REJECTION
The first thing about that comes to everyone's mind is a negation or a negativity. But none of us barely knows the strength of this word. Rejection is indeed a positive factor. It solely depends on an individuals perception and how he uses this. The utmost strength is achieved when we know we should have or maybe we could have made it be we didn't and there's this spark which makes you even better. Rejection maybe in many forms. Rejection in an interview, rejection from a loved one or a supposedly or a potential loved one or maybe worse rejection life. However i do feel that the worst kind of rejection when we get a no before trying. No you must be wondering how?. Well, this is indeed the worst kind of a rejection. Imagine a person giving all of his time, efforts, every ounce of his energy in for a a certain thing and he does not even get a chance to present it. Can you imagine his mental state?. Or even imagine a person taking efforts to make someone happy, to be friends with them and they, by their acts, makes them feel unwanted. These feelings are worst. Imagine a person in an office or in relationship and he is made feel that he is not a part of it. He is there but he isn't. He was almost there but he was never there. And even worse is our efforts not being appreciated. All these things break a person into pieces.
For me, the person who takes this as a challenge and prove everyone wrong is a real winner. The person who decides to make everyone regret ( obviously with an aim to take a revenge) wins at life. The day he succeeds, he wins at life. With so many hardships he still has that drop of energy to overcome everything and be back at life. These are the real winners.
But, the people who reject, should know that like everything has a way, there's a way to reject. Obviously everything cannot be possible as per our wishes but to say a no in an apt way is so crucial. Even while rejecting, you recognize someone's efforts, make the other person satisfied. Recognizing someone's efforts makes their day. It may not affect you or bother you but it surely does to them. They take out their precious time to make you happy. They care for you. So recognize someone's efforts that they take for you. I even include myself in this. I have done wrong to many people and today getting somethings back.. I feel the pain. Not only pain but frustrating, anger. Karma is really a bitch. Obviously you cannot be everything to everyone and you the way you feel for someone or consider someone important it's not necessary they may feel so. That's why ek tarfa things are real hard to handle. But ek tarfa pyaar ki taakat bhi kch kam nahi. And Rejections cannot only be negative. You did your bit. You took your efforts. You may not necessarily get what you want but at least have the satisfaction of doing your bit. Get back at life as those efforts which you took will only be fruitful if the other person recognizes. Which is not true in every case. Soo to all the people whose efforts i did not appreciate. I am sorry. And one thing '' someone maybe important to you but you may or may not be '' so know your worth and take efforts for the right things are the right person.
#review #Parth
The first thing about that comes to everyone's mind is a negation or a negativity. But none of us barely knows the strength of this word. Rejection is indeed a positive factor. It solely depends on an individuals perception and how he uses this. The utmost strength is achieved when we know we should have or maybe we could have made it be we didn't and there's this spark which makes you even better. Rejection maybe in many forms. Rejection in an interview, rejection from a loved one or a supposedly or a potential loved one or maybe worse rejection life. However i do feel that the worst kind of rejection when we get a no before trying. No you must be wondering how?. Well, this is indeed the worst kind of a rejection. Imagine a person giving all of his time, efforts, every ounce of his energy in for a a certain thing and he does not even get a chance to present it. Can you imagine his mental state?. Or even imagine a person taking efforts to make someone happy, to be friends with them and they, by their acts, makes them feel unwanted. These feelings are worst. Imagine a person in an office or in relationship and he is made feel that he is not a part of it. He is there but he isn't. He was almost there but he was never there. And even worse is our efforts not being appreciated. All these things break a person into pieces.
For me, the person who takes this as a challenge and prove everyone wrong is a real winner. The person who decides to make everyone regret ( obviously with an aim to take a revenge) wins at life. The day he succeeds, he wins at life. With so many hardships he still has that drop of energy to overcome everything and be back at life. These are the real winners.
But, the people who reject, should know that like everything has a way, there's a way to reject. Obviously everything cannot be possible as per our wishes but to say a no in an apt way is so crucial. Even while rejecting, you recognize someone's efforts, make the other person satisfied. Recognizing someone's efforts makes their day. It may not affect you or bother you but it surely does to them. They take out their precious time to make you happy. They care for you. So recognize someone's efforts that they take for you. I even include myself in this. I have done wrong to many people and today getting somethings back.. I feel the pain. Not only pain but frustrating, anger. Karma is really a bitch. Obviously you cannot be everything to everyone and you the way you feel for someone or consider someone important it's not necessary they may feel so. That's why ek tarfa things are real hard to handle. But ek tarfa pyaar ki taakat bhi kch kam nahi. And Rejections cannot only be negative. You did your bit. You took your efforts. You may not necessarily get what you want but at least have the satisfaction of doing your bit. Get back at life as those efforts which you took will only be fruitful if the other person recognizes. Which is not true in every case. Soo to all the people whose efforts i did not appreciate. I am sorry. And one thing '' someone maybe important to you but you may or may not be '' so know your worth and take efforts for the right things are the right person.
#review #Parth
Rejection. The first thing about that comes to everyone's mind is a negation or a negativity. But none of us barely knows the strength of this word. Rejection is indeed a positive factor. It solely depends on an individuals perception and how he uses this. The utmost strength is achieved when we know we should have or maybe we could have made it be we didn't and there's this spark which makes you even better. Rejection maybe in many forms. Rejection in an interview, rejection from a loved one or a supposedly or a potential loved one or maybe worse rejection life. However i do feel that the worst kind of rejection when we get a no before trying. No you must be wondering how?. Well, this is indeed the worst kind of a rejection. Imagine a person giving all of his time, efforts, every ounce of his energy in for a a certain thing and he does not even get a chance to present it. Can you imagine his mental state?. Or even imagine a person taking efforts to make someone happy, to be friends with them and they, by their acts, makes them feel unwanted. These feelings are worst. Imagine a person in an office or in relationship and he is made feel that he is not a part of it. He is there but he isn't. He was almost there but he was never there. And even worse is our efforts not being appreciated. All these things break a person into pieces.
For me, the person who takes this as a challenge and prove everyone wrong is a real winner. The person who decides to make everyone regret ( obviously with an aim to take a revenge) wins at life. The day he succeeds, he wins at life. With so many hardships he still has that drop of energy to overcome everything and be back at life. These are the real winners.
But, the people who reject, should know that like everything has a way, there's a way to reject. Obviously everything cannot be possible as per our wishes but to say a no in an apt way is so crucial. Even while rejecting, you recognize someone's efforts, make the other person satisfied. Recognizing someone's efforts makes their day. It may not affect you or bother you but it surely does to them. They take out their precious time to make you happy. They care for you. So recognize someone's efforts that they take for you. I even include myself in this. I have done wrong to many people and today getting somethings back.. I feel the pain. Not only pain but frustrating, anger. Karma is really a bitch. Obviously you cannot be everything to everyone and you the way you feel for someone or consider someone important it's not necessary they may feel so. That's why ek tarfa things are real hard to handle. But ek tarfa pyaar ki taakat bhi kch kam nahi. And Rejections cannot only be negative. You did your bit. You took your efforts. You may not necessarily get what you want but at least have the satisfaction of doing your bit. Get back at life as those efforts which you took will only be fruitful if the other person recognizes. Which is not true in every case. Soo to all the people whose efforts i did not appreciate. I am sorry. And one thing '' someone maybe important to you but you may or may not be '' so know your worth and take efforts for the right things are the right person.
#review #Parth
For me, the person who takes this as a challenge and prove everyone wrong is a real winner. The person who decides to make everyone regret ( obviously with an aim to take a revenge) wins at life. The day he succeeds, he wins at life. With so many hardships he still has that drop of energy to overcome everything and be back at life. These are the real winners.
But, the people who reject, should know that like everything has a way, there's a way to reject. Obviously everything cannot be possible as per our wishes but to say a no in an apt way is so crucial. Even while rejecting, you recognize someone's efforts, make the other person satisfied. Recognizing someone's efforts makes their day. It may not affect you or bother you but it surely does to them. They take out their precious time to make you happy. They care for you. So recognize someone's efforts that they take for you. I even include myself in this. I have done wrong to many people and today getting somethings back.. I feel the pain. Not only pain but frustrating, anger. Karma is really a bitch. Obviously you cannot be everything to everyone and you the way you feel for someone or consider someone important it's not necessary they may feel so. That's why ek tarfa things are real hard to handle. But ek tarfa pyaar ki taakat bhi kch kam nahi. And Rejections cannot only be negative. You did your bit. You took your efforts. You may not necessarily get what you want but at least have the satisfaction of doing your bit. Get back at life as those efforts which you took will only be fruitful if the other person recognizes. Which is not true in every case. Soo to all the people whose efforts i did not appreciate. I am sorry. And one thing '' someone maybe important to you but you may or may not be '' so know your worth and take efforts for the right things are the right person.
#review #Parth
He was a battered man. He was an old man. He was old, battered man. His name Oliver, he had a wrinkly face that seemed to have faced joyful as well as disheartening moments, cold nights and warm summers, weddings and funerals; all that life had to offer. His white beard now grew freely and was unkempt, giving the idea of a man who no longer cared what people thought of him.
Oliver carried an air of contention around him as he went by his days. He had managed to provide for his wife and his 4 kids as best as he could. He had done most of the things he wanted in his life, and even if there were a few left, there wasn't much he could do now. Recently a troubling thought recurred to him several times, what mark he had left in this world?
Though old on the outside, his soul had withstood all the battering that life had to offer and was young as ever. Always exuding confidence everywhere he went, he was the darling of the old as well as the young. Younger adults always sought his wise counsel. He unselfishly helped where he could. In him, children found a caring man and a playmate, who always made them happy.
Everyday, the thought kept crossing his mind. His children as well as grandchildren visited and he would play with them, but the thought wouldn't leave him. What impression would they have of him?
Oliver tried his best to conceal his feelings of dissatisfaction with himself, since he could have achieved more. He masked this by focusing more on his achievements. He also sought support from his family, though indirectly. It was hard to believe that this great man – to them he was, would ever doubt himself. Each day, the voice grew to more profound and thereby silencing all his other thoughts. It troubled him so much that he started wishing that he could die soon.
Once on a warm cloudy noon, he took a walk in the pine forest around his home. Some hikers walking nearby asked to take a picture of him and he made a face with his tongue sticking out. A breath of the fresh forest air quenched his old lungs allowing him to admire the life that he had lived. Not many had the happiness he felt. At once, he knew that he had lived a good life.
#wca #wccb
#rocky #review
Oliver carried an air of contention around him as he went by his days. He had managed to provide for his wife and his 4 kids as best as he could. He had done most of the things he wanted in his life, and even if there were a few left, there wasn't much he could do now. Recently a troubling thought recurred to him several times, what mark he had left in this world?
Though old on the outside, his soul had withstood all the battering that life had to offer and was young as ever. Always exuding confidence everywhere he went, he was the darling of the old as well as the young. Younger adults always sought his wise counsel. He unselfishly helped where he could. In him, children found a caring man and a playmate, who always made them happy.
Everyday, the thought kept crossing his mind. His children as well as grandchildren visited and he would play with them, but the thought wouldn't leave him. What impression would they have of him?
Oliver tried his best to conceal his feelings of dissatisfaction with himself, since he could have achieved more. He masked this by focusing more on his achievements. He also sought support from his family, though indirectly. It was hard to believe that this great man – to them he was, would ever doubt himself. Each day, the voice grew to more profound and thereby silencing all his other thoughts. It troubled him so much that he started wishing that he could die soon.
Once on a warm cloudy noon, he took a walk in the pine forest around his home. Some hikers walking nearby asked to take a picture of him and he made a face with his tongue sticking out. A breath of the fresh forest air quenched his old lungs allowing him to admire the life that he had lived. Not many had the happiness he felt. At once, he knew that he had lived a good life.
#wca #wccb
#rocky #review
Dear Ella,
My beloved, did you miss me? I'm sure your heart is quivering. Your hands must be shaking as you recognize my handwriting. Your honey golden eyes must be diluted. Don't go into shock just yet, I have important things I should tell you and you don't have time to waste.
Remember the tulips we used to grow in our back yard? You're gonna have to look underneath them. Don't ruin them though, you know how much I loved them. Anyway, your fair tiny hands can't possibly get dirty with soil and dust, maybe ask Carl to help out. It's where I kept some dirty secrets, your dirty secrets.
Love
Charels
P. S: please bring some of the tulips next time you visit my grave, it's a little ugly in here.
#review #Noob #shortstory (?)
My beloved, did you miss me? I'm sure your heart is quivering. Your hands must be shaking as you recognize my handwriting. Your honey golden eyes must be diluted. Don't go into shock just yet, I have important things I should tell you and you don't have time to waste.
Remember the tulips we used to grow in our back yard? You're gonna have to look underneath them. Don't ruin them though, you know how much I loved them. Anyway, your fair tiny hands can't possibly get dirty with soil and dust, maybe ask Carl to help out. It's where I kept some dirty secrets, your dirty secrets.
Love
Charels
P. S: please bring some of the tulips next time you visit my grave, it's a little ugly in here.
#review #Noob #shortstory (?)
Mirth was born on his lips and grace bloomed in his hands. He was indeed the great father of all the village. His snow like hair never played a role in why would the villages consider him a parent figure, it was the caring he provided and the warmth he gave. He lived at the edge in a small house with his petite wife's memory which he held close. A girl in our village would come by every now and then to help him with the house. And there's a rumor that he can do magic, but no one ever really saw him practice his arts. Some believed he would pass his secrets to the girl before he dies since he was in his 90s, for his real son left the village fifity years ago and never came back. For me I just liked to pass by his little garden that he gave his most daily attention, it was very beautiful, not betraying the efforts he had put in it. I would pass by and say hello and he would reply me with a smile, a warm gaze of his crystal blue eyes and a wave of his wrinkly hand.
#review #Noob #wca #wcpp #chatacter_description
#review #Noob #wca #wcpp #chatacter_description
This one i wrote last year, had a lot going on back then. Hope it makes sense to you.
IGNORANCE
In less than about a minute
We lost all senses
We lost the control
And what we were looking for
It's just a myth after all
We kept away from the light
The joy, the wilderness of the night
Swept us towards the ocean
Remarking every descent
To stall with all the focus
In the lost cause
We had a miniature telescope
Until a mini black hole sucked us in
Now the distance and time is irrelevant
What you are looking for is beyond the black
The eyes behind your head could interpret
What lord had planned
The darkness kept you lull
When we missed the rise of the world
You find it appealing to love
You find it needy when you are dubbed the miscellaneous
Then you turn yourself in
You hand over the powers
You cease your existence
To live for the love
The sea won't free you
The waves shall drown you
Their job is not to keep calm
This view you have of sodom
Pretend you are okay
Give in just a little bit more every day
One shall remain thy slaves
You trace your steps
When you can't find any peace
To an old familiar place
Where ignorance was the cure
#review #shaunav
IGNORANCE
In less than about a minute
We lost all senses
We lost the control
And what we were looking for
It's just a myth after all
We kept away from the light
The joy, the wilderness of the night
Swept us towards the ocean
Remarking every descent
To stall with all the focus
In the lost cause
We had a miniature telescope
Until a mini black hole sucked us in
Now the distance and time is irrelevant
What you are looking for is beyond the black
The eyes behind your head could interpret
What lord had planned
The darkness kept you lull
When we missed the rise of the world
You find it appealing to love
You find it needy when you are dubbed the miscellaneous
Then you turn yourself in
You hand over the powers
You cease your existence
To live for the love
The sea won't free you
The waves shall drown you
Their job is not to keep calm
This view you have of sodom
Pretend you are okay
Give in just a little bit more every day
One shall remain thy slaves
You trace your steps
When you can't find any peace
To an old familiar place
Where ignorance was the cure
#review #shaunav
Never lie down in a sandcastle
The time has a dangerous meticulous fashion
Beware of the wind and destroy your passion
Don't fall in love for just one small reason
Indemnify your tears
For the one and only self
Just in time for another
Night in a small shell
Wizards make the magic
Feel like reality
The trick to defy long-awaited sobriety
#review #shaunav
The time has a dangerous meticulous fashion
Beware of the wind and destroy your passion
Don't fall in love for just one small reason
Indemnify your tears
For the one and only self
Just in time for another
Night in a small shell
Wizards make the magic
Feel like reality
The trick to defy long-awaited sobriety
#review #shaunav
Title : I feel enervated
I feel enervated,
for not that i have been castigated.
I see failure everywhere,
not found a competition that i can measure.
happiness makes me nostalgic,
sympathy calls for bereavement.
nights are haunting,
days feel like threatening.
i feel enervated
for not that i have been castigated
hundreds of hopes feel like ghosts.
dangling around day and night
working hard is the key to perfection,
am i the only one not paying enough attention
only god knows what is my true intention,
will i find my way through this competition.
I feel enervated,
for not that i have been castigated
Intimidated by short success,
making step by step success.
will i regain my lost potential,
or would i succumb to incessant fate denial.
watching the night fall after every dawn,
i impatiently wait for my very own dawn.
#review
#Sagar
#poem
I feel enervated,
for not that i have been castigated.
I see failure everywhere,
not found a competition that i can measure.
happiness makes me nostalgic,
sympathy calls for bereavement.
nights are haunting,
days feel like threatening.
i feel enervated
for not that i have been castigated
hundreds of hopes feel like ghosts.
dangling around day and night
working hard is the key to perfection,
am i the only one not paying enough attention
only god knows what is my true intention,
will i find my way through this competition.
I feel enervated,
for not that i have been castigated
Intimidated by short success,
making step by step success.
will i regain my lost potential,
or would i succumb to incessant fate denial.
watching the night fall after every dawn,
i impatiently wait for my very own dawn.
#review
#Sagar
#poem
WORLD UNDER SEA
Densed my eyes
Some positive vibrations woke me
My eyes opened but closed
felt the floor turned to smooth bed
My legs felt my father's hand
Hands of love massaged
Hands neither felt air nor water
Some creatures kissed my cheeks
like a baby girl kissing her father
Some delightful played with my eyes
Something chirpy I guessed
My eyes opened
Witnessed the new world
Witnessed indralog's parijaat tree
Witnessed new form of creatures
which I have never seen before
Perceived a kind of denouement peace
Peace with pleasure in my heart
Neither grasp the sky nor the earth
Obtained iam under the sea
Neither my breath nor my lungs ceased
Can't believe my own eyes
Wow! What a peace of pleasure?
Whether it's dream or reality
Densed my eyes
Dare not to open!
-Lakshmi Prabha Swaminathan
#review #poetry
Densed my eyes
Some positive vibrations woke me
My eyes opened but closed
felt the floor turned to smooth bed
My legs felt my father's hand
Hands of love massaged
Hands neither felt air nor water
Some creatures kissed my cheeks
like a baby girl kissing her father
Some delightful played with my eyes
Something chirpy I guessed
My eyes opened
Witnessed the new world
Witnessed indralog's parijaat tree
Witnessed new form of creatures
which I have never seen before
Perceived a kind of denouement peace
Peace with pleasure in my heart
Neither grasp the sky nor the earth
Obtained iam under the sea
Neither my breath nor my lungs ceased
Can't believe my own eyes
Wow! What a peace of pleasure?
Whether it's dream or reality
Densed my eyes
Dare not to open!
-Lakshmi Prabha Swaminathan
#review #poetry
_Reminiscence
Oh now that you are gone
Are you contented with your life of leisure?
Wealth all spent in your pursuit for pleasure
Oh our lost childhood , not of Innocence and mischievous play
But of loneliness ; yearning for Affection and your presence
Nights spend in horror in your absence
My head dipped into the pillow
Bearing the constant voices of betrayal and suspicion
Dearth of love and compassion
Leaving a gulf in my heart
Oh now that you are gone
I will rewrite a story of my own
Not of hardships ,pain or melancholy
But one that of love and compassion
Be the person you could never be
Love my children to the moon and back
A guardian that you could never be
Oh now that you are gone
I wish you find peace and solace
Looking down at us living in a better place
# kinoJimz
#review
Oh now that you are gone
Are you contented with your life of leisure?
Wealth all spent in your pursuit for pleasure
Oh our lost childhood , not of Innocence and mischievous play
But of loneliness ; yearning for Affection and your presence
Nights spend in horror in your absence
My head dipped into the pillow
Bearing the constant voices of betrayal and suspicion
Dearth of love and compassion
Leaving a gulf in my heart
Oh now that you are gone
I will rewrite a story of my own
Not of hardships ,pain or melancholy
But one that of love and compassion
Be the person you could never be
Love my children to the moon and back
A guardian that you could never be
Oh now that you are gone
I wish you find peace and solace
Looking down at us living in a better place
# kinoJimz
#review
IRINA
It evokes great joy in my heart
When I keep watching you.
And if things were different
I would cross the oceans to marry you.
It's all about your gorgeous face
Carrying the most beautiful smile
That I am madly in love with.
Its overloaded with cuteness -
Those plumpy lips
Painted with a color of grace
Casts a shadow on your
Well-aligned teeth underneath.
I don't mind even if you think
We don't know each other.
Because it just doesn't matter.
Your ravishing smile tells me
Everything about you.
That you are the woman
With whom I want to spend
My whole life.
The thick dark hair of yours
Manage to flutter in the breeze
Without affecting the beauty
You are bestowed with,
Covering the groomed eyebrows
Which are trying to hide from me.
And what to say about your eyes!
Those big shiny black pearls of love.
They are the dazzling pair of gifts
Rolled down to you from heaven.
Those long curved eyelashes give
The right touch of glamour.
So the twinkle in your eyes is
A rare spectacle of elegance!
But as I examine you closely
I see that those magical eyes hide
All the sorrows of earthly life
And reflect the love you ask from a man.
The waves formed by your cuddly cheeks
Reflect the glint of shyness about you -
Exhibiting the innocence you wear
As the mark of great finesse!
And when you smile, they swell;
Tempting all the children around you
To squeeze them and then kiss them.
If I had met you for real,
I wouldn't have come up with this verse.
Because everything that has created you
Would have overwhelmed me so much
That I would have hardly succeeded
In expressing these words about you.
I am grateful that I am underwhelmed
For not seeing you in person
As it allowed me to write this song
Just by staring at the portraits of you.
Like goddesses and angels,
You are all around me.
On every wall of every room.
Accept this verse as a token of gratitude
For sharing your portraits with me
As they fill the gaps of loneliness with joy
And cure my insanity with your warmth.
I am so sad that we are far away
So this poor soul has only one request:
Please keep sharing your portraits.
I want to dream of you every day
For turning this illusion
Into a delusion of reality
As I live my life in them.
My heart knows that
Our love for each other
Lives on and on,
Forever.
© Amit Herlekar
#poetry #review
It evokes great joy in my heart
When I keep watching you.
And if things were different
I would cross the oceans to marry you.
It's all about your gorgeous face
Carrying the most beautiful smile
That I am madly in love with.
Its overloaded with cuteness -
Those plumpy lips
Painted with a color of grace
Casts a shadow on your
Well-aligned teeth underneath.
I don't mind even if you think
We don't know each other.
Because it just doesn't matter.
Your ravishing smile tells me
Everything about you.
That you are the woman
With whom I want to spend
My whole life.
The thick dark hair of yours
Manage to flutter in the breeze
Without affecting the beauty
You are bestowed with,
Covering the groomed eyebrows
Which are trying to hide from me.
And what to say about your eyes!
Those big shiny black pearls of love.
They are the dazzling pair of gifts
Rolled down to you from heaven.
Those long curved eyelashes give
The right touch of glamour.
So the twinkle in your eyes is
A rare spectacle of elegance!
But as I examine you closely
I see that those magical eyes hide
All the sorrows of earthly life
And reflect the love you ask from a man.
The waves formed by your cuddly cheeks
Reflect the glint of shyness about you -
Exhibiting the innocence you wear
As the mark of great finesse!
And when you smile, they swell;
Tempting all the children around you
To squeeze them and then kiss them.
If I had met you for real,
I wouldn't have come up with this verse.
Because everything that has created you
Would have overwhelmed me so much
That I would have hardly succeeded
In expressing these words about you.
I am grateful that I am underwhelmed
For not seeing you in person
As it allowed me to write this song
Just by staring at the portraits of you.
Like goddesses and angels,
You are all around me.
On every wall of every room.
Accept this verse as a token of gratitude
For sharing your portraits with me
As they fill the gaps of loneliness with joy
And cure my insanity with your warmth.
I am so sad that we are far away
So this poor soul has only one request:
Please keep sharing your portraits.
I want to dream of you every day
For turning this illusion
Into a delusion of reality
As I live my life in them.
My heart knows that
Our love for each other
Lives on and on,
Forever.
© Amit Herlekar
#poetry #review
She !!❤
I feared the dark nights, she pointed d stars
I craved for beauty,she loved my scars
Wen my eyes brighten ,her lips smiled
In the days of silence ,she stood by my side I had exams ,she did some extra prayers
I felt a lil pain,her eyes shed the tears
I feared mistake she showed spirits to fight
I lost my battles , she simply held me tight
I was a brat , she had calmness lyk saint
At times I yelled at her yet she nvr cmplaint
I achieved a lil ,she danced on my fame
Years over years she still remained d same
I m nothing and she is all we need
No god's angel ,she is my mother indeed
By surbhi
#surbhi
#review #teenagewriter #mother #poetry #iam
I feared the dark nights, she pointed d stars
I craved for beauty,she loved my scars
Wen my eyes brighten ,her lips smiled
In the days of silence ,she stood by my side I had exams ,she did some extra prayers
I felt a lil pain,her eyes shed the tears
I feared mistake she showed spirits to fight
I lost my battles , she simply held me tight
I was a brat , she had calmness lyk saint
At times I yelled at her yet she nvr cmplaint
I achieved a lil ,she danced on my fame
Years over years she still remained d same
I m nothing and she is all we need
No god's angel ,she is my mother indeed
By surbhi
#surbhi
#review #teenagewriter #mother #poetry #iam
It's my life to live,
My rules to make,
I never give a fuck what others think,
Never expect anything from others,
Seeing and listening everything in an awesome way,
Setting new Goals, Setting new Missions,
Shining like a Sun,
Haters around me are just like stars,
My moves are high, expectations are Low,
Crossing my limits, fucking my boundaries,
Enjoying the freedom I've got,
Owning the whole fucking world,
King of my kingdom.
By Rohit Yadava
#review #kinglife #iam #poetry #microtales #thoughts
My rules to make,
I never give a fuck what others think,
Never expect anything from others,
Seeing and listening everything in an awesome way,
Setting new Goals, Setting new Missions,
Shining like a Sun,
Haters around me are just like stars,
My moves are high, expectations are Low,
Crossing my limits, fucking my boundaries,
Enjoying the freedom I've got,
Owning the whole fucking world,
King of my kingdom.
By Rohit Yadava
#review #kinglife #iam #poetry #microtales #thoughts
I looked up to the stars..
To tell my story or share childish fears
To be lost in dark & shamelessly shed tears
To reveal secrets & nervousness to fight
To wrap innocence & sleep in twinkling light...
I looked up to the stars..
With a happy heart or teary eyes
To recall the memories of painful goodbyes
To feel emptiness or at times to shout
To free voice inside &cry aloud ...
I looked up to the stars..
To cherish its beauty & question my scars
To connect the dots of my journey so far
Lil did I got my ans of every why ..
& I fought d dark clouds to have bright sky
By surbhi
#surbhi
#review #microtales #poetry #stars #dark #moonlight #emotions #deep #iam
To tell my story or share childish fears
To be lost in dark & shamelessly shed tears
To reveal secrets & nervousness to fight
To wrap innocence & sleep in twinkling light...
I looked up to the stars..
With a happy heart or teary eyes
To recall the memories of painful goodbyes
To feel emptiness or at times to shout
To free voice inside &cry aloud ...
I looked up to the stars..
To cherish its beauty & question my scars
To connect the dots of my journey so far
Lil did I got my ans of every why ..
& I fought d dark clouds to have bright sky
By surbhi
#surbhi
#review #microtales #poetry #stars #dark #moonlight #emotions #deep #iam
A conversation i had with a bird I saw flying the open sky.
Title - A BRAVE BIRD AT PEACE .
I saw how we divide the world
How the rulers rule
How birds fly freely
And then there's a bird whose cruel
Flying alone in the sky
Fighting the sun
How they make peace in their world
Could not do much at least he tries
He's the man of the family
The head as they say
Determined to fight for his rights
So that his family could survive
The haunting night is the perfect motivator
No matter if it's god or satan
He'll fight until his last breath
He'll scream much more than himself
See what have you done
It gave me so much hope
When I realized a little birdman like him
Could fly alone
Somehow we both are co-existing
Somehow we both are trying to breathe
We both are crusaders
Looking for answers
We both are stranded
Trying to fix for our ordeals
Never saw peace so clearly
What a view, we shared dearly
But wait the time? it's running out
Make it stop please, I'm screaming out loud
We are in a war,
A war with the sky
Neverending battle,
We know we are never going to win this
No matter how hard we try
At that moment we knew
We have to live today
The bird looked at me
I looked at him
He thought I was at peace
We called a truce
Serenity overthrew us at that moment
Then we went back to fight
Until the sun tamed itself
I saw how we divide the world
The light, the trees,
The good and the bad deeds
I saw how the rulers rule
A little bird has to fight
I thought I was cruel
#review #shaunav
Title - A BRAVE BIRD AT PEACE .
I saw how we divide the world
How the rulers rule
How birds fly freely
And then there's a bird whose cruel
Flying alone in the sky
Fighting the sun
How they make peace in their world
Could not do much at least he tries
He's the man of the family
The head as they say
Determined to fight for his rights
So that his family could survive
The haunting night is the perfect motivator
No matter if it's god or satan
He'll fight until his last breath
He'll scream much more than himself
See what have you done
It gave me so much hope
When I realized a little birdman like him
Could fly alone
Somehow we both are co-existing
Somehow we both are trying to breathe
We both are crusaders
Looking for answers
We both are stranded
Trying to fix for our ordeals
Never saw peace so clearly
What a view, we shared dearly
But wait the time? it's running out
Make it stop please, I'm screaming out loud
We are in a war,
A war with the sky
Neverending battle,
We know we are never going to win this
No matter how hard we try
At that moment we knew
We have to live today
The bird looked at me
I looked at him
He thought I was at peace
We called a truce
Serenity overthrew us at that moment
Then we went back to fight
Until the sun tamed itself
I saw how we divide the world
The light, the trees,
The good and the bad deeds
I saw how the rulers rule
A little bird has to fight
I thought I was cruel
#review #shaunav
silence !!❤
She was lost in dark
When there were stars ..
In the world of beautiful sunrise
No one noticed the painful scars !!
Among those happy faces ...
All she had was tears !!
In the world of musical notes
No one listened her fears !!
She had a past her present was lost !!
She had a journey ....
A painful story to tell ...
In the world of "us" !!
All she had was silence !!
By surbhi
#suro
#review #poetry #silence #iam #writer#teenager
She was lost in dark
When there were stars ..
In the world of beautiful sunrise
No one noticed the painful scars !!
Among those happy faces ...
All she had was tears !!
In the world of musical notes
No one listened her fears !!
She had a past her present was lost !!
She had a journey ....
A painful story to tell ...
In the world of "us" !!
All she had was silence !!
By surbhi
#suro
#review #poetry #silence #iam #writer#teenager
Goodbye❤
Oh yes I imagined you holding tight ..
Wrapped in yourr arms in the endless night
And dear maybe you found the lil spark
Maybe I m still fighting in the dark ...
Oh yes I opened up my heart a lil more
Revealed fears shed tears all way before
And dear maybe you listened a lil less
Maybe I was stupid or beautiful mess
Oh yes I thought you would complete me .
Broken cold confused but u'll still need me
And dear Maybe u found the perfect one
Maybe I m still holding on to none
Oh yes I dreamt a forever
Lost in your world going back never
And dear maybe you told the only lies
Maybe I was too good at goodbyes..
By #surbhi
#review #poetry #surbhi
Oh yes I imagined you holding tight ..
Wrapped in yourr arms in the endless night
And dear maybe you found the lil spark
Maybe I m still fighting in the dark ...
Oh yes I opened up my heart a lil more
Revealed fears shed tears all way before
And dear maybe you listened a lil less
Maybe I was stupid or beautiful mess
Oh yes I thought you would complete me .
Broken cold confused but u'll still need me
And dear Maybe u found the perfect one
Maybe I m still holding on to none
Oh yes I dreamt a forever
Lost in your world going back never
And dear maybe you told the only lies
Maybe I was too good at goodbyes..
By #surbhi
#review #poetry #surbhi
DARK !!❤
Amidst colourful images exists the label Dark ..
Beneath the skin ,failed to see intense spark
Fought her battle with colours and cream
Erratic was the world, but she chose to dream...
She bleed at war against her ownreflection
Disclosed to stars the story of every single rejection..
Gist of insecurities and she called herself shy
We Choked her wings yet she craved to fly
She crossed seas and travelled miles
In the dark side, carried her own Fireflies
She soaked her tears ,gave up all fears
She blossomed and spread her wings
Prior her body , love her soul strings
She screamed her heart aloud
Dark ,brown , blonde, yellow,white ...
beauty comes in every shape and shade
Only benevolence stays and beauty fades !!
By surbhi ❤
#review #surbhi
Amidst colourful images exists the label Dark ..
Beneath the skin ,failed to see intense spark
Fought her battle with colours and cream
Erratic was the world, but she chose to dream...
She bleed at war against her ownreflection
Disclosed to stars the story of every single rejection..
Gist of insecurities and she called herself shy
We Choked her wings yet she craved to fly
She crossed seas and travelled miles
In the dark side, carried her own Fireflies
She soaked her tears ,gave up all fears
She blossomed and spread her wings
Prior her body , love her soul strings
She screamed her heart aloud
Dark ,brown , blonde, yellow,white ...
beauty comes in every shape and shade
Only benevolence stays and beauty fades !!
By surbhi ❤
#review #surbhi
LOVE
Love is him!
When you have that man in ur life for whom you just pray everyday without fail. For whom you wish safety, success & security. For whom you can go out of your ways to make him smile. For whom you can keep your ego and anger aside & sort your issues with love . When you understand his moods , his wants, his dreams, his ambitions & you team up with him. You support him, when u just love & respect his parents the way you respect yours. Love is when you cwatch him doing his favourite stuff and I smile , when u just zoom into his picture and be like how can this person be so beautiful!! Wen you respect him, his choices. When you get jelous and get insecure and fear losing him by u never let that fear dominate ur realtionship with him. U trust him and ukbit by heart that he would never leave you! Never! That's love! Love is friendship and I if u aren't great frnds, u can never have strong partnership. So yeah,love it's about efforts. If u can't treat him like a king then don't disturb him. Don't blame the girl who treats him better than u do. Fight for him. Grow with him. Accept ur mistakes, forgive, understand. Call him with cute names, pamper him. He deserves it dude. Life is short and I just can't waste it.
Rest yes, love is also frnds, food, teddy bear, puppies, kittens, sleep ,hugs, parents, kids, basically everything. ( Including all of you too n the one reading this! Lots of love!❤
#review #vj
Love is him!
When you have that man in ur life for whom you just pray everyday without fail. For whom you wish safety, success & security. For whom you can go out of your ways to make him smile. For whom you can keep your ego and anger aside & sort your issues with love . When you understand his moods , his wants, his dreams, his ambitions & you team up with him. You support him, when u just love & respect his parents the way you respect yours. Love is when you cwatch him doing his favourite stuff and I smile , when u just zoom into his picture and be like how can this person be so beautiful!! Wen you respect him, his choices. When you get jelous and get insecure and fear losing him by u never let that fear dominate ur realtionship with him. U trust him and ukbit by heart that he would never leave you! Never! That's love! Love is friendship and I if u aren't great frnds, u can never have strong partnership. So yeah,love it's about efforts. If u can't treat him like a king then don't disturb him. Don't blame the girl who treats him better than u do. Fight for him. Grow with him. Accept ur mistakes, forgive, understand. Call him with cute names, pamper him. He deserves it dude. Life is short and I just can't waste it.
Rest yes, love is also frnds, food, teddy bear, puppies, kittens, sleep ,hugs, parents, kids, basically everything. ( Including all of you too n the one reading this! Lots of love!❤
#review #vj
Delusional thoughts of an illusionary world.
Your mind is a mess so is your life.
You're lost in your thoughts that cannot be real,
Hope is what keeps them alive past the fear.
Your illusions are delusions but no worry there.
Some pink skies and chocolate rivers are needed here.
#princhi #review #justthoughts
Your mind is a mess so is your life.
You're lost in your thoughts that cannot be real,
Hope is what keeps them alive past the fear.
Your illusions are delusions but no worry there.
Some pink skies and chocolate rivers are needed here.
#princhi #review #justthoughts