#Adi #review #poem
Shield,
What people need, is a shield.
Shield to save their futile lives,
Shield to save themselves from the guilt,
Shield to hide their bad deeds,
Shield to look great in everyone's eyes,
Shield which is made up of lies,
Shield which will be wield to crush
others,
Shield to live life in harmony after destroying Innocents.
Shield,
What people need, is a shield.
Shield to save their futile lives,
Shield to save themselves from the guilt,
Shield to hide their bad deeds,
Shield to look great in everyone's eyes,
Shield which is made up of lies,
Shield which will be wield to crush
others,
Shield to live life in harmony after destroying Innocents.
#review #poetry #love
You turned my darkness into light
You made everything alright
You picked me up when I was down
You turned my life around
If I don't have you, what would l
be
A blessing is what you are to me.
The world is full of many people
But there is only one of you
You fill my heart with love
You are God sent gift for me
An angel is what you are to me
There is no reason to be sad
You've taken away all the bad
A best friend is what you are to me❤️
You turned my darkness into light
You made everything alright
You picked me up when I was down
You turned my life around
If I don't have you, what would l
be
A blessing is what you are to me.
The world is full of many people
But there is only one of you
You fill my heart with love
You are God sent gift for me
An angel is what you are to me
There is no reason to be sad
You've taken away all the bad
A best friend is what you are to me❤️
#review #Saviour #shortstory
| Cause it hurts...|
‘Okay. And tell me exactly how you feel about her?’
‘I mean, you know, I’d like to keep it to myself.’ I said. ‘I love some girl out there and that’s it. That’s all I want you to know for the time being.’
‘But you can trust me on that!’ she said, childishly, like a 5 y/o girl wanting to know everything that’s happening around her.
‘Hey… you don’t need to assure me that every now and then. I know I can trust you. Completely. I know that. It’s just that—’ I took a pause, and said again, ‘It’s just that… I don’t know. I don’t feel like sharing this to anyone as of now.’
‘Not even to your closest friend?’
‘No, not even to him.’
‘Does it hurt? I mean, not getting the love you deserve, and not being able to share this with anyone, too. Does it hurt?’
‘I’ll be honest with you.’ I said. ‘It did before. It wasn’t a long time back when it used to hurt a lot.’
‘But now it doesn’t?’
‘I’d be lying if I say it doesn’t hurt at all.’ I said. ‘You see things ain’t going your way, and you get hurt. That’s how it goes. But now my heart and mind walk along the same lane. They are quite congenial to each other. To what they want and what they deserve.’
‘A bit of philosophy, ha?’ she said.
‘If you don’t want to sound a bit filmy— or cliché is the more precise word what people are using these days— philosophy is the only way around.’ I said. ‘So you do get it, don’t you?’
‘I’m very much unknown to Seneca or Socrates or Plato.’ she said. ‘But since I’ve to answer you something, I would say— you’ve other things to focus upon, too, other than love. Like goals and career. Is that what you’re talking about?’
‘Give yourself a hard slap on your back, smart lady! That’s the size of it.’
‘Yayy, chocolates? Now I need chocolates.’
‘Don’t you fear god? Your fathers’ salary is thrice to my fathers’. And I and my sister have grown up eating chalks and slate pencils. You still want some chocolates?’
‘I hate you.’
‘Accepted. At least this won’t hurt as much as love does.’ I replied, with a dry smile.
| Cause it hurts...|
‘Okay. And tell me exactly how you feel about her?’
‘I mean, you know, I’d like to keep it to myself.’ I said. ‘I love some girl out there and that’s it. That’s all I want you to know for the time being.’
‘But you can trust me on that!’ she said, childishly, like a 5 y/o girl wanting to know everything that’s happening around her.
‘Hey… you don’t need to assure me that every now and then. I know I can trust you. Completely. I know that. It’s just that—’ I took a pause, and said again, ‘It’s just that… I don’t know. I don’t feel like sharing this to anyone as of now.’
‘Not even to your closest friend?’
‘No, not even to him.’
‘Does it hurt? I mean, not getting the love you deserve, and not being able to share this with anyone, too. Does it hurt?’
‘I’ll be honest with you.’ I said. ‘It did before. It wasn’t a long time back when it used to hurt a lot.’
‘But now it doesn’t?’
‘I’d be lying if I say it doesn’t hurt at all.’ I said. ‘You see things ain’t going your way, and you get hurt. That’s how it goes. But now my heart and mind walk along the same lane. They are quite congenial to each other. To what they want and what they deserve.’
‘A bit of philosophy, ha?’ she said.
‘If you don’t want to sound a bit filmy— or cliché is the more precise word what people are using these days— philosophy is the only way around.’ I said. ‘So you do get it, don’t you?’
‘I’m very much unknown to Seneca or Socrates or Plato.’ she said. ‘But since I’ve to answer you something, I would say— you’ve other things to focus upon, too, other than love. Like goals and career. Is that what you’re talking about?’
‘Give yourself a hard slap on your back, smart lady! That’s the size of it.’
‘Yayy, chocolates? Now I need chocolates.’
‘Don’t you fear god? Your fathers’ salary is thrice to my fathers’. And I and my sister have grown up eating chalks and slate pencils. You still want some chocolates?’
‘I hate you.’
‘Accepted. At least this won’t hurt as much as love does.’ I replied, with a dry smile.
|NOTHING IN PROMPTICULAR|
DAY 14
CONDITION: Thriller
PROMPT: Without his big toes it was incredibly difficult to walk…
||PART 1||
“Josh Wake up!” Her whisper was firm and impatient. There wasn’t much time. Crouched by his bedside to keep from being spotted, she tried again.
Still nothing! Josh had evidently been drugged. Sue sighed, disappointed at her newest thought. She counted down in her head and…BARGE!
Josh flew off the table with his makeshift pillow. His face got planted into the uneven ground. His fall shook the structure. She didn’t have to be told. Her cover had been blown. Much worse, by a glorified idiot! Why did he have to be so important anyway?
She crawled to him and turned him over hoping for the best. A bloody nose was fine in her books. She prayed against a broken one though. Josh Kent, the face of the morning show, won’t be as dashing with a lopsided nose. The city would never forgive one who ruined such a perfect face.
Sue’s eyes widened. Blood snaked from his nostrils but the bloke was still asleep. Her first aid instincts kicked in. She flew into chest compressions all the while listening for the long overdue sound of menacing footsteps.
She took a better look at her surroundings. A large room with tools and worktables everywhere. Dirty oil, a makeshift sickbed with full on torture equipment nearby. The stuffiness was sickening. The lighting obscured vision. Dust clung to every molecule of oxygen. Two things in the room made her smile however. Many places to hide and the fiery red nail gun she had salvaged.
“Come on. Come on!” Sue whispered again. Talking undertone was hellish. She was used to barking everything. She had to command respect from her diminutive frame. A large voice made things easier for her.
Sue cringed at her next thought. On a normal day she’d slap a man awake. But this time it was Josh and his nose was already being generous with the blood. Mouth to mouth resuscitation…that was her last resort.
She dropped the nailgun, knelt down over him, wiped his leaking face with gentle palms, puckered up some juicy lips, screwed her eyes shut and dove in.
Contact!
With his palm!?
...
“You? Try to kiss me?” He cringed at the thought of it. “I don’t even know you!” He shrieked.
“What? You were awake this whole time?” Her embarrassment couldn’t be hidden.
“YES! Awake enough to see that you’re pretty cheap. AND THIRSTY! Ugly ol' woman.” His words impaled every part of her. Again, the mantra of her world was validated. “ All men are the same”
“You’d say this to the woman risking her life to save you?” She protested.
“Don’t talk like you’re perfect. You tried to kiss a sleeping man you just met!”. His accusation stabbed her. Her fists deformed into clenches. Her pale Caucasian skin began to burn. Her teeth clamped down on the horrid words she wanted to spew.
Sue lost the internal battle and shot words at him anyway, “Your socks reek! And you look better on TV!”
Slowly getting back to her feet she said, “Escape on your own since you’re so perfect.” She mopped her eyes with her sleeve before her tears broke out.
“I risk my life to save you and…QUICK! HIDE,SOMEONE IS COMING!” She commanded undertone...
To be continued
#MA #review #shortstory
DAY 14
CONDITION: Thriller
PROMPT: Without his big toes it was incredibly difficult to walk…
||PART 1||
“Josh Wake up!” Her whisper was firm and impatient. There wasn’t much time. Crouched by his bedside to keep from being spotted, she tried again.
Still nothing! Josh had evidently been drugged. Sue sighed, disappointed at her newest thought. She counted down in her head and…BARGE!
Josh flew off the table with his makeshift pillow. His face got planted into the uneven ground. His fall shook the structure. She didn’t have to be told. Her cover had been blown. Much worse, by a glorified idiot! Why did he have to be so important anyway?
She crawled to him and turned him over hoping for the best. A bloody nose was fine in her books. She prayed against a broken one though. Josh Kent, the face of the morning show, won’t be as dashing with a lopsided nose. The city would never forgive one who ruined such a perfect face.
Sue’s eyes widened. Blood snaked from his nostrils but the bloke was still asleep. Her first aid instincts kicked in. She flew into chest compressions all the while listening for the long overdue sound of menacing footsteps.
She took a better look at her surroundings. A large room with tools and worktables everywhere. Dirty oil, a makeshift sickbed with full on torture equipment nearby. The stuffiness was sickening. The lighting obscured vision. Dust clung to every molecule of oxygen. Two things in the room made her smile however. Many places to hide and the fiery red nail gun she had salvaged.
“Come on. Come on!” Sue whispered again. Talking undertone was hellish. She was used to barking everything. She had to command respect from her diminutive frame. A large voice made things easier for her.
Sue cringed at her next thought. On a normal day she’d slap a man awake. But this time it was Josh and his nose was already being generous with the blood. Mouth to mouth resuscitation…that was her last resort.
She dropped the nailgun, knelt down over him, wiped his leaking face with gentle palms, puckered up some juicy lips, screwed her eyes shut and dove in.
Contact!
With his palm!?
...
“You? Try to kiss me?” He cringed at the thought of it. “I don’t even know you!” He shrieked.
“What? You were awake this whole time?” Her embarrassment couldn’t be hidden.
“YES! Awake enough to see that you’re pretty cheap. AND THIRSTY! Ugly ol' woman.” His words impaled every part of her. Again, the mantra of her world was validated. “ All men are the same”
“You’d say this to the woman risking her life to save you?” She protested.
“Don’t talk like you’re perfect. You tried to kiss a sleeping man you just met!”. His accusation stabbed her. Her fists deformed into clenches. Her pale Caucasian skin began to burn. Her teeth clamped down on the horrid words she wanted to spew.
Sue lost the internal battle and shot words at him anyway, “Your socks reek! And you look better on TV!”
Slowly getting back to her feet she said, “Escape on your own since you’re so perfect.” She mopped her eyes with her sleeve before her tears broke out.
“I risk my life to save you and…QUICK! HIDE,SOMEONE IS COMING!” She commanded undertone...
To be continued
#MA #review #shortstory
||PART 2||
The footsteps were getting louder. She was deep in enemy territory. Those boots could certainly not be friendly.
Sue vanished behind the closest worktable. Josh sprung up to a vertical base. Took one step and belly flopped to the ground.
“Sue help me!” He pulled himself towards the worktable on his forearms.
“Shit! Josh, this isn’t the time for games!” An infuriated Sue peered from behind the table and took his hand. There was still no sign of the imminent threat.
“No, no don’t pull me!” Josh argued. "The oil is going to..."
His sentence was truncated by her tug. By now he was sliding through the dirty oil on the ground at the mercy of Sue's yank.
…
“Pretty boy! It’s lunchtime.” The menacing steps were finally in the room. The owner of the footsteps had a hostile rasp in his voice.
He seemed to be examining the place. Sue could tell from his slow wandering steps. “Pathetic! I know you’re here and I know pretty boy couldn’t do this alone.” The intruder said as he picked up a steel bar from the floor.
“Pretty boy, you have one more chance to show yourself.”
The intruder dealt three blows to the nearest worktable. That was his innovative way of counting. With no sign of Josh, he shrugged.
”It looks like you are on the menu. Let the games begin.”
…
“Josh what was the one-step- fall about? The penguin dance? ” Sue protested.
“An angry baton man is coming. Don’t argue or I’ll shout”.
“Fool! He’ll kill you first.” Sue countered.
Josh made a face to complement his idiocy and tried to change the topic. “I can’t believe you! Now I’ve got dirty oil in my shirt."
“Your socks are the real problem here! They’d still reek from six feet under. Take them off.” Sue didn’t miss the opportunity to pounce on him.
Baton man's attacks on innocent worktables were getting closer. Their incessant whispering was going to be a dead give away.
Josh slipped both socks off after Sue's harsh attack on his person…
“OH SHIT! WHERE ARE YOUR TOES?!” Sue yelled. She covered her mouth realizing she had exposed them.
“I’ve got you, fat rat! And your screeching partner too!” The intruder threatened. His boots charged in their direction...
“Wow so much for undercover rescue! Who’s the idiot now?!” Josh muttered as he flared his nose at Sue...
"So that's why you couldn't walk?" she asked still dumbfounded.
"If we die it's your fault, whatever your name is."
"My name is Sue. Keep on your toes and we'll make it out of here alive."
"A toe joke?! Now?" Josh started.
"Be quiet! I have a plan."
To be continued…
(Mainly because, his difficulty in walking would be focused on more during their attempt to escape)
#MA #review #shortstory
The footsteps were getting louder. She was deep in enemy territory. Those boots could certainly not be friendly.
Sue vanished behind the closest worktable. Josh sprung up to a vertical base. Took one step and belly flopped to the ground.
“Sue help me!” He pulled himself towards the worktable on his forearms.
“Shit! Josh, this isn’t the time for games!” An infuriated Sue peered from behind the table and took his hand. There was still no sign of the imminent threat.
“No, no don’t pull me!” Josh argued. "The oil is going to..."
His sentence was truncated by her tug. By now he was sliding through the dirty oil on the ground at the mercy of Sue's yank.
…
“Pretty boy! It’s lunchtime.” The menacing steps were finally in the room. The owner of the footsteps had a hostile rasp in his voice.
He seemed to be examining the place. Sue could tell from his slow wandering steps. “Pathetic! I know you’re here and I know pretty boy couldn’t do this alone.” The intruder said as he picked up a steel bar from the floor.
“Pretty boy, you have one more chance to show yourself.”
The intruder dealt three blows to the nearest worktable. That was his innovative way of counting. With no sign of Josh, he shrugged.
”It looks like you are on the menu. Let the games begin.”
…
“Josh what was the one-step- fall about? The penguin dance? ” Sue protested.
“An angry baton man is coming. Don’t argue or I’ll shout”.
“Fool! He’ll kill you first.” Sue countered.
Josh made a face to complement his idiocy and tried to change the topic. “I can’t believe you! Now I’ve got dirty oil in my shirt."
“Your socks are the real problem here! They’d still reek from six feet under. Take them off.” Sue didn’t miss the opportunity to pounce on him.
Baton man's attacks on innocent worktables were getting closer. Their incessant whispering was going to be a dead give away.
Josh slipped both socks off after Sue's harsh attack on his person…
“OH SHIT! WHERE ARE YOUR TOES?!” Sue yelled. She covered her mouth realizing she had exposed them.
“I’ve got you, fat rat! And your screeching partner too!” The intruder threatened. His boots charged in their direction...
“Wow so much for undercover rescue! Who’s the idiot now?!” Josh muttered as he flared his nose at Sue...
"So that's why you couldn't walk?" she asked still dumbfounded.
"If we die it's your fault, whatever your name is."
"My name is Sue. Keep on your toes and we'll make it out of here alive."
"A toe joke?! Now?" Josh started.
"Be quiet! I have a plan."
To be continued…
(Mainly because, his difficulty in walking would be focused on more during their attempt to escape)
#MA #review #shortstory
I talk to many unknown girls, online.
The app I use does not require any personal details, at all, and that’s why pals use it as a medium of sex-talk.
Truth be told, I’m not any saint, either.
I’m just another boy with yet other hormones. But sex-talk doesn’t make sense to me. I mean, how can you possibly imagine things, on call, that you’ve never done before?
Well, let’s not dive into any further details as it’s already sounding very peculiar.
I’ll tell you why I use that app. Plain and simple.
I love listening to stories coming from girls.
Breakup. Childhood. Drop year. Suicidal thoughts. Chronic disease. Relatives. And all other dark stories, too.
Since we’re totally anonymous on this app, thus, there’s no such thing as you can trust any stranger with your stories or not.
You can.
As far as you’re not telling your complete address to strangers, you can.
So, the moment my call is connected with some random girl, there are few hi’s and hello’s and then comes my intrigue part.
‘If you don’t mind, can you tell me a story about your childhood? Any story?’ I venture.
‘Childhood? Yes, why not! Um, when I was young…’ she would reply, softly.
Speaking of their childhood, 95% of the girls end up telling a dark story. Where, they were touched very inappropriately by some distant relatives, school teacher, or some other male. Mostly known.
Even a little prodding on their stomach, by some male, carves a deep tattoo on the girls’ mind. And it becomes an eternal catastrophic memory.
On hearing so many of these stories, about bad touch, I now understand what I shouldn’t be doing as a male.
I shouldn’t be touching any girl(of whatever age) without her consent.
Because, even if I know that my touch is right, what if someone she trusted, didn’t touch her in the right way? What if she has a past? What if she thinks I’m gonna do the same as some other man did?
So, it’s my responsibility to let her know that she does not have to trust me. At least, not that easily.
I want her to know that it’s completely fine to take enough time for healing. And, I want to let her know that the right man can wait. He’s patient with the girl he loves.
Here, I’m not talking just about my future girlfriend.
I’m talking about my distant cousins who may or may not be comfortable with me, all at once. Or, my little niece, too.
I can wait till she’ll come first, with a broad smile and hands wide open. I can wait until she’ll let me embrace her with all my love.
And, only then, I’ll hug her and tell her that right men exist, too. And now, she needs to leave behind her past for her own good.
#review #Saviour #random
The app I use does not require any personal details, at all, and that’s why pals use it as a medium of sex-talk.
Truth be told, I’m not any saint, either.
I’m just another boy with yet other hormones. But sex-talk doesn’t make sense to me. I mean, how can you possibly imagine things, on call, that you’ve never done before?
Well, let’s not dive into any further details as it’s already sounding very peculiar.
I’ll tell you why I use that app. Plain and simple.
I love listening to stories coming from girls.
Breakup. Childhood. Drop year. Suicidal thoughts. Chronic disease. Relatives. And all other dark stories, too.
Since we’re totally anonymous on this app, thus, there’s no such thing as you can trust any stranger with your stories or not.
You can.
As far as you’re not telling your complete address to strangers, you can.
So, the moment my call is connected with some random girl, there are few hi’s and hello’s and then comes my intrigue part.
‘If you don’t mind, can you tell me a story about your childhood? Any story?’ I venture.
‘Childhood? Yes, why not! Um, when I was young…’ she would reply, softly.
Speaking of their childhood, 95% of the girls end up telling a dark story. Where, they were touched very inappropriately by some distant relatives, school teacher, or some other male. Mostly known.
Even a little prodding on their stomach, by some male, carves a deep tattoo on the girls’ mind. And it becomes an eternal catastrophic memory.
On hearing so many of these stories, about bad touch, I now understand what I shouldn’t be doing as a male.
I shouldn’t be touching any girl(of whatever age) without her consent.
Because, even if I know that my touch is right, what if someone she trusted, didn’t touch her in the right way? What if she has a past? What if she thinks I’m gonna do the same as some other man did?
So, it’s my responsibility to let her know that she does not have to trust me. At least, not that easily.
I want her to know that it’s completely fine to take enough time for healing. And, I want to let her know that the right man can wait. He’s patient with the girl he loves.
Here, I’m not talking just about my future girlfriend.
I’m talking about my distant cousins who may or may not be comfortable with me, all at once. Or, my little niece, too.
I can wait till she’ll come first, with a broad smile and hands wide open. I can wait until she’ll let me embrace her with all my love.
And, only then, I’ll hug her and tell her that right men exist, too. And now, she needs to leave behind her past for her own good.
#review #Saviour #random
#Adi,
#review
"Religion "
Please someone help me over it, I've written both, and there is very slight difference between them.
First
Creator of god and I also made the devil.
I made someone descent, I made someone Evil.
I prospered on your sin and created inferior humanity.
I dragged you into illusion and manipulated reality.
I shrouded the truth and circulated the falsity.
I crushed rebellions and ceased innovation.
I threatened your existence and forced you in oppression.
I thrashed your belief and divided you in factions.
I decided righteousness and I decided orthodox.
God didn't create me but I created God.
Second .
Creator of god and I also made the devil.
I made someone descent, I made someone Evil.
I prospered on your sin,
I created inferior humanity.
I dragged you into illusion,
I manipulated reality.
I shrouded the truth,
I circulated the falsity.
I crushed rebellions,
Iceased innovation.
I threatened your existence,
I forced you in oppression.
I thrashed your belief,
Idivided you in factions.
I decided righteousness and I decided orthodox.
God didn't create me but I created God.
Because,
I am the power,
I am the ruler,
I am delusion,
And I am religion.
#review
"Religion "
Please someone help me over it, I've written both, and there is very slight difference between them.
First
Creator of god and I also made the devil.
I made someone descent, I made someone Evil.
I prospered on your sin and created inferior humanity.
I dragged you into illusion and manipulated reality.
I shrouded the truth and circulated the falsity.
I crushed rebellions and ceased innovation.
I threatened your existence and forced you in oppression.
I thrashed your belief and divided you in factions.
I decided righteousness and I decided orthodox.
God didn't create me but I created God.
Second .
Creator of god and I also made the devil.
I made someone descent, I made someone Evil.
I prospered on your sin,
I created inferior humanity.
I dragged you into illusion,
I manipulated reality.
I shrouded the truth,
I circulated the falsity.
I crushed rebellions,
Iceased innovation.
I threatened your existence,
I forced you in oppression.
I thrashed your belief,
Idivided you in factions.
I decided righteousness and I decided orthodox.
God didn't create me but I created God.
Because,
I am the power,
I am the ruler,
I am delusion,
And I am religion.
//Trigger warning//
FELON
The first time I saw you,
you smiled
I fell for you and
into your love I dived
you asked me out that night
I had butterflies in my stomach
but your intentions weren't right
you touched me
It wasn't the you
whom I knew
I saw your vicious side
hungry for my hide
I begged and cried at you
you grabbed me and
started to chew
In pain, I yelled and
tried to loosen your grip
you had turned into a maniac
you smudged my lipstick
and removed my hairclip
threw me on your bed
I saw you undress
I revolted when you
gave me that hard press
you didn't stop
and as I bled
I fell numb, I felt dead
my sight was fading
when I saw you
leave the room with your shirt on
I lied on that bed
half alive, half dead
I had no strength to get up
and face anyone
I was ravished by someone
who was my world
I headed to the window
took a long breath
looked down and
I jumped to my death
now, I'll be in place
where there'll be
no question or answer
no love or torture
It would be just me
without a ravished body
#review
#poem
#AS
FELON
The first time I saw you,
you smiled
I fell for you and
into your love I dived
you asked me out that night
I had butterflies in my stomach
but your intentions weren't right
you touched me
It wasn't the you
whom I knew
I saw your vicious side
hungry for my hide
I begged and cried at you
you grabbed me and
started to chew
In pain, I yelled and
tried to loosen your grip
you had turned into a maniac
you smudged my lipstick
and removed my hairclip
threw me on your bed
I saw you undress
I revolted when you
gave me that hard press
you didn't stop
and as I bled
I fell numb, I felt dead
my sight was fading
when I saw you
leave the room with your shirt on
I lied on that bed
half alive, half dead
I had no strength to get up
and face anyone
I was ravished by someone
who was my world
I headed to the window
took a long breath
looked down and
I jumped to my death
now, I'll be in place
where there'll be
no question or answer
no love or torture
It would be just me
without a ravished body
#review
#poem
#AS
Looks can be deceiving
But a dark heart never hides
Seeing isn't always believing
But imagination doesn't cost a dime
From ashes of mistakes comes grievance
A frigid soul stirs up storms every night
Churning skin to bones, odds to evens
Two steps from heaven, sincerity dies
#review #poetry #The_Lost_Poet
But a dark heart never hides
Seeing isn't always believing
But imagination doesn't cost a dime
From ashes of mistakes comes grievance
A frigid soul stirs up storms every night
Churning skin to bones, odds to evens
Two steps from heaven, sincerity dies
#review #poetry #The_Lost_Poet
#review #thoughts #love
Immature people falling in love
Destroy each other freedom
Creat a bondage. Make a prison
Mature persons in love Help each other to be free
They help each other to destroy
All short of bondage.
And When love flow with freedom there is a beauty.
When love flows with dependence there is ugliness.
Immature people falling in love
Destroy each other freedom
Creat a bondage. Make a prison
Mature persons in love Help each other to be free
They help each other to destroy
All short of bondage.
And When love flow with freedom there is a beauty.
When love flows with dependence there is ugliness.
#Adi
#review
#poem
First
Creator of god and I also made the devil.
I made someone descent, I made someone Evil.
I prospered on your sin and created inferior humanity.
I dragged you into illusion and manipulated reality.
I shrouded the truth and circulated the falsity.
I crushed rebellions and ceased innovation.
I threatened your existence and forced you in oppression.
I thrashed your belief and divided you in factions.
I decided righteousness and I decided orthodox.
God didn't create me but I created God.
Second .
Creator of god and I also made the devil.
I made someone descent, I made someone Evil.
I prospered on your sin,
I created inferior humanity.
I dragged you into illusion,
I manipulated reality.
I shrouded the truth,
I circulated the falsity.
I crushed rebellions,
Iceased innovation.
I threatened your existence,
I forced you in oppression.
I thrashed your belief,
Idivided you in factions.
I decided righteousness and I decided orthodox.
God didn't create me but I created God.
Because,
I am the power,
I am the ruler,
I am delusion,
And I am religion.
Please someone help me over it, I've written both but I can't understand which one to go with. I do think that here is slight difference but it's changing the whole meaning.
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First
Creator of god and I also made the devil.
I made someone descent, I made someone Evil.
I prospered on your sin and created inferior humanity.
I dragged you into illusion and manipulated reality.
I shrouded the truth and circulated the falsity.
I crushed rebellions and ceased innovation.
I threatened your existence and forced you in oppression.
I thrashed your belief and divided you in factions.
I decided righteousness and I decided orthodox.
God didn't create me but I created God.
Second .
Creator of god and I also made the devil.
I made someone descent, I made someone Evil.
I prospered on your sin,
I created inferior humanity.
I dragged you into illusion,
I manipulated reality.
I shrouded the truth,
I circulated the falsity.
I crushed rebellions,
Iceased innovation.
I threatened your existence,
I forced you in oppression.
I thrashed your belief,
Idivided you in factions.
I decided righteousness and I decided orthodox.
God didn't create me but I created God.
Because,
I am the power,
I am the ruler,
I am delusion,
And I am religion.
Please someone help me over it, I've written both but I can't understand which one to go with. I do think that here is slight difference but it's changing the whole meaning.
I pretend that I'm good
But all the pain is there, under the hood
You'll see me smile and laugh
But you won't know what's going on inside, not even half
I'm hurting, hurting really bad
Don't worry, won't tell you and make you mad
I'm strong, stronger than you could ever know
Emotions are not something I don't really show
I'm gonna put a big smile again today
Will fool you all again and keep from my true self , away
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But all the pain is there, under the hood
You'll see me smile and laugh
But you won't know what's going on inside, not even half
I'm hurting, hurting really bad
Don't worry, won't tell you and make you mad
I'm strong, stronger than you could ever know
Emotions are not something I don't really show
I'm gonna put a big smile again today
Will fool you all again and keep from my true self , away
#MuskanMishra #review #poetry
I eye her while she’s on a walk with someone who seems like her mother.
She’s 5′7″ and her mother 5′3″. That’s what I presume from 50 meters afar and three storeys up.
She looks perfect.
Her hair tied like a braided bun and wearing that cut-off denim shorts on those small carves, long legs: she looks absolutely perfect.
The road where she’s walking seems endless.
I want to go out there and maybe ask her mom to go home while I walk with her daughter, maintaining a proper one-hand distance.
I want to assure her mother that she’s all safe with me.
I want to assure her that all I wish for is to walk with her daughter. Maybe crack a little joke here and there to make her laugh: but nothing more than that.
As I’m planning-my-plans-in-my-head, my beautiful 5′7″ is long gone away from my detect.
But that’s okay.
I’ll go on a walk tomorrow at exact 8:58 PM to espy her walking right on my right/right on my left.
I’ll walk and walk and walk. I’ll walk till she notices me.
I’ll walk exactly how Forrest Gump ran in his low days.
I’m at my low days
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She’s 5′7″ and her mother 5′3″. That’s what I presume from 50 meters afar and three storeys up.
She looks perfect.
Her hair tied like a braided bun and wearing that cut-off denim shorts on those small carves, long legs: she looks absolutely perfect.
The road where she’s walking seems endless.
I want to go out there and maybe ask her mom to go home while I walk with her daughter, maintaining a proper one-hand distance.
I want to assure her mother that she’s all safe with me.
I want to assure her that all I wish for is to walk with her daughter. Maybe crack a little joke here and there to make her laugh: but nothing more than that.
As I’m planning-my-plans-in-my-head, my beautiful 5′7″ is long gone away from my detect.
But that’s okay.
I’ll go on a walk tomorrow at exact 8:58 PM to espy her walking right on my right/right on my left.
I’ll walk and walk and walk. I’ll walk till she notices me.
I’ll walk exactly how Forrest Gump ran in his low days.
I’m at my low days
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Wished Too Much.
My Dear, I make you a promise, a promise to hold true;
If God is to call me back before he calls you.
I will go to the skies to the beautiful place,
To write your name in gold, in the stars' embrace.
Even if I was to do this thing,
It wouldn't begin to speak my love.
And was my love a song to sing,
Forever past would it be sung.
After the skies and moon,
When the stars are past.
Will our love be intune,
There in the empty vast.
But let me stop here, for I have wished too much.
Olny to wish is not to love, and my love is such.
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My Dear, I make you a promise, a promise to hold true;
If God is to call me back before he calls you.
I will go to the skies to the beautiful place,
To write your name in gold, in the stars' embrace.
Even if I was to do this thing,
It wouldn't begin to speak my love.
And was my love a song to sing,
Forever past would it be sung.
After the skies and moon,
When the stars are past.
Will our love be intune,
There in the empty vast.
But let me stop here, for I have wished too much.
Olny to wish is not to love, and my love is such.
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Maya swiftly opened the door, the room was left in bare silence. She kept her footsteps very gently on the floor to avoid any noise. Something was not right. An ill omen was stirring over, she was breathing calmly to force away the ambiguity and anxiety she had. She kept her bag on the table and called,"Mom are you there ?" There was a wandering eco of the word there in the room.
She noticed that the kitchen was locked.She took the keys from the drawer and turned the lock only to witness her mother dead. Blood was flowing like a river in the kitchen of her mother, she was killed horribly. A strain of stress ran down her body and she couldn't stand the site so she plunged away from the kitchen.
Her mother, her head was in the oven burnt, the door was open, hairs produced a foul whiff, her hands and body were dribbling blood. This act was cruel. She was dead. Maya ran out of the room with her curly long brown hairs swinging on her hairs.Her eyes were red with tears. She stopped at the door, taking a support. Nothing was processing in her memory other than the old beautiful moments.
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She noticed that the kitchen was locked.She took the keys from the drawer and turned the lock only to witness her mother dead. Blood was flowing like a river in the kitchen of her mother, she was killed horribly. A strain of stress ran down her body and she couldn't stand the site so she plunged away from the kitchen.
Her mother, her head was in the oven burnt, the door was open, hairs produced a foul whiff, her hands and body were dribbling blood. This act was cruel. She was dead. Maya ran out of the room with her curly long brown hairs swinging on her hairs.Her eyes were red with tears. She stopped at the door, taking a support. Nothing was processing in her memory other than the old beautiful moments.
#review #shortstory #shashwat