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p o o r C o m p a s s i o n

while walking on a foot path
On a dusky evening..
eyes sudden got stuck on the roadside
I saw a mother rather I would elaborate saying:
a working mother feeding her new baby
on the wooden bench of the tea stall
where she works.
the view was something that broadly able to justify the Indian grading system in an well manner.
Despite of thousands of plannings and steps towards the mother walfare skim that the government regularly thinking of.
Believing that one day with the new sun rise all the sorrows and pains of the roadside workers will be wipe out.

#review
#thought
It's true.

I am the monster they say I am, So please keep a distance.

I'll be waiting for the tenderness to exorcize the shades from my pathetic existence.

And when the mist unfolds, I'll cry the tears I couldn't cry before.


Author's note: This is an old thing of mine. Still I want to hear thoughts about it.

#review #Noob #poetry
Oh my sweet diary

You are like that pole star
Who shows the way when the time comes.

You are like those stars
Which contains all my happiness and sadness,

You are like that sun
Who show new hope every day,

You are like those trees
Who gives fresh new ideas,

You are like that flower
through which blossomed life,

You are like that wind
That clarifies the thoughts of the mind,

What to say about you
There's nothing like saying
You are my whole life
#review #everyone
Yes, I love him

Yes, I adore him

Yes, his handsome face brings smile to my face

And yes, he sure lights up my day

But there is a price that I have to pay for all this

Bcoz, Yes, it is gonna hurt when he leaves

Yes, it will make me sad when I couldn't see him anymore

And, yes it will break my heart when I won't even receive his texts 

But I guess you have to go through the pain for the happiness that you gained

Yes, it is stupid to fall for him knowing in the end it will leave you hurt

Yes, it is illogical to think of a future with him when it's a dead end

And, ofcourse, it's really suicidal to be a hopeless dreamer

But I guess life is about all that

Taking risks,

Putting your heart on your sleeves,

Being courageous to be vulnerable and open to love 

Wishing to be loved back like a endless prayer

That might never come true

But in the end it's worth it as it sets you free 

That you dared to do something, gave your all to it,

Not thinking about the outcome, but enjoying the thrill of that journey brought you

Yes, in the end Love hurts

Yes, it sucks

And yes, it will drain you out 

But you gave yourself a chance again

And I think it matters the most 

That you loved someone with your bare soul. 


#review #kp #poetry
Don't  know what pleasure did  those animals gain, 
As they made her scream in pain. 
Rods inserted, intestines pulled out, 
She was so damned that she couldn't even shout. 
Stripped, tortured, traped and raped, 
Of her self respect she was scraped. 
No one listened, no one came,
Now the demons within her no one can tame. 
Alone in a black hole, 
She lost everything, even her soul. 
Justice is something she deserves, 
But the judiciary is under the thumb of those pervs. 
No where to go, no one to tell, 
She decided to escape that scary hell. 
With a smile on her face, 
And hand on her heart, 
She slit her wrists, 
And was dead in a gist. 



-Aditi Panjwani 
MBBS Student.

#review
Don't  know what pleasure did  those animals gain, 
As they made her scream in pain. 
Rods inserted, intestines pulled out, 
She was so damned that she couldn't even shout. 
Stripped, tortured, traped and raped, 
Of her self respect she was scraped. 
No one listened, no one came,
Now the demons within her no one can tame. 
Alone in a black hole, 
She lost everything, even her soul. 
Justice is something she deserves, 
But the judiciary is under the thumb of those pervs. 
No where to go, no one to tell, 
She decided to escape that scary hell. 
With a smile on her face, 
And hand on her heart, 
She slit her wrists, 
And was dead in a gist. 



-Aditi Panjwani 
MBBS Student.

#review #ap #poetry
Euthanasia

Euthanasia not dysplasia
Euthanasia not fantasia
Euthanasia not aphasia
Euthanasia is a plight
Not Asia nor Malaysia.

Euthanasia is mercy-killing
Euthanasia is painlessly-killing
Euthanasia is putting to death

She thought with a flood of despair
With a glinting eyes, eye blazing with fury
such imperturbable looks she succumbed
Words cut by her cry of pain.

She'd escaped from the clause of thought
She'd been jailed, jailed by her emotions
Grew leaps and bounds
Loving an exotic man,a foreigners
Thinks white is preferable to black
Not remembering, flesh remains flesh
White or black, both remains are Human flesh
Words cut her train of thought

With her thoughts and doing
She thinks she's building a future
Not knowing all was semblance
Such deceit, Such deception,
Such dissimulation, Such delusion
She'd been cremating her later(future)

Dead but living, the doctor persisted
She wanted a diagnosis that require
Chemotherapy or maybe chemotherapeutic
But the tick tock of time, isn't hers anymore
Its over EUTHANASIA she screamed.


© TheSimiloluwa ✍🏿


#review #everyone #poetry
colours



there's a war going on

not on a warpath

but inside my head


my mind tries to win

but my heart takes the lead


a bloodshed takes

place within


a million of

broken dreams.


#review #kt #poetry

(I wrote this 3 years back and that is why it feels so off)
c a v e r n o u s L o v e

the awakened souls,
those keep meditating on the
peak tip of
the great Himalaya
have only one motive
and one compassion.
that's to get attached deeply
with the supremacy soul
of the unseen spheres of
the mother earth.
The unconditional bond of love
between thou supreme light
and the awakened monk
are rare to see and
very rare to feel nowadays.

#review
#thought
monk
Light
God
#Review


It takes not a second for tongue to transform into a snake. The snake can sting anyone it wishes, not bothering to know if the prey could bear with its venom. The problem lies not in the snake, but in mind. It will be fair to say that a tongue doesn't transform into some venomous entity unless brain allows it. Thus, the role of brain can't be denied. This brain can do wonders if used rightly. But, it has been misused since time immemorial, this tongue turning into a snake induced by dirty mind is no exception. 


When a dirty mind sees a person who has different facial complexion, when it sees someone blush while talking, when it sees someone not physically stable, when it sees someone kind-hearted, and when it sees someone taciturn; it quickly sends a message to the tongue to perform in inhumane way - "You're black." "Your'e dumb." "You're a woman." "You resemble a skelton." It rips apart someone else's heart, thier dirty minds don't mind. It is as if they have this inner compulsion  - perhaps to feed thier egoistic mind -  to sting others, the kindhearted, who choose to suffer, and not to resist. 


Sometimes the snake emits so much venom out of its mouth that the attacked is left with no choice but to commit suicide. Same was the case with a canadian girl, Amanda Todd, who being bullied took her own life away. There are many people who are on the brink of doing something deleterious to thier lives, reason behind remains these nasty human beings who speak without thinking once, what effects thier words could have on others. 


As for perfection, nobody is.
Every human being has flaws. Only God is perfect. We, humans, have this superb organ called brain. So not to be used in such a way as to break someone else's heart, to affect someone else's pshychological being. Instead of picking holes, sweet fragrance should come out of our mouths. Our approach should be loving in nature. That's what defines a human. True human.
Olden days
Memorable nights
Your calls.



#review #jam
Poem: The Aching Truth

My heart leaps up, when it listens to the sound of rain.

And My heart leaps up, thinking about loss-or-gain.

When all my efforts go down the drain,

It seems that I am about to faint,

My heart questions the Almighty, "Oh Lord! In this life what is important and main?"

The Almighty answers, "the same old perpetual pain!!"


~ Abhinaba Dutta
#review #poetry #everyone
Everytime I close my eyes,
Pain hit me inside,
I feel everything is worthless,
I don't have anyone who cares,
I have always dreamt of having someone who understands,
My life is gathered by silence,
Like dessert gathered by sand,
There is no rain of hope,
I may say I don't care,
But I feel alone,
I'm tired of talking to myself,
Deep down it hurts,
I may say I'm fine,
Deep down I'm dying every second.
#review #poetry #everyone
I wanted to speak
Though I did, I tried so hard
Just wanted us to sit and talk it at a nice place
I wanted us to make it facially

I tasted lies in my mouth
Serpent tongue & still said
"I love you" but I am just not "in love with you"
It hurts, I tired look away yet you never seems to stop coming
showing yourself on my lock screen, home screen all day.
A dagger to my heart
I still embrace her soul
Now asking myself why?
Why do we destroy ourselves
"Ride or die"
These days;
Patient dogs do not eat, they end up starving
The fastest bone are meant for the hurry dogs

Sober! Sober!! Sober!!!
No sober man would put himself into danger
for the applause of escaping without breaking his neck.
I just want to see a day after today.. Maybe with her
So I kept mute till date

Copyright®
theSimiloluwa 🖊

#review #everyone #poetry
LOVE IS COMPLICATED

I say,
Love is complicated
But Is it just like what people say
Or is it worse
I don't know
It's complicated

I felt,
Peace looking into her eyes
But is it just me or
Her eyes weren't made to look after me
I don't know
It's complicated

I think,
My words are futile
My tears float in vain
But Is it just me or her tears float too
I don't know
It's complicated

Those nights
We got wild together
She said, she's undesirable
But Hasn't she opened her heart for me?
Like i did
Or is it just like those games we used to play!!
I don't know
It's complicated

The day
I took her out on the date
She said, she loves me
And I said her, I love her too
But is It just me or It is true
That drunk people don't speak truth
I don't know
It's complicated

I learned
Words lie, feelings don't
As she always hides her love behind her words
But Is it just me or she calls it love too
I don't know
It's complicated

#review #tejaskhurana #poem
Journey

Came all the way down in search of a dream,
Found few places, walked all the way long on the beam.
Found some martyrs & saviours of my soul,
Eyes on aim, focus on my goal.

Blurred & dazed by surge of light,
Lost all faith and strength and might.
Given in to the hands of worldly pleasure,
Of material things and tons of treasure.

I never knew I lost my sight,
A reckless mistake made me loose the fight.
A handful of help brought a paradigm shift,
Proved to be as worthy as heavens gift.

Back on the path with an aim of my own,
After all the dark there's the break of a dawn.
And the purpose of my life is still unknown,
But the line on the stone is already drawn.

And I know I have been following the path already chosen,
And yet sometimes I feel my feet are frozen.
But then something ignites the flame inside my veins,
And then the frozen feet of mine come in harmony with brains.

And so I continue on the path laid for me,
And so this journey goes on and on until the infinity...

#review #tm #poetry
L-O-V-E
Some say; it's beautiful like a Rose garden
Some say; it's black and it's dark Like a funeral
Some say; it means something
Some say; it means Everything
Some say; it means Nothing
Some say; it's lunatic
Some say; it like a habit
Some say; I would die for it
Some say; i don't think it's even real
Some say; they understand
Some say; i don't know how it feels
Some say; it's alive
Some say; that it can kill
Some say; it's patient
Some say; it's kind
Some say; I don't think it's invisible
Some say; I have been on it
Some say; they are still walking to it
Some say; I know that it's blind
Some say; sometimes it might surround you
Some say; one minute it's saving you
Some say; other minute it's trying to drown you
Some say; they want to show it
Some say; they were never taught how to show it
Some say; I am searching for it
Some say;it never exist
Some say; one minute I'm on the ground
Some say; next minute I'm in the sky
Some say; they'd it by mistake
Some say; we work for it
Some say; it's a talent
Some say; it's a gift from God
Some say; it's illusion
Some say; it's amiable
© TheSimiloluwa ✍️


#review #everyone #poetry
Looking with those gloomy eyes
All around as he arrives
Thunders in the sky were loud
There's a Moon peering behind the clouds.
Today he's all there alone
Where all his star friends gone?
Might scared by those loud thunders,
For starry clouds may also be responsible.

Those Black Misty clouds.
Were engulfing him all around.
Neither he's afraid being there alone,
Nor he dims his midnight gloom

Gusty stranger came running his way,
Sweeping all the dense darkness away.
Friend-wind with him took all his pain.
And gave him a hope to shine again.

Slowly gradually his brightness,
Overcomes the darkness.
The sky was now all cleared.
All his star friends reappeared
#review #saloni
I trust you

I trust them

I trust us

I trust myself

I trust God

I trust my parents

I trust the universe

I trust in love being shared around us, among us

I trust in the prayers I do for you, for my friends and family, and people around the world

I trust in the smile I receive when people see me as their child or friend or whatever I am to them

I trust in the beating of heart, in the blooming of a flower, in the impeccable green color of leaves, in stars and also in the way we still are alive, as it tell me there is a higher power beyong my imagination 

I trust still in the goodness of others, 

I trust in the way I get those moments of laughter I share with my mother

I trust in the stupid, weird, (sometimes) deep talks with I have with my brother about everything 

I trust in the way I could speak my heart out to my friends

I guess I really wanna trust in all the things I mentioned but I am not being able to

Someone, something have changed me

I am not being able to trust back people and things

I hope I come out of this phase. Or maybe remain the same forever.

As I have understood that

Trust is too fragile to break and make




#review #poetry #kp
Dear Dead Diary,

I heard your grievances for the lives you have lost,
I heard your messages on my life I began,
I heard your views on the hearts got broke,
I heard your reviews on the path I took,
I heard your comments for the cycle that stopped peddling,
I heard your predictions on the train which got off the track,
I heard your songs on me and mine,
I heard your thoughts on neil nitin mukesh,
I heard your jokes on my lust full life,
I heard your cries on family's problems
I heard your prayers spreading love for my family and friends,
I heard your whispers mentioning jet lags in my relationship
And I heard your lessons for my life and love,
But
I also heard your requests to patch up the line breaks,
I heard your words of pain and distress,
I heard your prayers for dreams and desires,
I heard your depressed screams of lonliness,
And I heard your voices screaming out for help.

I miss you more than the words, that can be written in you, I have been there with you all the time from January to December, from Sunday to Saturday, now it's time to start new journey from January.

Kindly
Tejas :)

#review #tejaskhurana #poem
As it is my last wish

I knew you all are waiting for me
but I am not able to come home,

I want to say you and our child
and want to talk in the peaceful wind,

my child still waiting outside the door
when dad came, we hugged them more and more,

my parents want to hear my voice
I also want to see them, but they're no choice,

I still wait when I will saw you all
my heartbeat fast and want to reach a goal,

I want to cry, when your call came
I have no word to say, only want to reach home,

it is very tough to reach the destination
you say I am strong and you control your emotion,

you all stay safe, I prayed yo god
always keep smiled and always loved,

as it is my last wish
will reach home and want to see all family members.

I wrote this when all members want to reach home during the lockdown.
#everyone #review #writerpen