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Love in the Tropical Shade.

In the tropical sun-heat,
in the cool shade of the mango tree,
hearts skipped a beat
and felt was a feeling so free.

Wiped were the unseen tears
that had flown so often,
the untold fears,
suddenly gone and forgotten.

It wasn't much to have
albeit being so priceless.
Treasured it was, love,
for it made life fearless.

#rocky #poem #review
#scene
I took her over the grasses which were slighlty wet due to rains, the atmosphere was silent the sky had turned to a bit of orange shade as sun was ready to cease for the day.

There was hardly anything she could speak but her eyes said it all, as I fed here sandwiches there the thin line of stress on her forehead seemed to have vanished even though she could not express I could feel her faint smile.

That was The day I told here the truth knowing hardly was she perceiving anything due to past to seizure attacks.
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Curtain call

When all is said and done,
we will lie sprawled under the sun,
and recur the seasons of verdure and savory dew;
the ethereality of life anew.

When your fur coat turns dun,
and the fireflies, now, you shun,
we will bury our noses in tales, utopian yet blue
and strive to keep a clear hue, wiping a tear or two.

When the battle is won,
and the final curtain is drawn,
over your entrails, a new beginning will ensue.
It is airy tonight, my Canine,
Adieu.

(the last line in the seconds stanza is a reference to the Japanese animated series, Psycho Pass. According to Wiki Fandom, in Psycho Pass, Hue is a reflection of a person's stress level.)

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#poerty
#wca #wcss #review #scene #Go

The Love was bright, and in those deep mysteries of a loveless lovely couple, a song was made for the young girl and young boy, how come you may say? Loveless yet lovely, the dark yet bright love? The Girl was the reason why it was dark, the boy the reason why it was loveless, the obsession they may say of a Valkyrie, the sadness of a not understandable voice of despair from a warrior.
The girl observed the boy, the boy observed the girl, and for once they clash, with clear golden eyes of the girl and despair for the boy’s heart, the girl says – Tell me, Tell me, what I must do, if for your sake I’ll be through – The boy starts to sing – Not by my lake your love I must take – But in one twisted moment the girl sings – Now, don’t worry my own love, grab my hand and become a little dove – This very song, was created by them, and they call themselves the lovely yet loveless couple, singing at the darkest of the parks, within a cloudless autumn, they smile, and they kiss, yet so graciously, yet so beautiful.
The Love was bright, out of their different kind, and once again they may smile.
Oh ! Little girl see barefoot
Walking without her sparefoot!
Her smile was keen
When I had seen ,
But little boy! It took no time
To fade away without a dine.

I walked her so barefoot
To feel the spoofy land
My Lord ! OH GOD!
I felt so harsh ,
Felt like I will have a crash.

I came across her little home
Small and sweet little doom ,
Do we ever turn to think?
What life we live, what food we eat,
To Those have nothing for their feat .

She smiled and smiled
On and on
On the sight of little boots
She will never walk from now
 barefoot.
#poem #review
The Long Wait
It was a breezy sunny afternoon. Joy had chosen a park bench near the tall jacaranda tree close to the center of the lush green park. The moderately strong breeze rustled the jacaranda branches dropping more indigo flowers to the ground than usual.
What a romantic scene? She thought to herself as she glanced at her watch. It was ten minutes past 3.00 p.m. She couldn't believe she had been waiting for the love of her life and her best friend, Mike, for twenty minutes already. It felt like ages as time seemed to drag more than usual.
Anger was starting to build up inside her, owing to the fact that she had waited three months for this day.
"Hey. I'm really sorry for making you wait so long."
A barritone voice spoke softly from behind her. She must have been so deep in thought that she didn't notice Mike walking up to the bench. She turned around and there he was, tall figure with a smile to kill, holding a bouquet of flowers out to her. Excitement took over her body as ran and tightly embraced him.
When they finally broke the long embrace, Mike brought out a speaker.
"I brought a wireless speaker. I really missed dancing to our song with you. I missed you so much."
He turned it on and slow romantic music rent the air. Another embrace followed, but this time they danced slowly to the rhythm of the music.
Joy couldn't mind the long wait, since the satisfaction she felt now seemed to have been worth it. The sun seemed to come to life and smile at them, cheering them on. More jacaranda flowers fell, but this time they had taken the shape of love hearts. If it had been up to her, she would have let that moment go on forever. At last, her love was here with her.
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The Long Wait
It was a breezy sunny afternoon. Joy had chosen a park bench near the tall jacaranda tree close to the center of the lush green park. The moderately strong breeze rustled the jacaranda branches dropping more indigo flowers to the ground than usual.
What a romantic scene? She thought to herself as she glanced at her watch. It was ten minutes past 3.00 p.m. She couldn't believe she had been waiting for the love of her life and her best friend, Mike, for twenty minutes already. It felt like ages as time seemed to drag more than usual.
Anger was starting to build up inside her, owing to the fact that she had waited three months for this day.
"Hey. I'm really sorry for making you wait so long."
A barritone voice spoke softly from behind her. She must have been so deep in thought that she didn't notice Mike walking up to the bench. She turned around and there he was, tall figure with a smile to kill, holding a bouquet of flowers out to her. Excitement took over her body as ran and tightly embraced him.
When they finally broke the long embrace, Mike brought out a speaker.
"I brought a wireless speaker. I really missed dancing to our song with you. I missed you so much."
He turned it on and slow romantic music rent the air. Another embrace followed, but this time they danced slowly to the rhythm of the music.
Joy couldn't mind the long wait, since the satisfaction she felt now seemed to have been worth it. The sun seemed to come to life and smile at them, cheering them on. More jacaranda flowers fell, but this time they had taken the shape of love hearts. If it had been up to her, she would have let that moment go on forever. At last, her love was here with her.
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The night was young. Their hearts were given to each other. They felt as if the time was going so slow that they can count each star in the other one's eye.

The night started when they decided to meet each other in a covid relatable date. They connected each other on a video call. The room was setup in the following manner which was common for both. There was a table. On one side of the table was a cell phone with the front facing the other side and the front camera was on. On the other side was one of them. The table was served with dinner.

They began their online date. It was very romantic all the way. They talked about their hobbies, their jobs, their favourite aspect of each other.

After a while, they decided to do something crazy. They both agreed to break the curfew and meet in the building's lobby which was a common one for both since they were living in one building.

They reached the building's lobby and were amazed by the moment. They held each other and gazed into each other's eyes for sometime. They knew it was the perfect moment for breaking the silence.

Next thing out of nowhere, the man got on his knees and showed his will to marry her. She was breath-taken and nodded without uttering a word.

P.S- They were both diagnosed with Covid and are being vaccinated in a hospital. Please dont copy their stunts and follow all prescribed measures to keep the virus away from you.
Hey , said a twinkling star

That appeared to be not too far

Why are you sleeping so soon?

Come out and look at the beautiful moon

I don't have anybody with me , I said

And was heading towards my cozy bed

What about the girl you message everyday?

Said the star in a cheesy way

Oh! She lives too far

To together see these twinkling stars

And buzz , I received a message out of the blue

It was none other than you

Hey there , your message read

Uh! Uh! And the star had enough said

I know you're wondering what I'm trying to say

To see the stars with you if it's okay

Be my partner in this crime

Now it's getting too difficult to rhyme

( P.S. : it's my first time writing a poem. I know it's too crude . Suggestions are welcome)

#review #poem #everyone #midnight_thoughts
Hey , said a twinkling star,

That appeared to be not too far.


Why are you sleeping so soon?,

Come out and look at the beautiful moon.

I don't have anybody with me , I said

And was heading towards my cozy bed.


What about the girl you message everyday?

Said the star in a cheesy way.

Oh! She lives too far

To together see these twinkling stars.


And buzz , I received a message out of blue,

It was none other than you.

'Hey there' , your message read

' Uh! Uh! ' and the star had enough said .


I know you're wondering what I'm trying to say ,

I want to see the stars together if it's okay

Be my partner in this crime ,

Oh god! It's damn hard to form the perfect rhyme.

( P. S. : I'm a total noob at writing poems. It is one of my first pieces. Please share your valuable feedbacks.)

#everyone #review #poem #midnight_thoughts
#review #NG
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I woke up early this morning with a spring in my step. Today is the day I have waited for ages and going to propose Navita finally. Me and Navita have been friends for ages but the problem is we both are committed but not with each other, so it is needless to say it would be wrong to go any further than friends.

Today is the day when I first met Navita in our society garden and she has been my bestie from then.
We couldn't be in a relationship if I too even tried because she was in a relationship with Piyush but whenever I meet him I always see the anger in his eyes.

Anyway I get out of bed early this morning in a good mood unlike me ,who wouldn't happy in the morning but only been a lazy scum.
Then I got up to take the shower and washed my hair and made sure I will look presentable and look like I had tried. I decided already to wear the T-shirt that was Navita's gift to me on my birthday that states "Janam se aalsi"(Lazy from birth).
And I pick up my phone to call Navita but as I was about to call her I got a text from her, it says,"Hey Ayaan, can we meet today in the society garden at 4 in evening?".

I don't know what was happening to her and why, but still I hope for the best.
So I jumped into the car and all I could think only about Navita. Then I buy a red and yellow color flowers bouquet just like she love.
I reached the garden just on right time and repeating the proposal lines to myself and I saw her coming, the love of my life.
As she came, I welcome her of my best hugs, she nuzzled into my chest and we hugged. She started to cry I felt her tears seep through my T-shirt but I don't care and bent down and cupped Navita's face with my large hand and I said,"It's OK Navi.., But tell me what happened?"
Then she explained me the whole story that how she engaged in a fight with piyush last night and he even slapped her and she also told that she don't wanna be with him not anymore.
And then she hold my hands into her and said,"OK Ayaan I must have to tell this now, , from the first day we met in this garden that place, and today is the only day I gathered enough courage to tell you today on this special day, I Navita is in deeply,madly, througly in love with you Ayaan.."
As I heard her and just looked in her wet eyes and I said "I love you more Navi.."
I lent down and I kissed her gently and finally I am with the person that I meant for.
FADE AWAY

It was the last day I could ever see her, my heart was beating hard and ears were red, It felt like my soul was about to fade away with hers.The weather was sultry, The sun had began to fade away and cool freezing winds were blowing swiftly .

Emilia and I were Good friends to be said frankly but for no reason I was in deep groan more than hers because of the departure, It was like we were never meant to be friends we were like soulmates.

She was diagnosed with cancer last week and that too on 4 th stage, the sky fell on me after I heard about it, She had to go abroad for her medcial treatments but I knew and doctors too that there was no hope over the horizon not even a single ray that hovers to save her.

It was the time to be strong I made her a call and asked if she could come to the park, she readily agreed to meet her friend. I wanted to wave a last good bye .

I reached the park about an hour before her, yhe sky had turned dark by now and stars had begin to twinkle in dim lights ,There was no artificial light in the park, but the light of full moon did scatter all around .

After an hour she reached her eyes were red and she sobbed little I could feel her groans inside me, " Are we meant to be friends " I spoke this words without even thinking what would they sound like but I hardly cared now .

She didn't utter a word , I held her head and kissed her , I wanted to absord every little detail of hers and capture it for entiquity, I thought that she will live in me, some little particles of her will be engulfed , swallowed or inhaled and will remain forever.

I rested my lips on her letting our breathes mingle breaking the chain of friendship.
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A LOST FRIEND A LOST FRIENDA LOST FRIEND

Do you know how it feels to lose a friend,
To sit at their funeral hoping, to heaven they'll ascend?
They say death is something noone can prevent,
But the loss of a soul in its youth, is a loss none can comprehend.

They preached that, "Sadly, it was your time",
But that is an excuse I strongly wish to decline,
Your presence is what made my life sublime,
Taking you away from me so early should be a crime.

Without you life can never be the same,
What makes it worse is that there's noone to blame,
Perpetually keeping you in my memory is now my true aim,
Continuing to fight life's adversities while honoring your name.

Although I'm just human frail and weak,
I hope my words to others will speak,
The sorrow from my ink continues to leak,
Keeping you alive through my poetry is what I seek.

#review #poem #JAV
The promise

A fine young woman, you've become.
Standing before him was his girl. And as she looked up at him with a dazzling smile, the universe couldn't be any more right about this moment. He knew in his heart that her coming into his life was destiny. It had to be. Cupping her face in his hands, he searched her eyes for any hint of regret. He lingered. Waiting for anything. A flicker of doubt, maybe. But her hazel colored eyes only looked at him with admiration—or so he thought. In that moment, her eyebrows furrowed and her thin lips were slightly turned down—just the way they do when she disapproved of something.
Did she have regrets? His hands slowly fell to his sides in defeat. Could this be the end? 7 years he had nurtured her. He tore his eyes away from hers.

"What's wrong?" She inquired, taking his hands in hers and giving them a tight squeeze. She glanced back over her shoulder at the small crowd that had gathered behind them. She gave them a sorry look and turned back her attention to the man before her.
In response, he gave her a nervous smile.
"Nothing..." The uncertainty in his voice was too obvious to miss. Studying her delicate features again, the quizzical look he had seen on her face earlier must have been her just reacting to the disturbing face he was wearing earlier.

Silly me, he thought. He had raised a perceptive girl.

Feeling a little more confident, he pulled her into a hug. At first, she was stiff against his buldging chest but she melted against him, taking in his scent and relishing the moment. He tightened his grip around her tiny frame.
My little girl.

He dropped kisses on her brown curls, running his fingers through them. Even those resembled the heap of tousled hair on his head. Sometimes, he had to remind himself that she wasn't his—that she had been his victim—that the people behind her were her family. Her true family.
Damn the law.

"Are you crying?" She pushed against him.
Embarrassed, he tore at his face, wiping his eyes rather too viciously.
"N-n-no of course not." He stammered.
She giggled and playfully jabbed him with an elbow.
"A wise man once told me, it's okay to cry." She said, a smirk playing on her lips.
He threw his head back laughing like a kid.

Smart smart girl.
Quoting him at a time like this.
"Crazy old man." He muttered.

Just then, the horn blared behind them, startling the duo. They both knew what that meant.
No matter what the press said—Stockholm Syndrome or not, she loved him and he loved her.

"Do you resent me?" He finally had the courage to ask after 7 years of trying.

"For what?" She looked genuinely clueless.
"Taking you....from your family."

She didn't have an answer to that and she wasn't going to think too deeply on it. Standing on her tip toes, She dropped a tender kiss on the temple of the man she had come to know and love. He was family. All she knew was that in one year, she'll be recognized by the Law as an adult.

"One year." She whispered, sticking up her index finger in his face.
"One year." He understood, wrapping his index around hers.

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(I had written this in the hopes of submitting it for the activity but oh well oh well 😂)
Time
Once I saw a clock tick tock,
Then I just sat back and thought,
What is time?
I questioned myself on and on
Peering books from dusk till dawn .

Sitting back still I wonder
Is it time or my brain did blunder?
What is time?
Is it just what passes off,
making one dull and dwarf?

What I make of time is
Its not just bit of science,
What is time I asked myself ;
And this is what I got-

Its a circle round and round
Moving smoothly has no bound,
Life is eternal it never dies
So is time it never flies .

It goes repeating on and on ,
Time I think of what I can
Is just an eternal loop
Never we know it where began
Never we know its end.
#poem #review

I believe in eternity of soul do you?
Oh! It's such a wonderful night,

But you are nowhere in my sight.

Oh I wish ! You didn't live so far ,

We could together see these twinkling stars.

But no worries my dear , please sleep tight,

After I whisper a final good night.

( P. S. : This one was my actual first piece but I thought it was too short)

#review #poem #everyone
My fake friends...
.
Don't give me your love & light
Your fake good vibes
Your smile so bright
. Don't give me your shining sun
Your prayers for peace

...Give to me..
Your blood and bones
Your heavy soul
Your cries and moans
... Give to me..
Your full submission
Your freedom rights
..Give to me
Your tears to sip
Your body bound
..then R.I.P. HATTER
#review #first peice
My fake friends...
.
Don't give me your love & light
Your fake good vibes
Your smile so bright
. Don't give me your shining sun
Your prayers for peace

...Give to me..
Your blood and bones
Your heavy soul
.. Give to me..
your full submission
Your freedom rights
.. Give to me..
your tears to sip
Your body bound
Your ownership...
Then R.I.P
HATTER

#review #poem
A star in the ocean

At edge of my dream
I promised her a view
The sea of truths and
the shower of kisses

Two winters past
Now I've let her go
She built her own boat
And had learnt to sail

I watch from ashore
A distant light
Brighter than those
Stars in the sky

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DEAR TOXIC EX-LOVER

We started off as a picturesque couple,
Perfectly content in our own protected bubble,
We thought we fit together like a puzzle,
Nights would feel incomplete without a kiss and cuddle.

My days were spent showing you the way,
My heart ached seeing you waste away all day,
Hoping you'd find success every night I'd pray,
Constantly pulling you back each time you'd go astray.

I didn't even notice how toxic it had become,
How my mood would fall each time you became numb,
How you'd perpetually stick to me like gum,
How your dependence on me had slowly begun.

I didn't even see how you were pulling me down,
How my face now had a continuous frown,
How your clinginess was making me drown,
How I'd lost my beloved freedom's crown.

Reality soon struck me with a sour taste,
That I lost abit of myself each time we embraced,
That every prayer I'd uttered was a total waste,
These facts pummeled at me leaving me displaced.

You were like a leech sucking me dry,
I tried to tend to your every cry,
To all your requests I'd gladly comply,
Blind to how I was letting my own ambitions die.

Now that you're gone I can finally breathe,
I understand why our time was meant to be brief,
What we had was love I truly believe,
But that love was never enough for the happiness I want to achieve.

You treated me like a cigarette watching me burn,
Rising back up like a phoenix was something you couldn't discern,
Some nights when I'm high thoughts of you would fill me with concern,
But one thing I know for sure is that to you I'd never return.

~ JAV

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