for the sun again .
Bring me back the rustic scent of those days, my heart longs every now and then.

The satin sand slips from the fist , makes the noise so crisp and warm ,
The droplets set to make their way graze the hazel eyes, hiding inside is a roaring storm  ,
Time has come , time has come , says the racing heart,
Its time to walk ahead and do what is your part.
What good are the goodbye's that rips the old oak from her soul apart.
Its a stained shroud and a trembling hands and the lone humdrum starts.

The singing sand whistles through the dunes , scorching sea and burning fumes.
There walks a tender pair , burning are the feet against all odds and the blazing heat..
The solace lost and found in strings it's a world full words and a scar that stings.
Alone in the crowd is the journey planned the screaming silence and a ocean of burning sand..                                                         Ashes
#review #poem #ashes
Memories


Memories , some burst of colours, some very define, some pale and faint.
Spaced in the time and reality there is no time for a re-visit or a retouch of paint .

These pictures tell you who you are and the journey that made “you” today .
Your picture in some one’s mind and heart may bring a smile and make it a day. 


Options are many, you could be a soul remembered for ages to come and go 
For you have brought in the joy of sharing and bringing smile where ever you go 

Or you crumbled the paper, tore it apart too hard to be undone 
One day you are gone and your memories are timbered , choose care fully which one.
...Ashes
#review
#song

Don't Deserve A FixDon't Deserve A Fix

Ever young memories starts to fade,
Silver lining of my clouds is in black shade,
And no matter what I do I can't change,

Don't give me all of your time,
Every passing second is a waste,
Maybe I don't deserve a fix..

Leave me with my broken pieces,
That's all how I wanna be,
Maybe I don't deserve a fix..
#review
#thoughts

The floor was screeched by her nails,
But even the walls didn't hear a word,
All the cries and agony went in vain,
But the "silence" after was heard.
#review
#Kia
#thoughts
An untold tale of endurance of a heart , sustaining blows; ironically alone.
#review
#Kia
#thoughs
Burdened heart, sniveling eyes;
Unspoken thoughts, restless nights;
Waiting for eternal acceptance .
#review
#Kia
#thoughs
My trembling lips were urging to break the selcouth silence and tell you that all i ever desire is to be in your sighs, surrendered in your arms. Bewitched by your sight, and intoxicated by your memories .