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Faceless feel of a dusty rhyme
Lost inside the wave of times
Battered by the thoughts unknown
Of the moments come and gone
Lurking on the inside a pool
Deep enough filled up of cruel
Regrets, tension and depression
Waiting for a sense of action
Flowing like a flooded river
Looking for something to trigger
Falling like a huge avalanche
Tonnes of weight can't stop the stanch
In the past I leave you behind
With a page full of dusty rhyme

#tm #poetry #review
Something to speak at my first day at college. Can anyone please review it and spot grammatical errors or any other way to improve.

In this economy, a certification or a degree isn’t enough to get by. It really concerns me to see so many of my seniors choose whatever job pays the most and give up on their dreams and in their despair, they tell themselves everything is fine and lose their inner child. So I want to set clear goals for myself and strive towards them while I’m still in college. Being a “good kid”, doing what you’re told and fitting in, may be what society wants. But it doesn’t make you the kind of person who can change society because you’ll never be extraordinary that way. Unfortunately, the world may not always be at peace so even if I never really do fit in, I hope other young people share my concerns. I want to be able to decide for myself who I should and shouldn’t listen to and I want to share the way I feel with lots of people. I know for a fact that when everyone remembers their mission in life, they have the power to change the world and that the world is always with them. That’s what I want to share with people; to wake their hearts from their slumber. 

#review #everyone #speech #vc
-:Come back again:-
Come back and again be my love,
And be with me forever, in every move.
Chanting your name inside, waiting with my open arms,
My heart welcomes you with beds of fragrant red roses.
Life will be delightful in all the afflictions,
We will sing with joy beating all the odds, since.
Let the tides of life as more stormy and wild,
Then with love, life will be more deeply filled.
Oh, my Darling! Come back again and very soon,
I'll give you love, beyond the limit and beyond the span.
#review #everyone #poetry
Let us revive, the pristine deed,
Which tamped into the travellers deed;

The falling of rain, the winnowing of wind,
The shining of stars, the esoteric Mozart;

With his power of eloquence and rhythm,
The snowfall occluded the hidden;

The hidden gnawed (at) the incorrigible Mozart,
Who'll be the "Benefactor of Tide"!! , challenged the Wizard;

The Tide with rise and fall of Beats ,
Who'll be the Odious? Who'll be the Preach?

The effrontery made the impassive kneel,
From high to low to rhythmic steel;

If you clung from too fast- too slow,
The lament will be the harmonious blow;

"Come, Join us, to throw the applauds of praise,
To elate the Sundry, Singer's of grace".
#zm #poetry #review
#poetry
-:Fullmoon on a dark night:-
Friskiness of the moment, I can feel in my heart,
And lonesomeness is becoming more pleasant.

The dismal and turbulent journey meets the glimmer of tranquility,
By goggling at you, life is filled with new hope and zesty.

Dread darkness has been defeated by glimpse of your smiling face,
Oh,Full Moon! Your beauty of calmness is limitless .

#review #everyone
#poetry
I want you

I want you to be at my side, but these limitations, religions, thinking, boundaries hold me tight.
I want my hand to be holded by you, but trust of my loved one is not allowing me to do.
YoU might know or may not what I feel, all I could do is wait for my heart to be healed.

I like you want to say it loud, but we don't have future together that what stop me out.
I wish love would be free, and we could be together where ever we would be.
#review #corrections
By: preet rana
We are the future policy makers,
We are the dreamers of dreams
World losers and World foresakers
Upon whom the Pale moon gleams

In our insipid study rooms
We sit from noon to noon
Reading and analysing empires and crowns
On us, our social life frowns

Yet we are the movers and shakers
Of world forever it seems

#SpartanGal-CivilsTaiyari #poetry #review
It's not fair
my dreams are different and rare
to be bound in the thoughts of care
of the gild I'm part of
of the crowd I'm heart of
and of the moment I can't encash
but something i think it must've has
for me, or am i flying blind
on the wings of air, am i bound to dive
nose down, will i hit the ground
crashing will i make a sound
or will i soar in the clouds of fame
waving goodbye to the oaf mundane
Of false truth I've always been taught
to keep in line, on my shoulder they fraught
I break the line as the tug of war rise
between my heart, my soul and my mind
Who's losing or winning, the adventure is mine
As i reach my destiny, I'll always be surprised

#tm #poetry #review
Diadem , yes it's a piece of diadem every person holds,
The lucidity of ideas and feelings our crux molds;

What is the the modulus of emotions?
The mendicant mind's concoction!

I feel alive, I feel bright,
This dawn of gloom,I feel disk drive,

I can't keep cool ,
It's this morning fool;

Let me sing a rhyming slang,
Be the morning bee gang.

#zm #poetry #review
EYES
I have veneration for those idiosyncratic and adornment eyes.
Her eyes implicit the endurance of consternation of rancorous war between Palestine and Israel.I forgot how to conjure up the image of her face ,I just remembered those eyes. In the corner of her eyes had gossamer of tear which no one can descry. Her foppish look doesn't match with the abode of passion (to change her world) in her eyes, the eyes which where garrulity more than her dry lips with stoic expression, though the face expression were irascible, but the eyes told a different story. It is jibe to not to get engross in those eyes. I just remembered those eyes.....
#IG #eyes #review
HERE'S THE LIGHT
Here's the light
Warring it has come forth
Rusty armour shines
Ascends the fallen blade
The ragged cape is in rage
Cut to the chase, is this a dream
No, this is the dream
The coup of the light
Light, I was waiting for
#rv #everyone #review #micropoetry
A World Apart
Chapter 2

After Sinzo leaves me all by myself I couldn't help myself but think of her traveling down the memory lane to the first time I lay my eyes on her.

I have never believed in love, nevertheless in love at first sight but from my own experience it felt like an arrow went right through my heart then.

It was fine hours in the morning, still cold, a little sunlight and clouds, dragons roaring and feeding their kids and the kindred beasts back to their homes.

I was playing with my pet dragon 'Azure' a beautiful long white dragon with deep blue eyes. I was still trying to bond with him, I got him last year in the dragon forest and man do they grow fast! He went from one feet to nine in a year.

He still throws me off his back whenever he wants to, bites my hand whenever I feed him and sweeps me off my feet with his tail for no apparent reason. I started to think he hates me.

Something similar happened that day, we were flying past a gate of spirits zone and then he threw me off his back, I fell right to the ground, the good thing was that we weren't flying too high when he dropped me, the bad thing was now I'd have to walk back all the way to my home and man that's a half day walk.

After I put myself together, I saw her, sitting there is a corner, her head bent on her knees and then looking up at me with confusion and apprehension. I would have loved to talk to her if I wasn't locked into my place in her dark black eyes and the locks of her wavy hair.

I couldn't move so I kept staring at her until finally I could find the strength to move. I moved towards her and in a split second I realized she wasn't one of us, she wasn't a magi, but a human!

#tm #review #shortstory
Maybe in a parallel universe depression doesn't exists.
Maybe their ain't no suicide victims,
maybe "happy" is a word with no opposite.
Maybe rapes are zero and humanity's alive,
maybe selfishness is not a term there.
Maybe in the parallel universe people are hopeful,
having reasons to continue, a tomorrow to look forward to,
where families don't hide their secrets and friends are not fake.
With no broken hearts where love is only beautiful.
Maybe everyone understands everyone in that world,
maybe cries are rare to their eyes.
Maybe people don't die of poverty and maybe animals are let free,
the air is clean and the ozone layer is not harmed,
where humans are actually "humans" and smiles are not forced and hearts don't ache in pain.

But in this world, this is how we live,
"In a series of 'maybe(s)' "

#everyone #review #princhi
If covid never came

Just like another game you came into the state, Nigeria. We let you in and we av been dealing with you ever since, we thought you would leave it's obvious you'd picked a nation in our state. If you had never come;
I would sneeze without people looking at me like am the death herself
I would dress in my usual way without covering my mouth like it stinks
I would use my hand as I choose to, with no exemption,
The world won't have been withheld not to talk of limitating our freedom of movement.


I miss the days of uncountable sneezing blessings.
I miss the days of partying 7pm till dawn
I miss the days of hand-shakes, hugs, kiss her on the face.
But now all I get is unfriendly glaring, even our brothers overseas are strange visitors
If you hadn't come I wouldn't walk about with mini suffocation and;
Thousand families would be happy or more than
You just changed the whole vision 2020 game plan...

© theSimiloluwa 🖊

#review #simi #everyone
Both love and hatred are not neophyte for each other because -
"When a man learn's to love,he must bear the risk of hatred".
Harbinger of hatred are pique,cry, fight, inveigh, depression, imprecation whereas the harbinger of love is exuberance, warmth, tenderness, lubricious, fondness; which extant together (love and hatred) by ingesting each other.
Both hatred and love are countervail that can't be hew.
#IG #randomPiece #review
Let me cite (you) the hardihood of the bamboo sap.

Once a farmer grew the saplings of bamboo shrub and banana tree, he was at odds with the bamboo because it takes six months for the shoots to come out from the ground whereas the golden egg, epithet for the banana earned him a lot of profit. He demurred with apathy the imminent advantages of bamboo over banana.

It is indeed a tideous task to nurture the saplings of the evergreen grass turning into a full grown tree.

It requires a prodigious amount of rainfall which makes it a tropical plantation.

After the stint of meticulous hardwork done on the tall tree, making its way above the abut ; it refuted the inedible limn of feckless banana, who provided one-tenth of the surplus amount of interest than the other, haemorrhaging the business of the callous banana owners.

To encapsulate the above narrative, I would like to state the old Japanese aphorism:
*THE* *BAMBOO* *THAT* *BENDS* *IS* *STRONGER* *THAN* *THE* *OAK* *THAT* *RESISTS*.
#zm #lesson #review
Hold along the time will come,
Be my sun ,be my sun;

The stars ask the space,
The moon has got his place;

The light illuminates the moon,
With the sparkling evening noon;

"I don't know why?", despised the callous stars in exuberance with the nemesis moon,
The lamp lights in its silver shoon.
#zm #poetry #review
BLOOM
pliant pink or the ruthless red
prickly paling or the thorn in itself
spring flattery or the hauteur sprout
emblem of beauty or the pride itself
for the queen or the knight himself
thrown at the weeds or the weed iridescent
Bloom-how'd you bloom
like a flower or as the wildflower instead

#rv #poetry #review #everyone
A world Apart
Chapter 3

I have always been told to stay away from them.

'Humans destroy us!' That's what I have been told every single day of my life. My heart hammered harder in my chest, I was so terrified that I felt like my soul was going to leave my body any minute, the voice in my head screamed, run!!! but then she spoke

"Excuse me mister, can you tell me where am I?" Her sweet voice calmed me down like a bucket of cool water on a very hot day. I took a deep breath and then I replied

"Before telling you so, can I know who you are miss and how did you get here?" I ask her fumbling across almost on every word, not sure if that was fear or what?

"I am Naoko and...." She hesitates
"And how did you get here?" I ask again politely

"I... I fell into a well." She tells me hesitantly almost as if making a lie on the spot

"Ok!" I say not probing her more, her eyes looked sunken, her lips fallen, she looked sad

"I can help you out of here," I offer her

"C'mon," I offered her my hand so that she could get up, she took it, her touch made me shiver, her hands were cold.

"I know a place, a few minutes away from here, it will send you back to your own world." I told her and she looked at me in surprise

"My world?"

"Yes, human world. You are in magi world right now. When you fell into the well a dimension gate must have opened there at that time and you landed here, ofcourse timing couldn't have been perfect otherwise you could have been hurt badly" I tell her feeling every single word of it, I'm glad she wasn't hurt. But at the same time I speak so fast that I don't even know if she followed what I said.

"The timing couldn't have been more imperfect" she whispers sadly

"Why?" I ask her surprised

"Because I wanted to be hurt!" She yells

"But why!?" I ask her seriously taken back

"I jumped into that well on my own. I wanted to end my own life. Been living for twenty years and I have realized that there is no place for me in this world, in anyone's life. Nobody loves me or cares for me and it doesn't matter to anyone what happens to me. All I am is a waste of time and space to the world so I wanted to end it so that I would not come in anyone elses way" tears roll down her cheeks as she says these words that cut through me like a knife. I wanted to solace her, but how, I don't even know her and as much as I want her to stay here I know she shouldn't. And so I just look at the ground trying hard not to wipe the tears off her face myself.

#tm #review #shortstory
I thought we survived
but you drenched me in your drama.
I thought we loved each other
but i was illusioned by your forgery.
I thought I was your everything
but you made me realise i was worth nothing.
I thought I was falling for you
but it was the poison you poured into my mind
I thought you were my knight in shining armour
but you turned out to be nightmare of my dreams.
#review#everyone
𝑨𝒇𝒕𝒆𝒓 𝒄𝒐𝒖𝒏𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒅𝒂𝒚𝒔 𝒊𝒕 𝒔𝒆𝒆𝒎𝒔 𝒍𝒊𝒌𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒆
𝑾𝒆𝒆𝒌𝒆𝒏𝒅 𝒉𝒂𝒔 𝒅𝒊𝒔𝒔𝒊𝒑𝒂𝒕𝒆𝒅,
𝑾𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒆 𝒂𝒔 𝒊𝒕𝒔 𝒄𝒂𝒗𝒆𝒂𝒕, 𝒊𝒇 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒔𝒕𝒆𝒑 𝒐𝒖𝒕𝒔𝒊𝒅𝒆 𝒚𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒔𝒆. 𝒀𝒐𝒖 𝒂𝒓𝒆 𝒃𝒐𝒖𝒏𝒅 𝒕𝒐 𝒇𝒂𝒕𝒂𝒍.
𝑻𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒈𝒉 𝒊𝒕𝒔 𝒅𝒆𝒋𝒆𝒄𝒕𝒊𝒐𝒏 𝒕𝒐 𝒃𝒆 𝒄𝒐𝒏𝒇𝒊𝒏𝒆𝒅 𝒘𝒊𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒏 𝒇𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒘𝒂𝒍𝒍𝒔.

𝑨𝒕 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒔 𝒅𝒊𝒔𝒎𝒂𝒍 𝒕𝒊𝒎𝒆 , 𝒍𝒆𝒕𝒔 𝒏𝒐𝒕 𝒅𝒆 𝒎𝒐𝒕𝒊𝒗𝒂𝒕𝒆 𝒚𝒐𝒖𝒓𝒔𝒆𝒍𝒇.

𝑱𝒖𝒔𝒕 𝒃𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒏𝒌𝒇𝒖𝒍 𝒕𝒐 𝒘𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒉𝒂𝒗𝒆 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒉𝒆𝒍𝒑 𝒐𝒖𝒕 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒏𝒆𝒆𝒅𝒚 𝒃𝒚 𝒅𝒐𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒘𝒉𝒂𝒕𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒓 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒄𝒂𝒏 𝒅𝒐.

𝑨 𝒔𝒎𝒂𝒍𝒍 𝒔𝒕𝒆𝒑 𝒕𝒐 𝒎𝒐𝒕𝒊𝒗𝒂𝒕𝒆 𝒐𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒓,
𝑻𝒐 𝒉𝒆𝒍𝒑 𝒐𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒓 𝒕𝒐 𝒇𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒔 𝒔𝒊𝒕𝒖𝒂𝒕𝒊𝒐𝒏.

𝑾𝒊𝒔𝒉 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒑𝒓𝒂𝒚 𝒕𝒐 𝒉𝒂𝒗𝒆 𝒑𝒂𝒍𝒂𝒕𝒂𝒃𝒍𝒆 𝒂𝒕𝒎𝒐𝒔𝒑𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒆 𝒔𝒐𝒐𝒏.


#review #quote #AG